ddrddr125 wrote:

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samiljul wrote:

ddrddr125 wrote:

태고난이도요청

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1. Why "17 " and "sirius" in tags ?

1. 00:42:760 (1,2,3) - This was quite confusing to me. I wasn't sure when to hit (3).

1. I don't know much about the Beatmania series, but shouldn't the name be Standard, and not Normal ?
2. Quite hard for a Normal. The sliders are too fast and the spacing is too high. This makes the difficulty gap with Beginner awfully high.
3. I very strongly recommend to use the biggest circles because the spacing is really huge, and it would be extremely hard for new players to catch it.
4. 00:02:318 (2) - I think that repeat sliders (1/2 or more) are too confusing to play, as their number of repeats can't be expected, and the repeat arrow is hidden under the cursor. This goes for 00:04:970 (2) - 00:09:611 (1) - 00:52:042 (1) - 01:03:976 (3) - 01:13:258 (1) -
   00:03:313 (3,4) - The fact that (4) comes back to (2) makes sense, but it might be quite confusing for new players.
5. 00:05:965 (3,4) - Same.
6. 00:11:766 (1,2) - I don't think this is a good idea for a Normal: the combo starts on a red tick, which is in itself rather confusing, and the stack makes the rhythm confusing as well. Make a slider instead ?
7. 00:32:816 (6) - Silencing beats like that is unrankable. 0% sections are as well.
8. 00:54:197 (1,2) - I don't think this is a good idea for a Normal: the combo starts on a red tick, which is in itself rather confusing, and the stack makes the rhythm confusing as well. Make a slider instead ?
9. 00:58:672 (5,6) - That's very nazi of me, but stack their ends perfectly ?
10. 01:03:976 (3) - 20% seems a bit low for that section... There are notes in the song at this point. Make this a bit louder ?
11. 01:15:412 (1,2) - I don't think this is a good idea for a Normal: the combo starts on a red tick, which is in itself rather confusing, and the stack makes the rhythm confusing as well. Make a slider instead ?

1. Tick rate 0.5 isn't unrankable, but it is getting removed and will be unrankable by next build. I strongly recommend to use tick rate 1.
2. The timing sections with 40% volume are unhearable imo... Make them a bit louder.
3. 00:32:816 (5) - Silencing beats like that is unrankable. 0% sections are as well.
4. 00:33:479 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This was very hard to read, thus confusing, because everything's stacked and it's hard to seen when the slider is, leading to clicking the 1/8 kick slider too late - thus combo breaking. My suggestion would be to change the slider for two circles, and unstack everything.
5. 01:14:584 (1,2,3) - Silencing beats like that is unrankable. 0% sections are as well. Not to mention it's extremely confusing and doesn't make sense here, since there are notes in the song at that point.
6. 01:37:125 (6) - The stack made this quite confusing... I was expecting it 1/2 earlier. I think it'd be better to unstack this.

1. 00:32:816 (9) - Silencing beats like that is unrankable. 0% sections are as well.
2. 00:08:285 (5,6) - These sliders are barely visible...
   00:53:368 (7) - Silencing beats like that is unrankable. 0% sections are as well.
3. 00:57:843 (4,5) - This was extremely confusing, because this rhythm is unexpected in the song, and doesn't match anything.

1. Since the mapper changed names to "nyan", rename it to "nyan's Taiko". Might as well add "Oni" hile you're at it.

Odaril wrote:

Random bubble checking time.

Please reply to this mod saying what you didn't fix (and what you did) and why.
Also, if you have any question, feel free to ask me in-game.

General

1. Why "17 " and "sirius" in tags ?

Beginner

1. 00:42:760 (1,2,3) - This was quite confusing to me. I wasn't sure when to hit (3).

