1. AriGuri's Futsuu (2,43 stars, 339 notes)
2. Ayyri's Inner Oni (5,02 stars, 897 notes)
3. Ayyri's Muzukashii (3,73 stars, 505 notes)
4. Kantan (1,52 stars, 155 notes)
5. Oni (4,67 stars, 795 notes)

rew0825 wrote:

PM request <3

[Kantan]

1. 00:01:342 (2,4,6,8) - How about delete it. done
2. 00:07:695 (12,15) - ^^ don't want to keep it so empty cause theres a clear sound
3. 00:32:401 (46) - ^^ done
4. 00:35:048 (51,53) - ^^ done
5. 00:37:872 (56,58,60) - ^^ done
6. 00:40:696 (62,64,66) - ^^ done
7. 01:00:636 (13,17) - ^^ i think they fit
8. 01:11:930 (27,31) - ^^ ^
9. 01:20:401 (38,40,42,44,48,51) - ^^ done
   
   I think Kantan is have notes too much and have star in high. and Why not have to add finish well, guess the finish is a good idea

[Futsuu]

1. 00:00:637 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - about this can you change it to same Kantan before delete dont want to be the same as kantan, so i kinda changed it
2. 00:06:284 (11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19) - Same as ^^ harder diff, more notes i guess :V
3. 01:19:695 (66,67,68,69,70,71,72,73,74,75,76,77) - Same as first ^
4. 01:25:342 (78,79,80,81,82,83,84,85,86) - Same as second ^
   may look into it tho, ill see what others are gonna say
   
   This Futsuu is doesn't have 1/2 note you can add it and Not have finish again please add

[Muzukashii]

• About Muzukashii it's have more unrankable so it's have 1/4 is ddk or kkd it's use in Muzu and 1/2 long it's should more 7 notes in one part

didnt really understand what you mean

[Oni]

• About Oni I think it should have more break

1. 00:03:284 (19) - Delete clear sound, dont wanna keep it empty
2. 00:06:107 (39) - Delete ^
3. 00:08:931 (58) - Delete ^
4. 00:11:754 (79) - Delete ^
5. 00:23:754 (142,143,144,145,146,147,148,149,150,151,152,153,154,155,156,157,158,159,160,161,162,163,164,165,166,167,168,169,170,171) - Please change to another pattern for easier will change soon
6. 00:29:401 (190,191,192,193,194,195,196,197,198,199,200,201,202,203,204,205,206,207,208,209,210,211,212,213,214,215,216) - Same as ^^ ^
7. 00:52:078 (6,12,18,24,30,36) - Delete done
8. 01:19:519 (201) - Delete same as first reason
9. 01:22:342 (220) - Delete same as first reason
10. 01:25:165 (240) - Delete same as first reason
    
    So Kiai part Please Delete or Change the pattern of notes for easier

Good luck <3

Remus wrote:

Hello from my queue o/

Song is very repeatative, so i can't find something very strange, but i'll make some notes.

Muzukashii

1. 00:42:284 (156,180) - try to fix your density here, cause it's not even kiai but you have 4 triples at the end. You can transform them into a slider/ save 2 triples and make gap between another two( kkk kkk kkk kkk ---->>> kkk k k kkk k k ->>>>> kkk k kkk k).
2. 01:45:284 (262) - kat here to emphasize 01:45:372 (263,264) volume going down. And it also gave some variety for the song(cause it's a little boring to play all time patterns like this)

Oni

1. 00:17:048 (107) - move it to 00:17:136 (107) . There is no sound at :048
2. 00:32:578 (217,227) - don't know properly, but what about this? Variety+rhytm.
3. 00:33:989 (231) - move it to 00:33:901.
4. 00:51:460 (1,37) - no way, it's just soooo boring. Try to to even ddk kdd to diversify this part.
5. 01:00:901 (66) - don to emphasize 67.
6. 01:11:225 (141,142) - this part followed by instrumentals, the you miss very LOUD sound. Do not recommend you to do that.
7. 01:46:695 (423) - kat.
8. 01:49:960 (457) - kat.
9. 01:52:166 (482,498) - this part can be improved, jsut listen with 50% speed.

