Eri Sasaki - Last Diary

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Hi from modreqs

Enjoy my really nit-picky mod

Shogun's Normal
00:11:869 (3,4,5) - space these further apart for emphasis

01:19:323 (3,4,1,2) - I would structure this section like this

Celsius' Hard

01:23:981 (4,1) - Replace the short slider with a single note and move the long slider two ticks back onto the red tick, also maybe make the long slider slower than usual for emphasis

Farewell

00:32:273 (3) - Note doesn't sound right here

00:37:584 (1,2) - move these up and two up and to the right a few grid spaces so the distance between these 00:37:025 (2,1,2,1) are all equal like so

01:12:149 - i would add another note here to make it a stack, again for emphasis



Good luck with ranking :D
Shunao

Smolboi wrote:

Hi from modreqs

Enjoy my really nit-picky mod

Shogun's Normal
00:11:869 (3,4,5) - space these further apart for emphasis Fixed

01:19:323 (3,4,1,2) - I would structure this section like this No thanks, it's sound good already

Good luck with ranking :D
Thanks for modding!

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Artist:Eri Sasaki
ArtistUnicode:佐々木恵梨
Creator:-Latias-
Version:Shogun's Normal
Source:プラスティック・メモリーズ
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Topic Starter
-Latias-

Smolboi wrote:

Hi from modreqs

Farewell

00:32:273 (3) - Note doesn't sound right here since modders said a lot of this note, removed !

00:37:584 (1,2) - move these up and two up and to the right a few grid spaces so the distance between these 00:37:025 (2,1,2,1) are all equal like so hmm, i think spacing here is good, as there is clear indication of a new "section" or part of music

01:12:149 - i would add another note here to make it a stack, again for emphasis it would sound weird if this was the only triple of the map, plus i dont think it fits well here



Good luck with ranking :D
Thanks for the mod ! :D
Venix
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Source: プラスティック・メモリーズ
Artist: 佐々木恵梨
Romanised Artist: Eri Sasaki
Title: Last Diary
Romanised Title:
http://erisasaki.net/post/146285148778/ ... A%E5%A3%B2
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Innovation
Super Late Mod Here

[Farewell]
00:34:230 (1,2,3) - The spacing here should be smaller compared to 00:33:112 (1,2,3) since it has a softer sound than the first set.
00:35:161 (1,2,3,1) - The spacing here is okay, but the part is the piano could have a smaller spacing, since the sound is still soft.
00:35:720 (1,2) - Increase the spacing for emphasis.
00:37:584 (1,2,1) - Spacing should be the same.
00:45:596 (1,2,3,4) - Instead of 5 on a stack, make it 3 on a stack and try to put the last two in as a jump connecting to the jump before the slider.
01:00:316 (1,2) - Flow is broken.
01:00:689 (2,3) - The flow is weird here and this makes it uncomfortable for the player to hit and move through the second slider.
01:03:671 (3,1) - The spacing emphasis is wrong since the sound really doesn't change in intensity.
01:24:261 (1,1) - Maybe you should just make this one whole spinner, since undermapping this could make it easier instead of having to hit the circle.

[Celsius's Hard]
00:02:925 - There's an unmapped sound here, unless this is intentional.
01:31:621 (6) - Maybe NC this. indicating the end of the song. (Just a suggestion.)

[Shogun's Normal]
All good to go (according to an underleveled mapper).

[Lefia's Easy]
01:00:316 (3) - This should be NC'd since this is the start of the kiai.

Okay another done, more to go.
Topic Starter
-Latias-

dark_assassin16 wrote:

Super Late Mod Here

[Farewell]
00:34:230 (1,2,3) - The spacing here should be smaller compared to 00:33:112 (1,2,3) since it has a softer sound than the first set.
00:35:161 (1,2,3,1) - The spacing here is okay, but the part is the piano could have a smaller spacing, since the sound is still soft.
00:35:720 (1,2) - Increase the spacing for emphasis.
00:37:584 (1,2,1) - Spacing should be the same.
00:45:596 (1,2,3,4) - Instead of 5 on a stack, make it 3 on a stack and try to put the last two in as a jump connecting to the jump before the slider. 00:45:596 (1,2,3,4,5) all has the same sound
01:00:316 (1,2) - Flow is broken.
01:00:689 (2,3) - The flow is weird here and this makes it uncomfortable for the player to hit and move through the second slider.
01:03:671 (3,1) - The spacing emphasis is wrong since the sound really doesn't change in intensity. not meant to emphasis, just jumps. if i were to change the shape, it would make it harder to read
01:24:261 (1,1) - Maybe you should just make this one whole spinner, since undermapping this could make it easier instead of having to hit the circle. there a sound at 01:25:472 though
Okay another done, more to go.
no reply = fixed
thanks for the mod ! :D
CelsiusLK