I don't think so. and I think they can hit if they parctice

Normal

1. I don't know much about the Beatmania series, but shouldn't the name be Standard, and not Normal ? k
2. Quite hard for a Normal. The sliders are too fast and the spacing is too high. This makes the difficulty gap with Beginner awfully high.
3. I very strongly recommend to use the biggest circles because the spacing is really huge, and it would be extremely hard for new players to catch it. k
4. 00:02:318 (2) - I think that repeat sliders (1/2 or more) are too confusing to play, as their number of repeats can't be expected, and the repeat arrow is hidden under the cursor. This goes for 00:04:970 (2) - 00:09:611 (1) - 00:52:042 (1) - 01:03:976 (3) - 01:13:258 (1) - k I fixed but I can't fix 00:52:042 (1) - 01:03:976 (3) - 01:13:258 (1) - because I don't want.
   00:03:313 (3,4) - The fact that (4) comes back to (2) makes sense, but it might be quite confusing for new players. k
5. 00:05:965 (3,4) - Same. k
6. 00:11:766 (1,2) - I don't think this is a good idea for a Normal: the combo starts on a red tick, which is in itself rather confusing, and the stack makes the rhythm confusing as well. Make a slider instead ? k
7. 00:32:816 (6) - Silencing beats like that is unrankable. 0% sections are as well. k
8. 00:54:197 (1,2) - I don't think this is a good idea for a Normal: the combo starts on a red tick, which is in itself rather confusing, and the stack makes the rhythm confusing as well. Make a slider instead ? k
9. 00:58:672 (5,6) - That's very nazi of me, but stack their ends perfectly ?k
10. 01:03:976 (3) - 20% seems a bit low for that section... There are notes in the song at this point. Make this a bit louder ? k
11. 01:15:412 (1,2) - I don't think this is a good idea for a Normal: the combo starts on a red tick, which is in itself rather confusing, and the stack makes the rhythm confusing as well. Make a slider instead ? k

Hyper

1. Tick rate 0.5 isn't unrankable, but it is getting removed and will be unrankable by next build. I strongly recommend to use tick rate 1. k
2. The timing sections with 40% volume are unhearable imo... Make them a bit louder. k
3. 00:32:816 (5) - Silencing beats like that is unrankable. 0% sections are as well. k
4. 00:33:479 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This was very hard to read, thus confusing, because everything's stacked and it's hard to seen when the slider is, leading to clicking the 1/8 kick slider too late - thus combo breaking. My suggestion would be to change the slider for two circles, and unstack everything.
5. 01:14:584 (1,2,3) - Silencing beats like that is unrankable. 0% sections are as well. Not to mention it's extremely confusing and doesn't make sense here, since there are notes in the song at that point.
6. 01:37:125 (6) - The stack made this quite confusing... I was expecting it 1/2 earlier. I think it'd be better to unstack this.

Another

1. 00:32:816 (9) - Silencing beats like that is unrankable. 0% sections are as well. k
2. 00:08:285 (5,6) - These sliders are barely visible... I can hit them and many player hit them.
   00:53:368 (7) - Silencing beats like that is unrankable. 0% sections are as well. k
3. 00:57:843 (4,5) - This was extremely confusing, because this rhythm is unexpected in the song, and doesn't match anything.k

ddr's Taiko

1. Since the mapper changed names to "nyan", rename it to "nyan's Taiko". Might as well add "Oni" hile you're at it.

k but "'s taiko" named him self so I don't want to change

Popping for the bold lines. The Normal needs more work, too.
Recheck SapphireGhost's mod as well. He has good points.k

1. Disable "letterbox during breaks" as you have a video. During breaks, black bars appear at the top and bottom of the screen, and disabling this will prevent them from appearing.
2. ddrddr125 is Nyan's previous name right ? Also add Nyan to the tags of all difficulties since he mapped a diff.

