o/
i'm slightly confused with 00:52:157 - 01:33:994 - greenline usage, there's not a real problem if you move first one to 00:52:197 - and the second one is like senseless for me D:, maybe if you use 90% idk could have a little more sense like you did on the first one
also kantan could still use 1.4 SV or 1.3, is not that complex so if you don't want to change you could use 1.3 on futsuu so makes a better spread :p[Futsuu]
00:38:251 (2,3,4) - d k k / d d k / k d k sounds better imo, triple kat is like they're having the same pitch so D:
01:31:765 (29) - maybe delete? is a little dense for a section before kiai
personal: 01:34:359 (1) -
01:34:521 - ? could be good for a futsuu diff!
[Muzu]
00:39:224 (5) - don?
00:57:711 (75) - remove big note maybe, this section is a little strange since you use 00:52:521 (53) - big note on here (i agree with this since it's a kiai start) but you don't here 00:55:116 (64) - (both have the same sound)
01:02:900 (97) - ^
[Oni]
00:40:846 (1) - d?
same question about finishers on kiai :c
01:12:629 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - may I suggest a kkkkddk here?
[Inner]
00:25:927 (232,233,234,235,236,237,238) - dkddkdk fits better imo according to pitches
00:36:954 (301) - 00:39:548 (2) - may I suggest using kat on them? for variation basically and difference from 00:38:251 (307) -
01:13:278 (1) - it isn't that important but is a little strange to see this diff with spinner, I can agree with you if you don't want to delete it, but is like unnecesary imo
call me back ~