Graffin wrote:

NM from my queue

Celsius's hard
  • 00:01:621 (3) - lower this a bit and put it around the previous 2 :arrow:uh ok
    00:38:702 (2,3) - blanket these :arrow: looks fine tbh for me

nothing wrong, good diff

Smolboi wrote:

Hi from modreqs

Celsius' Hard

01:23:981 (4,1) - Replace the short slider with a single note and move the long slider two ticks back onto the red tick, also maybe make the long slider slower than usual for emphasis :arrow:no i prefer my current rhythm since it express the feel of the vocal and fade in of the instrument on 01:24:354 (1) - better


Good luck with ranking :D

dark_assassin16 wrote:

Super Late Mod Here

[Celsius's Hard]
00:02:925 - There's an unmapped sound here, unless this is intentional. :arrow:this is intentional to fully emphasis the strong piano 00:03:112 (2) - at 100% speed
01:31:621 (6) - Maybe NC this. indicating the end of the song. (Just a suggestion.) :arrow:i don't think it necessary to do that , it's the end of song now so nothing after that imo

Okay another done, more to go.
Thanks :)

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Lasse
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all diffs besides highest don't have custom combo colors set

farewell
for future maps you should really try to utilize more of the playfield. you tend to got back towards the center of the screen all the time so if feels bit "compressed"
(also press ctrl-a and you will see how much of the grid you never used)
00:01:435 (2,3) - you do this quite often, having these sliders that totally break your movement, can work if you want to emphasize something special, but most of the time if doesn't. implies movement like http://i.imgur.com/yT6AdvJ.jpg and also (subjective) doesn't look very nice. when something like http://i.imgur.com/cUfm3xI.jpg would be a possible alternative // similar spots would be 00:07:584 (3) - for example
00:01:994 (4) - this has 2 distinct sounds, where the second stands out quite a bit, so it is noticeably different from 00:01:621 (3) - but you map both the same way. two circles would work really well here I think, just like you did on 00:04:975 (4,5) -
00:03:484 (1,2) - idk why the nc is there? consistency wise and following the hight pitched sounds, having it on 2 would make more sense as that is way stronger/starting new measure // if you change this, also 00:08:329 (5) -
00:05:907 (1) - musically this belongs with the sounds from before and the single note combo seems weird, I'd just not nc this
00:05:534 - you map these sounds all the time, so suddenly skipping it seems really strange
00:09:261 (3) - mapping this as a slider really kills the building up string sounds. could either map 00:08:888 (1,2) - as a slider instead or make all circles and go with some increasing spacing pattern
00:10:192 (5,6) - I don't think the stack works well here cause the second sound is much stronger but you give it no emphasis. 00:10:751 (1,2) - seems alright cause the sounds are pretty similar, though I think with how much they stand out, jumps would work better // 00:24:167 (2,3) - similar here and on a few other spots
00:11:776 (8,1,1) - - not quite sure how others see this,. but I think if you use patterns like this, decreasing stack leniency so they perfectly overlap but 1/2 stay normal helps reading this a bit (stack leniency 5) // 00:17:087 (1,1,2,1) -
00:13:360 (3) - would rather stack this with 2 so 00:13:546 (1) - gets more emphasis, which fits the song better
00:18:577 (2) - having such a strong sound distance snapped in this patterns seems really underemphasized :c also rhythm after it is kinda unfitting. how about trying something like http://i.imgur.com/r7kNVIG.jpg ?
00:27:708 - 00:28:826 - such strong vocals on a repeat? would be great if you managed to make them clickable
00:35:161 (1,2,3) - whistles on these would be great with how much they stand out
00:36:279 (2,3,1) - straight line (no snapping) and even spaving really puts way too low emphasis on 00:36:652 (1) - which transitions into a new part
00:38:143 - more important sounds mapped to reverse, this one is really weird cause the thing you made clickable is also weaker than the reverse
00:45:596 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - interesting idea actually
00:47:273 (4,5) - would ctrlg this rhythm cause emphasis on 00:47:459 - is more important
00:49:882 (1,2) - think normal is a bit too loud on those, try drum? or even soft+whistle cause it seems to be following vocals (you didn't map others that don't have vocal)
00:59:385 (1) - even if it follow vocal, it seems a bit too undermapped for how music builds up here. maybe try something like http://i.imgur.com/I1WG7Jw.jpg ?
well, your chorus is basivally mapped the same sv/spacing/rhythm wise as the 00:36:652 - part (much calmer) which doesn't really make sense. think higher sv and base spacing would fit better. also would make things like01:02:739 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - feels less sudden/more fitting
01:03:671 (3) - why is this even a jump? there's barely any sound on it
01:04:136 - having this not ignored would also be nicer here
01:04:789 (6) - interesting way to make a wave lol I see you need a very specific curve here to get it properly stacked, but why not do something like http://i.imgur.com/XbI9ZtQ.jpg instead then?
01:08:143 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - groups of 3 is a bit weird when the music emphasizes 01:08:143 (1,2) - 01:08:515 - 01:08:888 - 01:09:074 - => http://i.imgur.com/sG2r9ii.jpg would be nicer
01:09:447 - more cases of weird slider ephasis on reverses // 01:18:391 -
01:10:751 (3,1,2) - why this kind of spacing? 3-1 is so tiny then 2 is a huge jump despite string on both being pretty same? something like http://i.imgur.com/DXQ4GFI.jpg ?
01:12:242 (1) - what is that last node doing there? makes the wave really strange when you could just http://i.imgur.com/YmGJxl5.jpg (also stack with weird emphasis again here lol)
01:13:733 (2) - well I guess you just like these waves so whatever lol
01:15:410 - new pattern+combo should be here as that is way more emphasizes in the song than the next not
also 01:15:969 (3,4,5) - is really weird spacing wise. more spacing on 5 seems alright with the music, but such a difference just seems too much

