Blan_C wrote:

Yo, M4M from your modding queue.

• Insane
  i get it that you focus on vocal here but there are some beats that imo have to be clickable, if its how you want to map it, just skip this section glad you understood my intention

1. 01:22:713 (1,2) - spacing here (x0,88) is smaller than 01:24:588 (1,2) - (x1,00), but these are the same thing not really an issue
2. 01:05:369 (5,1,2) - this is a bit cramped to me. make this end of slider (1) spaced from (2) like (2) and (5) doesn't seem cramped to me, it might look cramped it the editor but it plays and reads fine
3. 02:30:213 (1,2) - this is a bit cramped too, maybe try to put this 02:30:213 (1) - with 02:31:384 (5,6,7) - in the same line
   
   Normal
4. blanket a bit off here 00:12:869 (3,4) -
5. 00:52:713 (1,2,3) - spacing between these is bigger than 00:55:525 (4,5,1) - fixed
6. 02:29:392 - you skip this part? nope this is spinner recovery time for beginners

This i all i could find. Good luck!

Delis wrote:

Hello there! I was going to catch you in game to ask for it but I couldn't so I am here, I feel kinda rude to post on queue even though we're friends lol. I think hitsounding suggestions what I wrote in Insane can be applied to all difficulties
[General]
the resolution of bg is right as is :O? I guess everything is fine unless it's on ranking criteria so whatever. I'll leave high resolution ver if you wanted in case. https://puu.sh/tCyer/4a8aa50189.jpg
[Insane]
00:34:314 (3) - whistle for the vocal? it's different vocal from hitsounding pattern what you did at 00:30:564 (2) - etc so it doesn't really necessary here. added
00:50:838 (1,2,3) - adjusting this an equal triangle would make the pattern very well since the flow at 00:51:775 (4,5,6,1) - is like zigzag, set the beginning of flow to 00:51:541 (3) - will be the flow more natural imo. 00:51:541 (3) - this should be at x96 y212 for a triangle idk maybe! cool https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7163605
00:52:478 (6) - sampleset normal for the strong drum sound? the drum sound is strongest compared to other parts on music, and I don't think it's really ignorable. missed that, added
00:59:627 (4) - you could've added a clap here, as the clap at 00:59:275 (2) - is intended to be fitting for the clap sound on music, so both 00:59:978 (6) - and here also can get hitsounded claps. done
01:31:619 (6) - I usually don't care copy-paste thingy at all but I prefer this slider to be paired with 01:31:150 (5) -pprobably because of the slider is quite top of playfield (is this a reason xD). me thinks its ok
01:40:525 (3,4) - I'd like to put another circle between the sliders to be a triplet, two 1/2+3/4 pattern (sorry if I'm wrong with beats) in a row is kinda boring to play unless the rhythm fits song best. if you agreed with this, 02:25:525 (3,4) - too. changed
01:42:400 (5,6,7,8,9) - adding sampleset normal to everywhere sounds nice, your usage of sampleset normal also is to follow the claps on music. same goes for 02:27:400 (5,6,7,8,9) - added
01:46:384 (5,6,7) - I think I'm gonna fuck what you wanted to do here, my suggestion is to make cursor that following this triplet to the top right so the triplet can emphasize the anti-jump 01:46:853 (8,1) - stronger. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7163698 i prefer how the current angle plays
02:00:213 (1) - soft finish instead of whistle? a lil too noisy for me at this part
02:15:681 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - this is 2nd time I see square mapping in 1/1 today. I love it, nice! :D
02:33:494 (3) - I want this slider to be headed to the slider directly, this currently is messing the flow a bit I think. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7163767 this is one of my ideas for here but a symmetrical slider with 02:33:025 (2) - is also nice. this is good
02:45:330 (1) - because the volume is very low, a finish might fit here while you don't really feel it loud. hmm i prefer the normal whistle
[Hard]
00:15:213 (3) - I know that feel when you don't want put a NC after only 2 long sliders, although it's only one that the combo is continued over 2 downbeats in the diff, so for consistency asdfgh fixed
01:38:650 (2,3,1,2) - hardest pattern in the overall mapset comes out. it's pretty hard to be in a hard difficulty, I'd put nc every circles at least so it'll be easier to read and warns it's something different. this im going to get some opinions on, not opposed to doing this i just dont like the way having these bunch of NC'd notes looks
02:24:002 (2,3,2,3) - o again, I'm sure you could've mapped this way easier ;-; like make distance each other more far. yup did that
[Normal]
00:42:869 (2) - I hope this stacks on 00:40:994 (5) - properly! (omg this is so nazi mod) lolol done
really nothing to say on normal diff!

