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hihi here's a quick mod for nagori

  1. 00:20:300 (3,4) - sudden 1/4 rhythm jump doesn't fit and doesn't play well as is it sudden with the big spacing imo. i recommend you bring 00:20:571 (4,5) - much closer to 00:20:300 (3) -.
  2. 00:39:818 (1,1) - the sliders have different sv even though they sound similar in the song? maybe im missing something.
    also hitting 00:40:179 (2) - is not expected to be a 1/4 rhythm, suggesting that it should be closer to the previous slider's tail.
  3. 00:41:444 (1,2) - i'd maybe keep the spacing low than 2.5x to stay consistent with the spacing of 00:38:553 (1,2,3) - and the ~3.0x would be better to emphasize the kiai section.
  4. 01:05:661 (1,2) - maybe rotate it to make it oriented vertically? it begins to be boring to repeat the same movement starting from 01:04:577 (1) -, in addition to follow the vocals because you started the jump patterns at a holding vocals on 01:04:577 - . the hold breaks on 01:05:661 - therefore a new flow appears to get the new vocals.


flow overally is good imo and rhythm-wise too. good luck!
posted
[Easy]
  1. 00:11:625 - 00:14:516 - 这样的地方多加点音效盖过音乐里的鼓声,听着会比较舒服.
  2. 00:21:203 (1,2) - 整段只有这一组是大长滑条跟的,有什么原因吗
  3. 00:34:215 (3,1) - 肯定不行,尤其是折返
  4. 01:06:023 (3,1) - 考虑改成一个3/2折返滑条


[Normal]
  1. 00:11:625 - 00:14:516 - 同ez
  2. 00:49:215 - 前后几个都是跟的vocal,这里vocal可能还更重,最好加个circle
  3. 01:14:516 (4,5) - 这样似乎更舒服:https://puu.sh/wF5OE/1d39d53f5b.png
  4. 01:23:914 - 同第一条


[Hard]
  1. 00:37:830 (3) - 改成1/4折返?折返一次就够,虽说00:38:101 - 这里也有音但主要还是00:37:920 - 这里最清楚,这样俩1/4折返放在一起也比较舒服
  2. 00:54:998 (1) - 单放个circle不如不跟.你要说跟背景音(滋~~~的那个声音)的话那显然滑条合适,跟vocal的话请直接塞爆,跟鼓的话应该用circle可是这里不存在啊,鼓声


[Insane]
  1. 00:23:643 - I can hear a sound clearly. add a circle?
  2. 00:52:649 (6,7,8,9) - overmap? 00:52:649 (6,8) - this to sound is heavy, use circle or 1/4 slider to follow them is better.


[Another]
  1. 00:33:131 - 这里不clickable还是怪怪的,毕竟是vocal+重鼓点
  2. 00:54:095 - 这个挺明显的,是不是把前面circle改滑条更好


GL
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m4m as request
额 我的图撒谎要摸 我先存个ticket可以不 或者就这张好了 https://osu.ppy.sh/s/545358 I 没做完 最近会挖出来
顺便你cw里写的是Esay
[Easy]
  1. 00:34:215 (3,1) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8614666 我要难受死了 凸出来的那一小点求求你改掉吧

[Normal]
  1. 没啥

[Misure]
  1. 00:03:492 (3) - 感觉在稍微往上挪一点吧 这个比起01:03:854 (3,1) - 类似的感觉小了好多

[Pata-Mon]
  1. 摸啥图 啥图就有怕他萌 劳模
  2. 硬要提点东西就是01:19:757 (5,6,1) - 头在一条直线上,01:26:986 (5,6,1) - 有个比较明显的分层,感觉音差不多吧...前面那个是不是也可以交错开一点

[Doormat]
  1. new game!! when ranked
  2. HS missing
  3. 00:51:926 (1,2) - swap NC will be better as stream used NC start.
  4. 01:13:251 (1,2,3,4) - stacking completely maybe hard to read...imo I will rotate 3 and 4 by 10°

[Kencho]
  1. 00:26:624 (1) - 01:20:119 (1) - 其实感觉不用NC 不过NC也行
  2. 00:39:818 (1) - 这个为啥3/4啊...听起来有点别扭 人声也是在大白线上停的 不如改1/2吧...现在节奏感觉有点乱

[Another]
  1. 00:51:384 (5,6) - 我觉得ctrl+G会更舒服

[Lami]
  1. HS missing
  2. 00:14:878 (5) - suggest NC here as 00:26:083 (3,1) -

[Extreme]
  1. 00:54:998 (1) - 我觉得不如把这个缩小到白线然后放三个圈overmap做大间距连打,还和00:09:276 (1,2,3,4,1) - 能呼应下,都是进主旋律的前奏.主要我觉得这种难度了稍微overmap一下反而更爽...嘛反正也有个长音在这就当跟了(
  2. 01:27:800 (1) - 种草渐出吧

[Nagori]
  1. 01:27:800 (1) - asdf
  2. 你猜这难度要多久才会被dt掉

有啥好摸的.jpg 基本水了一篇
GL~
posted
hard diff:
@巴达萌:都改了
@大宝剑:这里stack锁了间距 而且感觉还好就不改了

谢谢!

