hi
ur soft finish is like drum hitnormal why do u ever use it when the standart finish fits rly good lol
easy
i highly recommend u to put nc on the every odd downbeat so combos wont be that tiny + it will work better with the hp
00:14:694 (2) - i think x=102 y=82 will work better with the flow
00:22:635 - why do u skip this note? its pretty strong and must be mapped imo
00:36:752 (2,1) - prolly u could do a better blanket here or smth..
00:46:017 (1,2,1) - idk those blankets could be better too
01:19:547 (1) - try x=307 y=94 cuz rn flow isnt really good
01:30:135 (1) - i think that this wave could be much better
https://pp.vk.me/c836433/v836433809/195/Iz0_pG64jbs.jpg01:31:899 (1) - try ctrl+g, so the flow wont be that sharp
01:40:723 (1) - same tbh
01:58:370 (1) - ithnik u could try to do smth like this
https://pp.vk.me/c836433/v836433809/19d/dKU1Yl0Kako.jpg to avoid that uneccesarry overlap + u will improve the flow a bit~
02:44:252 (1) - again this wave lol
02:46:016 (1) - and again as i told before. probably dince u do the ctrl+c ctrl+v u could just fix one moment instead of two
02:49:105 (1) - unneccessary nc
03:01:899 (1) - maybe
https://pp.vk.me/c836433/v836433809/1a5/c9wJavILYJI.jpg03:33:664 (1) - move on x=270 y=119 for a better flow
normal
od+1 cuz in easy its 2 and in hard its 6
00:03:664 (1) - looks really strange becuz u just ignored the melody 00:03:444 - 00:03:885 - that u were mapping 00:01:900 (1,2,3,4) - here lol
00:06:091 (2) - idk prolly try x=241 y=151
00:11:826 - 00:12:267 - these notes should be clickable because the beats on them are really strong and deserve some emphasis
00:15:355 - 00:15:797 - kinda same?
00:26:605 (4) - nc?
also i thik that u should keep it and do the same thing as i told you in easy
00:37:194 (4) - again nc if you wont listen to me
00:42:488 (1) - hmm.. i think that this will look better
https://pp.vk.me/c836433/v836433809/1ad/kyZp1YwhKCU.jpg01:07:194 (1) - ctrl+h for the flow
01:10:282 (4) - and ctrl+j this one xd
01:19:547 (1) - i didnt mentioned a lot of waves b4, but all of them can be improved. i showd u my example before in the mod
01:42:488 (1,1) - u could blanket these so it will look nicer
03:20:870 (3) - maybe ctrl+h?
hard
idk recommend u to put ar 7.5 cuz some spacings are really big for the hard```````
00:06:973 (1) - recovery time after the spinner is too little.. even its a hard diff, the break should not be that tiny
00:08:958 (1,2,3) - idk but its better not to do such things at all. 2 stacked circles are fine, but three - no
00:13:149 (3,5) - blanket these otherwise it will look bad
00:19:988 (2,3,4) - yeah, kinda again
00:23:076 (1) - such sudden sv changes are really inpredictable in a such low diff with such low ar lol. pls use at least 0.75
00:23:738 (1) - not sure if its a good thing for a hard.. fits in the insane but in hard no especially when u have 00:24:399 (3) - this later
00:53:076 (1,1) - same as before
01:11:164 (3,5) - this balnket can be totally improved
01:15:576 (5,6,1) - same thing lol. btw 01:16:017 (1) - here is a strong beat, so that means that it needs mor spacing
01:16:899 (4,5) - spacing between these two must be lower than between these two 01:17:561 (6,1) - cuz here is a strong beat 01:17:782 (1) -
01:18:223 (2,3) - dont really like this overlap
01:37:194 (1,1) - yeah. and this goes to all such moments
02:19:547 (1) - can you like blanket this like that 02:19:105 (7) - one?
02:23:076 (1,2,3,4) - this overlap is not really needed. 02:23:958 (4,5) - also this 1/2 spacing is a bit unreadable becuz it looks more like 1/4
03:08:958 (1) - o, first good wave lolz
03:21:311 - dude this sv is really an overkill for a hard. even 1.5 looks too much, 2 is just way too huge ;v
last kiai is better than the whole map holy lol
good luck!~