• Overall that was not bad. Fits well the Beginner difficulty, although some parts were in my opinion contrasting way too much with the rest:

1. 00:11:766 (1) - This surprised me a lot when I testplayed. First, it's 1/2, when all the map uses rhythms like 1/1 or even longer, which makes it sounds quite sudden in the middle of them. Second, it starts on a red tick, which might be confusing timing-wise for new players. I toyed around trying to fix it, and my suggestion is to remove a repeat from 00:09:611 (1) - , start a slider where it ended, and make that slider end where this note ended (that is 1/1 before the next note). Try it out and see if you like it !
2. 00:42:760 (1,2,3) - Same goes for this rhythm. I don't really understand why you used such a complicated rhythm in that place when the rhythms are pretty simple in the rest of the diff (which is a good thing). Try going for something simpler ?
3. 00:54:197 (3) - Same comment about this slider as about the first one I pointed out. Make it start 1/2 earlier and extend it by 1/2 ? It souds good enough, I think.
4. 01:15:247 (1) - Still the same comment about the slider.
   There were also a few volume issues:
5. 00:10:854 - This section isn't hearable while playing. I had to go in the editor and check the timing panel to actually see it wasn't silenced. Boost its volume up to 100%.
   Finally, just a few comments:
6. 00:04:307 (2) - You should add a new combo on this to stay consistent with the comboing afterwards.
7. 00:57:346 (3,1) - To stay consistent with the way you added new combos near the beginning, swap these new combos, then add one on 00:59:998 (2) - .
8. 01:04:970 (3) - I really think this should be a lowered whistle like the beats right before it. It sounds better for the combo, and for the map in general to me.
9. 01:07:954 (2) - To stay consistent in your comboing, add a new combo on this.
10. 01:13:258 (3) - Same. Then remove 01:15:247 (1) - this new combo.

1. The slider speed and (consequently) spacing are too high imo. But consider the difficulty spread, I think it's fine.
2. 00:11:766 (1) - To stay consistent with your comboing after this, and with the other diffs, remove this new combo, then add one on 00:12:263 (4) - . For the same reason, remove this one as well: 00:13:589 (1) - .
3. 00:17:236 (5) - This shouldn't be a repeat slider. The beat on the red tick matches nothing, and the position of the slider is bad for the comboing, because its end is where a new combo should be.
4. 00:25:523 (3) - To stay consistent with your comboing in the diff - and to be consistent with Easy), add a new combo here.
5. 00:32:816 (6) - Although the final beat isn't entirely silent, I still consider this a silenced beat. I can understand what you did (I think), and I think a simple circle would be better for that purpose. But you made that slider for symmetry... But then, you'd need to keep the whistle for symmetry again. Anyway. Don't silence it.
6. 00:52:042 (1) - I can understand what you did here, but I really think kick sliders shouldn't be used in Normal diffs. The number of repeats cannot be expected (unless one knows the song) nor read (since the cursor hides the repeat arrows), which makes it extremely confusing. Replacing it with a spinner is fine and plays well, so try it ?
7. 01:03:976 (3) - I really think the two last beats should be separated from this slider. As the hitsounds show, they represent something completely different than what the slider was made for, and thus shouldn't be linked together like that, because it makes the number of repeats confusing (even I had a sliderbreak on that slider). Also, in the rest of the map, you never linked beats in similar rhythms in the song, so you shouldn't do that here either. :/
8. 01:13:258 (1) - Same as earlier: I think replacing this with a spinner is a lot better for the difficulty of the diff.
9. 01:30:495 (1) - For consistency with your comboing (in this diff and in others), remove this new combo.
10. 01:35:799 (1) - Same.
11. 01:36:462 (2) - For consistency with the other diffs, wouldn't it be better to remove the repeat and use a circle with a new combo instead ?

