1. Melody (4,84 stars, 1007 notes)

Ultimate Madoka wrote:

GoGoGo vick!

[Melody]
00:00:358 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think it's not a good idea to stack this stream, Try to make a bend flow stream? i dont think it would make a big difference, i like it now to make the first part of the map calm
00:21:477 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I think the music is not too strong in here. so set a 1.2x ds stream is not suitable for play. oh, you are right here, but i want to wait for more opinions in this one since the spacing 1.2 is not that big
00:25:205 (4) - you have followed vocal in 00:23:785 (1,2,3) - , why not in here? because in that part in some points the voice is stronger than the instruents, im following the instruments when they are stronger than the voice
00:26:448 - add a circle? following the voice~
00:35:856 (3,1) - stack?
00:45:797 - start mapping in here is a good idea i think lol its almost the same, i wanted to start in the voice lo
01:10:471 (8) - you should NC when you changed sv, and timing should -1s.
01:44:732 (1,2) - I think here should use 1/4 slider to keep the consistent of this part. i dont wanted to make the map too repetitive, so i did the same in all kiais
02:06:570 (2) - move to 02:06:393 - and add circle in 02:06:748 - ?
02:21:126 (6,7) - I think you should keep the same ds in here and 02:20:061 (4,5) -
02:21:304 (7) - NC
03:42:771 (1) - change to 2 circle? its okay for me
04:41:351 (1) - I think you shouldn't set a slow down slider in here. the piano is strong, set a 2 circle's jump is better? hmm, the melody in general slows down a bit, thats why i prefer to keep this !

Thanks a lot for the mod ! (No reply = fixed! )

O-Moei wrote:

Hi !, my 3rd special 🌀NM request for vick.
Yeah me started to count it now xD LOL

✨ = Suggestion
💧 = Uuhhh?
💥 = Warning !!!

Here we go...

General :
✨Haha, the banner !. Lift that up by size 420x125 and use [centre] is better

💧HS doesn't seemed appropriated yeah, im having a hard time here lo
Edit : Oh working on it,eh ? xD

Melody :
✨00:04:941 (4) - 02:42:428 (4) - 03:22:179 (2) - 05:04:427 (5) - BPM or SV changes note/slider should NC, am I right here ? x'D BPM changes are not necesary NC, SV changes yes !

✨01:06:211 (5) - Me dunno but this overlap doesn't seemed nice here. x254y277 feels better

✨01:40:826 (3) - Having this note at x421y329 is good and to blanket with 01:40:116 (4) -

✨02:28:049 (5,1) - Slightly imperfect blanket

✨02:59:102 (1) - I suggest remove this NC, because most of your NC are continuing the rhythm (Same applied example : 01:40:471 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - )

Yeah, as usual, my mod always as a perfection x'D . Overall is cool. Good luck

Thanks for the mod ! (No reply = fixed)

vick wrote:

Narcissu wrote:

timing wrong,

00:00:358 - incomplete bar, i suggest offest here -352

00:02:279 - not downbeat, its syncopations, bar line still here 00:02:456 - , other syncopations such as 02:41:363 - 03:20:404 -

00:04:941 - then its redundant

01:53:252 - 02:58:570 - 5ms is illusion, some sound delay but overall no change

as a whole, at the composer to do the song, its only one red line here -352,355.029585798817,4,2,1,50,1,0 okay, so basically i just change the first red line to -352 offset and remove the others ?

other wait ……

Narcissu wrote:

timing wrong,

00:00:358 - incomplete bar, i suggest offest here -352

00:02:279 - not downbeat, its syncopations, bar line still here 00:02:456 - , other syncopations such as 02:41:363 - 03:20:404 -

00:04:941 - then its redundant

01:53:252 - 02:58:570 - 5ms is illusion, some sound delay but overall no change

as a whole, at the composer to do the song, its only one red line here -352,355.029585798817,4,2,1,50,1,0 okay, so basically i just change the first red line to -352 offset and remove the others ?

other wait ……

-Yuzuriha wrote:

from pm

Genreral

BG name change Bg+para+toto+nii+sama → BG recommend

Audio Lead In 0 → 2000
so fast
https://gyazo.com/4363291ac8d2490a0c000a2b0ee9299a

you should AiMod
Aimod is Ctrl ＋ Shift ＋ A


Melody

00:09:233 (4,1) - change
https://gyazo.com/0d454132e7637980dabd84f7f42b3ede
is best
00:20:594 (7,1) - ^^ is kinda my style, but changed a little bit

00:26:452 - need circle

01:47:399 - need circle or 03:04:973 (5,6) - same plz sorry i dont agree with this

03:39:233 (1,1) - new combo ?
https://gyazo.com/8323f0fdf4b0f139426723e8c213841f

04:15:801 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - need sounds part

04:33:020 (3,1) - dont should stack
https://gyazo.com/397ce43f22cffd089cc3f6033987bc7a

04:42:251 (1) - ~ 04:47:754 (4) - need sounds
For examaple ... add sampleset noraml to white line
https://gyazo.com/7e2306a4af240e7cc0504edc17f9ef40
03:00:003 (1) - ~ 03:05:328 (6) - ^^
01:41:896 (1) - ~ 01:46:866 (2) -

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i think need sounds

gl thanks for the mod (no reply fixed)

_MiaoFUuU_ wrote:

hi vick

Melody

1. 00:04:440 (2,3) - rhythm try ctrl+g at here and stack the circle at 00:04:973 (4) -
2. 00:14:204 (2,3,4) - a little ugly ,try this or change another ?https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7583901
3. 00:21:482 - this is right?try it https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7583951
4. 00:26:452 - don't pass it → 00:30:890 -
5. 00:53:079 (4,1,2,3) - same as 02:11:541 (1,2,3) -
6. 02:17:754 - try this rhythm https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7583993
7. 02:59:648 - use slider? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7583999
8. 04:30:003 (4,5,6) - 04:30:535 (7,8,9,10) - 04:40:831 (5,6,7,8,9) - check timing 04:30:150 - add red line? 04:47:931 - add