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Alsty- wrote:

ahhh , sorry for being late.
NM
bahasa indo aja ya =3=
note : ini suggestion ga berdasarkan pitch hs tp main pitch dr lagu , terus mempertimbangkan balance yang lebih baik buat player terutama buat diff *easy*
  1. 00:04:832 (4832|1) - move ke 4 , buat pitch sekalian ngimbangin 00:06:118 (6118|0,6547|1,6975|0) - // lah. kan pitch nya berulang. ko dibedain
  2. 00:09:118 (9118|1) - move ke 1 terus add di 00:09:547 - mungkin 2 atau 4 buat nambah sedikit feel nya sebelum stair // uhh no... pitch nya dah sesuai sama sebelumnya 00:07:832 (7832|1) - (bisa di bilang dua itu kan pitch nya sama jadi kalo di kasi ke 1 bakalan ga singkron
  3. 00:11:261 (11261|1,11689|2) - move ke kiri , pitch , ngisi tangan kiri juga // uhh... malah aneh karena ngga terlalu rendah pitch nya
  4. 00:18:118 (18118|2) - mungkin move ke 2 terus add 00:18:547 - di 3 , itu kek masih 1 paket sama 00:18:975 (18975|0,19404|1,19832|2) - sih , agak kurang feelnya imo kalo kosong // nah salah tangkep suara. aku ngikut Cello nya, bukan Violin nya
  5. 00:25:404 (25404|1,25832|2) - move ke kiri // pitch nya berulang so keep
  6. 00:30:118 (30118|1,30547|2) - move kiri , colum kiri keliatan agak kosong kalo di liat pake timiline zoom yang kecil // same reason
  7. 00:51:975 (51975|2,52189|1,52404|2) - 4|1|4 // same reason
  8. 01:17:904 (77904|2,78547|2) - balik ke 4 lagi pitchnya abis 01:16:189 (76189|2,76832|2) - , 4 nya kosong btw wkwk // kan aku bikin sesuai pitch... yha ga bisa asal pindah
  9. 01:27:547 (87547|0) - ke 4 // apa alasan nya untuk pindah ke 4? kan nada nya turun
  10. 01:40:832 (100832|0) - endingnya jadiin LN? biar beda ama yg lain? @_@ // sengaja


dahh moga bisa bantu dikit wkwk

goodluck
sorry. semuanya ke reject jadi ngga ada update, thanks for the mod

sepertinya cukup buat Diff ku
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revive this then i'll post my mod here we go

[EZ]
  1. 00:09:547 - sengaja kaa?
  2. 00:25:832 (25832|2) - kalo ngikut picth sih, hrsnya di 1.-.

[NM]
  1. 00:13:832 (13832|0,14047|0) - kalo ini di jack, knp 00:14:689 (14689|3,14904|1) - ini engga?
  2. 00:15:547 (15547|1,15761|3) - too
  3. 00:21:547 - knp ga double kyk 00:24:975 (24975|1,24975|0,25404|1,25404|2,25832|2,25832|3) - dsb dsb
  4. 00:29:904 - kelewat?
  5. 00:32:261 (32261|3,32261|0,32475|3) - knp kek gini patternnya? kan jelas bgt suaranya stair-able, knp jadi jacking'-'
  6. 00:36:547 (36547|3,36761|3,37404|2,37618|2,37832|1,38047|1,38261|0,38475|0,39547|2,39761|2,39975|1,40189|1,40832|0,41047|0,41261|2,41475|2,41689|1,41904|1,42118|0,42332|0) - ini jg aku jd gagal paham, cek diff ka aste deh coba disitu ada referensi ngikut suara piano high pitch
  7. 01:03:547 (63547|2) - knp gk di 4?
  8. 01:15:761 (75761|2,75975|2) - ??

