_llkey_18 wrote:

Let me seeya LaLaLa
Love me me hey YaYaYaYa~

ykcarrot wrote:

yayayayaranaika

MoonFragrance wrote:

Way to go, Tanmak

galvenize wrote:

[Easy]

I don't really like the empty space at 00:41. Better end the spinner at 00:39:835 end start mapping at 00:40:751.
hmm..I think if spinner is longer, little strange. However, I put in break. Thanks remind about this part.

[Hard]

00:35:255 (9) - New combo.
00:53:575 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - A bit harsh for a hard, I've got the exact same pattern in an approved insane diff xD. I don't think many MATs will agree with this.
01:21:514 (2) - This slider isn't easy to see because of the bursts of the previous notes. Better find an other way to place it. Changed.

Not a regular Hard you've got there, wouldn't be surprising if it were called insane.

Xen wrote:

star o/

S i R i R u wrote:

Easy




Normal

Map is fine for me but i think this map is difficault for Normal >x<


Hard

00:22:430 (6) - maybe this slider is hard to see ? hidden slider. * Changed.
00:24:262 - I think not need to use break here Reomved...But, I'm afraid Hp drain is so high then, HP will be so low.
00:37:087 - start spiner here is better (for me) Hmm.. I think there are 1note and spiner is better. Btw I arranged spiner location. Thanks remind about thar XD
01:06:171 (12) - Return slider one more time :3 Yes.
01:19:224 (5) - same opinion with * Changed.
01:41:209 (1) - remove new combo ? and add here ? 01:41:438 (2) Fixed.
02:40:980 (1) - change this slider to Single note 02:40:980 - 02:41:094 - 02:41:209 - and 02:41:438 ( just my opinion)little changed. I think single note is little strange. Slide is better.

orioncomet wrote:

haha cute song (when I was -just- listen to it and didn't look at any lyrics etc.)
suggest you to change diffs name, Easy to Normal, Normal to Hard and Hard to Insane, look fit more.
I will mod this map later again when I get time to.

tmddlekt wrote:

star~

arien666 wrote:

[General]
If possible, remove source since it's album name... Album name can't be source orz

arien666 wrote:

ps. Good luck on your army life orz

arien666 wrote:

[General]
If possible, remove source since it's album name... Album name can't be source orz

[Normal]
00:40:980 - Delete this break
01:56:094 - ^
Fixed

[Hard]
01:24:491 - Delete this break Fixed

[Insane]
01:24:491 - Delete this break
02:39:606 - ^
No..I worried high HP drain...

mebins wrote:

NORMAL


01:28:384(2,3) both up 1 grid
02:24:491(4) pull this down 3 grid

I'm sorry but I think there are OK.


LOVE THE SONG star XD

Lissette wrote:

hi~

Insane
00:20:598 (3) - fix this lil spacing Fixed.
00:44:987 (4) - this note feels odd Fixed.
00:46:705 - something is missing around here, i don't know >< Arranged.
01:23:117 (6) - plays nice 1/4 later I think that's OK.
01:59:987 - same as 00:46:705 Arranged.
02:32:965 (2) - stack under the end of the prev slider? just suggesting Arranged.
02:36:629 (9) - ^ Arranged.
02:48:079 - missing note? like this..... http://puu.sh/278H I think looks so good..
02:51:743 (3) - fix this lil spacing Fixed.
i would love a bigger breaktime around there, but well map is not that hard

Hard
00:56:323 (2,3,4) - these notes are correct spaced, but visually 3 and 4 seem like are nearer that 2 and 3, so this kinda confused me, this is not bad, but just saying in case you want to change it Fixed.
02:33:423 (5) - this is kinda hidden by the 300 explosion Fixed.

Normal
01:51:285 (4) - remove one reverse? No. That's okay.
how about using a different bg for this one too? Added. But I can't find high quality BG D:

also you should use a approach circle, and a hitcircle overlay
Added overlay only. Approach circle is best which is normal skin.

Star~

Lissette wrote:

hi~

I got a better offset: 456 (+10ms to your current offset) remember to re snap all notes and timing points
Also add a approachcircle to your song folder, since you have a hitcircle and a hitcircleoverlay

Sonnyc wrote:

안녕하세요 탄막님^^

Normal:

00:24:730 (X) : Break Time 부탁합니다. 굳이 안넣어도 될 듯..
00:59:997 (2) : 슬라이더.. 점이 꽤나 많네요?? 대칭적으로 부탁을 드립니다 ㅎㅎ 모양은 크게 눈에 안 띄어요.
01:24:730 (X) : Break Time 부탁합니다 위와 동일. 더군나 여기는 아예 안넣어지네요. -_-
01:51:295 (4) : 01:51:982에서 끝내시고 Nope.
01:52:440 (1) : 01:52:211에서 시작하세요 ^

Hard:

-- Approach Rate 6?? 싫으시면 아니구요 수정했어요~ ^.^

00:32:517 (8) : 대칭 부탁합니다 Nope.
01:24:730 (X) : Break Time 부탁합니다. ^
02:10:532 (1) : 02:10:990의 Finish는 빼는게 좋을것 같네요 수정~

Insane:

00:24:730 (X) : Break Time 부탁합니다. 이정돈 괜찮음..
01:26:562 (3) : 01:27:020의 Finish 제거 수정~!

티아라를 위한 탄막님을 위한 스타~및 모드

Sonnyc wrote:

음 저..
제가 Break Time을 주장한 이유가 다른 난이도와 달리 있거나 없기 때문이었습니다

Lissette wrote:

Sorry for the delay, plz call me after fixing this silly thing i found T.T

Insane
02:36:181 (8) - New combo

Lissette wrote:

Good~ Bubble~

James2250 wrote:

Insane:
02:48:318 (1,2) - I would say decrease this jump slightly as it is the only jump in the entire difficulty and could take people by surprise

James2250 wrote:

-Although there are gaps in the map at the moment in my opinion it would be better to have another break in the first half of the song for Normal/Hard and have at least 1 break in Insane somewhere as 3:30 is a long time to play without any time to rest
(Just for future reference it normally looks neater in the folder if you put all the lyrics etc if their own seperate folder but no big deal)

Insane:
02:48:318 (1,2) - I would say decrease this jump slightly as it is the only jump in the entire difficulty and could take people by surprise

Lissette wrote:

please snap your kiai-time timing sections correctly (start and end) and i will be able to give you bubble back ^^

EDIT: Almost forget, also consider the break on Insane that James2250 mentioned.

Tanmak wrote:

Thanks Lissette and James 2250..and I'm terribley sorry James2250 T_T

If I were smart about English, I wouldn't useless mod my map. T_T