1. 00:26:700 (1) - Could space a little more
2. 00:31:367 (5) - Droplets are stupid, curve this slider so that they are more to the right, like upside down L shape
3. 00:34:700 (1,2) - Too close, space more
4. 00:37:367 (1,3) - Song is decreasing strength, sliders should have less distance/angle. Almost vertical maybe, just an idea
5. 00:53:367 (1) - Would make a lot more sense to have this on the other side, but probably fine. Going to mess up some FL plays though
6. 01:23:367 (2,3) - Needs more spacing, compare to the previous walk
7. 02:01:367 (4,5) - Probably too close together
8. 02:05:700 (1) - Missing finish hitsound

1. 00:40:367 (1) - Bananas + slider angle makes this easy to miss if not thought through,
2. 01:40:033 (1) - Couple pixels too close for comfort, since the dash distance decreases

1. 00:21:700 (2,3) - Could look nicer if distance was reduced
2. 00:32:867 (4) - This would look better with more spacing
3. 01:18:867 (5) - NC

1. 00:35:283 (2) - Make these circles + separate a bit, easy to miss the second with that hyperdash.
2. 00:36:367 (5,1) - Pattern is just a bit far to be comfortable/easy dash, move back to where 00:36:200 (4) - is
3. 00:40:700 (2) - Not really an issue, but if you move this circle a little left it makes it far less stressful to catch the first banana
4. 01:01:367 (3) - This was not fixed in Mbomb's mod :thinking:
5. 01:09:700 (1) - Odd flow here because there's no light dash, add one
6. 01:14:700 (1) - ^ same, could just remove hyperdash because you didn't emphasise this sound on other combos sometimes before
7. 01:24:699 (5,1) - Increase spacing, too small after those hypers
8. 01:31:699 (3) - Seems to be a 'one off' pattern, could change it to look more like 01:26:032 (3) - so there's more consistency
9. 01:46:032 (2) - Don't really agree with a 3/4 because there's no sound to map here, but if you're doing the vocal thing then make 01:46:366 (3) - a 3/4 as well. + reduce volume on slider ends

Sinnoh wrote:

Alright, lets get this ranked already

General
You need extra timing points as I pointed out before. The ranked mapset for this song has extra timing points, please copy it.
Remove the tag "mb", it's redundant with "mbomb" Oh I didn't know that

I remapped the cup completely, so I'm gonna skip this one
Cup

1. 00:26:700 (1) - Could space a little more
2. 00:31:367 (5) - Droplets are stupid, curve this slider so that they are more to the right, like upside down L shape
3. 00:34:700 (1,2) - Too close, space more
4. 00:37:367 (1,3) - Song is decreasing strength, sliders should have less distance/angle. Almost vertical maybe, just an idea
5. 00:53:367 (1) - Would make a lot more sense to have this on the other side, but probably fine. Going to mess up some FL plays though
6. 01:23:367 (2,3) - Needs more spacing, compare to the previous walk
7. 02:01:367 (4,5) - Probably too close together
8. 02:05:700 (1) - Missing finish hitsound

Some points here aren't valid anymore since I have remapped it mostly. I will of course address all remaining valid points
Rain

1. 00:35:283 (2) - Make these circles + separate a bit, easy to miss the second with that hyperdash. x
2. 00:36:367 (5,1) - Pattern is just a bit far to be comfortable/easy dash, move back to where 00:36:200 (4) - is x
3. 00:40:700 (2) - Not really an issue, but if you move this circle a little left it makes it far less stressful to catch the first banana x
4. 01:01:367 (3) - This was not fixed in Mbomb's mod :thinking: x
5. 01:09:700 (1) - Odd flow here because there's no light dash, add one Good catch, fixed
6. 01:14:700 (1) - ^ same, could just remove hyperdash because you didn't emphasise this sound on other combos sometimes before x
7. 01:24:699 (5,1) - Increase spacing, too small after those hypers x
8. 01:31:699 (3) - Seems to be a 'one off' pattern, could change it to look more like 01:26:032 (3) - so there's more consistency x
9. 01:46:032 (2) - Don't really agree with a 3/4 because there's no sound to map here, but if you're doing the vocal thing then make 01:46:366 (3) - a 3/4 as well. + reduce volume on slider ends I feel like this is fine that way o: let's see what others have to say about this. Reduced volume on slider ends tho