have I ever modded your map before? can't really remember aw i don't think so :>

-Xephyr- wrote:

Heya, M4M from queue.

Insane:
00:21:306 (2) - Not sure why this slider is stacked on the one before it, as well at this one 00:30:564 (2) - . These two are the only ones that do this in the entire map, and every time you have that same rhythm it is mapped consistently like this 00:32:088 (1,2) - . Not sure if this was intentional but there's nothing different in the music to break that normal cursor flow during those two times. Whoops, this one as well. 00:47:088 (1) - alright

02:23:064 (2) - This one seems out of place because 90% of time when you map this same rhythm it doesn't double back, it follows the flow of the slider. I'm not sure how much it matters to you where 02:22:713 (1) - starts but maybe move that starting slider somewhere so the next slider doesn't flow off the side with nowhere to go? its a drop-off, its ok to introduce different kinds of flow patterns into a map

Since you use this rhythm a lot, 01:56:463 (1,2) - , sometimes the circle/slider on the downbeat follows the slider-flow perfectly but sometimes it doesn't later in the map. Since the map starts with this rhythm where it follows slider flow perfectly, 00:07:713 (1,2) - , the same rhythm with the downbeat not following the slider-flow like this 01:02:088 (1,2) - jumps out at me as sort of incorrect. Obviously it increases the variety of the map, but the times where it shows up seem random. Flow does not have to be made consistent. rhythm generally speaking should be made consistent, flow on the other hand you're free to play with. If you make a map in which every single pattern that followed a certain rhythm had to flow a certain way you would be making one hell of a boring map.

00:26:463 (1,2) - 01:18:963 (1,2) - These two similar parts don't really match up, and the first one at 26 seconds is the only time you use this spacing ever in the map. The extra spacing sort of makes sense with the vocal part there, but it seems weird that this one spacing is a one-and-done. I really wanted to bring out that emphasis in the vocal whereas I didn't feel the second time it needed as much emphasis given the bgm is more prevalent then. If that was not the case I would agree with you that the spacing should be changed.


Hard:
01:00:213 (1,2) - This one breaks the slider flow of the softer parts, up until now all of this rhythm had the second slider directly follow the first slider. it's fine

01:41:229 (2) - This should probably be a NC, since same rhythm right before this had a NC on the red tick as well. Avoids some confusion. Quite the opposite I think. The NCs were used indicate 3/4 gaps in the rhythm, hence why I didnt use one for 01:39:588 (2) - It would be especially confusing too with it being stack

01:52:713 (1,2) - This is the only one that breaks slider flow in this chorus section. I disagree

02:24:002 (2,3,1,2,3,4) - Possibly think about repeating the NC spam for this part like you had before? You did set it up for the player before so it doesn't feel weird to play without guiding combo colors, but it is a Hard difficulty and not an Insane or Extra so I dunno what the norms are for that kind of stuff. fair, i'll look into making this part easier to read


Normal:
00:12:400 (2) - Not completely in-line with slider end. intentional

01:20:838 (3) - Slightly off from slider end if you want it be perfectly in line. Move a little to the right if this is what you want. it looks fine

01:40:759 (4) - This slider seems weird because the slider before it ends on the first syllable of "Better" and this slider doesn't hit the downbeat. I think having the slider on "When you're" rather than "-ter When" follows the music better. Spinner placement is fine. Going to leave this for now


Let me know if you have any questions, fun stuff to play on DT too