most of these things are just examples and repeat way more often through the whole map
main issues to work on:
- clicking rhythm (like these slider reverses that are stronger than head)
- proper usage of stacks (sometimes you have them on weak sound, sometimes on strong)
- making the patterning of the map actually match what is going on in the music

celsius
00:44:851 (3) - yeah 1/6 works kinda with the vocal, but it's the only one in the whole map and there is some drum on the 1/4 it seems, so I think that would be nicer

shogun
00:24:820 - up until here you tend to alternate 1 measure and 2 measure nc usage which seems a bit weird and then anlso add some single note combos. think consistent 2 measure would be nice
00:42:615 (1,2,3,4,5) - one of the most dense rhythms clicking/holding slider wise in the whole map in such a calm part? would be nice if you could reduce this a bit. maybe http://i.imgur.com/IVUTSfT.jpg ? // 00:54:540 (1,2,3,4,5) - too
00:50:068 (4,5) - could ovelap less to be easier to read

lefia
1/2 sliders don't seem really fitting for how easy this difficulty is overall. it will be played mostly by people with no experience with the game at all :c

gl
Shunao

Lasse wrote:

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shogun
00:24:820 - up until here you tend to alternate 1 measure and 2 measure nc usage which seems a bit weird and then anlso add some single note combos. think consistent 2 measure would be nice Fixed
00:42:615 (1,2,3,4,5) - one of the most dense rhythms clicking/holding slider wise in the whole map in such a calm part? would be nice if you could reduce this a bit. maybe http://i.imgur.com/IVUTSfT.jpg ? // 00:54:540 (1,2,3,4,5) - too Fixed
00:50:068 (4,5) - could ovelap less to be easier to read Fixed

gl
Thanks for mod!~ :D

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Topic Starter
-Latias-

Lasse wrote:

