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Shyotamaze

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Shyotamaze 2016-11-08T20:25:40+00:00

Garden wrote:
Easy
00:36:243 - 00:44:815 - whistle sounds bit off here imo Fixed
not important but almost all kiai is mapped at the right part of playfield :< it's fine imo
Normal
00:07:851 - better be clickable as 00:08:386 - cuz they are same sound, maybe adjust to sth like 00:32:493 (1,2,3,4) - Fixed
01:15:351 (1,2,3,4) - ^ Fixed
00:50:440 - this sound is relatively prominent, try this rhythm pattern instead? -> http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6495778 Fixed
Galaxy
00:30:351 (1) - stack under 00:29:547 (4) - instead? makes the pattern neater imo I tried but then I would need to remake the whole pattern that is following so I'll keep it like this
01:24:458 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - my ocd forces the pattern to be central lol ocd?? what is this I'm not really sure to understand lol but centered it anyways :d

Thanks!

Natsu

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Joined September 2012

Natsu 2016-11-10T00:53:39+00:00

Hi

Galaxy
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00:00:351 (1) - I think you are missing a finish here?, if is on purpose I think you need to reconsider it, since it fits the song a lot.
00:04:636 (1) - 00:08:922 (1) - 00:13:208 (1) - 00:17:493 (1) -
00:31:154 (3,4,5,6,7) - the spacing here is wrong and is really confused to play, can you space them more? , well looking at 00:39:859 (4,5) - seems the first one have a spacing issue
00:51:779 (1) - missing finish here too, there are some situations were a finish hitsound can make your hitsounding more interesting, yes your actual ones are fine, but they can be better.
oh btw 01:07:315 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - the perfect overlapped sliders are hard to read at the first play and I think you really need to reconsider this kind of patterns.

Normal
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01:16:154 (2,3,4) - seems something went wrong here
01:16:154 (3,2,4) - same
01:16:154 (2,3,4) - same

Easy
[]

Fine

BTW I really wanted to icon this, because the song is nice and the map is fine, but once I saw the normal diff... mmm the spread is really bad, Galaxy uses streams and 1/4 slider jumps, Normal use 1/2 overlapped objects following a certain spacing, in my point of view your spread looks like:

Easy -- Normal ----------- Galaxy

You can get other BNs/QATs opinion tho, anyways I'll keep an eye here in case you solve it.

Shyotamaze

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Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

Shyotamaze 2016-11-10T12:18:25+00:00

Natsu wrote:
Hi

Galaxy
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00:00:351 (1) - I think you are missing a finish here?, if is on purpose I think you need to reconsider it, since it fits the song a lot. Fixed
00:04:636 (1) - 00:08:922 (1) - 00:13:208 (1) - 00:17:493 (1) - Fixed
00:31:154 (3,4,5,6,7) - the spacing here is wrong and is really confused to play, can you space them more? , well looking at 00:39:859 (4,5) - seems the first one have a spacing issue Fixed
00:51:779 (1) - missing finish here too, there are some situations were a finish hitsound can make your hitsounding more interesting, yes your actual ones are fine, but they can be better. Fixed
oh btw 01:07:315 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - the perfect overlapped sliders are hard to read at the first play and I think you really need to reconsider this kind of patterns. idk they are supposed to be a bit tricky, especially this one which is kinda fine imo yes it might not be really easy at sightread but if you retry one time you understand the pattern and can easily fc but if other ppl find it too difficult to read I might change it (I really like how it is now tho rip)
Normal
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01:16:154 (2,3,4) - seems something went wrong here OOPS LOL I totally forgot about this thanks!
01:16:154 (3,2,4) - same The same link? Seems like something went wrong with your links too :^))
01:16:154 (2,3,4) - same ^
Easy
[]
Fine

BTW I really wanted to icon this, because the song is nice and the map is fine, but once I saw the normal diff... mmm the spread is really bad, Galaxy uses streams and 1/4 slider jumps, Normal use 1/2 overlapped objects following a certain spacing, in my point of view your spread looks like:

Easy -- Normal ----------- Galaxy Hmm yea you're right I'll ask someone to make an Advanced diff bc idk how to map a decent one myself :d

You can get other BNs/QATs opinion tho, anyways I'll keep an eye here in case you solve it.

Thanks a lot! I'll call you back once the Advanced diff is ready

Natsu

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Joined September 2012

Natsu 2016-11-15T08:35:42+00:00

I'll check this in a few days, meanwhile, could you get some feedback for the advanced diff?

Shyotamaze

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Shyotamaze 2016-11-15T09:00:40+00:00

Natsu wrote:
I'll check this in a few days, meanwhile, could you get some feedback for the advanced diff?

Sure I'll try

Affirmation

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Affirmation 2016-11-20T01:28:59+00:00

Q

[E]
00:19:636 (3,4) - http://puu.sh/snZJs/39d19361e5.jpg
00:28:208 (3,4) - ^

[N]
00:27:672 - should be clickable

[Adv]
00:04:101 (6) - end at 00:04:368 - , I think 00:04:368 - have weak drum sound, 00:04:502 - this part is meaningless, I think
00:08:922 (1) - ctrl HJ for flow.
00:12:672 (6) - same with 00:04:101 (6) -
00:13:208 (1,2) - Why you didn't make symmetry? symmetrical pattern could be more stable.
00:25:261 - should be clickable, imo. it have strong sound, as you know,. my suggestion
00:44:011 (3,4) - stack error
why you reduced sv in kiai? in kiai you made 0.75x sv, kiai should be strong...
01:21:243 (5) - too curved slider pattern?