复制了主难度的音效 改了点细节直接用了

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TitleUnicode:シンシアの光
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364,348,48673,6,0,L|230:370,1,135,10|8,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,296,49215,2,0,L|177:262,2,33.75,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
88,344,49577,1,0,0:0:0:0:
88,344,49757,2,0,P|76:312|79:279,1,67.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,196,50119,6,0,L|272:223,1,135,14|8,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,184,50661,1,0,0:0:0:0:
360,184,50751,1,0,0:0:0:0:
360,184,50842,2,0,P|378:119|360:55,1,135,8|8,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
277,9,51384,1,0,0:0:0:0:
214,80,51565,5,10,0:1:0:0:
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65,70,52288,2,0,P|65:102|74:135,1,67.5,8|8,0:1|0:1,0:0:0:0:
132,211,52649,2,0,P|130:243|121:276,1,67.5,8|8,0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
26,341,53010,5,14,0:1:0:0:
75,136,53372,1,8,0:0:0:0:
230,282,53733,2,0,L|295:265,2,67.5,8|8|8,0:0|0:1|0:1,0:0:0:0:
162,350,54276,5,8,0:1:0:0:
376,320,54637,1,8,0:0:0:0:
246,148,55902,6,0,L|229:282,1,135,14|8,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,344,56444,1,0,0:0:0:0:
71,301,56625,2,0,P|60:268|59:235,1,67.5,8|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
123,167,56986,2,0,P|156:168|188:178,1,67.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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379,39,57890,2,0,P|389:70|389:104,2,67.5,0|8|0,0:0|0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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188,178,58794,6,0,L|322:192,1,135,10|8,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
371,273,59336,1,0,0:0:0:0:
317,350,59516,2,0,L|249:358,2,67.5,8|0|8,0:1|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,358,60059,1,0,0:0:0:0:
412,358,60240,6,0,L|437:225,1,135,10|8,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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491,86,61324,2,0,P|502:118|501:151,1,67.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
409,134,61685,6,0,L|274:142,1,135,10|8,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
187,103,62227,1,0,0:0:0:0:
187,7,62408,2,0,P|220:12|248:30,1,67.5,8|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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120,113,63673,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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121,300,64486,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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317,360,65119,1,8,0:1:0:0:
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317,212,65661,1,8,0:0:0:0:
255,285,65842,1,8,0:1:0:0:
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194,190,69637,2,0,L|206:123,1,67.5,8|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
269,53,69998,1,8,0:0:0:0:
340,115,70179,1,0,0:0:0:0:
315,206,70360,6,0,P|251:222|194:190,1,135,14|8,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
117,129,70902,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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317,89,72167,2,0,L|251:71,1,67.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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421,117,72890,1,8,0:0:0:0:
421,117,73071,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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374,161,77408,1,8,0:1:0:0:
416,245,77589,6,0,L|482:253,1,67.5,14|8,0:1|0:1,0:0:0:0:
409,339,77950,2,0,L|342:347,1,67.5,8|8,0:1|0:1,0:0:0:0:
214,317,78312,2,0,L|223:384,1,67.5,14|8,0:1|0:1,0:0:0:0:
289,260,78673,2,0,L|297:193,1,67.5,8|8,0:1|0:1,0:0:0:0:
214,317,79035,5,14,0:1:0:0:
135,265,79215,2,0,L|69:280,2,67.5,8|8|8,0:1|0:1|0:1,0:0:0:0:
182,184,79757,2,0,L|172:152,3,33.75,8|8|8|8,0:1|0:1|0:1|0:1,0:0:0:0:
193,109,80119,2,0,L|202:77,3,33.75,4|4|4|4,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,32,80480,5,10,0:1:0:0:
123,43,81926,6,0,P|154:31|188:32,1,67.5,14|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
231,116,82287,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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171,188,82559,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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428,208,83733,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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224,352,85179,1,8,0:0:0:0:
132,328,85360,1,0,0:0:0:0:
132,328,85451,1,0,0:0:0:0:
132,328,85541,2,0,P|120:296|122:262,1,67.5,8|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,204,85902,1,8,0:0:0:0:
161,116,86083,6,0,L|26:126,1,135,14|0,0:1|0:1,0:0:0:0:
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Like you said, a short mod ^_^ (forrgot to write that I can't really mod extras becouse I don't play the so often. Sorry.)



00:44:336 (1) & 00:55:902 (1) - I dont really like that this slider is stacked with 00:43:251 (4) & 00:54:276 (3) this slider. Bit hard to read for brand new players.

01:21:926 (1) - Questionible slider ( dont really like it either).

Almost flawles! I just dont like the visiuals.
FLAWLESS! I guess?
00:32:408 (4) - I would peffer to have that circle at x:352 y:60

00:42:167 (3,4,1) - bit messed up flow. I would peffer to put the circle 00:42:167 (3) at x:244 y:60, and the slider 00:42:348 (4) ctrl + H.

I like the structure better that the normal or the easy difficulty.
00:00:962 (1,2,3) - I would just peffer whole clock wise flow, insted of one random slider that just goes down and ruins the flow. (kina of).

01:00:239 (1,2,3) - This part doesnt make any sense. (wierd flow). Ok it's bit similar to previus parts, but it feels weird to me.

