2016-11-04 19:02 Parachor: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1105148 MY FIRST STORY - monologue / Itsuwari NEUROSE [puxtu's Schizophrenic NEUROSE]]
2016-11-04 19:02 Parachor: You free to irc for this now?
2016-11-04 19:04 puxtu: oh sweet
2016-11-04 19:04 puxtu: yes sure
2016-11-04 19:04 Parachor: just giving it a testplay first brb
2016-11-04 19:05 puxtu: sure
2016-11-04 19:10 Parachor: ooo very nice
2016-11-04 19:10 puxtu: oo thanks xd
2016-11-04 19:11 puxtu: just a generic map xd
2016-11-04 19:12 Parachor: The piano section in the beginning is a little too stripped back. I have a suggestion that I'll screenshot in a sec
2016-11-04 19:13 puxtu: yea, normally i wouldn't map song intros but ye :v
2016-11-04 19:14 Parachor: I think you just need to map more of it, because it seems pretty empty at the moment
2016-11-04 19:14 Parachor: I can still hear piano notes in the background during the gaps
2016-11-04 19:14 Parachor: Might be hard to see but
http://prntscr.com/d2wnt82016-11-04 19:14 Parachor: That pattern is a possibility, if you want to be pitch relevant
2016-11-04 19:15 Parachor: I think paying attention to pitch when mapping piano is important but that's up to you
2016-11-04 19:15 puxtu: uhm timestamp?
2016-11-04 19:15 Parachor: oops
2016-11-04 19:15 Parachor: 00:01:941 - for the first note in the screenshot
2016-11-04 19:16 puxtu: oh the very beginning
2016-11-04 19:16 puxtu: ok i got it
2016-11-04 19:16 Parachor: the repeated note in column 1 is just because the pitch of that note stays the same
2016-11-04 19:16 Parachor: so that's just an idea
2016-11-04 19:17 Parachor: Another possibility is to keep the amount of notes how it is, and instead mess with the column placement
2016-11-04 19:17 puxtu: oh you want me to map the background sound too?
2016-11-04 19:17 Parachor: At the moment the placement is pretty random, and might be more interesting to play if it was loosely according to pitch
2016-11-04 19:17 Parachor: If you want to
2016-11-04 19:17 puxtu: :v
2016-11-04 19:18 puxtu: im sux at pr
2016-11-04 19:18 Parachor: aw
2016-11-04 19:18 Parachor: I'd say just do what you can and I can help you tweak it afterwards if you'd like?
2016-11-04 19:19 puxtu: yes yes :v
2016-11-04 19:19 Parachor: Cool. For now I'll continue on from this part :v
2016-11-04 19:19 puxtu: :v
2016-11-04 19:20 Parachor: 00:30:345 (30345|0) - cant hear a sound here
2016-11-04 19:21 puxtu: 00:30:026 - there's something fading in from this point
2016-11-04 19:21 puxtu: the note is for them :v
2016-11-04 19:23 Parachor: Fair enough
2016-11-04 19:23 Parachor: Okay so 00:47:899 (47899|0,47899|2,48377|0,48377|2) - these have repeated column placement.
2016-11-04 19:23 Parachor: So does this: 00:50:452 (50452|3,50452|0,50930|0,50930|3) -
2016-11-04 19:23 Parachor: So it would be cool to have it here too 00:37:686 (37686|2,37686|1,38165|2,38165|0) -
2016-11-04 19:24 puxtu: good point :V
2016-11-04 19:24 puxtu: 00:30:026 (30026|1,30186|3,30345|0,30505|2,30665|3,30824|0) - about this part
2016-11-04 19:24 puxtu: do you think i should add more 1/4s
2016-11-04 19:24 puxtu: or leave it as it is?
2016-11-04 19:25 Parachor: I'd say leave it how it is
2016-11-04 19:25 puxtu: okay
2016-11-04 19:25 Parachor: 00:53:803 (53803|0,54122|2) - Same pitch, would be nice to see it on the same column
2016-11-04 19:25 Parachor: Maybe by moving 00:54:122 (54122|2) - to column |1|
2016-11-04 19:25 Parachor: (going by 1|2|3|4)
2016-11-04 19:26 Parachor: Oh you actually did it here: 01:04:016 (64016|2,64335|2) - so you should probably do it then as well lol
2016-11-04 19:27 puxtu: lol ok done
2016-11-04 19:27 Parachor: Something just seems weird about having 01:20:452 (80452|1,80452|3,80771|3,80771|1) - the same placement as 01:19:175 (79175|3,79175|1,79494|1,79494|3) -
2016-11-04 19:27 Parachor: idk why haha
2016-11-04 19:27 Parachor: perhaps change the later ones to use |1| and |4|?
2016-11-04 19:28 puxtu: oh ok cool
2016-11-04 19:28 Parachor: I'd probably move 01:25:877 (85877|0) - to column |2| to avoid having this: 01:25:877 (85877|0,86037|0,86196|0) -
2016-11-04 19:29 puxtu: done
2016-11-04 19:29 Parachor: From 01:33:218 - I suggest mapping the vocal to LN or something.
2016-11-04 19:29 Parachor: Definitely needs something to fill that break
2016-11-04 19:29 puxtu: :v
2016-11-04 19:30 Parachor: Or, actually, don't map the vocal
2016-11-04 19:30 Parachor: Map the melody in the background?
