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占个2kd坑

General

  1. Another难度的tag有问题,更新一下
  2. 文件大小超过24mb

Nagori

  1. 00:09:276 (1,2,3,4) - 个人推荐一下用1/8短滑。这里每个音隔断很明显,用短滑感觉比单纯的加大间距带感多了
  2. 00:25:179 (4) - 试试让滑条指向的方向反过来(头的位置不动)?vocal这里有上升,换个方向的flow好突出变化
  3. 00:47:770 (2,3,4,6) - 把这几个物件上移一点,让滑条头和5,6能与下面的平行
  4. 00:43:613 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这个连打感觉不好看啊。。要么做圆一点,要不然就下图这样试试看?
  5. 有很多地方的圈,我觉得没必要和滑条碰到(怀疑你cs4做完转的cs3):01:07:468 (1,2) - 01:09:456 (2) - 01:13:251 (1) -
  6. 01:27:800 (1) - 转盘尾消音,其他难度同

Extreme

  1. 00:04:938 - 可以考虑在这儿加个圈

Lami

  1. 01:18:673 (4) - How about replacing this slider with two short-distance circles? i think this would fit the vocal better.
  2. 01:27:166 (3) - The bottom one is a bit offscreen.

Another

  1. 00:54:095 - 最好在这个地方加个圈,比如加到跟蓝色的1重叠,形成一个来回。一方面这里有鼓点,另一方面没圈的话讲道理挺干扰读图的。

Normal

  1. 00:40:179 (3,4,5,6) - 这种梗我觉得在Normal过难了,这种叠很难读清楚。可以试试类似这样的节奏:

就这样吧。祝你好运
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save 2kd
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: optc.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 54998
Countdown: 1
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.4
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 962,9637,15420,26986,38553,55902,67468,81926
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 8
TimelineZoom: 2.5

[Metadata]
Title:Cynthia No Hikari
TitleUnicode:シンシアの光
Artist:Eir Aoi
ArtistUnicode:藍井エイル
Creator:Shad0w1and
Version:Lami's Extra
Source:ソードアート・オンライン ロスト・ソング
Tags:Sword Art Online Lost Song
BeatmapID:1315102
BeatmapSetID:504005

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:3.8
OverallDifficulty:8.2
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:1.8
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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MONSTRATA MONSTRATA MONSTRATA
posted

Neptunee wrote:

MONSTRATA MONSTRATA MONSTRATA
posted
Don't hate me but, the majority of the BGs are from Hollow Realization, not Lost Song.

Try this album instead: http://imgur.com/gallery/Q6GDs

:?
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Lanturn wrote:

Don't hate me but, the majority of the BGs are from Hollow Realization, not Lost Song.

Try this album instead: http://imgur.com/gallery/Q6GDs

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Damn I love you su much. ( also do you still remember that ef gd stuff
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Shad0w1and wrote:

Damn I love you su much. ( also do you still remember that ef gd stuff
Yup of course. I've been really lazy with osu! lately though :(

I'm gonna work on it again over these next few days (and finish?) hopefully.
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hihi here's a quick mod for nagori

  1. 00:20:300 (3,4) - sudden 1/4 rhythm jump doesn't fit and doesn't play well as is it sudden with the big spacing imo. i recommend you bring 00:20:571 (4,5) - much closer to 00:20:300 (3) -.
  2. 00:39:818 (1,1) - the sliders have different sv even though they sound similar in the song? maybe im missing something.
    also hitting 00:40:179 (2) - is not expected to be a 1/4 rhythm, suggesting that it should be closer to the previous slider's tail.
  3. 00:41:444 (1,2) - i'd maybe keep the spacing low than 2.5x to stay consistent with the spacing of 00:38:553 (1,2,3) - and the ~3.0x would be better to emphasize the kiai section.
  4. 01:05:661 (1,2) - maybe rotate it to make it oriented vertically? it begins to be boring to repeat the same movement starting from 01:04:577 (1) -, in addition to follow the vocals because you started the jump patterns at a holding vocals on 01:04:577 - . the hold breaks on 01:05:661 - therefore a new flow appears to get the new vocals.


flow overally is good imo and rhythm-wise too. good luck!
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[Easy]
  1. 00:11:625 - 00:14:516 - 这样的地方多加点音效盖过音乐里的鼓声,听着会比较舒服.
  2. 00:21:203 (1,2) - 整段只有这一组是大长滑条跟的,有什么原因吗
  3. 00:34:215 (3,1) - 肯定不行,尤其是折返
  4. 01:06:023 (3,1) - 考虑改成一个3/2折返滑条