01:17:589 (1,2,3,4) - I think this part should reapeat like this previus part. : 01:16:143 (1,2,3,4)
00:04:938 (3) - New combo could be good, becouse roatiaition change.

00:57:167 (5,1) - weird distance. Preffer bit bigger gap

01:10:360 (1) - Would be more comfortable if there was sharper angle. Could place that slider 01:10:360 (1) at x:264 y:180 and then replace a circle

01:10:902 (2) at x:96 y:196.

01:02:950 (4) - can you raplace this circle at x:420 y:340? Just to finish whole rotation.

00:51:384 (5,1,2) - Uncomfortable. Make the angle more sharper please.

I dont really like this map becouse of the constant rotaition.
Looks kinda near perfect.
00:22:468 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - this part is so confiusing. Change up the flow

00:37:649 (2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - bad stream. It shouldn't have that many corners, becouse corners emphasisies spesific strong sounds. Its not a mistake, but I really don't like it.

01:26:083 (1) - very quetionable. The slider is very uncomfortable. Make it that it goes in a "sharp angle direction", dont know how to explain xD.

Probobly least favorite map in this mapset.
I wouldn't say perfect, but the map it self feels weird. Probobly cause i don't play alot of extras.
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is this a nm or m4m?
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Shad0w1and wrote:

is this a nm or m4m?
you said m4m.
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salchow wrote:

Shad0w1and wrote:

is this a nm or m4m?
you said m4m.
edit your link to your mod. will mod back after 08/01
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Can you even play/mod CTB?

if yes here is the link: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/642707
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M4M, but i don't have a song to mod after 08/01, so will say it later. Here we go...
Nagori
00:20:300 (3,4,5) - read it not like zxz, like zzx. Make 00:20:300 (3) shorter to blue tick, make it reverse and delete 00:20:571 (4). (Here better to follow music, not vocal)
Another
00:28:251 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - don't think this readable enough for 5*
01:12:619 (4) - make shorter to red tick (no sound there)
01:21:926 (1) - seems not like a good idea, cause player will go to this slider, before prev finish (you should make prev shorter or do smth with spacing)
Extreme
00:01:504 (2,3) - http://i.imgur.com/Lne0BpB.jpg (Cause change spacing between sliders in first 2 seconds seems not good)
00:09:276 (1,2,3,4,1) - Nominator for the best choke at start 2017 (this way how i changed it http://i.imgur.com/745xXuv.jpg)
01:06:926 (3,1,2,3,4,1) - http://i.imgur.com/WKllG6W.jpg fix a little (it's really strange when last diff 5.7* is much eaisier than another 5.3*)
01:09:456 (1) - i don't wanna to hit a note, i wanna follow 2nd 01:08:733 (5)
Easy
00:00:962 (1) - this slider looks weird
00:09:637 (1) - and this
01:21:926 (1) - and this looks weird too (I know you can make more pretty ones)

GL WITH RANKING
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For Kencho's request
[Kencho]
00:44:155 (4) - 到 00:44:336 (1) - 神flow 建议修改成大概这样
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8677020
00:57:167 (5) - 248,80 这么一个重音不跳一下好意思?你要说你想用停来表示重音请先改 00:10:721 (5,1) - 00:13:613 (5,1) - etc.
01:00:059 (5) - ^
01:08:733 (4) - ^ 248,168
01:03:854 (3,4) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8677033 better flow for 01:04:215 (4,5,6,1,2) -
01:11:806 (1,2) - rotate 30deg https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8677042 for better flow from 01:11:263 (4,5,1) -
01:27:709 (1) - 480,40 为了上扬感就不要往回勾一下了
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Hi, from my queue :D

If you'll find this mod useful and still want m4m here's my map https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1350269

[Doormat Insane]

00:05:119 (4,5,1) - There's antiflow where in similar part 00:02:408 (1) flow is rather clear
00:17:770 (4,5) - I think it would be better without this stack, there's only one syllable "ta", while in previus stack there were 2 "ga" and "chuu" where circle and slider's beginning represented both of them, here only circle do it
00:49:215 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - With this slider shape whole pattern doesn't look good imo
00:51:926 (1) - Move nc to 00:52:649 (6) (There's no reason for nc to be on this place, while on 6 you have strong sound, if you don't do it at least add a hitsound there)
00:54:637 (2) - Here's a strong sound, snap it more
00:57:167 (5,1) - This spacing is too low comparing to 01:00:059 (5,1)
01:07:468 (1) - Think of making a wave or making angle bigger

[/Notes]

[Extra]

00:02:227 (4) - Think of removing last two ticks and adding a circle on current end
00:09:547 (4,1) - This change in movement is breaking flow + a diamond made from 00:09:366 (2,3,4,1) doesn't look good imo
00:40:541 (4) - Nc here instead of 00:40:721 (1) and 00:41:083 (1)
00:53:010 (1) and so on - This kind of stacks on AR 9 map are really hard to read
00:53:372 (1) - Change angle direction and make angle bigger, won't break a flow
00:54:998 (1) - If your focusing on vocals why this is made as one slider?
01:26:083 (4,1) - Stack in a map's corner is also hard to read

[/Notes]

Good luck with your mapset :D
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My Mod
Nagori