[Galaxy]
00:00:886 (2,3) - make sure jump or DS pattern.
00:05:172 (2,3) - ^
00:18:967 - add a beat, it has a sound.
00:23:252 - ^
00:24:726 (3,4,5,6,7) - you rotated 60' . but 00:26:065 (1) - you didn't made hexagon. I prefer make hexagon with 00:24:726 (3,4,5,6,7,1) - even if you intended emphasize the note., Just making 00:24:726 (3,4,5,6,7) - could be bad for looking, it's unfinished hexagon,
00:29:815 (6,1) - bad overlap
00:33:297 (5,6,7,8,9,1) - same as 00:24:726 (3,4,5,6,7) -
01:07:315 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - other patterns, you just rotated this square pattern, but this part, you twisted the square? could be hard to play and read because of consistency,

Good luck

Shyotamaze

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Topic Starter

Shyotamaze 2016-11-20T13:14:12+00:00

Neoskylove wrote:
Q

[E]
00:19:636 (3,4) - http://puu.sh/snZJs/39d19361e5.jpg Fixed
00:28:208 (3,4) - ^ ^

[N]
00:27:672 - should be clickable Fixed

[Galaxy]
00:00:886 (2,3) - make sure jump or DS pattern. Intended, it's a jump
00:05:172 (2,3) - ^ ^
00:18:967 - add a beat, it has a sound. Hmm not sure about this, it's like an "echo" or something so it's not really important imo, I never mapped this kind of beat in that diff (I think?) and if I add it here I would need to add it here 00:01:824 00:06:109 etc it would make the streams too long imo ;;
00:23:252 - ^ ^
00:24:726 (3,4,5,6,7) - you rotated 60' . but 00:26:065 (1) - you didn't made hexagon. I prefer make hexagon with 00:24:726 (3,4,5,6,7,1) - even if you intended emphasize the note., Just making 00:24:726 (3,4,5,6,7) - could be bad for looking, it's unfinished hexagon, A mod told me to space 1 a bit more to keep consistency with 00:08:386 (6,7,1) - 00:16:958 (6,7,1) - etc, I agree that it doesn't look as good as a normal hexagon but I must keep the DS consistency
00:29:815 (6,1) - bad overlap I tried to fix it on a previous mod but I can't without messing up the structure of the next patterns and it's easily readable/playable imo
00:33:297 (5,6,7,8,9,1) - same as 00:24:726 (3,4,5,6,7) - Same as before, I must keep the DS consistency sry ;;
01:07:315 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - other patterns, you just rotated this square pattern, but this part, you twisted the square? could be hard to play and read because of consistency, aaaaa I really like this pattern tbh, it adds a bit of variety but if I get another complain I guess I'll change it

Good luck

Thanks!

Deppyforce

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Joined November 2014

Deppyforce 2016-11-22T10:48:15+00:00

Neoskylove wrote:
[Adv]
00:04:101 (6) - end at 00:04:368 - , I think 00:04:368 - have weak drum sound, 00:04:502 - this part is meaningless, I think na im mapping dat 3/4 hold instrument thing so this works perfectly
00:08:922 (1) - ctrl HJ for flow. i prefer this flow sorry
00:12:672 (6) - same with 00:04:101 (6) -
00:13:208 (1,2) - Why you didn't make symmetry? symmetrical pattern could be more stable. cuz this is also fine and i think i already used a lot of symmetry flipped slider patterns in the map so this should make just a little more variety
00:25:261 - should be clickable, imo. it have strong sound, as you know,. my suggestion i guess
00:44:011 (3,4) - stack error fix
why you reduced sv in kiai? in kiai you made 0.75x sv, kiai should be strong... not necessary lol u just need to 'emphasize' kiai by making it plays differently from other parts. in this case i used 0.75x sv cuz the kiai is literally filled with 1/4 so it makes the rhythm that im mapping feels a bit less powerful imo so i reduced it instead of increasing sv so i did that to reflect this in music, the rhythm i mapped wouldnt be overpowering the other ignored 1/4s throughout the kiai so this works best imo
01:21:243 (5) - too curved slider pattern? think its fine so keep for now

thanks!

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Azure

771 posts

Joined November 2010

Azure 2016-11-22T14:07:12+00:00

Hello,from my queue

wow interesting song

[General]

Advanced doesn't set a video
check the wildscreen be consistent in every diff

[Deppy's Advanced]

I'm confusing with the stars of the diff cuz there're so many 1/4 in the diff such like 00:43:208
though the BPM is not fast but I think it will be little hard for a new player when you follow all 1/4 in this song...
(I really have no idea about this... orz)
00:14:011 follow your idea, I think this one should be (same as 00:00:351 (1,2))
00:23:118 it's not a good place in advanced, and it also not easy to read for new player cuz the flow

[Galaxy]

00:42:940 (10) try to +drum-clap?

well.. that's all GL!

Shyotamaze

916 posts

Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

Shyotamaze 2016-11-22T17:24:52+00:00

Azure wrote:
Hello,from my queue
wow interesting song

[General]
Advanced doesn't set a video Fixed
check the wildscreen be consistent in every diff Fixed
[Galaxy]
00:42:940 (10) try to +drum-clap? Fixed
well.. that's all GL!