Good luck!

changed it all, thank you

Ayyri wrote:

why

Feerum wrote:

Hoi o/
No kds.

Dein Titel ist falsch.
Tomorrow Perfume (tpz Despair remix)
Bitte das R auch groß schreiben!

Denke das geht als source durch, auch wenn die Seite grade offline ist als ich diesen post hier geschrieben habe.
geklaut aus dem vor kurzem geranktem Mania Set

Good luck!

- Magic Girl - wrote:

I think I was told to put my cup here idk

Magic Girl's Cup

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1. Consider getting a higher quality mp3 (max allowed is 192kbps) as the one you're using is 128kbps.
2. Same for Backgrounds, at 1366*768 they are fine but if you happen to come across a higher resolution ones then it'd be much better
3. Maybe delete tpz from tags as it's on the title anyways. Or change it to t+p that's also an option

1. 00:12:813 (87,95,103,120,128,136) - these were really distracting as they aren't part of the melody mapping like the section is and these are on hihat sounds so probably you should change them to k
2. 00:42:195 - ~ 00:42:989 - dkkddk kkd => (x)d ddkdkkd. (the note at 00:42:195 (285) - feels like it shouldn't be there, removing 00:42:372 (287) - makes it so the stream from 00:42:460 (288) - to 00:42:989 (293) - follows better the melody, and the note suggested at 00:42:725 - to make this a stream plays better considering it being a build up for the following streams
3. 00:51:284 - (Suggestion, I know the purpose of this line is to try smoothing the sv change but) I'd remove this green line, because the song just suddenly goes up on (density? volume? I don't really know how to explain it)

1. 00:23:754 - ~ 00:32:578 - I really don't think that multiple triplets in a row is either fun to play or called by the song, instead, I believe you should cut some notes and make a better designed rhythm using 2-plets / 4-plets or even using 3-plets with some 1/2 notes to avoid making it too repetitive
2. 00:33:813 (230) - (not important) delete, sticks better to the song
3. 00:36:813 (245,246,247,248,249,250) - Maybe you should delete those as the song isn't really calling for that and if you want to keep it for improvisation (which if it's the case I like it) the Inner doesn't have it so it'd be bad spread wise to keep this
4. 00:45:813 - ~ 00:51:460 - I think you should map this section on this diff at least, as Ayyri has this mapped on her Muzukashii so for spread purposes this needs to be mapped too. Same in 00:55:695 - ~ 00:57:107 - .
5. 00:57:107 - ~ 01:29:578 - The map really lacks 1/1 rests for this whole portion of the map, so try finding good spots to make some rests
6. 01:31:342 - ~ 01:53:578 - This section is kinda messy on its execution, as there is a lot of stuff like multiple triplets in a row, streams that feel a bit too much and stuff like 01:45:548 (409,410) - where these notes don't really feel like they should be there, so I guess you need to recheck this part and work on it

1. 00:30:460 (127,128) - may be that way for variation but I believe this should get CTRL+G'd
2. 01:42:284 - ~ 01:52:166 - this section looks kind of messy, as I think you're doing vocalmapping on this section (I..guess?) but it behaves a bit weird considering how the whole map is sticking to the melody and even some parts on this section are also attached to the melody (like 01:46:519 - ~ 01:47:578 - ) so I don't think that just making it similar to the previous sections is the answer but maybe just emphasize harder on the vocals and make this section consistent with itself

1. I didn't really wanted to check this diff, mostly because I really believe you should remake this one as this diff is just a Kantan with a few notes snapped on 1/2 with no real 1/2 patterns on it, and considering the jump from this to Muzukashii which has some 1/4 around it you really should think on creating a Futsuu that is around 2.5~2.9 (considering how the Muzukashii is 3.7 (kinda high)) to keep the spread alright