[HD]
  1. 00:05:904 (5904|3,6332|3,6761|3,7189|3) - hmmm.-.
    yhaaaa

[MX]
  1. 00:22:618 (22618|0,22832|0,23047|0) - ini apa?:U
  2. 00:23:475 (23475|1,23689|1) - ini jg
    knp bnyk overnote -w-
  3. 00:50:904 (50904|2) - 1/4ln-able
  4. 01:05:689 - ini double tapi 01:06:118 - ini triple
    remap pls ty:V
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let's go again, shall we? :D

Fixed some minor issues, OD & HP rebalanced.
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Leonita wrote:

revive this then i'll post my mod here we go

[NM]
  1. 00:13:832 (13832|0,14047|0) - kalo ini di jack, knp 00:14:689 (14689|3,14904|1) - ini engga? jacked.
  2. 00:15:547 (15547|1,15761|3) - too ^
  3. 00:21:547 - knp ga double kyk 00:24:975 (24975|1,24975|0,25404|1,25404|2,25832|2,25832|3) - dsb dsb yg double ngikutin grandpiano '-'
  4. 00:29:904 - kelewat? naisu :v
  5. 00:32:261 (32261|3,32261|0,32475|3) - knp kek gini patternnya? kan jelas bgt suaranya stair-able, knp jadi jacking'-'staired.
  6. 00:36:547 (36547|3,36761|3,37404|2,37618|2,37832|1,38047|1,38261|0,38475|0,39547|2,39761|2,39975|1,40189|1,40832|0,41047|0,41261|2,41475|2,41689|1,41904|1,42118|0,42332|0) - ini jg aku jd gagal paham, cek diff ka aste deh coba disitu ada referensi ngikut suara piano high pitch ah, makanya ada yg janggal di jack itu '-' fixed
  7. 01:03:547 (63547|2) - knp gk di 4? ok.
  8. 01:15:761 (75761|2,75975|2) - ?? ada suara piano kok '-'

[HD]
  1. 00:05:904 (5904|3,6332|3,6761|3,7189|3) - hmmm.-.
    yhaaaa ahahaha~ fixed. :p
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Since Valentrixe- didn't online for a months, can't contact him for the mod reply, and no news from him, I decided to remove his Guest Difficulty and post the link of his .osu file on the description.

Removed Valen's MX!
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Leonita wrote:

revive this then i'll post my mod here we go

[EZ]
  1. 00:09:547 - sengaja kaa? // lupaaa
  2. 00:25:832 (25832|2) - kalo ngikut picth sih, hrsnya di 1.-. // ko bisaa? kan pitch nya balik lagi
done here~ sorry lama

https://puu.sh/w1Xz7/aa71325926.rar
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Aste- wrote:

done here~ sorry lama

https://puu.sh/w1Xz7/aa71325926.rar
Updated As' EZ and add a banner!
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Hi! o/ Mod requested from queue

[General]
  • I think you should remove valentrixe in the tags since you removed his gd u wu
    Untick widescreen support unless you have a storyboard


1|2|3|4

[NM]
  • 00:53:475 (53475|1,53689|3,53904|0) - pattern suggestion: http://puu.sh/w2CnS/4eccf0cb1c.png to avoid mijijack at [1] and to allow for a smoother transition to the next LN, since it uses only one hand.


[HD]


[Hitsounds]
And i've scanned the hitsounds that you've used and found out some sounds that were not used. I think you need to remove these in your folder upon uploading to save space (just make sure to double check the sounds listed here because I might be wrong):

  • A3H
    A4H
    A6H
    B6H
    C#6H_Db6H_s
    C#7H_Db7H_s
    C4H_s
    C5H_s
    C8H_s
    cymbalL
    D#8H_Eb8H
    D4H
    E2H_s
    E8H
    F2H_s
    G#3H_Ab3H_s
    G#5H_Ab5H
    G#5H_Ab5H_s


And that's it for my mod. Solid hitsounds btw 8-) Hope my mod helped. Goodluck in ranking this!! sorry my mod got in very late since im busy irl *sobs*
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JztCallMeRon wrote:

Hi! o/ Mod requested from queue

[General]
  • I think you should remove valentrixe in the tags since you removed his gd u wu
    Untick widescreen support unless you have a storyboard


1|2|3|4

[NM]
  • 00:53:475 (53475|1,53689|3,53904|0) - pattern suggestion: http://puu.sh/w2CnS/4eccf0cb1c.png to avoid mijijack at [1] and to allow for a smoother transition to the next LN, since it uses only one hand.