Thanks! Updated Deppy's diff, waiting for his response to your mod :d

Rieri

905 posts

Joined December 2014

Rieri 2016-11-23T05:23:12+00:00

Hello~ NM from my queue

General

Easy

00:53:922 (3,4) - The rhythm used is mentioned in earlier parts before the kiai and since it is now kiai, it would be better if the rhythm was a bit more dense than the non-kiai parts.
Nothing else really, just that the patterns and rhythms are very repetitive and not that diverse.

Normal

00:06:779 (1,2) - a bit too close to each other
00:13:208 (1,2,3) - how about using 00:00:351 (1,2,3) - this pattern for more consistency into the map
00:50:440 (2,3) - sorta inconsistent how you choose not to stack these two here, of course it may not be the same sounds 00:33:297 (2,3) - as those but still it would add consistency if you could stack these two

Hard

01:01:958 (4,5,6,7) - I'd say it's better to use a 1/4 repeat if you're going to introduce this only once in the entire song.

Galaxy

00:00:886 (2,3) - 00:05:172 (2,3) - what is the purpose of the spacing here? just asking because im not sure if that would be like the most ideal place to emphasize although i may know where you're getting at
00:30:351 (1) - seems sorta cramped, i get that you are trying to keep consistency on the distance but that obliterates the aesthetics here
01:11:601 (2,3,4) - straighten out please

not bad, good luck with this set

Deppyforce

1,961 posts

Joined November 2014

Deppyforce 2016-11-23T10:58:48+00:00

Azure wrote:
[Deppy's Advanced]
I'm confusing with the stars of the diff cuz there're so many 1/4 in the diff such like 00:43:208
though the BPM is not fast but I think it will be little hard for a new player when you follow all 1/4 in this song...
(I really have no idea about this... orz) dont wry its fine cuz this diff exists to make better 1/4 usage spread between normal and galaxy diff so using around this amount of 1/4 rhythms works nicely imo
00:14:011 follow your idea, I think this one should be (same as 00:00:351 (1,2)) doesnt matter tbh
00:23:118 it's not a good place in advanced, and it also not easy to read for new player cuz the flow its actually a low end hard diff it should be fine to use something like this imoooo

ProEzreal wrote:
Hard
01:01:958 (4,5,6,7) - I'd say it's better to use a 1/4 repeat if you're going to introduce this only once in the entire song. i agree, made more 1/4 circles like that on kiai

thanks

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Shyotamaze

916 posts

Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

Shyotamaze 2016-11-23T15:52:37+00:00

ProEzreal wrote:
Hello~ NM from my queue

General

Easy
00:53:922 (3,4) - The rhythm used is mentioned in earlier parts before the kiai and since it is now kiai, it would be better if the rhythm was a bit more dense than the non-kiai parts. Fixed
Nothing else really, just that the patterns and rhythms are very repetitive and not that diverse.

Normal
00:06:779 (1,2) - a bit too close to each other It's because of the stacking, otherwise it's fine
00:13:208 (1,2,3) - how about using 00:00:351 (1,2,3) - this pattern for more consistency into the map Fixed
00:50:440 (2,3) - sorta inconsistent how you choose not to stack these two here, of course it may not be the same sounds 00:33:297 (2,3) - as those but still it would add consistency if you could stack these two I didn't stack because I wanted to emphasize that sound and because you can feel some kind of "buildup" in the music or whatever so it gets more intense/harder here :d

Galaxy
00:00:886 (2,3) - 00:05:172 (2,3) - what is the purpose of the spacing here? just asking because im not sure if that would be like the most ideal place to emphasize although i may know where you're getting at Jumps to emphasize the "bell-like" sound or idk how it's called, it's fine imo
00:30:351 (1) - seems sorta cramped, i get that you are trying to keep consistency on the distance but that obliterates the aesthetics here I tried to fix it on a previous mod but I can't without messing up the structure of the next patterns and it's easily readable/playable imo :^)
01:11:601 (2,3,4) - straighten out please Fixed

not bad, good luck with this set

Thanks!

Winnie

1,343 posts

Joined November 2013

Winnie 2016-12-13T23:57:36+00:00

Hi From Modding Queue

The map looks has no flaws, it's pretty good Idk why you needed my help for this

but below is just a single suggestion

01:09:190 (2) - I don't think you necessarily need this. You can remove and make it like this. It adds a little more emphasis without having to consecutively keeping playing notes http://puu.sh/sODvP/bcd303aa4c.jpg Kinda like this 01:11:065 (1,2) - and most of your others ones you have

Shyotamaze

916 posts

Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

Shyotamaze 2016-12-14T13:05:06+00:00

Kocari wrote:
Hi From Modding Queue

The map looks has no flaws, it's pretty good Idk why you needed my help for this but below is just a single suggestion

01:09:190 (2) - I don't think you necessarily need this. You can remove and make it like this. Make it like this link http://puu.sh/sODvP/bcd303aa4c.jpg? Or did you forget a link because I didn't really understand ;; It adds a little more emphasis without having to consecutively keeping playing notes http://puu.sh/sODvP/bcd303aa4c.jpg Kinda like this 01:11:065 (1,2) - and most of your others ones you have Hmm sorry I didn't understand with that screenshot so I couldn't try your suggestion but imo it's necessary because I'm following the vocals with 00:52:047 (2) - and similar reverse sliders :d

Thanks! btw would you like me to credit you in the description since you gave me the mp3 a while ago?

