First of all, you have a Lunatic and an Insane difficulty. Insane is classified to be (even) harder than lunatic, so you might want to consider renaming that one to the secret fifth difficulty in Touhou, Phantasm.
Lunatic
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01:03:311 (2,3) - I don't like these. Consider placing (3) with its start in the center, facing down, and shortening it a bit. that way you get a nice tringle of similar sliders.
01:25:558 (1,2,1) - Later on in the map you spread this green combo to the corners. Please do the same here, it only jars play.
01:33:648 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Lol. At least place (6) elsewhere, now it's really ugly and confusing. This is not how difficulty is made.
01:40:053 (1) - What is this mapped with?
02:40:053 (1,2,3,1) - Now you just have no excuse. The red combo right before it has the same spacing, and works well spread out.
03:04:659 (3) - The obsessive compulsive bitch inside me says this has to go one Lv3 grid down.
04:04:659 (3,4) - These sliders overlap uglily.
04:07:356 (2,3) - Idem.
04:40:895 (7) - Move elsewhere.
04:43:761 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This combo is too far down. You can't even fully see the score burst.
05:05:078 - Map this guitar solo. Just to prove my point you will find enclosed a difficulty in which I mapped it. Don't use that (it sucks), but at least do something with it. The break is too short and too close to the end to play well.
...On second thought, you can also end your map at 04:54:547. That works just as well.
Overall, the hitsounds on this map are terrible. The claps are so dull and repetitive I had to take a second look in the editor to make sure they weren't just part of the song, and there are no other hitsounds than every coconuts-banged-together-underwater on the offbeat. Add whistles, add finishes, tone down on the claprhythm.
Insane
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I really can't make an unbiased judgement on this difficulty because when forced to play anything in this horrid jump-stream-jump style I'd rather chew off my own hand to render me unable to, and redigest the vomit it becomes after I look at the patterns again. I truly think it's altogether terrible, but apparently a lot of people, a whole lot of people, don't. Ask someone else for this one.
You said you're going for approval. Again I have to say: Don't. There have been plenty of maps ranked that were over 5 minutes, that's not a valid argument against making a Normal or Hard.
Download: Tatsh feat. Sariyajin - FOUR SEASONS OF LONELINESS (ouranhshc) [Wojjan].osu
Lunatic
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01:03:311 (2,3) - I don't like these. Consider placing (3) with its start in the center, facing down, and shortening it a bit. that way you get a nice tringle of similar sliders.
01:25:558 (1,2,1) - Later on in the map you spread this green combo to the corners. Please do the same here, it only jars play.
01:33:648 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Lol. At least place (6) elsewhere, now it's really ugly and confusing. This is not how difficulty is made.
01:40:053 (1) - What is this mapped with?
02:40:053 (1,2,3,1) - Now you just have no excuse. The red combo right before it has the same spacing, and works well spread out.
03:04:659 (3) - The obsessive compulsive bitch inside me says this has to go one Lv3 grid down.
04:04:659 (3,4) - These sliders overlap uglily.
04:07:356 (2,3) - Idem.
04:40:895 (7) - Move elsewhere.
04:43:761 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This combo is too far down. You can't even fully see the score burst.
05:05:078 - Map this guitar solo. Just to prove my point you will find enclosed a difficulty in which I mapped it. Don't use that (it sucks), but at least do something with it. The break is too short and too close to the end to play well.
...On second thought, you can also end your map at 04:54:547. That works just as well.
Overall, the hitsounds on this map are terrible. The claps are so dull and repetitive I had to take a second look in the editor to make sure they weren't just part of the song, and there are no other hitsounds than every coconuts-banged-together-underwater on the offbeat. Add whistles, add finishes, tone down on the claprhythm.
Insane
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I really can't make an unbiased judgement on this difficulty because when forced to play anything in this horrid jump-stream-jump style I'd rather chew off my own hand to render me unable to, and redigest the vomit it becomes after I look at the patterns again. I truly think it's altogether terrible, but apparently a lot of people, a whole lot of people, don't. Ask someone else for this one.
You said you're going for approval. Again I have to say: Don't. There have been plenty of maps ranked that were over 5 minutes, that's not a valid argument against making a Normal or Hard.
Download: Tatsh feat. Sariyajin - FOUR SEASONS OF LONELINESS (ouranhshc) [Wojjan].osu