1. 00:07:695 (8) - delete this note, I think its a bit early to do a kdk (for how the rhythm would work, not because the song is just starting, generally when you do offbeat blue notes, you want the kdk to be on the second large white lines). This also makes so that resembles the change of pace of the song
2. 00:11:578 - add a note here, it works wonders
3. 00:22:519 - also add note here, so that you emphasize the strong kick at this point
4. 00:24:636 (27) - move this note to 00:23:931 - and map considering the emphasize of 00:24:284 (26,28,29,30,32) - (map around them, but keep them on place as they are what denotes the beat). Also, I would move 00:26:754 (31) - to 00:27:460 - and change 00:27:813 (33) - to d so that you have a transition to the following section
5. 00:29:225 (36) - change this note to k. OR change 00:29:931 (37,39,40,41,42) - to d to make an abekobe effect compared to the previous section (abekobe=same pattern but notes inverted, which is a mapping technique very useful on lower diffs). I kinda like the abekobe the most even though probably it would be better if they were k. Up to you
6. 00:33:813 (44) - Move this note to 00:33:460 - and add a d in 00:34:166 - to make a better end to this section
7. 00:52:342 (2,3,4) - I don't really think there is need to make a rhythm on 1/2 snaps on this section, so you can probably do something else much more simple that would work better
8. 01:00:989 - add d here to make contrast with the previous "k dkk k". Do the same in 01:12:284 - (same reason)
9. 01:26:753 (47) - feels a bit unnecesary to me (for the same reason I did mention on 00:07:695)
10. 01:30:813 (54) - move this note to 01:30:284 - to avoid 1/2 snapped notes as much as possible. Maybe not needed since it has a 1/1 rest afterwards but you should still consider it
11. 01:31:342 - ~ 01:53:578 - Just as I said on the previous stream (and I feel is much more important here since this section looks a bit unstable on its rhythm) do a steady pattern and map around it. For example, 01:32:048 (57,58,60,61) - (and lacks a note in 01:34:872 - as the last of this pattern) you keep these note as staple, then map around it (or not, depending on what you want to do). This same thing should happen 4 times in total on the whole kiai so I hope I don't need to link them all. Also works much better if you do an abekobe here (you stick to the end of the melody on these 1/1 "k k k k k", do a transition, then do the same but with dons (1/1 d d d d d)
12. I think that should be it

-Kazu- wrote:

mod as requested on my queue

[General]

1. Consider getting a higher quality mp3 (max allowed is 192kbps) as the one you're using is 128kbps.
2. Same for Backgrounds, at 1366*768 they are fine but if you happen to come across a higher resolution ones then it'd be much better
3. Maybe delete tpz from tags as it's on the title anyways. Or change it to t+p that's also an option

[Ayyri's Inner Oni]

1. 00:12:813 (87,95,103,120,128,136) - these were really distracting as they aren't part of the melody mapping like the section is and these are on hihat sounds so probably you should change them to k
2. 00:42:195 - ~ 00:42:989 - dkkddk kkd => (x)d ddkdkkd. (the note at 00:42:195 (285) - feels like it shouldn't be there, removing 00:42:372 (287) - makes it so the stream from 00:42:460 (288) - to 00:42:989 (293) - follows better the melody, and the note suggested at 00:42:725 - to make this a stream plays better considering it being a build up for the following streams
3. 00:51:284 - (Suggestion, I know the purpose of this line is to try smoothing the sv change but) I'd remove this green line, because the song just suddenly goes up on (density? volume? I don't really know how to explain it)

[Ayyri's Muzukashii]

1. 00:30:460 (127,128) - may be that way for variation but I believe this should get CTRL+G'd
2. 01:42:284 - ~ 01:52:166 - this section looks kind of messy, as I think you're doing vocalmapping on this section (I..guess?) but it behaves a bit weird considering how the whole map is sticking to the melody and even some parts on this section are also attached to the melody (like 01:46:519 - ~ 01:47:578 - ) so I don't think that just making it similar to the previous sections is the answer but maybe just emphasize harder on the vocals and make this section consistent with itself

-Kazu- wrote:

mod as requested on my queue

[General]

1. Consider getting a higher quality mp3 (max allowed is 192kbps) as the one you're using is 128kbps. ill change it once i find one!
2. Same for Backgrounds, at 1366*768 they are fine but if you happen to come across a higher resolution ones then it'd be much better will change once i find one
3. Maybe delete tpz from tags as it's on the title anyways. Or change it to t+p that's also an option done!