Seijiro

osu! Alumni

3,438 posts

Joined April 2013

Seijiro 2016-12-24T00:24:43+00:00

m4m

General

nothing relevant I could find

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Galaxy

00:00:351 (1,2,3) - the spacing between these guys should be bigger between 1 and 2 and smaller between 2 and 3 imo. You could even stack 2 on 3, but it wasn't in your plans anyway, I guess
00:04:636 (1,2,3) - same as above + it is not even consistent with what you did above D:. It is clearly a different spacing than before
00:08:922 (1,2,3) - same ^
00:15:886 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - I get the feeling these guys should be shorter than 1/4 tho. Those high pitched sounds are like... 1/6 or even 1/8, since they're really short (probably circles would have worked better, but uhhh). This is highly personal so don't mind it
01:13:208 (1,2) - flow on 2 is a bit iffy. What about stacking 2 under 1?
00:51:779 (1,2) - same ^, but this time stack 1 on top of 2
(and change 2's direction accordingly to make it fit with the pattern)
01:26:199 (1) - I'd make this end at 01:27:672 - . Explanation is found in the Normal's mod

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Deppy's Advanced

not really a big problem but some 3/4 slider tails are a bit noisy. Maybe it's not your style and I can agree with that, but silencing them would be cool
00:59:279 (3,4) - idk, this doesn't feel as good as 00:16:422 (3,4) - , although I see it is consistent with 01:07:583 (2,3) - so uhhh

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Normal

00:00:351 (1,2,3,1) - right off, this pattern tells me nothing lol. It... it just looks random for me: 00:01:690 (3) - I though this was the same slider as 00:00:886 (2) - , but rotated by 120 degrees (which is not) and if I look at 00:00:886 (2,3,1) - these 3 sliders I can't understand their relation .-.
00:13:208 (1,2,3) - well, I guess it is consistent, although not so beautiful
00:15:886 (2,3) - insteda of this cramped pattern why not just 2 1/1 sliders instead? They would feel way more cleaner and if you use some bumps on the slider body you can map the middle beats too
00:46:958 (4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - wow, give them a break, lol
01:03:029 (2) - I mean... if you do ignore vocals this way, why is stuff like 01:00:618 (2) - mapped with such complexity anyway? I'm of the opinion that similar sounds deserve a similar interpretation, and you go against this here
01:07:315 (2,3,1,2) - this is just another cluster again. Alright, it makes sense and it's relatively clean, but it's a Normal and you're focusing too much on how to tap (the player doesn't really move on these objects, so they have to mentally play all those beats you skip). Less cluster = better
01:26:333 (1) - I get the feeling this is following vocals, and not that background sound at all, so it feels more natural to end it at 01:27:672 - imo

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Easy

00:26:601 (2,3) - kinda poor flow here :/ I already came from the right, why do I have to go back once again in that direction ?.?
00:33:565 (4) - is this the same as 00:32:493 (3) - ? Imo, it is not and you should make it visible: a change in shape or rhythm works, as long as it makes sense
01:05:172 (2,3,4) - poor flow again :/ Exaplanation
01:26:333 (1) - same as for Normal

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I personally find the Easy and the normal to be mapped more loosely and with way less structure than the upper diffs.
I'd suggest going over them and remaking some parts with more though on what you want to follow and how (yes, remapping could be a good idea, because fixing just one pattern doesn't fix much here).
The Normal has rhythm problems (some parts are too intense and some are too less compared to each other) and the Easy has some flow problems (like the screen I gave you), while both of them have poor aesthetics and/or structure in some parts.

Please do not speedmap lower diffs because they are required for RC. They are still maps and you should map them with the same effort as your hardest diff.

Deppyforce

1,961 posts

Joined November 2014

Deppyforce 2017-01-01T15:53:07+00:00

MrSergio wrote:
Deppy's Advanced

not really a big problem but some 3/4 slider tails are a bit noisy. Maybe it's not your style and I can agree with that, but silencing them would be cool fine lol i was just being lazy anyways
00:59:279 (3,4) - idk, this doesn't feel as good as 00:16:422 (3,4) - , although I see it is consistent with 01:07:583 (2,3) - so uhhh i dont see how is this bad

thanks

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Shyotamaze

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Shyotamaze 2017-01-01T16:53:26+00:00

MrSergio wrote:
m4m

General

nothing relevant I could find

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Galaxy

00:00:351 (1,2,3) - the spacing between these guys should be bigger between 1 and 2 and smaller between 2 and 3 imo. You could even stack 2 on 3, but it wasn't in your plans anyway, I guess The sounds are more important at 00:00:351 (1) - and 00:01:154 (3) - imo so I wanted to emphasize them like this
00:04:636 (1,2,3) - same as above + it is not even consistent with what you did above D:. It is clearly a different spacing than before How is that a different spacing? They have the same DS: 1 to 2 with 1.2x DS; 2 to 3 with 1.5x DS
00:08:922 (1,2,3) - same ^ ^
00:15:886 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - I get the feeling these guys should be shorter than 1/4 tho. Those high pitched sounds are like... 1/6 or even 1/8, since they're really short (probably circles would have worked better, but uhhh). This is highly personal so don't mind it It's fine imo and it's better to simplify the rhythm for that kind of diff I think
01:13:208 (1,2) - flow on 2 is a bit iffy. What about stacking 2 under 1? Changed the triangle's flow but I'll keep 2 and 1 as they are because I prefer how it is right now ;;
00:51:779 (1,2) - same ^, but this time stack 1 on top of 2 hmm the flow is alright imo, it's not the most comfortable thing to play I agree but I don't see a way to fix this because what you are suggesting me would be pretty inconsistent with the rest of the diff because I never stacked that kind of pattern/I don't want to
(and change 2's direction accordingly to make it fit with the pattern)
01:26:199 (1) - I'd make this end at 01:27:672 - . Explanation is found in the Normal's mod Fixed

