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随分と長期間になりました、お疲れ様でした!

komasy wrote:

コれ
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JUDYDANNY wrote:

随分と長期間になりました、お疲れ様でした!

komasy wrote:

コれ
ありがとうございました!!!
初めて本格的にRankedを狙った譜面で、かなり譜面づくりが下手だというのがあって、かなりご迷惑をおかけしてしまいました。
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o/

i'm slightly confused with 00:52:157 - 01:33:994 - greenline usage, there's not a real problem if you move first one to 00:52:197 - and the second one is like senseless for me D:, maybe if you use 90% idk could have a little more sense like you did on the first one

also kantan could still use 1.4 SV or 1.3, is not that complex so if you don't want to change you could use 1.3 on futsuu so makes a better spread :p


[Futsuu]
00:38:251 (2,3,4) - d k k / d d k / k d k sounds better imo, triple kat is like they're having the same pitch so D:
01:31:765 (29) - maybe delete? is a little dense for a section before kiai
personal: 01:34:359 (1) - :arrow: 01:34:521 - ? could be good for a futsuu diff!

[Muzu]
00:39:224 (5) - don?
00:57:711 (75) - remove big note maybe, this section is a little strange since you use 00:52:521 (53) - big note on here (i agree with this since it's a kiai start) but you don't here 00:55:116 (64) - (both have the same sound)
01:02:900 (97) - ^

[Oni]
00:40:846 (1) - d?
same question about finishers on kiai :c
01:12:629 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - may I suggest a kkkkddk here?

[Inner]
00:25:927 (232,233,234,235,236,237,238) - dkddkdk fits better imo according to pitches
00:36:954 (301) - 00:39:548 (2) - may I suggest using kat on them? for variation basically and difference from 00:38:251 (307) -
01:13:278 (1) - it isn't that important but is a little strange to see this diff with spinner, I can agree with you if you don't want to delete it, but is like unnecesary imo

call me back ~
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xfraczynho wrote:

o/

i'm slightly confused with 00:52:157 - 01:33:994 - greenline usage, there's not a real problem if you move first one to 00:52:197 - and the second one is like senseless for me D:, maybe if you use 90% idk could have a little more sense like you did on the first one

also kantan could still use 1.4 SV or 1.3, is not that complex so if you don't want to change you could use 1.3 on futsuu so makes a better spread :p


SV of all diff are fixed. And since BPM 185 is not fast, I changed Kantan's SV to 1.4.

[Futsuu]
00:38:251 (2,3,4) - d k k / d d k / k d k sounds better imo, triple kat is like they're having the same pitch so D:
It is a quiet part so I do not want to put d.

01:31:765 (29) - maybe delete? is a little dense for a section before kiai
I think that it is acceptable, so keep

personal: 01:34:359 (1) - :arrow: 01:34:521 - ? could be good for a futsuu diff!
Since the drum starts from there, keep

[Muzu]
00:39:224 (5) - don?
same as futsuu

00:57:711 (75) - remove big note maybe, this section is a little strange since you use 00:52:521 (53) - big note on here (i agree with this since it's a kiai start) but you don't here 00:55:116 (64) - (both have the same sound)
01:02:900 (97) - ^
I think that they are not the same sound. I am putting Finish according to the sound of the cymbal. But 01:02:900 - is not cymbal, so I deleted finish here!

[Oni]
00:40:846 (1) - d?
same

same question about finishers on kiai :c
01:02:900 - deleted finish!

01:12:629 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - may I suggest a kkkkddk here?
now better imo

call me back ~
thanks for mod! :)
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xfraczynho wrote:

[Inner]
00:25:927 (232,233,234,235,236,237,238) - dkddkdk fits better imo according to pitches keep
00:36:954 (301) - 00:39:548 (2) - may I suggest using kat on them? for variation basically and difference from 00:38:251 (307) - um.. I agree to add difference to those. but 00:39:548 - and 00:36:954 - seem like to similar. so I only changed k 00:38:251 - .
01:13:278 (1) - it isn't that important but is a little strange to see this diff with spinner, I can agree with you if you don't want to delete it, but is like unnecesary imokeep. I think it is important to expressing calm.
thanks for mod!
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restart.
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JUDYDANNY wrote:

restart.
ありがとうございます!
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Everything looks nice! ~
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congratz! :)
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thanks everyone :):)
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F.I.N.A.L.L.Y
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404 AccNotFound wrote:

F.I.N.A.L.L.Y
I DID IT.
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長かったね……おめでとう(っ´ω`c)
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yuzu__rinrin wrote:

長かったね……おめでとう(っ´ω`c)
ありがとうございます…! :)
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