1. Insane (4,94 stars, 420 notes)
2. Normal (2,94 stars, 208 notes)
3. Roddie's Hard (4,53 stars, 385 notes)

JauiPlaY wrote:

hihi~

[Roddie's Hard]
preview point? Added.
03:22:728(8) - do not be overlapped well. It's fine like that?

JauiPlaY wrote:

hihi~
sry for delay...

[General]
i'm afraid a 320kbps mp3 is not available here...you'd better change your mp3 file imo. Nah!
also add roddie to the tags. make sure that all the diffs have the same tags. Oops!

[Normal]
00:22:978(2) - move to 00:22:728 and add a note with clap hitsound at 00:23:478.
00:26:228(3) - new combo.
00:27:603(1) - not a good idea for normal, try to map something different here. also remove new combo.
00:36:228(1,2) - i expect the sliders little more cute.
00:41:478(1) - i prefer the spinner starts at 00:41:978 and put some notes here.
00:59:478(x) - add a note here.
00:59:728(x) - ^
01:02:978(5) - very bad position. the next circle could not be overlapped perfectly.
01:11:728(x) - add a note here.
and it's seems that you copied a lot in this map, so i'll not mod it anymore. just fixed the same part in your copy version. Copy paste at end deleted and made a new part!Fixed all

[Insane]
resnap all notes. Done
00:47:105(8) - quite noisy...remove this combo. Fits Perfectly so no
00:47:928(x) - add a note here. Nah
01:15:228 - 01:16:228 - imo it's better to map something here. Done
oops another copy part. so just fixed the same part in your copy version.
02:35:980(1) - why you suddenly changed sound volume here? soooo weird.True
02:43:978(1) - move to 02:44:228 and add a note here. K

good luck.
so
star~

cesc wrote:

[General]
mp3 file is 320kbps. I'm uploading for you a 128kbps file http://puu.sh/1JyB

[Normal]
copy-paste, copy-paste, copy-paste...
01:11:728 (6,1) - why this entire part of the chorus isn't mapped? I dunno, use al least a break XD

[Roddie]
nothing here, the diff is quite funny

[Insane]
copy-paste, copy-paste, copy-paste...
00:20:228 (1) - fix it, it must finish at 00:20:728
00:47:603 (10,11) - this is ugly, can you do something like 01:51:478 (10,11,12)?
01:24:228 (1,2) - fix them, lol
03:14:978 (1,2,3,4,5) -this is very ugly and unexpected


Nice beatmap, nothing veeery special, but pretty good to play. And Ke$ha is great :3

1. An update was needed after downloading, try full submitting again to fix this, please. Nvm I forgot this happen with every Ke$ha map.
2. Keep Kiai consistent between Normal and Insane please. (Roddie's is a guest, so It's ok if it's not consistent)
3. I highly suggest to map an [Easy] diff, Normal is too hard to be the easiest diff in this mapset. (The main reasons are: the spacing is too wide, the slider speed is really high (even faster than Roddie's Slider speed and the patterns are ok for a Normal but not for the easiest diff of this mapset)
4. Hitcircle-overlay is missing.
5. I think somebody already mentioned it but the mp3 is 320kbps (which is unrankable) so you need to reduce it. (Let me know if you need help with that)
6. Add "Kesha" to tags.
7. Preview Point is slightly different for Roddie's diff.
8. You should resize the wallpaper to fit the 4:3 proportions, you'll probably need to crop BG a bit. (Let me know if you need help doing that too)
9. The approach circle seems bit wider than the standard, It's a little annoying, you should reduce it a bit.
10. This map is about to blo-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-w-w. Lol sorry, that part is stucked in my head :3

1. I suggest to raise AR 1 tick, It's really necessary imo.
2. 00:16:228 (1,2,3) - The spacing between (1) & (2) is different to the one used in between (2) & (3), the beats are spaced by the same time in the timeline, so keep spacing consistent between patterns please.
3. 00:22:728 (2,3) - This looks a bit confusing due to the low AR, I suggest to add a repeat to (2) instead. (Plays much better too)
4. 00:32:228 (2) - The repeat of the slider is slightly off-screen, move it some grids to the right please.
5. 00:36:228 (1,2) - This pattern looks and flows way better if you unstack the sliders.
6. 00:52:978 (2,3,4) - I failed here twice, the low AR makes this pattern really hard to read and hit, I suggest to unstack (3) to make it easier to read. Perhaps something like this
7. 00:58:228 (4,5,1) - I felt the same problem here, unstacking (5) might make this pattern easier.
8. 01:11:853 - I suggest to make this break rhythmical (Drag the beginning of the break to: 01:12:228 - )
9. 01:20:228 (1,2,3) - Copy-paste - The same thing about spacing here.
10. 01:16:228 - Well I see that since this point there are copy-pasted patterns, so apply the fixes to these patterns too. (I'll spoilerbox the suggestions to specify the times.)
    