[Oni]

1. 00:23:754 - ~ 00:32:578 - I really don't think that multiple triplets in a row is either fun to play or called by the song, instead, I believe you should cut some notes and make a better designed rhythm using 2-plets / 4-plets or even using 3-plets with some 1/2 notes to avoid making it too repetitive
2. 00:33:813 (230) - (not important) delete, sticks better to the song
3. 00:36:813 (245,246,247,248,249,250) - Maybe you should delete those as the song isn't really calling for that and if you want to keep it for improvisation (which if it's the case I like it) the Inner doesn't have it so it'd be bad spread wise to keep this
4. 00:45:813 - ~ 00:51:460 - I think you should map this section on this diff at least, as Ayyri has this mapped on her Muzukashii so for spread purposes this needs to be mapped too. Same in 00:55:695 - ~ 00:57:107 - .
5. 00:57:107 - ~ 01:29:578 - The map really lacks 1/1 rests for this whole portion of the map, so try finding good spots to make some rests
6. 01:31:342 - ~ 01:53:578 - This section is kinda messy on its execution, as there is a lot of stuff like multiple triplets in a row, streams that feel a bit too much and stuff like 01:45:548 (409,410) - where these notes don't really feel like they should be there, so I guess you need to recheck this part and work on it

[Kantan]

1. 00:07:695 (8) - delete this note, I think its a bit early to do a kdk (for how the rhythm would work, not because the song is just starting, generally when you do offbeat blue notes, you want the kdk to be on the second large white lines). This also makes so that resembles the change of pace of the song
2. 00:11:578 - add a note here, it works wonders
3. 00:22:519 - also add note here, so that you emphasize the strong kick at this point
4. 00:24:636 (27) - move this note to 00:23:931 - and map considering the emphasize of 00:24:284 (26,28,29,30,32) - (map around them, but keep them on place as they are what denotes the beat). Also, I would move 00:26:754 (31) - to 00:27:460 - and change 00:27:813 (33) - to d so that you have a transition to the following section
5. 00:29:225 (36) - change this note to k. OR change 00:29:931 (37,39,40,41,42) - to d to make an abekobe effect compared to the previous section (abekobe=same pattern but notes inverted, which is a mapping technique very useful on lower diffs). I kinda like the abekobe the most even though probably it would be better if they were k. Up to you
6. 00:33:813 (44) - Move this note to 00:33:460 - and add a d in 00:34:166 - to make a better end to this section
7. 00:52:342 (2,3,4) - I don't really think there is need to make a rhythm on 1/2 snaps on this section, so you can probably do something else much more simple that would work better
8. 01:00:989 - add d here to make contrast with the previous "k dkk k". Do the same in 01:12:284 - (same reason)
9. 01:26:753 (47) - feels a bit unnecesary to me (for the same reason I did mention on 00:07:695)
10. 01:30:813 (54) - move this note to 01:30:284 - to avoid 1/2 snapped notes as much as possible. Maybe not needed since it has a 1/1 rest afterwards but you should still consider it
11. 01:31:342 - ~ 01:53:578 - Just as I said on the previous stream (and I feel is much more important here since this section looks a bit unstable on its rhythm) do a steady pattern and map around it. For example, 01:32:048 (57,58,60,61) - (and lacks a note in 01:34:872 - as the last of this pattern) you keep these note as staple, then map around it (or not, depending on what you want to do). This same thing should happen 4 times in total on the whole kiai so I hope I don't need to link them all. Also works much better if you do an abekobe here (you stick to the end of the melody on these 1/1 "k k k k k", do a transition, then do the same but with dons (1/1 d d d d d) really not sure what you mean with that, maybe i can pm you if i catch you online!
12. I think that should be it

Good luck with ranking! :0

Loreley wrote:

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