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Normal

00:00:351 (1,2,3,1) - right off, this pattern tells me nothing lol. It... it just looks random for me: 00:01:690 (3) - I though this was the same slider as 00:00:886 (2) - , but rotated by 120 degrees (which is not) and if I look at 00:00:886 (2,3,1) - these 3 sliders I can't understand their relation .-. Fixed
00:13:208 (1,2,3) - well, I guess it is consistent, although not so beautiful beauty is subjective and I think it's pretty right now :^)
00:15:886 (2,3) - insteda of this cramped pattern why not just 2 1/1 sliders instead? They would feel way more cleaner and if you use some bumps on the slider body you can map the middle beats too I prefer it that way because the middle beats are really mapped and hitsounded, they wouldn't be if I do what you say
00:46:958 (4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - wow, give them a break, lol Fixed
01:03:029 (2) - I mean... if you do ignore vocals this way, why is stuff like 01:00:618 (2) - mapped with such complexity anyway? I'm of the opinion that similar sounds deserve a similar interpretation, and you go against this here because on 01:00:618 (2) - the vocals are on white and red ticks, on 01:03:029 (2) - the vocals are on blue ticks so it would be really awkward to play and it's not even allowed in a normal diff ;;
01:07:315 (2,3,1,2) - this is just another cluster again. Alright, it makes sense and it's relatively clean, but it's a Normal and you're focusing too much on how to tap (the player doesn't really move on these objects, so they have to mentally play all those beats you skip). Less cluster = better idk about this, I agree that less cluster is better to play but like you said it's only a normal diff so I can't go wild with the DS so idk how to make it less "clustered" (does that even exist? rip me) while keeping the DS consistent and it's true that they don't reeeeeeally move but the reverse arrows still imply some kind of movement imo
01:26:333 (1) - I get the feeling this is following vocals, and not that background sound at all, so it feels more natural to end it at 01:27:672 - imo Fixed

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Easy

00:26:601 (2,3) - kinda poor flow here :/ I already came from the right, why do I have to go back once again in that direction ?.?
Fixed
00:33:565 (4) - is this the same as 00:32:493 (3) - ? Imo, it is not and you should make it visible: a change in shape or rhythm works, as long as it makes sense A change in shape would make the pattern really weird and idk with what other rhythm I could map that sound so I'll leave it like this for now
01:05:172 (2,3,4) - poor flow again :/ Exaplanation Fixed
01:26:333 (1) - same as for Normal Removed the spinner because it would be too short for that kind of diff imo

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I personally find the Easy and the normal to be mapped more loosely and with way less structure than the upper diffs.
I'd suggest going over them and remaking some parts with more though on what you want to follow and how (yes, remapping could be a good idea, because fixing just one pattern doesn't fix much here).
The Normal has rhythm problems (some parts are too intense and some are too less compared to each other) and the Easy has some flow problems (like the screen I gave you), while both of them have poor aesthetics and/or structure in some parts.

Please do not speedmap lower diffs because they are required for RC. They are still maps and you should map them with the same effort as your hardest diff.

Thanks!

Last edited by Shyotamaze 2017-01-21T12:37:46+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Kyuukai

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Kyuukai 2017-01-08T15:42:02+00:00

tamap el pu omg cancer

Shyotamaze

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Shyotamaze 2017-01-08T15:43:27+00:00

javou remap stp

Pentori

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Pentori 2017-01-29T05:29:50+00:00

heyhey
[General]
deppy's diff missing video o:

[Easy]
ar 3 would be better for this bpm
00:15:886 (4) - flow isn't the best here, point downward would play nicer
00:30:351 (1,2) - u should try avoid this type of flow in easies, since visually it looks the same distance from everything else
00:37:851 - 00:46:422 - i dont really agree with these sounds being skipped, since there r unique sounds on this tick that aren't anywhere else. u could try using 2/1 sliders at 00:45:351 (3) - so u dont skip it
01:17:493 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1) - using the same area of the playfield for this long can get pretty boring :c i would reconsider this
rhythm feels a bit repetitive, mainly because almost everything is 1/1. try including some 2/1 sliders so u can prioritise different sounds and introduce variety

[Normal]
00:31:690 - include a note here? otherwise the polarity changes are a little hard to follow
00:34:636 - rhythm is a little shaky in this section eg. you skip 00:35:440 - in order to follow the weaker vocal on 00:35:708 (2,3) - but then change back to the instrumental track at 00:36:779 (1,2,3) . there are ways to follow one track while still giving respect to the other http://puu.sh/tERLP/cb99f744ad.jpg
00:37:315 (2) - also here the slider tail is a lot more dominant than the head
00:50:440 - i wouldn't skip this strong beat

[Deppy's Advanced]
00:34:636 (1,2) - this is just way too difficult to follow, plus the fact that you only do this occasionally makes this really inconsistent. like why is 00:41:065 (1,2,3) - a triplet when all the other times u used duplets. in the kiai you also do this pretty randomly 01:00:351 (1,2) . u need to follow some pattern so the player can anticipate the rhythm instead of having to watch every note lol

