Request from in-game.
Hope this gets ranked!
Oui's Kantan
00:03:165 (2) - Remove this. The beginning of this song should be calm. Save 2/1 patterns for later.
00:05:165 (4) - ^
00:06:665 (6,7) - Remove 6, and make 7 k.
00:11:665 (12) - Remove this for rhythmic purpose. It's still calm in this section of the song.
00:15:665 (18) - ^
00:22:665 (29) - I'd remove this because it gives the map a bit of consistency with 00:19:165 (23,24) - .
00:26:665 (34) - Try removing this. It makes the music seem a bit over-dramatized with this in here. Keep in mind the song is supposed to be calm.
00:30:165 (39,40,41) - Using a 1/2 pattern in a slow song could work, but in my opinion I think you should delete 40 and make 41 k so that it's easier for the player.
00:34:165 (46,47,48) - Same reason as above, but either way it's almost fine in here because of the kiai.
00:38:165 (52,53,54) - Don't use this pattern here. Use the pattern that I suggested above.
00:53:665 (77) - Remove this for consistency.
00:57:915 (83,84) - Ehhh, I don't know how to feel about this. It sounds nice, but it just throws me off. That's just me, though.
That's really all there is. It's solid, just move some things around.
00:05:165 (4) - ^
00:06:665 (6,7) - Remove 6, and make 7 k.
00:11:665 (12) - Remove this for rhythmic purpose. It's still calm in this section of the song.
00:15:665 (18) - ^
00:22:665 (29) - I'd remove this because it gives the map a bit of consistency with 00:19:165 (23,24) - .
00:26:665 (34) - Try removing this. It makes the music seem a bit over-dramatized with this in here. Keep in mind the song is supposed to be calm.
00:30:165 (39,40,41) - Using a 1/2 pattern in a slow song could work, but in my opinion I think you should delete 40 and make 41 k so that it's easier for the player.
00:34:165 (46,47,48) - Same reason as above, but either way it's almost fine in here because of the kiai.
00:38:165 (52,53,54) - Don't use this pattern here. Use the pattern that I suggested above.
00:53:665 (77) - Remove this for consistency.
00:57:915 (83,84) - Ehhh, I don't know how to feel about this. It sounds nice, but it just throws me off. That's just me, though.
That's really all there is. It's solid, just move some things around.
Aldwych's Futsuu
00:37:165 (50) - Make this k for musical purposes.
00:45:165 (18) - ^
00:39:915 (2) - Forgot to mention this. ^
00:54:165 (17) - Make this d for the same reason.
00:56:915 (25) - ^
01:06:165 (7) - Make this D.
Really solid Futsuu.
00:45:165 (18) - ^
00:39:915 (2) - Forgot to mention this. ^
00:54:165 (17) - Make this d for the same reason.
00:56:915 (25) - ^
01:06:165 (7) - Make this D.
Really solid Futsuu.
Ayyyyyyyyyyyyri's Muzukashii
suh dude
Don't really see anything wrong here. Only suggestion is to rethink those triplets that go ddk, because even with a slow song, you should only really do monochromatic triples.
Don't really see anything wrong here. Only suggestion is to rethink those triplets that go ddk, because even with a slow song, you should only really do monochromatic triples.
Hope this gets ranked!