[Normal]
  1. 00:11:625 - 00:14:516 - 同ez
  2. 00:49:215 - 前后几个都是跟的vocal,这里vocal可能还更重,最好加个circle
  3. 01:14:516 (4,5) - 这样似乎更舒服:https://puu.sh/wF5OE/1d39d53f5b.png
  4. 01:23:914 - 同第一条


[Hard]
  1. 00:37:830 (3) - 改成1/4折返?折返一次就够,虽说00:38:101 - 这里也有音但主要还是00:37:920 - 这里最清楚,这样俩1/4折返放在一起也比较舒服
  2. 00:54:998 (1) - 单放个circle不如不跟.你要说跟背景音(滋~~~的那个声音)的话那显然滑条合适,跟vocal的话请直接塞爆,跟鼓的话应该用circle可是这里不存在啊,鼓声


[Insane]
  1. 00:23:643 - I can hear a sound clearly. add a circle?
  2. 00:52:649 (6,7,8,9) - overmap? 00:52:649 (6,8) - this to sound is heavy, use circle or 1/4 slider to follow them is better.


[Another]
  1. 00:33:131 - 这里不clickable还是怪怪的,毕竟是vocal+重鼓点
  2. 00:54:095 - 这个挺明显的,是不是把前面circle改滑条更好


GL
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m4m as request
额 我的图撒谎要摸 我先存个ticket可以不 或者就这张好了 https://osu.ppy.sh/s/545358 I 没做完 最近会挖出来
顺便你cw里写的是Esay
[Easy]
  1. 00:34:215 (3,1) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8614666 我要难受死了 凸出来的那一小点求求你改掉吧

[Normal]
  1. 没啥

[Misure]
  1. 00:03:492 (3) - 感觉在稍微往上挪一点吧 这个比起01:03:854 (3,1) - 类似的感觉小了好多

[Pata-Mon]
  1. 摸啥图 啥图就有怕他萌 劳模
  2. 硬要提点东西就是01:19:757 (5,6,1) - 头在一条直线上,01:26:986 (5,6,1) - 有个比较明显的分层,感觉音差不多吧...前面那个是不是也可以交错开一点

[Doormat]
  1. new game!! when ranked
  2. HS missing
  3. 00:51:926 (1,2) - swap NC will be better as stream used NC start.
  4. 01:13:251 (1,2,3,4) - stacking completely maybe hard to read...imo I will rotate 3 and 4 by 10°

[Kencho]
  1. 00:26:624 (1) - 01:20:119 (1) - 其实感觉不用NC 不过NC也行
  2. 00:39:818 (1) - 这个为啥3/4啊...听起来有点别扭 人声也是在大白线上停的 不如改1/2吧...现在节奏感觉有点乱

[Another]
  1. 00:51:384 (5,6) - 我觉得ctrl+G会更舒服

[Lami]
  1. HS missing
  2. 00:14:878 (5) - suggest NC here as 00:26:083 (3,1) -

[Extreme]
  1. 00:54:998 (1) - 我觉得不如把这个缩小到白线然后放三个圈overmap做大间距连打,还和00:09:276 (1,2,3,4,1) - 能呼应下,都是进主旋律的前奏.主要我觉得这种难度了稍微overmap一下反而更爽...嘛反正也有个长音在这就当跟了(
  2. 01:27:800 (1) - 种草渐出吧

[Nagori]
  1. 01:27:800 (1) - asdf
  2. 你猜这难度要多久才会被dt掉

有啥好摸的.jpg 基本水了一篇
GL~
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hard diff:
@巴达萌:都改了
@大宝剑:这里stack锁了间距 而且感觉还好就不改了

谢谢!

复制了主难度的音效 改了点细节直接用了

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Title:Cynthia No Hikari
TitleUnicode:シンシアの光
Artist:Eir Aoi
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Creator:Shad0w1and
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399,278,26986,6,0,P|432:283|464:275,1,67.5,14|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
503,188,27348,2,0,P|490:156|467:132,1,67.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
375,156,27709,2,0,P|309:168|245:149,1,135,8|8,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
198,65,28251,1,2,0:1:0:0:
120,120,28432,6,0,L|134:185,1,67.5,8|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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280,224,29516,2,0,L|265:289,1,67.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,348,29878,5,10,0:1:0:0:
340,348,30059,1,0,0:0:0:0:
420,296,30240,2,0,P|421:262|410:230,1,67.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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445,139,31143,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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411,230,31685,2,0,L|345:244,1,67.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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409,193,35119,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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Like you said, a short mod ^_^ (forrgot to write that I can't really mod extras becouse I don't play the so often. Sorry.)