2016-11-04 19:30 Parachor: Sounds like it would be nice to have it as LN as well
2016-11-04 19:30 puxtu: :v
2016-11-04 19:30 puxtu: ok i'll try
2016-11-04 19:30 Parachor: cool :V
2016-11-04 19:30 puxtu: wish me luck :v
2016-11-04 19:30 Parachor: good luck~
2016-11-04 19:31 Parachor: I'll keep posting things I find in the meantime haha
2016-11-04 19:31 puxtu: ok
2016-11-04 19:31 Parachor: 02:13:590 (133590|2) - add note here for the low piano note
2016-11-04 19:32 Parachor: oops, bad timestamp
2016-11-04 19:32 puxtu: :v
2016-11-04 19:32 Parachor: 02:13:590 -
2016-11-04 19:32 Parachor: there we go
2016-11-04 19:32 Parachor: Clicking the timestamp in the bottom left is broken for me, so I have to place a note, copy it, paste it here and then delete the second half of it.
2016-11-04 19:33 Parachor: It's frustrating
2016-11-04 19:33 puxtu: lol me too
2016-11-04 19:33 Parachor: 02:18:696 - note here for the piano as well. And here: 02:19:015 -
2016-11-04 19:33 puxtu: i always do that
2016-11-04 19:33 Parachor: I wish it would be fixed >_<
2016-11-04 19:35 Parachor: 03:31:302 (211302|3,211302|2,211408|1,211408|0,211515|3,211515|2,211621|1,211621|0) - I feel like this would work better with a pattern that isn't [12][34]
2016-11-04 19:35 Parachor: Perhaps [13][24] or [14][23]
2016-11-04 19:36 Parachor: Just to accentuate that it's suddenly changing the triplets, and isn't played the same as the [12][34] pattern played a few seconds earlier
2016-11-04 19:36 Parachor: changing to*
2016-11-04 19:36 Parachor: Oh wait what the hell am I talking about, there's no [12][34] pattern before it .-.
2016-11-04 19:37 puxtu: 13 24 looks fine for me
2016-11-04 19:37 puxtu: wh
2016-11-04 19:37 Parachor: don't mind me, 13 24 works xD
2016-11-04 19:37 puxtu: lol
2016-11-04 19:37 Parachor: 03:38:004 (218004|1) - this should be the double instead of 03:37:685 (217685|3,217685|2) -
2016-11-04 19:38 Parachor: 03:39:600 (219600|0,219919|0) - different pitch, so different column placement
2016-11-04 19:38 puxtu: ok
2016-11-04 19:38 puxtu: agre
2016-11-04 19:40 Parachor: 05:23:164 (323164|2,323323|2) - maybe change these to be [23] doubles?
2016-11-04 19:40 Parachor: Just for the emphasis
2016-11-04 19:42 puxtu: ok
2016-11-04 19:42 Parachor: 02:54:760 - I'd make the SV here be 0.01, for a real complete stop
2016-11-04 19:43 Parachor: And then maybe do the speedup slightly later, like about here? 02:55:797 -
2016-11-04 19:43 Parachor: Or instead of using a linear growth, do it exponentially
2016-11-04 19:44 puxtu: oh well sv
2016-11-04 19:44 puxtu: 0.01 isn't it an unrankable issue?
2016-11-04 19:44 Parachor: I'm pretty sure it's allowed
2016-11-04 19:44 Parachor: 0.00 isn't though
2016-11-04 19:45 puxtu: i remember my gd dq'd once because of it
2016-11-04 19:46 puxtu: anyway how to add 0.01 sv
2016-11-04 19:47 Parachor: Like you would with any SV
2016-11-04 19:47 Parachor: The editor was changed a while back so that the minimum wasn't 0.10
2016-11-04 19:47 Parachor: and is now 0.01
2016-11-04 19:47 puxtu: oh shit really?
2016-11-04 19:47 puxtu: that's nice
2016-11-04 19:47 puxtu: oh wow
2016-11-04 19:48 puxtu: this is beautiful
2016-11-04 19:48 Parachor: Hahaha
2016-11-04 19:49 Parachor: For the speedup try square numbers
2016-11-04 19:49 puxtu: like what
2016-11-04 19:50 Parachor: 0.01x 0.02x 0.04x 0.08x 0.16x 0.25x 0.36x 0.49x 0.64x 0.81x 1.00x
2016-11-04 19:50 Parachor: Instead of just doing 0.10, 0.20, 0.30, 0.40 etc
2016-11-04 19:50 puxtu: :v
2016-11-04 19:50 Parachor: I think that might look pretty nice
2016-11-04 19:51 Parachor: Made a typo, 0.08x is meant to be 0.09x
2016-11-04 19:51 Parachor: and 0.02x shouldn't be there xD
2016-11-04 19:51 puxtu: o
2016-11-04 19:51 puxtu: 1 4 9 16 25 36 49 81 100?
2016-11-04 19:51 Parachor: yeah
2016-11-04 19:52 Parachor: For some reason I started off going by powers of 2
2016-11-04 19:52 Parachor: Idek o-o
2016-11-04 19:52 Parachor: But yeah that should be it
2016-11-04 19:52 puxtu: o nice