1. wet (6 stars, 1031 notes)

6 digit wrote:

Hi~ fun mod
Note that each point applies to the map as a whole, so if there's something specific listed here and you see another place in the map where this occurs, try to address the issue. Also double quotes means something I mentioned earlier applies here.

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General~
Consider using slider tick rate of 1, a lot of ticks don't show on the sliders cause they're too close together to each other.
You want might to space things out to a consistent distance. Overlapping the edges of slider bodies looks a little sloppy and hard to read
There's things that need to be fixed, but I see some good ideas in here. Would recommend mapping and practicing more to execute those ideas better.

wet~
00:02:365 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Music is too quiet to map a lot of objects, especially hit circles to it. Players want to click/tap on audible beats and sounds so try not to put objects to click/tap on where it's not audible (im going to remap this whole first part so its deleted for now)
00:30:919 (1,1) - It's more fitting to have the slider end and start overlap since there's a long silence in the middle (added something in the middle)
00:42:485 (1) - Try not to make long sliders touch or get too close to themselves unless you are doing a significantly obvious loop/intersection (changed slider)
00:59:835 (1) - Slider ends on strong white tick, more intuitive to have something to tap there alright
01:05:437 (8,1) - 01:07:606 (6,7) - Spacing not consistent with growing ds fixed
01:08:510 (1) - Same white tick slider end issue (fixed)
01:11:401 (1,2,3,4,5) - 2 could be spaced away from the slider body so that it's more intuitive to read (fixed)
01:14:654 (2) - Consider tilting to same angle as 01:15:016 (4,5,1,2,3) - fixeded
01:22:967 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - No distinct 1/6 sound in music to map stream to. a 1/4 would be more intuitive (changed to 1/6 sliders)
01:29:744 (3,4,1) - 4 to 1 doesn't flow as the previous few objects tells the player to snap at a sharp angle, rather than a wide angle changed
01:38:510 (4,5,6) - Differentiate 1/3 patterns from your 1/4 timed patternssomething was attempted
01:38:871 (7,8) - Generally hard to read perfectly stacked sliders, consider offsetting onedone
01:46:281 (1) - Start on 01:46:100 - fixed
01:47:003 (2) - Ends hit a distinct beat. More intuitive to click/tap " " " changed
02:00:016 (2,3,4) - Song doesn't imply a triplechanged
02:01:100 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - The kick sounds are more prominent than the hi-hats so stream is counter intuitive. Also, since it is a softer part of the song, you want object density to be less. Mapping to the kicks and snares would represent the music better.changed a bit
02:10:317 (1) - ^ yes
02:13:329 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ yes
02:24:895 (1,2,3) - Reduce spacing, soft part of song reduced a bit
02:37:425 (7) - Remove and respace, no sound indicates jumps or an object here just respaced a bit
02:41:943 (1,1) - Overlap; silence " " " reduced spacing and made hs quieter
02:48:269 (3) - Slowing the sv down to 02:45:377 (1) - would be pretty cools since the sounds match
03:02:546 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Kinda ugly stream. Also want stream to lead into 6 changed
03:09:586 (1,2,3,4,5) - " ima keep this one
03:11:197 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Stream doesn't map to a distinct sound like 03:09:047 (6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5) - and 03:10:482 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - changed some rhythm
03:15:635 (3) - Kick slider doesn't map to " " " changed
03:18:450 (7,1,1,2,1,2,1,2) - If you're going to do 1/2 patterns like these, start it on the strong tick i think these 2 are fine
03:19:845 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Overlap the 2's like ^
03:29:524 (1,2,3) - Bad flow, angle at which sliders end do not follow into next changed
03:31:592 (5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Try not to overlap patterns, especially streams, with slider bodies. Hard to read/unintuitivechanged
03:35:041 (1,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Back and forth jumps for these sounds play better than what's mapped here. Try to map similar to 03:45:041 (1,2,3,1,1,2) - you did it better during this part changed
03:40:213 (1,2,3,4,5) - Spacing like this works and is pretty nice to play for these kinds of songs, just make sure to keep it consistent with other elements in your maps changed
03:45:299 (2,3) - Slant 3 more horizontal, better flowchanged
03:46:937 (4,5,6) - Spacing doesn't imply pausetried a different thing
04:08:144 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - End these on 1/4 beatsfixed
04:46:765 (1) - Curve the part after the loop, looks and flows weirdchanged
04:52:282 (1) - This overlapping end is ok since it's distinct, but use a circle to guide your slider creation if possible done

EG: line up slider edge with approach circle to guide you. Won't be a perfect circle unless the edge overlaps with the guide


05:04:006 (3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2) - Reduce speed, spacing, and object density; soft part " " " reduced spacing
05:16:765 (1) - Kick slider hits no audible sound " " "

not a kickslider, but changed
I would also take what hlanden said into consideration as they noted some of the ways to get better at mapping.
Pishi's videos and style imitation is definitely a good start.

Hope it helps, gl