Cloudchaser wrote:

Say Hallelujah~

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  У меня в AiMod показывает что в Calm и Nervous куча объектов не на тиках. пофикси плз

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  02:06:490 (1,2,3) - это место немного пустое,ты упускаешь важный удар на красном тике,я предлагаю сделать вот как : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9022842 там где (3) можно стакнуть с (1). Как мне кажется это неплохо выглядит.

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  00:24:115 (5) - please do a little rounded https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9022871 + https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9022877
  00:30:115 (5) - ^ same too
  00:33:490 (1) - Move them below because they overlaps with health bar > https://puu.sh/xshaT/cf597b2da6.jpg

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  02:08:740 (6) - nc pls
  02:16:802 (6) - x:60 y:132 looks better

Gordon123 wrote:

hello owo
[General]

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  У меня в AiMod показывает что в Calm и Nervous куча объектов не на тиках. пофикси плз починил

[Calm!]

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  02:06:490 (1,2,3) - это место немного пустое,ты упускаешь важный удар на красном тике,я предлагаю сделать вот как : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9022842 там где (3) можно стакнуть с (1). Как мне кажется это неплохо выглядит.

[Nervous!]

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  00:24:115 (5) - please do a little rounded https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9022871 + https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9022877
  00:30:115 (5) - ^ same too applied both
  00:33:490 (1) - Move them below because they overlaps with health bar > https://puu.sh/xshaT/cf597b2da6.jpg sure

[Panic!]

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  02:08:740 (6) - nc pls там потом на (1) нк, и (1) явно сильнее
  02:16:802 (6) - x:60 y:132 looks better а по флоу не идет, там выход на полукруг сбивает мне паттерн-арку

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Good Luck

1. Yo dude, OD8 is way too much, considering the previous diff is using 4, change it to 6
2. the hp is also really high dude, 6 is better ;c
3. 00:24:865 (2,3,4,5,6) - this pattern looks really random, I really can't see structure behind it, how about trying something symetric?
4. 01:04:990 (1) - being honest you're missing so many important sounds because of this slider, while I understand the slider art thing I also don't think it's appropriate here, since the music is offering you a lot more.
5. 01:18:396 (8) - the only 1/8 thing in the full diff, also is not that nice, because the rhythm is a 5 beats stream, so the triplet don't really fit much, maybe just stick to the 1/4 rhythm?
6. 01:50:458 (5,6,1) - blankets are kinda off
7. 02:34:615 (4,5,6) - the map is really fun, but this kinda make it frustrating to acc and it's the last part of the map, just use a repeat slider like the other ones.

1. 00:31:990 (4,7) - the ovelap doesn't looks nice
2. turn on stacking in the editor, because a lot of your spacing get off 00:45:490 (1,2,3) - because of the stack leniency
3. I feels that AR 5,5 is better at this diff.

Natsu wrote:

Panic!

1. Yo dude, OD8 is way too much, considering the previous diff is using 4, change it to 6
2. the hp is also really high dude, 6 is better ;c holy shrimp, these two are way over the top. reduced them.
3. 00:24:865 (2,3,4,5,6) - this pattern looks really random, I really can't see structure behind it, how about trying something symetric? sure!
4. 01:04:990 (1) - being honest you're missing so many important sounds because of this slider, while I understand the slider art thing I also don't think it's appropriate here, since the music is offering you a lot more. I'll need your opinion here, the thing kinda revolves around the vocals, so the slider seems to make more sense?
5. 01:18:396 (8) - the only 1/8 thing in the full diff, also is not that nice, because the rhythm is a 5 beats stream, so the triplet don't really fit much, maybe just stick to the 1/4 rhythm? whoops
6. 01:50:458 (5,6,1) - blankets are kinda off fixed
7. 02:34:615 (4,5,6) - the map is really fun, but this kinda make it frustrating to acc and it's the last part of the map, just use a repeat slider like the other ones. I mean, it's not meant to be an easy one-play SS, and even if it looks challenging, in reality it's a fairly easy thing, much like singletapping a very short burst of low BPM 1/4s.Additionally, I did everything to ease players into the rhythm, so it should be quite easy to get.

Nervous!

1. 00:31:990 (4,7) - the ovelap doesn't looks nice
2. turn on stacking in the editor, because a lot of your spacing get off 00:45:490 (1,2,3) - because of the stack leniency
3. I feels that AR 5,5 is better at this diff.

Bakari wrote:

tomorrow.