1. Vergissmalnicht (5.91 stars, 1489 notes)

1. Preview Point in here. 01:15:728
2. From Ranking Criteria Kiai should be consistent throughout difficulties of your mapset (especially since it is shown on the main menu). If you have a guest difficulty from another mapper that uses different kiai, then it's fine as long as it still makes sense. Add Kiai Time on emphasizing you want.
   
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1. 00:29:645 (7,1) - blanket
2. 00:37:532 (1) - finish?
3. 00:56:089 (6) - NC
4. 01:06:604 (5,6,7,8) - Ctrl+G 01:06:604 (5,6) and 01:06:914 (7,8)
5. 01:27:017 (1) - finish on slider head
6. 01:51:759 (1,3) - ^
7. 02:08:769 (12,13) - sampleset normal is more better
8. 02:14:645 (3) - remove whistle
9. 02:26:243 (10) - NC?
10. 02:38:460 (9) - how about this rhythm? and sampleset to normal
    
11. 02:56:089 (1,2) - it will be nice!
    
    Try this!

    
12. 02:57:905 (1) - make gradually like this
    
    SPOILER

    
13. 03:08:842 (10,11) - whistle
14. 03:34:155 (1,2) - blanket
15. 03:57:592 - Break end time in here move to 03:56:967 ?
16. 87 BPM Timing Point move to 03:57:983. It seems to little unsnapped.
17. 04:08:876 (1) - finish on head
18. 04:38:567 (1) - finish than clap is fine
19. 06:06:810 (5) - remove this

Lily Bread wrote:

1st

怎么办...摸不出东西呢...难度有点超出我的能力了，随便说一点吧

预览点就在开头吗？感觉放在第一个kiai会更好的样子..
然后全程一个音量感觉也不好

01:26:630 (10) - 听起来这里normal， - 01:26:707 (11) - 这里soft似乎更好？并不，搞乱了
04:08:412 (9,10,11) - 嗯所以这里应该少了什么音效 加了

02:38:460 (9) - normal?然而背景里啥也没有

06:18:097 (11,12,13,14) - 这里你下的节奏跟音效有点不搭，如果要三连的话考虑一下别的音效下法？改了

06:47:866 (7) - 跟上面类似，要三连的话干脆这个也下个clap好

good luck!

TaMul wrote:

From my queue

[General]

1. Preview Point in here. 01:15:728
2. From Ranking Criteria Kiai should be consistent throughout difficulties of your mapset (especially since it is shown on the main menu). If you have a guest difficulty from another mapper that uses different kiai, then it's fine as long as it still makes sense. Add Kiai Time on emphasizing you want.
   
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[Vergissmalnicht]

1. 00:29:645 (7,1) - blanket fixed
2. 00:37:532 (1) - finish?fixed
3. 00:56:089 (6) - NCfixed
4. 01:06:604 (5,6,7,8) - Ctrl+G 01:06:604 (5,6) and 01:06:914 (7,8)
5. 01:27:017 (1) - finish on slider head
6. 01:51:759 (1,3) - ^
7. 02:08:769 (12,13) - sampleset normal is more better fixed
8. 02:14:645 (3) - remove whistlefixed
9. 02:26:243 (10) - NC?fixed
10. 02:38:460 (9) - how about this rhythm? and sampleset to normal
    
11. 02:56:089 (1,2) - it will be nice!
    
    Try this!

    
12. 02:57:905 (1) - make gradually like fixed
    
    SPOILER

    
13. 03:08:842 (10,11) - whistlefixed
14. 03:34:155 (1,2) - blanketfixed
15. 03:57:592 - Break end time in here move to 03:56:967 ? fixed
16. 87 BPM Timing Point move to 03:57:983. It seems to little unsnapped.fixed
17. 04:08:876 (1) - finish on head
18. 04:38:567 (1) - finish than clap is finefixed
19. 06:06:810 (5) - remove thisfixed

lol long nice map! good luck!
get my star~

raririn wrote:

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