00:44:336 (1) & 00:55:902 (1) - I dont really like that this slider is stacked with 00:43:251 (4) & 00:54:276 (3) this slider. Bit hard to read for brand new players.

01:21:926 (1) - Questionible slider ( dont really like it either).

Almost flawles! I just dont like the visiuals.
FLAWLESS! I guess?
00:32:408 (4) - I would peffer to have that circle at x:352 y:60

00:42:167 (3,4,1) - bit messed up flow. I would peffer to put the circle 00:42:167 (3) at x:244 y:60, and the slider 00:42:348 (4) ctrl + H.

I like the structure better that the normal or the easy difficulty.
00:00:962 (1,2,3) - I would just peffer whole clock wise flow, insted of one random slider that just goes down and ruins the flow. (kina of).

01:00:239 (1,2,3) - This part doesnt make any sense. (wierd flow). Ok it's bit similar to previus parts, but it feels weird to me.

01:17:589 (1,2,3,4) - I think this part should reapeat like this previus part. : 01:16:143 (1,2,3,4)
00:04:938 (3) - New combo could be good, becouse roatiaition change.

00:57:167 (5,1) - weird distance. Preffer bit bigger gap

01:10:360 (1) - Would be more comfortable if there was sharper angle. Could place that slider 01:10:360 (1) at x:264 y:180 and then replace a circle

01:10:902 (2) at x:96 y:196.

01:02:950 (4) - can you raplace this circle at x:420 y:340? Just to finish whole rotation.

00:51:384 (5,1,2) - Uncomfortable. Make the angle more sharper please.

I dont really like this map becouse of the constant rotaition.
Looks kinda near perfect.
00:22:468 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - this part is so confiusing. Change up the flow

00:37:649 (2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - bad stream. It shouldn't have that many corners, becouse corners emphasisies spesific strong sounds. Its not a mistake, but I really don't like it.

01:26:083 (1) - very quetionable. The slider is very uncomfortable. Make it that it goes in a "sharp angle direction", dont know how to explain xD.

Probobly least favorite map in this mapset.
I wouldn't say perfect, but the map it self feels weird. Probobly cause i don't play alot of extras.
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is this a nm or m4m?
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Shad0w1and wrote:

is this a nm or m4m?
you said m4m.
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salchow wrote:

Shad0w1and wrote:

is this a nm or m4m?
you said m4m.
edit your link to your mod. will mod back after 08/01
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Can you even play/mod CTB?

if yes here is the link: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/642707
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M4M, but i don't have a song to mod after 08/01, so will say it later. Here we go...
Nagori
00:20:300 (3,4,5) - read it not like zxz, like zzx. Make 00:20:300 (3) shorter to blue tick, make it reverse and delete 00:20:571 (4). (Here better to follow music, not vocal)
Another
00:28:251 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - don't think this readable enough for 5*
01:12:619 (4) - make shorter to red tick (no sound there)
01:21:926 (1) - seems not like a good idea, cause player will go to this slider, before prev finish (you should make prev shorter or do smth with spacing)
Extreme
00:01:504 (2,3) - http://i.imgur.com/Lne0BpB.jpg (Cause change spacing between sliders in first 2 seconds seems not good)
00:09:276 (1,2,3,4,1) - Nominator for the best choke at start 2017 (this way how i changed it http://i.imgur.com/745xXuv.jpg)
01:06:926 (3,1,2,3,4,1) - http://i.imgur.com/WKllG6W.jpg fix a little (it's really strange when last diff 5.7* is much eaisier than another 5.3*)
01:09:456 (1) - i don't wanna to hit a note, i wanna follow 2nd 01:08:733 (5)
Easy
00:00:962 (1) - this slider looks weird
00:09:637 (1) - and this
01:21:926 (1) - and this looks weird too (I know you can make more pretty ones)

GL WITH RANKING
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For Kencho's request
[Kencho]
00:44:155 (4) - 到 00:44:336 (1) - 神flow 建议修改成大概这样
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8677020
00:57:167 (5) - 248,80 这么一个重音不跳一下好意思?你要说你想用停来表示重音请先改 00:10:721 (5,1) - 00:13:613 (5,1) - etc.
01:00:059 (5) - ^
01:08:733 (4) - ^ 248,168
01:03:854 (3,4) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8677033 better flow for 01:04:215 (4,5,6,1,2) -
01:11:806 (1,2) - rotate 30deg https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8677042 for better flow from 01:11:263 (4,5,1) -
01:27:709 (1) - 480,40 为了上扬感就不要往回勾一下了
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Hi, from my queue :D