00:00:059 (1) - red tick note
00:01:504 (3) - To divide the revers on slider and notes
00:02:950 (1) - NC
00:03:131 (2) - 2 note
00:04:215 (2) - Nc
00:04:757 (1) - ^
00:05:842 (1) - ^
00:08:914 (9) - It seems to me that this slider should prolong to blue tick
00:10:902 (1) - I think that sound on white tick is important and note should be placed there!
00:12:348 (8,9) - No triple
00:18:131 (3) - No sound
00:18:312 (1) - This slider can be placed under this 00:17:770 (2)
00:20:300 (3,4) - On 00:20:571 (4) - There is no sound, i think i can place note on red tick and then kick-slider
00:23:010 (3) - Slider should be divided on notes, as it was 00:21:203 (1,2,3,4,5)
00:23:372 (1) - nc
00:23:914 (4,5) - remove 5
00:26:986 (1,2) - slider
00:27:709 (4) - Maybe you should not put a long slider cause there is an intense sound in the end!
00:29:336 (4,5) - Swap them
00:29:878 (1) - Maybe you should not put a long slider cause there is an intense sound in the end! Да и к тому же начинается парт, который был похож здесь part begins. It was look like this 00:21:203 (1,2,3,4,5)
00:32:227 (4,5) - Swap them like here 00:29:336 (4,5)
00:32:770 (1) - 00:29:878 (1) <
00:34:035 (5,6) - 00:23:914 (4,5) < (6)
00:37:378 (2,3) - No sound on 2
00:41:625 (2,3) - Jump is very big on 2, but on 3 it's perfect like you made 00:42:167 (1,2,3) - . Думаю стоит 2 передвинуть на 00:40:902 (2) и стакнуть
00:42:709 (1) - Pls do not prolong slider to blue tick because on 00:43:071 (2) strong bit
00:51:565 (1) - It's impossible to play, as you have to turn harshly on left and then harshly make spatial stream on right. 00:51:565 (1) - place this slider on
00:50:661 (2,3,4)
00:52:468 (1,2,3) - swap them 00:51:565 (1)
00:54:637 (3) - make kick-slider as sound on this bit is different
00:56:806 (1) - nc
00:59:697 (1) - think about^
01:00:782 (1) - nc
01:01:685 (1) - overlap
01:02:227 (2) - nc
01:03:854 (3) - nc
01:04:757 (2) - maybe stack on this? 01:04:215 (4)
01:05:300 (1,2,1,2) - decrease the spacing for a little bit
01:12:529 (3,4) - remove 4 and put triple
01:14:516 (1) - Nc i think
01:19:396 (3) - Make stack or unstack on this 01:18:673 (1)
01:24:456 (7,8,9) - There no sound on, then Make a 7 slider


I hope i helped you. Map is good gl with rank! :D
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Adol Christin wrote:

占个2kd坑

General

  1. Another难度的tag有问题,更新一下
  2. 文件大小超过24mb

Nagori

  1. 00:09:276 (1,2,3,4) - 个人推荐一下用1/8短滑。这里每个音隔断很明显,用短滑感觉比单纯的加大间距带感多了
  2. 00:25:179 (4) - 试试让滑条指向的方向反过来(头的位置不动)?vocal这里有上升,换个方向的flow好突出变化
  3. 00:47:770 (2,3,4,6) - 把这几个物件上移一点,让滑条头和5,6能与下面的平行
  4. 00:43:613 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这个连打感觉不好看啊。。要么做圆一点,要不然就下图这样试试看?
  5. 有很多地方的圈,我觉得没必要和滑条碰到(怀疑你cs4做完转的cs3):01:07:468 (1,2) - 01:09:456 (2) - 01:13:251 (1) -
  6. 01:27:800 (1) - 转盘尾消音,其他难度同

Extreme

  1. 00:04:938 - 可以考虑在这儿加个圈

Lami

  1. 01:18:673 (4) - How about replacing this slider with two short-distance circles? i think this would fit the vocal better.
  2. 01:27:166 (3) - The bottom one is a bit offscreen.

Another

  1. 00:54:095 - 最好在这个地方加个圈,比如加到跟蓝色的1重叠,形成一个来回。一方面这里有鼓点,另一方面没圈的话讲道理挺干扰读图的。

Normal

  1. 00:40:179 (3,4,5,6) - 这种梗我觉得在Normal过难了,这种叠很难读清楚。可以试试类似这样的节奏:

就这样吧。祝你好运

就改了消音

sheela wrote:

hihi here's a quick mod for nagori

  1. 00:20:300 (3,4) - sudden 1/4 rhythm jump doesn't fit and doesn't play well as is it sudden with the big spacing imo. i recommend you bring 00:20:571 (4,5) - much closer to 00:20:300 (3) -. :arrow: keep for now
  2. 00:39:818 (1,1) - the sliders have different sv even though they sound similar in the song? maybe im missing something.
    also hitting 00:40:179 (2) - is not expected to be a 1/4 rhythm, suggesting that it should be closer to the previous slider's tail.
    :arrow: keep for now, I do believe they have a difference
  3. 00:41:444 (1,2) - i'd maybe keep the spacing low than 2.5x to stay consistent with the spacing of 00:38:553 (1,2,3) - and the ~3.0x would be better to emphasize the kiai section.
  4. 01:05:661 (1,2) - maybe rotate it to make it oriented vertically? it begins to be boring to repeat the same movement starting from 01:04:577 (1) -, in addition to follow the vocals because you started the jump patterns at a holding vocals on 01:04:577 - . the hold breaks on 01:05:661 - therefore a new flow appears to get the new vocals. :arrow: I will figure out this later, I might need to restructure the whole section let me think about it


flow overally is good imo and rhythm-wise too. good luck!