General

1. "mb" is missing from tags in Rain

Cup

No real problems with this diff, though I do wanna say:

a) Most of your patterns focus on the centre of the playfield and some sections such as 01:04:033 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,1,2) - repeat in similar sides of the screen for extended periods, so I would try to change up some flow for variety

b) Kiai spacing could be increased in some places, since it doesn't feel that different or emphasised from regular spacing atm. Good examples would be 01:26:366 (2,3) - 01:29:032 (2,3,4) - 01:37:366 (3) - 01:42:699 (3,5) - where the piano sounds are sometimes lower spaced than weaker drum ones surrounding them

Salad

1. 00:44:945 (5,1) - Kinda unexpected dash into antiflow especially with (5) being oddly snapped. I'd curve this to offer a less sharp movement more fitting of the calm section. See 00:50:389 (3,1) - 01:14:366 (3,1) - also for similar
2. 01:19:366 (2,1) - No dash here? Seems quite important for the last piano downbeat before the kiai
3. 01:52:699 (3) - Would follow better to map this on the drum sound at 01:52:866 - instead

Platter

1. 00:30:367 (1,2) - Psure NC should be on this (2) for the downbeat. Whilst you're here, 00:30:367 (1,2,3) - is quite repetitive, you could make drum sound sliders more horizontal or something similar for variety between the different sounds
2. 00:54:722 (1,2,3) - See Rain

Rain

1. 00:54:722 (1,2,3) - Piano sounds are louder here, these should probably be more spaced than 00:53:389 (1,2,3) -
2. 01:41:366 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Awfully repetitive, could definitely do with a flow change here, maybe flip 01:42:366 (4) - to face left and Ctrl+H 01:42:699 (1,2,3,4) - to the right for some antiflow

Sinnoh wrote:

Alright, lets get this ranked already

JBHyperion wrote:

Yes this is revived I can mod it now

General

1. "mb" is missing from tags in Rain | Fixed

Cup

No real problems with this diff, though I do wanna say:

a) Most of your patterns focus on the centre of the playfield and some sections such as 01:04:033 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,1,2) - repeat in similar sides of the screen for extended periods, so I would try to change up some flow for variety | Added some variety

b) Kiai spacing could be increased in some places, since it doesn't feel that different or emphasised from regular spacing atm. Good examples would be 01:26:366 (2,3) - 01:29:032 (2,3,4) - 01:37:366 (3) - 01:42:699 (3,5) - where the piano sounds are sometimes lower spaced than weaker drum ones surrounding them | Applied this one to the whole kiai

Platter

1. 00:30:367 (1,2) - Psure NC should be on this (2) for the downbeat. Whilst you're here, 00:30:367 (1,2,3) - is quite repetitive, you could make drum sound sliders more horizontal or something similar for variety between the different sounds
2. 00:54:722 (1,2,3) - See Rain

Rain

1. 00:54:722 (1,2,3) - Piano sounds are louder here, these should probably be more spaced than 00:53:389 (1,2,3) - | Right!
2. 01:41:366 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Awfully repetitive, could definitely do with a flow change here, maybe flip 01:42:366 (4) - to face left and Ctrl+H 01:42:699 (1,2,3,4) - to the right for some antiflow | Completely changed the pattern, should be more interesting now

Not much, but hope this helps regardless - good luck! (:

Sinnoh wrote:

Alright, lets get this ranked already

Sinnoh wrote:

Alright, lets get this ranked already
Salad

1. 00:40:367 (1) - Bananas + slider angle makes this easy to miss if not thought through - I think it's fine, since all bananas at the end are on the left side, which is where the slider is.
2. 01:40:033 (1) - Couple pixels too close for comfort, since the dash distance decreases - Increased a little.

