Heya o/
Firstly:
Timing: After playing the beatmap back at 25%, I think your timing is fine and perfect.
Hitsounding:
00:34:791 (1) - Should not use soft hitsound, instead use the normal and add a finish.
00:36:475 (7) - Similar case as above. No additional hitsound required.
I'll assume you haven't finished hitsounding. Some parts in the beatmap lack hitsounds, particularly Finishes and Claps.
Note: Volume at the deathstream should be lowered, try not to earrape ppl xD (may apply for other parts of the song)
Flow and Gameplay:
Some spinners should be removed, good patterns can be added instead.
Spinners to be freed up:
00:27:444 (1) -
00:38:618 (1) -
00:56:832 (1) -
01:21:475 (1) -
01:26:220 (1) -
01:31:271 (1) -
01:37:087 (1) -
01:55:455 (1) -
02:16:271 (1) -
02:54:383 (1) -
Spinners that are okay:
01:13:975 (1) -
02:07:853 (8) - (Spinner should be added after this, not for the entirety of the break, but until the vocal finishes)
02:57:291 (1) -
Some other stuff:
Some stuff should be added after 02:26:679 (13) - , the drum still plays for a bit before the vocal solo
02:232:495 - Something should be added here, the drum starts to play already
00:31:883 (2,3) - Should not be spaced this much this early in the song, maybe add a stack?
00:34:026 (1,2,3,1) - Either space the 1,2,3 further apart, or reduce the space between the red 3 and the yellow 1.
01:11:985 (2,3,4,5) - Airman jump: Not a bad idea, but the circles should be space further apart, or rotate a bit for every 2 circles to clearly show that the rhythm still stays. (the stacks may confuse players)
Deathstream - The kick sliders (repeat sliders) are a good idea to make the stream easier, but you should add them where a finish or a clap is in the stream, to make their existence have meaning and reason.
02:46:883 (8) - Should be a bit further from the stream, to show that there is a pause before the note.
On a side note: Your mapping has improved a lot and I can see a style, but I notice that you tend to neglect the far left and far right side of the screen, sometimes you can use those edges extremely, make the players move around the playing field a bit more, you know?
P.S. If you want me to hitsound it for you I can do it, but preferably after you think the map is perfect
Lots of Love
me
