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Also popping this because I don't think this set is ready yet, aesthetics, rhythms, and patterning ideas can still be improved more, I hope some of the problems which I brought up are enough for you to understand the general idea, good luck~
- The way you mapped this + CS2 makes aesthetics look really cramped, strongly recommended to use CS2.5 instead.
- 01:07:208 (3,4) - Could've used the same slider shape here, current one looks aesthetically inconsistent.
- 00:19:561 (1) - Why a spinner on this part when other diffs are mapped?
- 00:24:855 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - 00:31:913 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - 00:38:972 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - 00:46:031 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1) - etc I want you to pay more attention on rhythm density on these parts(also other kiais/choruses as well), I don't know why you used 1/1 rhythms randomly like 00:24:855 (1,2) - 00:40:737 (1,2,3) - 00:47:796 (1,2,3,4) - etc which makes the rhythm plays really inconsistent. This is clearly noticeable when you mapped all these parts without any 1/1 rhythms in the second chorus/kiai. Try balance the 1/1 and 1/2 rhythms usages on these parts to make them more consistent. If you want rhythm variations then try not to do it without making too much rhythm inconsistency.
- 02:57:943 (3) - Not really necessary to map this imo since you didn't map 02:54:413 - 02:56:178 anyways.
- Overall I wish you could've used a higher DS throughout the map so things like 03:01:031 (3,4) - 03:16:913 (2,3,1) - etc won't look too cramped.
- 00:13:163 (3,5) - Looks cramped lol not really aesthetically appealing compared to other blankets like 00:16:031 (1,3) - 00:20:443 (3,4) - etc. Similar thing also occurred at 01:45:149 (5,1) .
- 00:25:296 (2,3,4,5) - 00:28:384 (1,2,3,4) - aaa I'm really curious what rhythm you're following here with these circle patterns.
- 02:56:178 (4) - Same reasoning as what I mentioned in Normal as you didn't map 02:54:413 - 02:57:943 to begin with, which have a similar rhythm.
- 03:08:972 (1) - A 1/1 slider doesn't really fit here since there's vocal in the middle of the slider, you didn't do this anywhere else so might as well use a different rhythm here.
- The patterning ideas seem random to me, like 01:19:561 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 02:33:678 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) for instance where the second one is a pattern while the first one doesn't really look like one, which is pretty inconsistent.
- 00:05:443 (1) - I assume this follow the sax right? But I don't know what 00:01:914 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) are following since they didn't seem to follow anything in particular.
- 00:09:855 (4) - What's the purpose of having a repeat slider here? It really stands out as it's the only repeat slider in the entire section.
- 00:31:913 (1,2,3,4) - 01:46:693 (2,3,4,5,6) - You made a pattern with these two but not 03:14:266 (1,2,3,4) which has a pretty much similar rhythm?
- 00:55:296 (2,3,5,6) - 00:55:296 (2,3,5,6,2,3,5,6) - 01:02:355 (2,3,5,6) - So this is how you followed the sax right? Then why 01:05:884 (3,5,6) - 02:20:002 (3,4) - 02:20:884 (6) - aren't the same rhythm then?
- 01:30:149 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 02:44:266 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Do these patterns really reflect or express anything from the song? I really want to hear your explanation on this cuz it doesn't seem like it at all. Repeated patterns would play better if the song is gradually building up, which is not in this case.
- 01:35:443 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - You're using the same pattern on these, but then you used different patterns on 02:49:561 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - which I don't know why tho
- 01:50:222 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - The circle placements here should be improved, you need to pay more attention on balancing visual spacings like 01:50:663 (4,6,1) - 01:51:766 (3,4,6) - etc where you can balance these triangles.
- Also the way you emphasis thing is really inconsistent, at least in terms of spacing. I don't understand your idea on having noticeably different spacings with 00:35:443 (1) - 00:42:502 (1) - 00:49:561 (1) - etc
- Personally I don't really agree with the way you pulled off symmetry patterns cuz they are done inconsistently and didn't reflect/express anything much from the song.
Also popping this because I don't think this set is ready yet, aesthetics, rhythms, and patterning ideas can still be improved more, I hope some of the problems which I brought up are enough for you to understand the general idea, good luck~