Ok,so..as you requested
Correct me if I'm wrong,but this track is from
beatmania IIDX 16 EMPRESS,so add it to Source?
Another is the only difficulty with more or less correct offset and has a Kiai section,others do not.
Add a Preview Point,please.
And,of course,you need a Normal difficulty.
[Beginner]Of course,first of all fix the offset and resnap all notes.
Hitsounds sound rude,so work on them as in Another.I can't hear any,well,you mentioned it via irc.
You're placing notes correctly,I mean they're mostly on 2/4 th white ticks,so simple claps on them will do.And of course add some finshes,they're clearly heared through the music.
Anyway,you have wide hitsounds choice,so you won't have any problems,I suppose
Ah,and the last thing - could you cut off your combos by half? It's not recommended to use 5+ combos in the easiest diffs.
00:21:338 (1) - No,you don't need a note here,better move it to 00:21:846.
00:26:592 - I'd add a note here to follow the rhytm.
00:27:270 - And here too.
00:34:727 - ^
00:35:405 - ^
00:37:439 - ^
00:38:117 - ^
00:38:456 (7) - I'd rather continue this slider up to 00:39:134.
00:43:625 - Again,a note would fit well.
00:48:964 - ^
01:05:912 (1) - Spinner doesn't fit,seriously :\ Start if from 01:02:522 if you want to keep it,and end at 01:05:234.
But..then the break will be too long,+20 sec is unrankable,but you could map something(a slider,maybe?) from 01:24:216.
01:26:927 (x) - Soft section,please.
01:38:452 (1) - Spinner starts too late,it should take off from 01:37:774.
01:49:638 (1) - You don't really need this slider,just a single note at 01:49:977 will do fine.
02:12:349 (5) - Shorten by 1/1? And allign next circles to the previous white ticks,either?
Well,looks more like a wip for now.
Though I haven't noticed any spacing mistakes, so good job!
You just need to imporve rhytm and hitsounds,of course.
[Hyper]As it's supposed to be Hard,but not the second Insane,I'd reduce both OD and AR by 1,but it's up to you,cause low AR on high BPM is kinda disputable,but still..
00:30:844 (6) - Remove 2 last repeats and a note to 00:31:183 instead.
00:34:065 (6,7,8,9) - A bit odd,you was stacking 2 objects during this combo,but this one has 3,so,maybe start slider from 00:34:404 of unstack it at all?
00:36:946 (10) - Same,last 2 repeats aren't needed.
00:44:742 (2) - Move some grids to the left/up to avoid overlapping with 00:44:234 (8)? Doesn't look so good now.
00:47:115 (4) - ^ Same,half hidden by hitbursts btw.
01:02:368 (6) - Repeats again
01:14:740 - Add a note to follow that sound?
01:16:435 (1) - I'd start it at 01:16:096 and end at 01:17:113.
01:33:214 (4) - Please,no,clear it out.
01:35:756 (1) - Extend to 01:37:790?
01:45:925 (5,6,7,8,9) - Uneven spacing and stack,I'd rather use something like this:
(7) and (9) are stacked01:47:450 (9,10) - You don't need these two,better start spinner from here.
01:47:789 (1) - Spinner should end at 01:48:637.
02:24:397 (1) - Remove last repeats again,please.
[Another]Not a fan of OD 8
I'd use 7.
But I'd increase HP drain a little.
In my personal opinion claps don't really fit this music well,as well as normalhits
00:08:841 (4) - Fix distance,it should be 2x farther.
00:19:518 (11) - Remove clap,doesn't fit here.
00:20:705 (10) - ^ And this slider plays bad for me,start it from 00:20:535.
01:20:701 (1) - Hey,there's only 1000 bonus score,unrankable
Remove or extend to 01:21:549.
01:50:022 (x) - Start Kiai from here.
02:18:495 (7,8,1,2,3) - You should sort of clear up the spacing.I suggest you not to stack 02:18:834 (8) with previous slider,and make another triangle spaced pattern,like at 02:17:478 (1,2,3).
02:34:935 (2,3) - Don't overlap them
02:37:307 (1) - Shorten by 1/2.
Okaaay..seems like I finished.
It took me a while I should say
Keep on the good work,map can be improved much more,so good luck~