    SPOILER

    01:20:228 (1,2,3) - The spacing between (1) & (2) is different to the one used in between (2) & (3), the beats are spaced by the same time in the timeline, so keep spacing consistent between patterns please.
    01:26:728 (2,3) - This looks a bit confusing due to the low AR, I suggest to add a repeat to (2) instead. (Plays much better too)
    01:36:228 (2) - The repeat of the slider is slightly off-screen, move it some grids to the left please.
    01:40:228 (1,2) - This pattern looks and flows way better if you unstack the sliders.
    01:56:978 (2,3,4) - I failed here twice, the low AR makes this pattern really hard to read and hit, I suggest to unstack (3) to make it easier to read. Perhaps something like [ur=http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/85260]this[/url]
    02:02:228 (4,5,1) - I felt the same problem here, unstacking (5) might make this pattern easier.
    02:15:853 - I suggest to make this break rhythmical (Drag the beginning of the break to: 02:16:228 -)
11. 02:31:228 (3) - New Combo time :3 ?
12. 02:43:978 (6,1) - Woops! this jump is not intuitive enough, use normal spacing please :3
13. 02:45:228 (2) - This "Normal" whistle felt bit random (This part is really calm and stuff~), I suggest to remove it or use a soft one instead.
14. 02:47:728 (2) - ^
15. 03:13:228 (1) - Lol, you left the inherited sections you used to add hit-sounds to the ticks, remove them (This one is a spinner :3)
16. 03:28:228 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Well this last combo seems really long, I suggest add New Combo on (7) and unstack it too~
17. Whoa nice patterns, I really like the last chorus.

1. 00:20:978 (X) - I expected a circle here, You should consider adding it :3
2. 00:19:603 (4) - Increase spacing a bit more so it doesn't look a like a fake "1/2 combo jump"
3. 00:23:978 (1,2,3,4) - Hmm that stack (2&3) in the middle of the pattern doesn't fit too well, you should unstack (2) & (3)
4. 00:57:228 (2,3,4,1,2) - The repeating sliders used here: 01:13:228 - were way easier/read to hit, Why don't use those repeating here too?
5. 01:10:228 (7,8) - This is a flow killer~ I suggest something like this instead
6. 02:14:228 (6,7) - Same suggestion as before.
7. 02:17:603 (4,5,1,2) - I still think these are a bit odd.
8. 03:22:228 (7,8) - Stack this correctly please~
9. 03:30:228 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I suggest this in Easy too: This last combo seems long, I suggest to use New Combo on (8) :3
10. About the little jumps between combos:
    

1. 00:28:228 (1,2,3) - This pattern will flow better if you unstack (2), like this
2. 00:36:228 (1,2,3) - ^
3. 00:41:978 (1) - This spinner ends a bit early, I suggest to end the spinner here: 00:43:728 -
4. 00:46:478 (X) - Well you added a circle here to the other little streams. Add a circle here too so you keep some consistency
5. 00:48:228 (1,2) - It's clearly noticeable that these [url=00:48:228 (1,2) -]are not properly stacked[/url]. Fix that please.
6. 01:10:228 (7,8,9) - I didn't miss on this anti-jumps, but I still feel that those are a bit odd. I suggest to use normal spacing instead :3
7. You know what to do with the copy-pasted patterns~
8. 02:29:228 (3,4) - I expected to see some other anti-jumps like this one for this part of the song, but I didn't so I suggest to remove this one.
9. 03:31:228 (1) - I suggest to add a "Finish" to this spinner.
10. In the last chorus I see some copy-pasted patterns so don't forget to apply the fixes to those too (Like, the missing circle here: 03:13:603 (4,5), The anti-jumps here: 03:18:228 (1,2,3,4) - , ...)