JBHyperion wrote:

Yes this is revived I can mod it now

Salad

1. 00:44:945 (5,1) - Kinda unexpected dash into antiflow especially with (5) being oddly snapped. I'd curve this to offer a less sharp movement more fitting of the calm section. See 00:50:389 (3,1) - 01:14:366 (3,1) - also for similar - Slanted first two, however, left the third as this section is a little more intense.
2. 01:19:366 (2,1) - No dash here? Seems quite important for the last piano downbeat before the kiai - Don't really feel it has the strength or pitch to support it.
3. 01:52:699 (3) - Would follow better to map this on the drum sound at 01:52:866 - instead - Generally the 1/2s are mapped on places with a quieter 1/2 piano or in places where piano isn't really standing out.

Thanks for the mods!

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296,192,95032,1,8,0:0:0:0:
136,192,95366,2,0,P|48:128|64:96,1,140,2|8,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,192,96032,6,0,L|472:192,2,140,2|10|2,1:2|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,192,96866,2,0,L|328:192,1,70,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,192,97366,6,0,L|320:192,1,140,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
40,192,98032,1,2,1:2:0:0:
200,192,98366,2,0,L|272:192,1,70,8|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
176,192,98699,5,2,1:2:0:0:
328,192,99032,2,0,L|400:192,1,70,8|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
240,192,99532,2,0,L|168:192,1,70,0|10,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,192,100032,6,0,L|424:192,2,70,2|0|8,0:0|1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,192,100699,1,0,1:0:0:0:
328,192,101032,1,8,0:0:0:0:
48,192,101366,6,0,P|96:136|176:128,1,140,6|8,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,192,102032,2,0,L|232:192,2,70,2|0|8,0:0|1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,192,102699,6,0,L|296:192,1,140,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,192,103366,2,0,L|48:192,2,70,2|0|10,1:2|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,192,104032,6,0,P|472:160|432:120,1,140,6|8,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,192,104532,1,0,1:0:0:0:
192,192,104866,2,0,L|272:192,1,70,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,192,105366,6,0,L|32:192,2,70,2|0|8,0:0|1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,106032,1,2,1:2:0:0:
88,192,106366,1,8,0:0:0:0:
384,192,106699,5,4,0:0:0:0:
192,192,108366,5,0,1:0:0:0:
344,192,108699,1,2,1:2:0:0:
416,192,108866,1,0,1:0:0:0:
416,192,109032,1,2,1:2:0:0:
344,192,109199,1,0,1:0:0:0:
168,192,109366,5,6,1:2:0:0:
296,192,109699,1,10,0:0:0:0:
144,192,110032,2,0,L|232:192,2,70,2|0|10,0:0|1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,192,110699,6,0,L|392:192,2,70,2|0|0,0:0|1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
472,192,111366,2,0,L|312:192,1,140,2|8,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,192,112032,5,2,1:2:0:0:
208,192,112366,2,0,L|280:192,1,70,10|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
184,192,112699,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,192,113032,1,10,0:0:0:0:
192,192,113366,6,0,L|336:192,1,140,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
488,192,114032,2,0,L|336:192,1,140,2|10,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,192,114699,6,0,L|8:192,2,70,2|0|10,1:2|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,192,115532,2,0,L|216:192,1,70,0|10,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,192,116032,6,0,L|480:192,1,70,2|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
376,192,116366,1,8,0:0:0:0:
232,192,116699,2,0,L|376:192,1,140,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,192,117366,6,0,L|8:192,1,70,2|0,1:2|1:0,0:0:0:0:
104,192,117699,2,0,L|248:192,1,140,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,192,118199,1,0,1:0:0:0:
80,192,118366,1,8,0:0:0:0:
244,192,118699,6,0,L|324:192,1,70,2|0,1:2|1:0,0:0:0:0:
216,192,119032,1,10,0:0:0:0:
496,192,119366,1,2,1:2:0:0:
376,192,119699,2,0,L|456:192,1,70,8|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
352,192,120032,5,2,1:2:0:0:
192,192,120366,1,8,0:0:0:0:
400,192,120866,2,0,L|328:192,1,70,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,192,121366,6,0,L|104:192,2,70,2|0|8,0:0|1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,192,122032,1,0,1:0:0:0:
168,192,122366,1,8,0:0:0:0:
440,192,122699,6,0,P|485:139|424:120,1,140,6|0,1:2|1:0,0:0:0:0:
280,192,123366,2,0,L|432:192,1,140,2|0,1:2|1:0,0:0:0:0:
144,192,124032,2,0,P|98:139|160:120,1,140,2|0,1:2|1:0,0:0:0:0:
304,192,124699,2,0,L|152:192,1,140,2|0,1:2|1:0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,125366,5,4,1:2:0:0:
256,192,125699,12,4,128032,0:0:0:0:

