00:14:173 (2) - looks better if you copy paste 00:13:786 (1) - and ctrl+> it
00:20:367 (7) - change into 2 sliders and 1 circle? feels weird having such long reverse sliders on something like this
00:33:141 (1) - this looks meh just saying
00:33:915 (2) - sharper curve on 2nd last grey node would look better, something more similar to the big circular curve to be exact
00:35:463 (1) - move first curve to the middle so it's circular and actually blankets that next thing 00:38:560 (2) -
00:39:334 (1) - sharper curve on 2nd grey node again
00:39:334 (1) - also the sliderend doesn't have to be silenced, there are drums and you can make a double on 00:40:109 (2) - too with them (they're 1/8)
00:45:528 (1,2) - could think of something prettier for this or just use circles,
00:46:299 (5) - also not a very standard slider
00:51:639 (4) - this is way too close compared to what was happening before also you swapped to red nodes on these 2 last measures but then randomly use a grey node here again next to the 3 last sliders which were red noded and it really stands out (I would just not use grey nodes for this introduction to the kiai to be honest, it's smooth and music isn't that aggressive yet)
00:56:821 (1) - this looks too unrelated to 00:57:230 (3) - or vice versa, pretty sure ctrl+h+j on (1) would be way better
01:00:639 (1) - these jumps look too unrelated to each other and also simply not clean visually, try to use more similar angles, spacing changes and absolute spacing (ok the rest of the jump sections have the same problems)
also I'd say these shouldn't be that spaced 01:00:639 (1,2,3,4) - 01:02:412 (1,2) -
these should be more spaced 01:01:184 (1,2,3) - 01:02:003 (1,2,3) -
01:00:367 (4,2) - also overlaps like these look bad, overlaps look best when almost everything is overlapping, not half or almost nothing of the 2 objects
01:09:912 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - would be a better effect if they had like 0.1-0.2 DS between them
01:15:230 (2,3) - it's not properly stacked lol few pixels off