Yo, just gonna voice my opinion real quick
For Another - The song isn't from beatmania IIDX, so Expert might be more fitting in this case.
For the top diff:
00:59:424 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2) - The emphasis should be more evenly distributed instead here. Having a 7+* jump pattern followed by two sliders, which are both the exact same sounds in the song doesn't really follow the song correctly.
Idea for the star jump:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7348344Idea for the part with the two sliders:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7348346^ If you do it in a similar matter to this, the sounds will at least be emphasized the same amount, and the map will still be super hard to aim.
01:01:372 (1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - For the 8 back n' forths, it's the same story. The focus is fine, but the way you emphasize it isn't imo. 01:03:320 (1) - Some would even argue that this one stronger because it's more defined. I would consider adding your peak points in different areas, and perhaps a little more spread out, so it won't be a matter of "hoping you don't die" on one small 8-note pattern that is basically a 153 BPM stream xd
Ideas in which you can change the emphasis:
01:03:904 (3) - This slider could be emphasized with 2 single taps instead
01:03:320 (1) - do single taps here too
If you don't wanna change the single taps to sliders or mix stuff, then you could make double stacks instead
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7348361 (this concept is flawed, and I know you can probably think of something better, this might help though. (Don't do doubles as well as changing the two small things above too tho, 'cause that's excessive lol)
Other things:
01:07:216 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - shouldn't the spacing increase? The intensity seems to be increasing, so if the first 5 notes were 0,8x, then 1,0x for the next 5 and then 1,2x / 1,4x for the last two, that might work a little better (That way the triple doesn't surprise people much while still being very difficult)
00:26:891 (2,3,4) - I like the way those triples work, and they flow better than stuff like 00:37:411 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - imo. You could do something similar maybe, but that's obviously a subjective manner.
00:28:060 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - The spacing is pretty underwhelming here, i'd consider spacing 2,3 - 4,5 - 6,7 away from each other a bit more so you don't have to force your cursor to stop in order to hit them
Conclusion:
I feel like some of the peak sections don't really follow the song properly, and I'd consider looking into that. Best of luck tho with the qualification