Not much, but hope this helps regardless - good luck! (:

Sinnoh wrote:

Alright, lets get this ranked already

Sorcerer wrote:

ModdingV1 retro style

[ General]

1. Background: Higher res, same filesize | Oh yeah the BG size limit is gone now
2. Unused Hitsounds: Modding assistant tells me drum-hitnormal2.wav is unused | Removed
   
3. Hitsound Issues: There's a potential delay on drum-hitnormal.wav. Fear not for I shall forward these concerns to my colleague JBHyperion who is infinitely more knowledgeable in this area

[ Cup]

1. 00:18:700 - Any reason for not having a spinner here like in the other diffs? There would still be a comfortable 1/1 gap between the spinner end and next note | Wow apparently I never noticed that
   
2. 00:28:700 (4) - This spawns some visible droplets that can overlap with the fruits a bit. It's not all that noticeable with the default skin which you would expect most Cup players to be using however it's a quick easy fix by just swapping this repeater for individual notes | Quick and easy

[ Platter]

1. Any reason for AR8.2 in place of 8 here? The song isn't denser than average and all the other difficulties have very traditional AR values (6, 7 and 9) | I can't remember why I put it to 8.2 tbh. It's 8 now
   
2. In the Kiais and the section just before there are a few NCs that get fairly large, around 14 objects such as 01:38:699 (1) - and 01:41:366 (1) - . I'd recommend looking through for these large combos and splitting them on/near the downbeat | All fixed
   
3. 00:54:722 (1,2,3) - There's no extra spacing emphasis for 00:55:389 (3) - like in other difficulties, it just has the same distance as 00:54:722 (1,2) - . Try moving 00:55:389 (3) - to about x:328 for a nice dash movement | Repositioned
   
4. 01:19:699 (7,1) - This movement is a bit strong to follow on after a hyperdash in a Platter. | I hope reducing the distance was enough
   
5. 01:46:699 (6,1) - There's about a 5 beat gap between these notes and they're at opposite sides of the screen. Would be nice to bring 01:48:366 (1) - closer to the centre so players are less likely to be caught out by it | Centered

[ In the Sky]

1. 00:25:033 (5,1) - Sure about this antiflow hyper in the intro? Feels a bit strong for a fairly simple section of the song | It feels fitting for me, so I'd like to keep it

Call me back when you've applied

P i k u wrote:

Thanks a lot!
@Sorcerer what do you think of 01:45:866 (3,4) - this pattern in the Platter? I thought it would be nice to lead into the end of this section with a hyper

Sorcerer wrote:

P i k u wrote:

Thanks a lot!
@Sorcerer what do you think of 01:45:866 (3,4) - this pattern in the Platter? I thought it would be nice to lead into the end of this section with a hyper

I like it, I'd just suggest moving 01:45:699 (2) - to x:272 to make the direction changes around this a little easier to hit

chickenbible wrote:

Just gonna post this real quick but the first spinner here 00:18:700 (1) - is 1/8th too early on all diffs
edit: forgot to mention it also ends 1/8th too early aswell

1. 01:09:366 (3,1) - It's 1/1 so we can be a little lenient but this is almost not walkable, please reduce this to be around .9x or change flow so that it's not antiflow
2. 01:19:366 (6,7,1) - could also use a slight reduction or a change to standard flow
3. 01:22:032 (4,5,1) - this one is really brutal and definitely antiflow, 1.60x antiflow jump needs to be changed
4. 01:53:866 (6,1) - technically antiflow as 1 moves against the flow of the rightwards direction 6 brings it (but not a big deal)
5. 01:57:199 (3,1) - pretty strong, missing hyperdash for sure

1. 00:44:056 - Imo this snapping is a bit weird since the end of slider 1 doesn't really fall on anything in particular and the beginning of slider 2 is pretty meme so I'd change it to be similar to the platter's pattern.

