o/thanks for mod!
i'm slightly confused with 00:52:157 - 01:33:994 - greenline usage, there's not a real problem if you move first one to 00:52:197 - and the second one is like senseless for me D:, maybe if you use 90% idk could have a little more sense like you did on the first one
also kantan could still use 1.4 SV or 1.3, is not that complex so if you don't want to change you could use 1.3 on futsuu so makes a better spread :p
SV of all diff are fixed. And since BPM 185 is not fast, I changed Kantan's SV to 1.4.
00:38:251 (2,3,4) - d k k / d d k / k d k sounds better imo, triple kat is like they're having the same pitch so D:
It is a quiet part so I do not want to put d.
01:31:765 (29) - maybe delete? is a little dense for a section before kiai
I think that it is acceptable, so keep
personal: 01:34:359 (1) - 01:34:521 - ? could be good for a futsuu diff!
Since the drum starts from there, keep
00:39:224 (5) - don?
same as futsuu
00:57:711 (75) - remove big note maybe, this section is a little strange since you use 00:52:521 (53) - big note on here (i agree with this since it's a kiai start) but you don't here 00:55:116 (64) - (both have the same sound)
01:02:900 (97) - ^
I think that they are not the same sound. I am putting Finish according to the sound of the cymbal. But 01:02:900 - is not cymbal, so I deleted finish here!
00:40:846 (1) - d?
same question about finishers on kiai :c
01:02:900 - deleted finish!
01:12:629 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - may I suggest a kkkkddk here?
now better imo
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[Inner]thanks for mod!
00:25:927 (232,233,234,235,236,237,238) - dkddkdk fits better imo according to pitches keep
00:36:954 (301) - 00:39:548 (2) - may I suggest using kat on them? for variation basically and difference from 00:38:251 (307) - um.. I agree to add difference to those. but 00:39:548 - and 00:36:954 - seem like to similar. so I only changed k 00:38:251 - .
01:13:278 (1) - it isn't that important but is a little strange to see this diff with spinner, I can agree with you if you don't want to delete it, but is like unnecesary imokeep. I think it is important to expressing calm.