[HD]


[Hitsounds]
And i've scanned the hitsounds that you've used and found out some sounds that were not used. I think you need to remove these in your folder upon uploading to save space (just make sure to double check the sounds listed here because I might be wrong):

  • A3H
    A4H
    A6H
    B6H
    C#6H_Db6H_s
    C#7H_Db7H_s
    C4H_s
    C5H_s
    C8H_s
    cymbalL
    D#8H_Eb8H
    D4H
    E2H_s
    E8H
    F2H_s
    G#3H_Ab3H_s
    G#5H_Ab5H
    G#5H_Ab5H_ssome of it were erased, some of it, i keep it.


And that's it for my mod. Solid hitsounds btw 8-) Hope my mod helped. Goodluck in ranking this!! sorry my mod got in very late since im busy irl *sobs*no prob ;)
all execpt i comment on the mod were accepted. 8-)

Updated NM and HD!
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oh my, I almost forgot I promised to mod this map lol
bit late, sorry about that

[General]
  1. Unused hitsounds, checked in notepad with control F because magic: A2H, A3H, A4H, B6H, C4H, cymbalL, D#8H_Eb8H, D4H, E2H, E8H,F2H, G#3H_Ab3H_s,
    G#5H_Ab5H. Everything else is good.


[Keysounds, all based off the hardest difficulty, with some pattern suggestions]
00:11:368 - Missing note here, A6H. Since they're the same pitch, I would consider jacking them like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8254402
00:15:332 - Same as and same pitch. Might add the note in 4

00:30:761 (30761|1) - I'd move this to a different column instead since the pitches aren't the same. You could try this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8254635

00:40:939 (40939|0) - I think this should have A6H on it since the pitch kind of travels back and forth between the A and a different note.
00:41:154 (41154|3) - ^

00:46:618 - Missing a piano note here, E6H I believe.

00:52:618 - This note is more on the bass side of things, but it's a C4H

00:53:261 (53261|3) - Should be A3H since you have another note to make room for it

00:53:475 (53475|2) - E4H, similar to 00:46:404 - but lower in pitch.

00:54:225 - E3H which should be preceeded by 00:54:118 (54118|0) - G3H I believe.

00:54:975 (54975|2) - F3H for the violin or low stringed sound

00:55:939 - Should be an added note here since there are two G6H notes, followed by 00:56:047 (56047|3) - C6H

00:56:154 - Add a note here with G6H since it's like a mini trill between the two C's

00:56:689 (56689|0) - A5H; I know it'll probably sound a little dissonant due to the whole step difference, but that's what I can hear slightly behind the G6H
00:56:689 (56689|1) - In the same chord, this should be C4H

00:57:547 (57547|3) - C4H

00:58:404 (58404|2) - B3H

00:58:832 (58832|2) - G#H, should sound a bit funky.

01:02:475 (62475|3) - C4H

01:05:904 (65904|1) - A3H

01:09:975 (69975|0) - C4H

01:13:189 - Might add another note here so that you can add the E6H there for the repeated wind sound or whatever, kind of like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8257646

01:14:475 (74475|0) - F5H I believe. There's a chord here but it's kind of hard to tell since all I can clearly pick out is the D. Cause of that though, I assumed the chord would either be D minor or major, and the A didn't really sound nice, and the F# just sounded wrong, so I settled for F. Feel free to correct me though.

01:17:904 - Could probably add a note here to emphasize the sforzando piano, and then add B3H to it

01:26:475 (86475|1) - E4H. You could also use C4H, but that makes the sound minor, and since I can't really tell what the chord is legit, I'd be safe and stick with the E so that the pitch could go either way.

01:27:654 - C5H

01:28:297 - A4H. This section has a kind of repeating structure with one note acting as an anchor
01:28:511 - ^
01:29:368 - ^
01:29:797 - 01:30:011 - 01:30:225 - ^
01:30:439 - 01:30:654 - 01:30:868 - 01:31:082 - 01:31:511 - and so on ^

01:38:154 - C7H

01:39:654 - 01:39:868 - A5H

01:40:404 (100404|3) - D6H
01:40:404 (100404|2) - I'm not entirely sure, but I think this note should be A6H instead. It sounds a little dissonant but that's the only thing I can think of that would complete the chord.