[Galaxy]
00:07:583 (3,4,5,6,7) - it would be cooler if u addressed the changes in the music instead of keeping this as one pattern. at 00:08:118 (5,6,7) - some stuff happens with the drums that u should try represent. same for rest of these
00:32:493 (1,2,3) - u could do something like http://puu.sh/tESZL/012083e4a1.jpg so these play as duplets like 00:31:154 (3,4)
00:41:065 (1,2,3) - ^ etc

gl

Shyotamaze

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Shyotamaze 2017-01-30T17:37:23+00:00

Pentori wrote:
heyhey
[General]
deppy's diff missing video o: oops

[Easy]
ar 3 would be better for this bpm Fixed
00:15:886 (4) - flow isn't the best here, point downward would play nicer Not really sure to understand this one tbh :^) imo the current flow is fine tho
00:30:351 (1,2) - u should try avoid this type of flow in easies, since visually it looks the same distance from everything else Fixed
00:37:851 - 00:46:422 - i dont really agree with these sounds being skipped, since there r unique sounds on this tick that aren't anywhere else. u could try using 2/1 sliders at 00:45:351 (3) - so u dont skip it Fixed
01:17:493 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1) - using the same area of the playfield for this long can get pretty boring :c i would reconsider this
rhythm feels a bit repetitive, mainly because almost everything is 1/1. try including some 2/1 sliders so u can prioritise different sounds and introduce variety I kinda agree about the playfield thing, I tried my best to move the pattern a bit to the left (everything was a the right before) but I don't think I can move it more without breaking my structure, about the 2/1 sliders idk where to put them since a lot of sounds seem important to me here ;;

[Normal]
00:31:690 - include a note here? otherwise the polarity changes are a little hard to follow Fixed
00:34:636 - rhythm is a little shaky in this section eg. you skip 00:35:440 - in order to follow the weaker vocal on 00:35:708 (2,3) - but then change back to the instrumental track at 00:36:779 (1,2,3) . there are ways to follow one track while still giving respect to the other http://puu.sh/tERLP/cb99f744ad.jpg Fixed
00:37:315 (2) - also here the slider tail is a lot more dominant than the head Fixed
00:50:440 - i wouldn't skip this strong beat idk about this one, there are a lot of different opinions if I should give the player a pause here or not because I had a note here before but it made a really long pattern

[Galaxy]
00:07:583 (3,4,5,6,7) - it would be cooler if u addressed the changes in the music instead of keeping this as one pattern. at 00:08:118 (5,6,7) - some stuff happens with the drums that u should try represent. same for rest of these I understand what you mean but it would be too awkward if I changed that 00:08:118 (5) - into 2 circles, I prefer to keep it a bit simple here because it is already difficult enough to play with that spacing/kind of pattern imo
00:32:493 (1,2,3) - u could do something like http://puu.sh/tESZL/012083e4a1.jpg so these play as duplets like 00:31:154 (3,4) Fixed
00:41:065 (1,2,3) - ^ etc ^

gl

Thanks!

Deppyforce

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Joined November 2014

Deppyforce 2017-02-04T16:56:25+00:00

Pentori wrote:
[General]
deppy's diff missing video o: shyotamuze can u fix dat for me thank

[Deppy's Advanced]
00:34:636 (1,2) - this is just way too difficult to follow, plus the fact that you only do this occasionally makes this really inconsistent. like why is 00:41:065 (1,2,3) - a triplet when all the other times u used duplets. in the kiai you also do this pretty randomly 01:00:351 (1,2) . u need to follow some pattern so the player can anticipate the rhythm instead of having to watch every note lol its nothing wrong about it and its not completely unreadable so -_ and prety sure i used alot of double 1/4s in other parts too so its kinda balanced enough already

thx for checking tho!!!

Nao Tomori

Nomination Assessment Team

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Joined December 2014

Nao Tomori 2017-02-08T04:16:15+00:00

im kinda with pentori on the drums things 00:08:118 (5) - here.

basically the way i see it is that this map's difficulty is almost nonexistent in the aim area. so you might as well follow the rhythm as closely as you can.

you could basically do 1/4 spam everywhere, like 00:04:636 (1) - or 00:08:118 (5) - etc.

ofc that would be changing the entire concept of the map, so i can't just say to do that lol, i think it would be a lot more interesting though.

[galaxy]
i understand why 00:08:922 (1,3) - aren't doubles but at least make all of 00:08:118 (5) - those doubles. it's really really weird to hear them represented same way as the rest despite being clearly different.

00:06:243 (5) - should be more spaced (and the other 30 million time the pattern is used x d) cuz of the bell thingy imo.

00:36:779 (1) - vs 00:45:351 (1,2) - should be same

there arent exactly "errors" in the map, but i think that much more could have been done with the song regarding the mapping concept. by and large it's very structured and consistent, so it shouldnt be too hard to push.