Pata-Mon wrote:

[Easy]
  1. 00:11:625 - 00:14:516 - 这样的地方多加点音效盖过音乐里的鼓声,听着会比较舒服. :arrow:
  2. 00:21:203 (1,2) - 整段只有这一组是大长滑条跟的,有什么原因吗 :arrow: 因为vocal段落变化了,但是鼓声节奏一样显得很无聊,不如改这样
  3. 00:34:215 (3,1) - 肯定不行,尤其是折返
  4. 01:06:023 (3,1) - 考虑改成一个3/2折返滑条


[Normal]
  1. 00:11:625 - 00:14:516 - 同ez
  2. 00:49:215 - 前后几个都是跟的vocal,这里vocal可能还更重,最好加个circle :arrow: 00:45:601 - 00:47:047 - 这些都没跟啊
  3. 01:14:516 (4,5) - 这样似乎更舒服:[url]https://puu.sh/wF5OE/1d39d53f5b.png :arrow: 差不多,不改了[/url]
  4. 01:23:914 - 同第一条 :arrow: 懒,再看


[Another]
  1. 00:33:131 - 这里不clickable还是怪怪的,毕竟是vocal+重鼓点 :arrow: 元音没有辅音清晰
  2. 00:54:095 - 这个挺明显的,是不是把前面circle改滑条更好 :arrow: 故意的


GL

[Crz]Sword wrote:

m4m as request
额 我的图撒谎要摸 我先存个ticket可以不 或者就这张好了 https://osu.ppy.sh/s/545358 I 没做完 最近会挖出来
顺便你cw里写的是Esay
[Easy]
  1. 00:34:215 (3,1) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8614666 我要难受死了 凸出来的那一小点求求你改掉吧

[Normal]
  1. 没啥


[Another]
  1. 00:51:384 (5,6) - 我觉得ctrl+G会更舒服 :arrow: 一样


[Extreme]
  1. 00:54:998 (1) - 我觉得不如把这个缩小到白线然后放三个圈overmap做大间距连打,还和00:09:276 (1,2,3,4,1) - 能呼应下,都是进主旋律的前奏.主要我觉得这种难度了稍微overmap一下反而更爽...嘛反正也有个长音在这就当跟了(
  2. 01:27:800 (1) - 种草渐出吧 :arrow: 微调了

[Nagori]
  1. 01:27:800 (1) - asdf
  2. 你猜这难度要多久才会被dt掉

有啥好摸的.jpg 基本水了一篇
GL~

salchow wrote:

Like you said, a short mod ^_^ (forrgot to write that I can't really mod extras becouse I don't play the so often. Sorry.)



00:44:336 (1) & 00:55:902 (1) - I dont really like that this slider is stacked with 00:43:251 (4) & 00:54:276 (3) this slider. Bit hard to read for brand new players. :arrow: keep for now

01:21:926 (1) - Questionible slider ( dont really like it either).

Almost flawles! I just dont like the visiuals.
FLAWLESS! I guess?
00:22:468 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - this part is so confiusing. Change up the flow :arrow: i dont think so :x

00:37:649 (2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - bad stream. It shouldn't have that many corners, becouse corners emphasisies spesific strong sounds. Its not a mistake, but I really don't like it.
:arrow: i think its fine
01:26:083 (1) - very quetionable. The slider is very uncomfortable. Make it that it goes in a "sharp angle direction", dont know how to explain xD.

Probobly least favorite map in this mapset.

BevzProDota wrote:

M4M, but i don't have a song to mod after 08/01, so will say it later. Here we go...
Nagori
00:20:300 (3,4,5) - read it not like zxz, like zzx. Make 00:20:300 (3) shorter to blue tick, make it reverse and delete 00:20:571 (4). (Here better to follow music, not vocal) :arrow: will think about it
Another
00:28:251 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - don't think this readable enough for 5* :arrow: mapping has nothing to do with SR
01:12:619 (4) - make shorter to red tick (no sound there) :arrow: scratch sound does not count here and long slider emphasis the snares better
01:21:926 (1) - seems not like a good idea, cause player will go to this slider, before prev finish (you should make prev shorter or do smth with spacing) :arrow: i am sure people can read it
Extreme
00:01:504 (2,3) - http://i.imgur.com/Lne0BpB.jpg (Cause change spacing between sliders in first 2 seconds seems not good) :arrow: either way. keep mine
00:09:276 (1,2,3,4,1) - Nominator for the best choke at start 2017 (this way how i changed it http://i.imgur.com/745xXuv.jpg&#41; :arrow: it fits
01:06:926 (3,1,2,3,4,1) - http://i.imgur.com/WKllG6W.jpg fix a little (it's really strange when last diff 5.7* is much eaisier than another 5.3*) :arrow: thats why SR is shxt, never look at it :/
01:09:456 (1) - i don't wanna to hit a note, i wanna follow 2nd 01:08:733 (5) :arrow: prefer current
Easy
00:00:962 (1) - this slider looks weird
00:09:637 (1) - and this
01:21:926 (1) - and this looks weird too (I know you can make more pretty ones)
:arrow: they are pretty to me
GL WITH RANKING