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all diffs besides highest don't have custom combo colors set

farewell
for future maps you should really try to utilize more of the playfield. you tend to got back towards the center of the screen all the time so if feels bit "compressed"
(also press ctrl-a and you will see how much of the grid you never used)
00:01:435 (2,3) - you do this quite often, having these sliders that totally break your movement, can work if you want to emphasize something special, but most of the time if doesn't. implies movement like http://i.imgur.com/yT6AdvJ.jpg and also (subjective) doesn't look very nice. when something like http://i.imgur.com/cUfm3xI.jpg would be a possible alternative // similar spots would be 00:07:584 (3) - for example
00:01:994 (4) - this has 2 distinct sounds, where the second stands out quite a bit, so it is noticeably different from 00:01:621 (3) - but you map both the same way. two circles would work really well here I think, just like you did on 00:04:975 (4,5) -
00:03:484 (1,2) - idk why the nc is there? consistency wise and following the hight pitched sounds, having it on 2 would make more sense as that is way stronger/starting new measure // if you change this, also 00:08:329 (5) -
00:05:907 (1) - musically this belongs with the sounds from before and the single note combo seems weird, I'd just not nc this
00:05:534 - you map these sounds all the time, so suddenly skipping it seems really strange
00:09:261 (3) - mapping this as a slider really kills the building up string sounds. could either map 00:08:888 (1,2) - as a slider instead or make all circles and go with some increasing spacing pattern
00:10:192 (5,6) - I don't think the stack works well here cause the second sound is much stronger but you give it no emphasis. 00:10:751 (1,2) - seems alright cause the sounds are pretty similar, though I think with how much they stand out, jumps would work better // 00:24:167 (2,3) - similar here and on a few other spots
00:11:776 (8,1,1) - - not quite sure how others see this,. but I think if you use patterns like this, decreasing stack leniency so they perfectly overlap but 1/2 stay normal helps reading this a bit (stack leniency 5) // 00:17:087 (1,1,2,1) -
00:13:360 (3) - would rather stack this with 2 so 00:13:546 (1) - gets more emphasis, which fits the song better
00:18:577 (2) - having such a strong sound distance snapped in this patterns seems really underemphasized :c also rhythm after it is kinda unfitting. how about trying something like http://i.imgur.com/r7kNVIG.jpg ?
00:27:708 - 00:28:826 - such strong vocals on a repeat? would be great if you managed to make them clickable
00:35:161 (1,2,3) - whistles on these would be great with how much they stand out
00:36:279 (2,3,1) - straight line (no snapping) and even spaving really puts way too low emphasis on 00:36:652 (1) - which transitions into a new part
00:38:143 - more important sounds mapped to reverse, this one is really weird cause the thing you made clickable is also weaker than the reverse
00:45:596 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - interesting idea actually
00:47:273 (4,5) - would ctrlg this rhythm cause emphasis on 00:47:459 - is more important
00:49:882 (1,2) - think normal is a bit too loud on those, try drum? or even soft+whistle cause it seems to be following vocals (you didn't map others that don't have vocal)
00:59:385 (1) - even if it follow vocal, it seems a bit too undermapped for how music builds up here. maybe try something like http://i.imgur.com/I1WG7Jw.jpg ?
well, your chorus is basivally mapped the same sv/spacing/rhythm wise as the 00:36:652 - part (much calmer) which doesn't really make sense. think higher sv and base spacing would fit better. also would make things like01:02:739 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - feels less sudden/more fitting
01:03:671 (3) - why is this even a jump? there's barely any sound on it
01:04:136 - having this not ignored would also be nicer herei don't see a place where it could be not ignored
01:04:789 (6) - interesting way to make a wave lol I see you need a very specific curve here to get it properly stacked, but why not do something like http://i.imgur.com/XbI9ZtQ.jpg instead then?
01:08:143 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - groups of 3 is a bit weird when the music emphasizes 01:08:143 (1,2) - 01:08:515 - 01:08:888 - 01:09:074 - => http://i.imgur.com/sG2r9ii.jpg would be nicer
01:09:447 - more cases of weird slider ephasis on reverses // 01:18:391 -
01:10:751 (3,1,2) - why this kind of spacing? 3-1 is so tiny then 2 is a huge jump despite string on both being pretty same? something like http://i.imgur.com/DXQ4GFI.jpg ?
01:12:242 (1) - what is that last node doing there? makes the wave really strange when you could just http://i.imgur.com/YmGJxl5.jpg (also stack with weird emphasis again here lol)
01:13:733 (2) - well I guess you just like these waves so whatever lol
01:15:410 - new pattern+combo should be here as that is way more emphasizes in the song than the next not
also 01:15:969 (3,4,5) - is really weird spacing wise. more spacing on 5 seems alright with the music, but such a difference just seems too much

most of these things are just examples and repeat way more often through the whole map
main issues to work on:
- clicking rhythm (like these slider reverses that are stronger than head)
- proper usage of stacks (sometimes you have them on weak sound, sometimes on strong)
- making the patterning of the map actually match what is going on in the music

gl
no reply = fixed
thanks for the big mod ! :D
Lefia

dark_assassin16 wrote:

Super Late Mod Here

[Lefia's Easy]
01:00:316 (3) - This should be NC'd since this is the start of the kiai. fixed

Okay another done, more to go.

Lasse wrote:

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lefia
1/2 sliders don't seem really fitting for how easy this difficulty is overall. it will be played mostly by people with no experience with the game at all :c will try to reduce it
Thanks for the mod~

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CelsiusLK

Lasse wrote:

celsius
00:44:851 (3) - yeah 1/6 works kinda with the vocal, but it's the only one in the whole map and there is some drum on the 1/4 it seems, so I think that would be nicer :arrow:yea

gl
thanks :)

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104,252,52863,1,0,1:0:0:0:
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392,92,55844,1,0,1:0:0:0:
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68,152,76062,1,0,1:0:0:0:
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220,176,76528,1,0,1:0:0:0:
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260,312,77273,1,0,1:0:0:0:
348,336,77459,2,0,P|385:335|436:328,1,77,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
496,272,77832,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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244,256,79509,1,0,1:0:0:0:
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264,88,80813,2,0,L|255:164,1,77,4|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
336,208,81186,1,0,1:0:0:0:
336,208,81279,1,0,1:0:0:0:
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Hishiro Chizuru
Saw on #modreq

First time modding (literally first mod) so you can take my word with a grain of salt.

00:01:621 (3,4) - could use better flow
00:09:261 (2,3) - this space difference seems more appropriate here: 00:09:447 (3,4) - as the music shifts there
00:15:037 (5) - Just an aesthetics thing, the slider could be rotated clockwise a bit to look better flowing from 00:14:664 (4) -
00:59:944 (3,1) - similar distance jumps at different speed feels weird, maybe place 01:00:316 (1) - much closer or on top of 00:59:944 (3) - (but then you'll have to change the succeeding patterns as well)
00:39:261 (2,1) - Feels unexpected, as there is a longer wait but follows the same pattern as it was before
00:51:931 (3,4) - blanket looks off (this actually happens in many places, however I could be losing it)
01:16:714 (1) - moving this on top of 01:16:341 (5) - makes it much easier to read (for me)


Really nice maps and song, I couldn't really find problems in the other difficulties (I suck at low stars). Good luck on getting this ranked!
Topic Starter
-Latias-

[ amb1d3x ] wrote:

Saw on #modreq

First time modding (literally first mod) so you can take my word with a grain of salt. its okie, we all have to start from somewhere

00:01:621 (3,4) - could use better flow the flow diffrence is to differentiaite 00:01:994 (4,5) from 00:01:621 (3) . since it has some new music
00:09:261 (2,3) - this space difference seems more appropriate here: 00:09:447 (3,4) - as the music shifts there 00:09:261 (2,3) is starting up in to a faster part of song
00:15:037 (5) - Just an aesthetics thing, the slider could be rotated clockwise a bit to look better flowing from 00:14:664 (4) - changed a bit
00:59:944 (3,1) - similar distance jumps at different speed feels weird, maybe place 01:00:316 (1) - much closer or on top of 00:59:944 (3) - (but then you'll have to change the succeeding patterns as well) 00:59:385 (1,2,3) the jumps here are to represent starting in to kiai time, and the distance from 01:00:316 (1) seems fine
00:39:261 (2,1) - Feels unexpected, as there is a longer wait but follows the same pattern as it was before distance represents 'new' part of music
00:51:931 (3,4) - blanket looks off (this actually happens in many places, however I could be losing it) not suppose to blanket here, as i'm just connecting the slider to the next part of the song
01:16:714 (1) - moving this on top of 01:16:341 (5) - makes it much easier to read (for me)way to big of a jump