Let's sort out the keysounds first before we get onto the chart itself.
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oh god, Sorry for the very late reply on this modding ;w;
very busy irl and other stuff that this map almost deserted. ;w; i'm very sorry.

Protastic101 wrote:

oh my, I almost forgot I promised to mod this map lol
bit late, sorry about that

[General]
  1. Unused hitsounds, checked in notepad with control F because magic: A2H, A3H, A4H, B6H, C4H, cymbalL, D#8H_Eb8H, D4H, E2H, E8H,F2H, G#3H_Ab3H_s,
    G#5H_Ab5H. Everything else is good. fixed


[Keysounds, all based off the hardest difficulty, with some pattern suggestions]
00:11:368 - Missing note here, A6H. Since they're the same pitch, I would consider jacking them like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8254402 the missing note was an okay, but the pattern i think better on stairs, because minijack on this map sounds like very discomforting
00:15:332 - Same as and same pitch. Might add the note in 4 fixed

00:30:761 (30761|1) - I'd move this to a different column instead since the pitches aren't the same. You could try this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8254635 ookay =w=

00:40:939 (40939|0) - I think this should have A6H on it since the pitch kind of travels back and forth between the A and a different note.
00:41:154 (41154|3) - ^ nice :3

00:46:618 - Missing a piano note here, E6H I believe. added

00:52:618 - This note is more on the bass side of things, but it's a C4H added

00:53:261 (53261|3) - Should be A3H since you have another note to make room for it okay

00:53:475 (53475|2) - E4H, similar to 00:46:404 - but lower in pitch. nice =w=

00:54:225 - E3H which should be preceeded by 00:54:118 (54118|0) - G3H I believe. its kinda weak piano sound on background, so no.

00:54:975 (54975|2) - F3H for the violin or low stringed sound added

00:55:939 - Should be an added note here since there are two G6H notes, followed by 00:56:047 (56047|3) - C6H added

00:56:154 - Add a note here with G6H since it's like a mini trill between the two C's

00:56:689 (56689|0) - A5H; I know it'll probably sound a little dissonant due to the whole step difference, but that's what I can hear slightly behind the G6H sounds good
00:56:689 (56689|1) - In the same chord, this should be C4H added

00:57:547 (57547|3) - C4H added

00:58:404 (58404|2) - B3H added

00:58:832 (58832|2) - G#H, should sound a bit funky. added

01:02:475 (62475|3) - C4H added

01:05:904 (65904|1) - A3H added

01:09:975 (69975|0) - C4H added

01:13:189 - Might add another note here so that you can add the E6H there for the repeated wind sound or whatever, kind of like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8257646 added

01:14:475 (74475|0) - F5H I believe. There's a chord here but it's kind of hard to tell since all I can clearly pick out is the D. Cause of that though, I assumed the chord would either be D minor or major, and the A didn't really sound nice, and the F# just sounded wrong, so I settled for F. Feel free to correct me though. uhh, its a matter of a pitch only, suppose to be F6H if i heard it

01:17:904 - Could probably add a note here to emphasize the sforzando piano, and then add B3H to it added

01:26:475 (86475|1) - E4H. You could also use C4H, but that makes the sound minor, and since I can't really tell what the chord is legit, I'd be safe and stick with the E so that the pitch could go either way. better on minor though, because the next tone will be minor too

01:27:654 - C5H added

01:28:297 - A4H. This section has a kind of repeating structure with one note acting as an anchor
01:28:511 - ^
01:29:368 - ^
01:29:797 - 01:30:011 - 01:30:225 - ^
01:30:439 - 01:30:654 - 01:30:868 - 01:31:082 - 01:31:511 - and so on ^ added

01:38:154 - C7H added

01:39:654 - 01:39:868 - A5H added

01:40:404 (100404|3) - D6H added
01:40:404 (100404|2) - I'm not entirely sure, but I think this note should be A6H instead. It sounds a little dissonant but that's the only thing I can think of that would complete the chord. a little dissonant but, still ok owob


Let's sort out the keysounds first before we get onto the chart itself.
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