SellinFuTuRe wrote:

My Mod
Nagori


00:00:059 (1) - red tick note
00:01:504 (3) - To divide the revers on slider and notes
00:02:950 (1) - NC
00:03:131 (2) - 2 note
00:04:215 (2) - Nc
00:04:757 (1) - ^
00:05:842 (1) - ^
00:08:914 (9) - It seems to me that this slider should prolong to blue tick
00:10:902 (1) - I think that sound on white tick is important and note should be placed there!
00:12:348 (8,9) - No triple
00:18:131 (3) - No sound
00:18:312 (1) - This slider can be placed under this 00:17:770 (2)
00:20:300 (3,4) - On 00:20:571 (4) - There is no sound, i think i can place note on red tick and then kick-slider
00:23:010 (3) - Slider should be divided on notes, as it was 00:21:203 (1,2,3,4,5)
00:23:372 (1) - nc
00:23:914 (4,5) - remove 5
00:26:986 (1,2) - slider
00:27:709 (4) - Maybe you should not put a long slider cause there is an intense sound in the end!
00:29:336 (4,5) - Swap them
00:29:878 (1) - Maybe you should not put a long slider cause there is an intense sound in the end! Да и к тому же начинается парт, который был похож здесь part begins. It was look like this 00:21:203 (1,2,3,4,5)
00:32:227 (4,5) - Swap them like here 00:29:336 (4,5)
00:32:770 (1) - 00:29:878 (1) <
00:34:035 (5,6) - 00:23:914 (4,5) < (6)
00:37:378 (2,3) - No sound on 2
00:41:625 (2,3) - Jump is very big on 2, but on 3 it's perfect like you made 00:42:167 (1,2,3) - . Думаю стоит 2 передвинуть на 00:40:902 (2) и стакнуть
00:42:709 (1) - Pls do not prolong slider to blue tick because on 00:43:071 (2) strong bit
00:51:565 (1) - It's impossible to play, as you have to turn harshly on left and then harshly make spatial stream on right. 00:51:565 (1) - place this slider on
00:50:661 (2,3,4)
00:52:468 (1,2,3) - swap them 00:51:565 (1)
00:54:637 (3) - make kick-slider as sound on this bit is different
00:56:806 (1) - nc
00:59:697 (1) - think about^
01:00:782 (1) - nc
01:01:685 (1) - overlap
01:02:227 (2) - nc
01:03:854 (3) - nc
01:04:757 (2) - maybe stack on this? 01:04:215 (4)
01:05:300 (1,2,1,2) - decrease the spacing for a little bit
01:12:529 (3,4) - remove 4 and put triple
01:14:516 (1) - Nc i think
01:19:396 (3) - Make stack or unstack on this 01:18:673 (1)
01:24:456 (7,8,9) - There no sound on, then Make a 7 slider


I hope i helped you. Map is good gl with rank! :D
:arrow: NC is usually placed at downbeats, and triplets are for extra emphasis, and other thing are intentional. fixed some minor things
posted

salchow wrote:

00:32:408 (4) - I would peffer to have that circle at x:352 y:60
:arrow:it will be so far from next slider in that case

00:42:167 (3,4,1) - bit messed up flow. I would peffer to put the circle 00:42:167 (3) at x:244 y:60, and the slider 00:42:348 (4) ctrl + H.
:arrow:the reason is the same as above, also I'd like an anticlockwise flow here

I like the structure better that the normal or the easy difficulty.
thx!

fixed some details

osu file format v14

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TitleUnicode:シンシアの光
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ArtistUnicode:藍井エイル
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posted

[Crz]Sword wrote:

[Doormat]
  1. new game!! when ranked soon tm
  2. HS missing copied from one of the higher diffs
  3. 00:51:926 (1,2) - swap NC will be better as stream used NC start. agree
  4. 01:13:251 (1,2,3,4) - stacking completely maybe hard to read...imo I will rotate 3 and 4 by 10° disagree; players of this level should be able to read this. plus i think it suits the music more appropriately

salchow wrote:

[Doormat's Insane]00:04:938 (3) - New combo could be good, becouse roatiaition change. no; new combos are primarily used at the beginning at every bar; this would break that consistency

00:57:167 (5,1) - weird distance. Preffer bit bigger gap i think it's fine

01:10:360 (1) - Would be more comfortable if there was sharper angle. Could place that slider 01:10:360 (1) at x:264 y:180 and then replace a circle no; i feel that this would play more awkwardly than what is currently there

01:10:902 (2) at x:96 y:196. why? this breaks spacing emphasis from 01:10:902 (2,3) -

01:02:950 (4) - can you raplace this circle at x:420 y:340? Just to finish whole rotation. point of placing circle here is to break the rotation

00:51:384 (5,1,2) - Uncomfortable. Make the angle more sharper please. angle is fine but i can space this out a bit more

I dont really like this map becouse of the constant rotaition if you dislike it cause of the constant rotation why are you suggesting me to make more rotations...