Ascendance wrote:

Yo, popping the bubble here for some glaring antiflow HDashes in the platter as well as some tag inconsistencies

Tags:

Cup: life starts at 200bpm drum and bass dnb piano cats kimi wo nosete laputa castle in the sky piku mbomb magic bomb
MBomb's Salad: life starts at 200bpm drum and bass dnb piano cats kimi wo nosete laputa castle in the sky piku mbomb magic bomb
Platter: life starts at 200bpm drum and bass dnb piano cats kimi wo nosete laputa castle in the sky piku mbomb magic bomb
In the Sky: life starts at 200bpm drum and bass dnb piano cats kimi wo nosete laputa castle in the sky piku mbomb mb magic bomb

I think it's the only one, but "In the sky" has "mb" in the tags, please remove it! | Removed

Platter:

1. 01:09:366 (3,1) - It's 1/1 so we can be a little lenient but this is almost not walkable, please reduce this to be around .9x or change flow so that it's not antiflow | Reduced distance to 1.00x and changed following slidershape
2. 01:19:366 (6,7,1) - could also use a slight reduction or a change to standard flow | Removed HDash
3. 01:22:032 (4,5,1) - this one is really brutal and definitely antiflow, 1.60x antiflow jump needs to be changed | Reduced spacing and following pattern
4. 01:53:866 (6,1) - technically antiflow as 1 moves against the flow of the rightwards direction 6 brings it (but not a big deal) | Changed direction of the sliders
5. 01:57:199 (3,1) - pretty strong, missing hyperdash for sure | Added HDash

In the Sky:

1. 00:44:056 - Imo this snapping is a bit weird since the end of slider 1 doesn't really fall on anything in particular and the beginning of slider 2 is pretty meme so I'd change it to be similar to the platter's pattern. | Changed pattern yee

The previous nominators can move the map forward from here after the fixes are made. Good luck, great map

1. 01:23:366 (2,3) - Would be nice to give (3) a bit more spacing emphasis since it builds right into the kiai, but you're kinda cramped for room here, so I'd consider moving everything from 01:04:033 (1) - to here right slightly to make room
2. 01:25:032 - Any reason you skipped this tick sound? as above I think it would build nicely into the kiai
3. 01:44:532 (2) - Quite a strong piano sound is ignored on the white tick at 01:44:699 - so splitting this into circle and 1/1 slider would fit nicely
4. 01:51:699 (4,5,1) - Equal spacing looks neater here for me personally

1. 01:11:699 (3,1) -01:19:366 (2,1) - Feels like there should be dashes here given you used them at 01:09:033 (3,1) - 01:14:366 (3,1) -
2. I found kiai dashes being the same distance as other dashes a little disappointing, the extra energy in the music had me overshooting a couple times. I think you could gain from increasing dash distances like 01:25:032 (4,1) - 01:27:699 (5,1) - 01:35:366 (4,1) - 01:41:032 (3,1) - 01:43:366 (2,1) - in particular to around 2.2x DS
3. 02:02:366 (3,1) - 02:03:366 (2,3) - 02:04:699 (4,1) - Same as above, the first two of these are actually smaller than almost all other dashes despite building to the climax of the song which makes little sense to me

1. 01:10:699 (4,5,6) - Given that you used most hitsound emphasis on (6), it makes more sense for the jump to be between (5,6) than (4,5)
2. 01:49:699 (2,3) - You're moving in the same direction as the previous jump here but the distance is lower, so this appears walkable, but it's pretty hard to do. Increase this distance to 2.0x so the player knows to dash twice, or reduce it for a more comfortable walk
3. 02:03:032 (2,3,4,1) - Same deal here, this would be easier to read as jumps or not-jumps if they used the same spacing (and given the sounds are the same intensity that seems reasonable to assume)