[deppy]
i don't quite see why you switched to circle+slider halfway in, i think you should be doing that consistently from the start of the map, at least on the ones without the rly loud bell type sounds like 00:02:493 -

00:04:636 (1,2) - think these 2 get too close together tbh

00:21:779 (1,3) - meh overlap dont think you need it

00:31:824 (3) - think all of these are better as slider end triples, you already have quints in the kiai so density isnt much of an issue imo.

why does the sv decrease in kiai lo

why does it randomly switch between doubles and not doubles for the sliders lo

01:17:493 (1) - vs 01:00:351 (1,2) - is literally same sound

01:21:243 (5) - this is ugly

mapset is not that bad, but i don't really like the concept of first diff to follow vocals over 1/4 spam xd

good luck

N0thingSpecial

2,355 posts

Joined November 2015

N0thingSpecial 2017-02-08T11:01:54+00:00

Remap

Kds plz

Nao Tomori

Nomination Assessment Team

3,089 posts

Joined December 2014

Nao Tomori 2017-02-08T22:53:25+00:00

N0thingSpecial wrote:
Remap

Kds plz

ok dont give me kds, i mean i am just explaining why i don't really like the map xd

N0thingSpecial

2,355 posts

Joined November 2015

N0thingSpecial 2017-02-09T03:59:46+00:00

LOL wasn't directed towards your mod but just telling him to remap EKSDEEEEE

Shyotamaze

916 posts

Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

Shyotamaze 2017-02-09T20:50:54+00:00

Nao Tomori wrote:
im kinda with pentori on the drums things 00:08:118 (5) - here.

basically the way i see it is that this map's difficulty is almost nonexistent in the aim area. so you might as well follow the rhythm as closely as you can.

you could basically do 1/4 spam everywhere, like 00:04:636 (1) - or 00:08:118 (5) - etc.

ofc that would be changing the entire concept of the map, so i can't just say to do that lol, i think it would be a lot more interesting though.

[galaxy]
i understand why 00:08:922 (1,3) - aren't doubles but at least make all of 00:08:118 (5) - those doubles. it's really really weird to hear them represented same way as the rest despite being clearly different. Yea I understand but I really can't do that, it would be way too difficult/awkward for the player and parts like this are already some kind of "difficulty spike" because of the spacing, adding doubles in patterns like this would be too much imo :/

00:06:243 (5) - should be more spaced (and the other 30 million time the pattern is used x d) cuz of the bell thingy imo. Fixed

00:36:779 (1) - vs 00:45:351 (1,2) - should be same Fixed

there arent exactly "errors" in the map, but i think that much more could have been done with the song regarding the mapping concept. by and large it's very structured and consistent, so it shouldnt be too hard to push. "shouldnt be too hard to push" -> 5 BNs checked it and no one bubbled it :^)

mapset is not that bad, but i don't really like the concept of first diff to follow vocals over 1/4 spam xd

good luck

Thanks!

Nao Tomori wrote:
N0thingSpecial wrote:
Remap

Kds plz
ok dont give me kds, i mean i am just explaining why i don't really like the map xd

Don't worry your mod was helpful so you deserve your kudosu

Deppyforce

1,961 posts

Joined November 2014

Deppyforce 2017-02-12T12:48:49+00:00

Nao Tomori wrote:
[deppy]
i don't quite see why you switched to circle+slider halfway in, i think you should be doing that consistently from the start of the map, at least on the ones without the rly loud bell type sounds like 00:02:493 - i map according to what i hear

00:04:636 (1,2) - think these 2 get too close together tbh it looks fine as long as its not overlapping

00:21:779 (1,3) - meh overlap dont think you need it except i do

00:31:824 (3) - think all of these are better as slider end triples, you already have quints in the kiai so density isnt much of an issue imo. theyre lame and these are rare

why does the sv decrease in kiai lo i map same sound while kiai has alot of stronger background noises so the sounds i follow become technically weaker

why does it randomly switch between doubles and not doubles for the sliders lo diversity

01:17:493 (1) - vs 01:00:351 (1,2) - is literally same sound why should same sound be mapped exactly the same irlyhate that meta

01:21:243 (5) - this is ugly it still kinda fits with music

thanks for taking a look

sahuang

2,293 posts

Joined December 2014

sahuang 2017-02-28T10:01:24+00:00

[Easy]

00:06:779 (3,4) - kinda lacking in aesthetics. always aim to have a good flow+angle for objects like these.
00:23:922 (4,5,1,2,3,1) - ds becomes 0.95x rather than 0.9x
00:30:351 (1,2) - really empty in between, should try sth like http://puu.sh/untfm/06b34be309.jpg
00:38:922 (1,2) - etc same
01:11:065 (3,1) - confusing in lower diff
kinda boring with same placements of objects

[Normal]

00:31:154 (2,3) - use a slider seems better cuz gap is too empty tbh
00:35:440 (2,3) - imo 00:35:440 (2) - should be deleted cuz there's no significant sound here
00:37:851 (3) - 1/2 slider?
01:26:333 (1) - dont think its necessary as easy doesnt have one as well. plus spinner is too short.

[Advanced]

00:08:922 (1) - ctrl+J for flow
00:53:922 (1) - same
01:01:958 (4,5,6,7) - 4 slider seems too hard here imo, can try change 6,7 to a slider or just use 2 sliders.
01:10:529 (3,4,5,6) - same

[note 7]

00:07:583 (3,4,5,6,7) - a major problem in this map is you map two different instruments with no difference. for example here 00:07:851 (4,5,6,7) - are quite different from 3 but u used same pattern.
00:15:886 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - same for 2,3 and 4-7
00:24:726 (3,4,5,6,7) - 00:33:297 (4,5,6,7,8) - 00:59:011 (3,4,5,6,7) - 01:07:315 (2,3,4,5,6,7) -
01:16:154 (3,4,5,6,7) - same
00:36:243 (7,1) - ds soo small with 1/1 spacing
00:46:824 (7,8) - aesthetics.
01:05:172 (2,3) - dont think aesthetics is good here

Overall not that bad but some aesthetics are not good imo. Put more effort on it pls.

Good luck on this.