Milar001 wrote:

[Doormat Insane]

00:05:119 (4,5,1) - There's antiflow where in similar part 00:02:408 (1) flow is rather clear antiflow is because of the triple; i feel that it gives the map a more snappier feeling which i feel constrasts well with the beginning because the song starts to pick up here
00:17:770 (4,5) - I think it would be better without this stack, there's only one syllable "ta", while in previus stack there were 2 "ga" and "chuu" where circle and slider's beginning represented both of them, here only circle do it stack is because of the kick in the drums on 00:17:950 -
00:49:215 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - With this slider shape whole pattern doesn't look good imo i think this looks fine. more importantly it plays fine.
00:51:926 (1) - Move nc to 00:52:649 (6) (There's no reason for nc to be on this place, while on 6 you have strong sound, if you don't do it at least add a hitsound there) it was to help with reading in case players couldn't read that this was a 1/4 repeat slider but i changed it anyways; however i moved the nc to 00:52:288 - instead
00:54:637 (2) - Here's a strong sound, snap it more confused by what you mean by "snap it more"... but i spaced it out more i guess
00:57:167 (5,1) - This spacing is too low comparing to 01:00:059 (5,1) intentional; the inflection at 00:57:167 (5,1) - isn't as strong as the inflection at 01:00:059 (5,1) - so the lower spacing is to emphasize difference in vocal inflection
01:07:468 (1) - Think of making a wave or making angle bigger i think this looks fine the way it currently is
edit: forgot to reply to pata-mon lol

Pata-Mon wrote:

[Insane]
  1. 00:23:643 - I can hear a sound clearly. add a circle? ok
  2. 00:52:649 (6,7,8,9) - overmap? 00:52:649 (6,8) - this to sound is heavy, use circle or 1/4 slider to follow them is better. good point;
    adjusted stream


thanks for the mods https://drmt.s-ul.eu/Yuk8sEqC https://drmt.s-ul.eu/DjlboyB5
posted
@大保健 前面那里没地方了 也不是特别必要就keep吧

salchow:
00:00:962 (1,2,3) - I would just peffer whole clock wise flow, insted of one random slider that just goes down and ruins the flow. (kina of). this part is really slow so i think it's unnecessary to do it

01:00:239 (1,2,3) - This part doesnt make any sense. (wierd flow). Ok it's bit similar to previus parts, but it feels weird to me. why no sense.. this part is comfortable to me

01:17:589 (1,2,3,4) - I think this part should reapeat like this previus part. : 01:16:143 (1,2,3,4) the feeling of the vocal changed here so i want sth different

no change but thanks!
posted
占个2kd坑

Lami

  1. 01:18:673 (4) - How about replacing this slider with two short-distance circles? i think this would fit the vocal better.
    idk.. this slider make emphasis at clicking drum 01:19:035 (1,2,3,4) - .keep
  2. 01:27:166 (3) - The bottom one is a bit offscreen. it's not offscreen
Sword"]m4m as request
额 我的图撒谎要摸 我先存个ticket可以不 或者就这张好了 https://osu.ppy.sh/s/545358 I 没做完 最近会挖出来
顺便你cw里写的是Esay

[Lami]
  1. HS missing
  2. 00:14:878 (5) - suggest NC here as 00:26:083 (3,1) - ok


GL~
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posted

[Crz]Sword wrote:

[Kencho]
  1. 00:26:624 (1) - 01:20:119 (1) - 其实感觉不用NC 不过NC也行 keep
  2. 00:39:818 (1) - 这个为啥3/4啊...听起来有点别扭 人声也是在大白线上停的 不如改1/2吧...现在节奏感觉有点乱 人格和yf都说3/4比较爽,我也这么觉得

ts8zs wrote:

For Kencho's request
[Kencho]
00:44:155 (4) - 到 00:44:336 (1) - 神flow 建议修改成大概这样 这个有点主观,改了没什么分别
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8677020
00:57:167 (5) - 248,80 这么一个重音不跳一下好意思?你要说你想用停来表示重音请先改 00:10:721 (5,1) - 00:13:613 (5,1) - etc. kiai前面的就不改了第二部分改了
01:00:059 (5) - ^
01:08:733 (4) - ^ 248,168
01:03:854 (3,4) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8677033 better flow for 01:04:215 (4,5,6,1,2) - 比较主官,改了之后违背我的flow
01:11:806 (1,2) - rotate 30deg https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8677042 for better flow from 01:11:263 (4,5,1) - ^
01:27:709 (1) - 480,40 为了上扬感就不要往回勾一下了^
Thanks for mod
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252,117,83914,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,117,84004,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,117,84095,2,0,L|157:126,1,95.9999970703126,8|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,195,84456,1,8,0:0:0:0:
292,30,84637,1,0,0:0:0:0:
213,204,84818,6,0,P|228:249|264:281,1,95.9999970703126,14|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,186,85179,2,0,P|398:233|368:271,1,95.9999970703126,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,195,85450,1,0,0:0:0:0:
308,195,85540,2,0,L|299:100,1,95.9999970703126,8|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,186,85902,1,8,0:0:0:0:
263,281,86083,6,0,P|170:284|122:208,1,191.999994140625,14|8,0:1|0:1,0:0:0:0:
116,51,86625,1,8,0:0:0:0:
213,204,86805,1,8,0:1:0:0:
73,131,86986,6,0,L|29:107,1,47.9999985351563,8|8,0:1|0:1,0:0:0:0:
256,124,87167,2,0,L|300:148,1,47.9999985351563,8|8,0:1|0:1,0:0:0:0:
122,208,87348,2,0,L|81:234,1,47.9999985351563,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
207,47,87528,2,0,L|248:21,1,47.9999985351563,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
171,285,87709,5,14,0:1:0:0:
256,192,87800,12,0,93492,0:0:0:0:
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General
  1. tag in Another: ''Sword Art Online Lost Song SAO Lami intoon Kencho Doormat Misure Pata-Mon Monstrata Monstrata Monstrata Monstrata''
    ;ok_hand;
  2. Unused hitsounds: normal-sliderslide.wav 似乎确实是没用到(?
  3. EN最后建议也加转盘,主要Easy现在0转盘又无别处可以加