1. 00:35:867 (1,2,3) - I don't feel a hyper is really appropriate here, there are no strong sounds when in comparison to 00:36:367 (4) - and you didn't use any 1/4 hypers on similar previous patterns such as 00:33:867 (2,3,4) - or 00:34:700 (1,2,3) -. Saving the emphasis for (4) feels better imo
2. 01:14:366 (4,1) - Optional but could add a 1/4 hyper here to emphasize the drum sound you did a few times before this
3. 01:37:032 (4,1) - Easy to overdash given the movement in the kiai prior to this, I'd try to increase this distance a little for better flow

JBHyperion wrote:

It's me again, great to see this is finally going through! Just a few minor suggestions before I return for the hopefully final time, feel free to accept or deny anything:

Cup:

1. 01:23:366 (2,3) - Would be nice to give (3) a bit more spacing emphasis since it builds right into the kiai, but you're kinda cramped for room here, so I'd consider moving everything from 01:04:033 (1) - to here right slightly to make room | Slightly increased spacing
2. 01:25:032 - Any reason you skipped this tick sound? as above I think it would build nicely into the kiai | Agreed
3. 01:44:532 (2) - Quite a strong piano sound is ignored on the white tick at 01:44:699 - so splitting this into circle and 1/1 slider would fit nicely | Oh yes, changed patterns to make everything fit together
4. 01:51:699 (4,5,1) - Equal spacing looks neater here for me personally | Yes I think so too

Platter:

1. 01:10:699 (4,5,6) - Given that you used most hitsound emphasis on (6), it makes more sense for the jump to be between (5,6) than (4,5) | Applied
2. 01:49:699 (2,3) - You're moving in the same direction as the previous jump here but the distance is lower, so this appears walkable, but it's pretty hard to do. Increase this distance to 2.0x so the player knows to dash twice, or reduce it for a more comfortable walk | Much better o:
3. 02:03:032 (2,3,4,1) - Same deal here, this would be easier to read as jumps or not-jumps if they used the same spacing (and given the sounds are the same intensity that seems reasonable to assume) | Applied

Fog is basically land clouds:

1. 00:35:867 (1,2,3) - I don't feel a hyper is really appropriate here, there are no strong sounds when in comparison to 00:36:367 (4) - and you didn't use any 1/4 hypers on similar previous patterns such as 00:33:867 (2,3,4) - or 00:34:700 (1,2,3) -. Saving the emphasis for (4) feels better imo | Yes it really does feel better
2. 01:14:366 (4,1) - Optional but could add a 1/4 hyper here to emphasize the drum sound you did a few times before this | I like it
3. 01:37:032 (4,1) - Easy to overdash given the movement in the kiai prior to this, I'd try to increase this distance a little for better flow | Feels better now imo!

Call me back once you responded and we'll wrap this up! (:

JBHyperion wrote:

It's me again, great to see this is finally going through! Just a few minor suggestions before I return for the hopefully final time, feel free to accept or deny anything:

Salad:

1. 01:11:699 (3,1) -01:19:366 (2,1) - Feels like there should be dashes here given you used them at 01:09:033 (3,1) - 01:14:366 (3,1) - | Added jumps
2. I found kiai dashes being the same distance as other dashes a little disappointing, the extra energy in the music had me overshooting a couple times. I think you could gain from increasing dash distances like 01:25:032 (4,1) - 01:27:699 (5,1) - 01:35:366 (4,1) - 01:41:032 (3,1) - 01:43:366 (2,1) - in particular to around 2.2x DS | Distance increased and slidershapes changed accordingly
3. 02:02:366 (3,1) - 02:03:366 (2,3) - 02:04:699 (4,1) - Same as above, the first two of these are actually smaller than almost all other dashes despite building to the climax of the song which makes little sense to me | Yup, changed it to be more intense

Call me back once you responded and we'll wrap this up! (:

1. First spinner's snap changed to 1/12
2. soft-hitclap's volume reduced (if that's the one you were refering to, JBH)
3. Timing snaps at 00:44:514 (4,5) - fixed

mingmichael wrote:

congrats!
love this mapset so much