If you'll find this mod useful and still want m4m here's my map https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1350269

[Doormat Insane]

00:05:119 (4,5,1) - There's antiflow where in similar part 00:02:408 (1) flow is rather clear
00:17:770 (4,5) - I think it would be better without this stack, there's only one syllable "ta", while in previus stack there were 2 "ga" and "chuu" where circle and slider's beginning represented both of them, here only circle do it
00:49:215 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - With this slider shape whole pattern doesn't look good imo
00:51:926 (1) - Move nc to 00:52:649 (6) (There's no reason for nc to be on this place, while on 6 you have strong sound, if you don't do it at least add a hitsound there)
00:54:637 (2) - Here's a strong sound, snap it more
00:57:167 (5,1) - This spacing is too low comparing to 01:00:059 (5,1)
01:07:468 (1) - Think of making a wave or making angle bigger

[/Notes]

[Extra]

00:02:227 (4) - Think of removing last two ticks and adding a circle on current end
00:09:547 (4,1) - This change in movement is breaking flow + a diamond made from 00:09:366 (2,3,4,1) doesn't look good imo
00:40:541 (4) - Nc here instead of 00:40:721 (1) and 00:41:083 (1)
00:53:010 (1) and so on - This kind of stacks on AR 9 map are really hard to read
00:53:372 (1) - Change angle direction and make angle bigger, won't break a flow
00:54:998 (1) - If your focusing on vocals why this is made as one slider?
01:26:083 (4,1) - Stack in a map's corner is also hard to read

[/Notes]

Good luck with your mapset :D
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My Mod
Nagori


00:00:059 (1) - red tick note
00:01:504 (3) - To divide the revers on slider and notes
00:02:950 (1) - NC
00:03:131 (2) - 2 note
00:04:215 (2) - Nc
00:04:757 (1) - ^
00:05:842 (1) - ^
00:08:914 (9) - It seems to me that this slider should prolong to blue tick
00:10:902 (1) - I think that sound on white tick is important and note should be placed there!
00:12:348 (8,9) - No triple
00:18:131 (3) - No sound
00:18:312 (1) - This slider can be placed under this 00:17:770 (2)
00:20:300 (3,4) - On 00:20:571 (4) - There is no sound, i think i can place note on red tick and then kick-slider
00:23:010 (3) - Slider should be divided on notes, as it was 00:21:203 (1,2,3,4,5)
00:23:372 (1) - nc
00:23:914 (4,5) - remove 5
00:26:986 (1,2) - slider
00:27:709 (4) - Maybe you should not put a long slider cause there is an intense sound in the end!
00:29:336 (4,5) - Swap them
00:29:878 (1) - Maybe you should not put a long slider cause there is an intense sound in the end! Да и к тому же начинается парт, который был похож здесь part begins. It was look like this 00:21:203 (1,2,3,4,5)
00:32:227 (4,5) - Swap them like here 00:29:336 (4,5)
00:32:770 (1) - 00:29:878 (1) <
00:34:035 (5,6) - 00:23:914 (4,5) < (6)
00:37:378 (2,3) - No sound on 2
00:41:625 (2,3) - Jump is very big on 2, but on 3 it's perfect like you made 00:42:167 (1,2,3) - . Думаю стоит 2 передвинуть на 00:40:902 (2) и стакнуть
00:42:709 (1) - Pls do not prolong slider to blue tick because on 00:43:071 (2) strong bit
00:51:565 (1) - It's impossible to play, as you have to turn harshly on left and then harshly make spatial stream on right. 00:51:565 (1) - place this slider on
00:50:661 (2,3,4)
00:52:468 (1,2,3) - swap them 00:51:565 (1)
00:54:637 (3) - make kick-slider as sound on this bit is different
00:56:806 (1) - nc
00:59:697 (1) - think about^
01:00:782 (1) - nc
01:01:685 (1) - overlap
01:02:227 (2) - nc
01:03:854 (3) - nc
01:04:757 (2) - maybe stack on this? 01:04:215 (4)
01:05:300 (1,2,1,2) - decrease the spacing for a little bit
01:12:529 (3,4) - remove 4 and put triple
01:14:516 (1) - Nc i think
01:19:396 (3) - Make stack or unstack on this 01:18:673 (1)
01:24:456 (7,8,9) - There no sound on, then Make a 7 slider


I hope i helped you. Map is good gl with rank! :D
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