Nagori
  1. 00:01:504 (3,1) - 主要跟人声就换1/1吧,1/2折返不停换flow移动起来真的不舒服加上这还是开头。另外开头整体视觉间距我觉得还需要缩小很多即使这是CS3,00:06:203 (4,5,6) - 什么的和后面区分度真的不大
  2. 00:39:818 (1) - 这耿直的形状我还以为还是1/2.. 建议稍微改一下
  3. 00:54:998 - 可whistle一下跟人声
  4. 00:54:095 (3) - 既然前面两个都是stack之前的物件这个也可以stack到 00:52:649 (3) - 尾,反而间距这样打起来更合适,我建议这样动一下 00:54:095 (3,1,2,3) - 这四个note
  5. 01:04:396 (5,6) - 也可以加点音效让这种不stack的三连更加有打击感 (为啥次难度倒有
  6. 01:19:396 (3) - 放下来一点,从2过来几乎横着柑橘不好打,可以和 01:20:480 (1) - 头stack
  7. 01:20:390 (8,1) - 你就不能弄个顺着前面串的flow的形状么

    cs稍大点似乎打起来也没啥区别的排版 :?



Extreme
  1. 00:55:902 (1,2,3) - ..我个人感觉这种节奏很不适合这首歌,副歌从头到尾人声都是很平稳地在唱,简直就是为了这种节奏而下这种节奏了

    硬要说也没什么特别难受的地方,但总有种感觉两个最高难度好的地方合在一起明明能弄一个更有意思的难度... 现在这样就是说不清楚的不满意,说多余也不好但总有点违和,Another感觉海星



Another
  1. 00:18:674 (3,5) - 这种东西多少会有争议的
  2. 01:16:866 (1,2,1,2,3,1) - 求你1/4滑条间视觉间距区分度跟1/2比大一点


Normal
  1. 00:01:866 (3,4,5,6,1,2) - 作为开头这串连续1/2有点长,建议 00:02:227 (4) - 换1/1,00:02:950 - 这里加个note叠后面的滑条上
  2. 00:47:227 (1,2,3) - 可以试试 https://puu.sh/xsL1m/661c39f38a.png
  3. 00:53:010 (1,2,3) - 这里节奏跟easy一样,可以稍微改难点



Easy
  1. 00:43:251 (4,1) - 这里叠着不妥,4快结束的时候后面缩圈已经出现新手可能读图会乱,ds也不是很远就ds吧还是
    整体来讲有的地方为了加1/2节奏上弄得跟normal差不多.. 明明再简化一点也没事的,搞得spread很微妙



Misure's Hard
  1. 00:44:968 (3) - 00:46:414 (3) - 00:47:859 (3) - 00:50:751 (3) - 删了主要跟人声吧,照顾下normal,现在spread状况大概是ez--nm----hd--hypr,你看别处合适的也可以稍微简化
  2. 01:17:408 (4) - 别处1/2都没叠啊.. 00:38:553 (1,2) - 00:41:444 (1,2) - 怎么说也算比较特别



Pata-Mon's Hyper
  1. 00:14:697 (3,4,1) - 这间距配合这flow是不是有点憋。。可以试试->https://puu.sh/xsLAn/813b50c6f9.png
  2. 00:24:456 - 折返漏了finish


Doormat's Insane
  1. 00:23:011 (3,6,7,8) - i think this is not what it is supposed to be like :?
  2. 00:36:204 (4) - flows better if 3->4 is pointing downward, what about stacking on slider head of 6?


Kencho's Insane
  1. 01:18:673 (2,3,1,2,3,4) - 这里可否调整成 https://puu.sh/xsM0W/e9861bf448.png 这种感觉,让1也跳到
    恳求已经掌握dt精髓了 :!:


Lami's Extra
  1. 00:41:444 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - I suggest rearranging to anti-clockwise movement instead cuz 00:38:552 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - is having enough of clockwise and it would fit music to break the flow there
  2. 01:04:577 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - would be nice if 01:05:661 (1,2) - is only different 1-2 cuz vocal is switching to another word here
  3. 01:33:492 - mute spinner tail like other diffs?
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