Shyotamaze

916 posts

Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

Shyotamaze 2017-02-28T19:43:12+00:00

Thanks! I'll answer once I can update the map (maybe 3 or 4 weeks rip)

Shyotamaze

916 posts

Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

Shyotamaze 2017-03-22T14:51:21+00:00

My Angel Azusa wrote:
[Easy]
00:06:779 (3,4) - kinda lacking in aesthetics. always aim to have a good flow+angle for objects like these. Will fix it once I remap
00:23:922 (4,5,1,2,3,1) - ds becomes 0.95x rather than 0.9x Fixed
00:30:351 (1,2) - really empty in between, should try sth like http://puu.sh/untfm/06b34be309.jpg Fixed
00:38:922 (1,2) - etc same ^
01:11:065 (3,1) - confusing in lower diff Will fix it once I remap
kinda boring with same placements of objects Yea that diff is kinda bad, I'll remap it

[Normal]
00:31:154 (2,3) - use a slider seems better cuz gap is too empty tbh I didn't do it to make a "little break" before that long pattern 00:31:690 (3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) -
00:35:440 (2,3) - imo 00:35:440 (2) - should be deleted cuz there's no significant sound here There is one, it's the same sound as I mapped here 00:37:583 (2) -
00:37:851 (3) - 1/2 slider? Same as before, a "little break" before a long pattern 00:38:386 (4,1,2,3) -
01:26:333 (1) - dont think its necessary as easy doesnt have one as well. plus spinner is too short. Fixed

[note 7]

00:07:583 (3,4,5,6,7) - a major problem in this map is you map two different instruments with no difference. for example here 00:07:851 (4,5,6,7) - are quite different from 3 but u used same pattern.
00:15:886 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - same for 2,3 and 4-7
00:24:726 (3,4,5,6,7) - 00:33:297 (4,5,6,7,8) - 00:59:011 (3,4,5,6,7) - 01:07:315 (2,3,4,5,6,7) -
01:16:154 (3,4,5,6,7) - same Hmm I understand what you mean but imo the difference between those sounds is too light and it's not worth to make the patterns more complicated just for that
00:36:243 (7,1) - ds soo small with 1/1 spacing Fixed
00:46:824 (7,8) - aesthetics. Fixed
01:05:172 (2,3) - dont think aesthetics is good here ^

Overall not that bad but some aesthetics are not good imo. Put more effort on it pls.

Good luck on this.

Thanks! You reminded me that I needed to change that diffname too haha

Deppyforce

1,961 posts

Joined November 2014

Deppyforce 2017-04-19T22:24:57+00:00

My Angel Azusa wrote:
[Advanced]
00:08:922 (1) - ctrl+J for flow f
00:53:922 (1) - same na this is fine tbh
01:01:958 (4,5,6,7) - 4 slider seems too hard here imo, can try change 6,7 to a slider or just use 2 sliders. do u mean 4 circles lmao but i did it twice in kiai so it shouldnt be a consistency issue and this way kiai is a bit harder than normal parts cuz sv is slower this looks like a cool way to increase kiai diificulty
01:10:529 (3,4,5,6) - same

thanks

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341,315,65708,1,0,0:0:0:0:
295,230,65976,1,0,0:0:0:0:
359,159,66243,2,0,L|387:157,3,28.1250010728836,8|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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194,105,67583,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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102,74,68922,6,0,P|100:129|129:176,1,112.500004291535,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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281,65,70663,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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Shyotamaze

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Shyotamaze 2017-05-03T18:42:23+00:00

Remapped the Easy diff, let's see how it goes

xChorse

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xChorse 2017-05-05T10:53:13+00:00

Hello, NM from my queue.

Easy

00:21:779 (1,2,3) - I think having a hitcircle on 00:21:779 - and a return slider starting on 00:22:315 - would be more consistent with your pattern choices

00:59:279 - hitcircle here to be more consistent

Normal

00:31:690 (3,4) - remove stack and make it like 00:20:976 (3,4) - since it's the only stack starting on a red tick except for these 00:34:636 (1,2,3) -

Deppy's Advanced

00:04:636 (1,2) - doesn't look that good since they're way too close imo

00:22:583 - could probably map a triple here

00:51:779 (1,2,3,4,1) - this part's rhythm could be something like this: https://puu.sh/vGidM/45d6495771.png since you put emphasis on the beeps before like here 00:23:118 (3) - and 00:27:404 -

01:21:243 (5) - kinda weird when it's the only one curved like this but idk

Yojouhan

01:16:154 (3,4,5,6,7) - this doesn't play as well compared to the rest of these kind of patterns so I suggest making it more like the others

Good luck!

Shyotamaze

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Shyotamaze 2017-05-05T19:46:51+00:00

xChorse wrote:
Hello, NM from my queue.

Easy
00:21:779 (1,2,3) - I think having a hitcircle on 00:21:779 - and a return slider starting on 00:22:315 - would be more consistent with your pattern choices Fixed

00:59:279 - hitcircle here to be more consistent Fixed

Normal
00:31:690 (3,4) - remove stack and make it like 00:20:976 (3,4) - since it's the only stack starting on a red tick except for these 00:34:636 (1,2,3) -Fixed

Yojouhan
01:16:154 (3,4,5,6,7) - this doesn't play as well compared to the rest of these kind of patterns so I suggest making it more like the others idk it seems quite playable to me even though it's a bit tricky yes, but some patterns are tricky too like 01:07:315 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - for example

Good luck!

Thanks! Actually after looking at the Normal diff again I kinda want to remap it lmao idk when I'll do it tho aaa

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