1. This is way too hard, it makes the gap with Standard way too high. Standard doesn't even have 1 million score, and this has 5 million score and could easily be called Insane. You better rename this to "gowww's Another" (the difficulty itself being rather good and fun) and map a Hyper yourself that fits the gap between Standard and this. :/
2. There are still silence beats, and even the silenced sliders.
3. 00:33:479 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This was really difficult to read. I'd suggest to at least unstack the stream and replace the slider with two circles to make this part simpler.
4. 00:42:760 (1,2,3,4) - You should raise the volume for these. I understand what you did and it is a very nice idea, but they're really difficult to hear, they should still be distinctly hearable imo.

1. The speedup at the end is really pushing it. But that's just a personal opinion (as I don't really like speedups), I still think it's justified and makes sense. I don't really have any complaint about this diff.

1. Too hard T.T Anyway. I really think you should get rid of the 1/6s in the beginning. At that BPM, it's really difficult to play, not to mention that dddk is very confusing and difficult to play that fast. Also, they are the only 1/6s in the whole diff, and that's too harsh for a start. :/

1. Update your description =p Hyper isn't gowww's diff anymore.
2. Add "dksslqj" to the tags ? It's your (previous) name, so people might still be looking for your maps this way.

• Nothing to say. =o

1. 00:52:042 (1) - I really really strongly recommend you to turn this into a spinner. Kick sliders are confusing because the number of repeats cannot be expected or guessed, and the cursor usually hides the repeat arrows. Also, you have more than enough room for a spinner here, so I really think you should change it.

1. 00:16:573 (5,1) - and 01:20:220 (5,1) - were pretty confusing, because the placement looks like (5) has 2 repeats while it has only one, which makes the timing of (1) unsure. You have room to orientate (5) differently, that should be enough to fix it.
2. 00:42:760 (1) - Make this blanket (5) ?
3. 01:03:975 (1) - Same ?

1. 00:33:479 (1,2,3,4,5) - This was pretty confusing because I somehow expected a triple 1/2 after the slider.
2. 00:54:694 (1) - This slider is completely silent.
3. 01:03:976 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - There's no need for such a long stream here. You followed to song kinda closely before, so there's no reason why you should add so many unfitting beats here.
4. 01:14:584 (1,2,3) - Completely silent sliders.

• Nothing to say. =o

1. Tick rate 0.5 is about to be removed. Change it to tick rate 1 ?
2. I REALLY think the first four beats are way too hard to play because of how fast they are because it's dddk... But well.

Odaril wrote:

Finally rechecking. Sorry. ><

General

1. Update your description =p Hyper isn't gowww's diff anymore.
2. Add "dksslqj" to the tags ? It's your (previous) name, so people might still be looking for your maps this way.

Beginner

• Nothing to say. =o

Standard

1. 00:52:042 (1) - I really really strongly recommend you to turn this into a spinner. Kick sliders are confusing because the number of repeats cannot be expected or guessed, and the cursor usually hides the repeat arrows. Also, you have more than enough room for a spinner here, so I really think you should change it.

Hyper

1. 00:16:573 (5,1) - and 01:20:220 (5,1) - were pretty confusing, because the placement looks like (5) has 2 repeats while it has only one, which makes the timing of (1) unsure. You have room to orientate (5) differently, that should be enough to fix it.
2. 00:42:760 (1) - Make this blanket (5) ?
3. 01:03:975 (1) - Same ?

gowww

1. 00:33:479 (1,2,3,4,5) - This was pretty confusing because I somehow expected a triple 1/2 after the slider.
2. 00:54:694 (1) - This slider is completely silent.
3. 01:03:976 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - There's no need for such a long stream here. You followed to song kinda closely before, so there's no reason why you should add so many unfitting beats here.
4. 01:14:584 (1,2,3) - Completely silent sliders.

Another

• Nothing to say. =o

Nyan's Taiko

1. Tick rate 0.5 is about to be removed. Change it to tick rate 1 ?
2. I REALLY think the first four beats are way too hard to play because of how fast they are because it's dddk... But well.

Let's get it clear: I will not rebubble the map unless gowww's sliders are fixed either by removing them, either by raising their volume to a hearable one.