Really nice maps and song, I couldn't really find problems in the other difficulties (I suck at low stars). Good luck on getting this ranked!
thanks ! :D
Sotarks
hi

farewell
your comboing is really weird in this diff dude.. i have no clue of your reasoning here.
00:01:621 (3,4) - you don't think that the spacing here is way too far for such a low beat, compared to 00:02:366 (1,2) - that you use the proper spacing.
00:03:484 (5) - consider a ctrl+g to make the transition easier
00:06:279 (8) - x:336 y:34 to make better emphasis to this high piano beat
00:14:292 (3) - pls stop using ds for such high volume sound, try and space it a bit
00:14:664 (4,5) - u don't want to map the missing beat between those 2 ? you can just add circle on top of 00:15:037 (5) -
00:17:087 (1,1) - remove ncs
00:18:950 (3,4,5) - sharp angle with large spacing for no reason dude
00:19:509 (1) - and now short spacing for the downbeat..
00:20:254 (3) - same as above space this further
00:23:049 (1,1) - rremove ncs
00:27:335 (5) - stack
00:37:584 (1,1) - remove ncs
k i'll stop the nc comboing 'cause it's so weird in the whole map...
00:42:428 (1) - finish on slider reverse gives no emphasis ...
00:45:596 (1,2,3,4,5) - what are you even trying to follow here, and gameplay wise it doesn't play well that stack..
01:04:789 (6) - hey hey that shape can be polished pls, use only 2 enchors
01:14:292 (3) - missing hitsounds
01:16:714 (1) - stack?
01:31:621 (3) - more spacing?
really messy diff imo...

gl
Topic Starter
-Latias-

Sotarks wrote:

hi

farewell
your comboing is really weird in this diff dude.. i have no clue of your reasoning here.i suck at nc's :(
00:01:621 (3,4) - you don't think that the spacing here is way too far for such a low beat, compared to 00:02:366 (1,2) - that you use the proper spacing.
00:03:484 (5) - consider a ctrl+g to make the transition easier
00:06:279 (8) - x:336 y:34 to make better emphasis to this high piano beat
00:14:292 (3) - pls stop using ds for such high volume sound, try and space it a bit
00:14:664 (4,5) - u don't want to map the missing beat between those 2 ? you can just add circle on top of 00:15:037 (5) -
00:17:087 (1,1) - remove ncs
00:18:950 (3,4,5) - sharp angle with large spacing for no reason dude00:18:950 (3,4) , i always map this part of the music like this, so i see no reason to not map that here. ill decrease spacing for 5 and 4, which also awnsers the mod below
00:19:509 (1) - and now short spacing for the downbeat..
00:20:254 (3) - same as above space this further
00:23:049 (1,1) - rremove ncs
00:27:335 (5) - stack
00:37:584 (1,1) - remove ncs
k i'll stop the nc comboing 'cause it's so weird in the whole map...
00:42:428 (1) - finish on slider reverse gives no emphasis ...
00:45:596 (1,2,3,4,5) - what are you even trying to follow here, and gameplay wise it doesn't play well that stack..the entire part of the music there is the same thing, so thats why its stacked like that
01:04:789 (6) - hey hey that shape can be polished pls, use only 2 enchors
01:14:292 (3) - missing hitsounds
01:16:714 (1) - stack?
01:31:621 (3) - more spacing?i think spacing is fine here since its the really quite end part of the song
really messy diff imo... im sorry

gl
thanks for the mod ! :D
Xinely
m4m

Easy :
- combo color?
- AR 3 is best for easy diff
- 00:03:857 (1) - move to 164,224 for at least make a symmetrical with 00:02:366 (2) - ? if u agree then fix spacing for rest
- 00:18:577 - finish
- 00:16:341 - whistle for piano
- 00:21:000 (4) - i think a circular flow will work better for smoother flow here try move to 428,176?
- 00:43:546 (2) - drum sampleset because there is drum sound
- 00:55:472 (2) - i prefer to remove this, its kinda weird to map here when the vocal is weak
- 00:59:757 (2) - i know you follow music but in easy diff you dont have to follow anything so i think you better remove this for give a little break for newbie
- 01:02:180 (3,1) - also the score from (3)'s tail doesnt cover for (1)'s tail but i still not recommended stack them in short time like this
- 01:08:143 (3,4) - having 3/2 gap for them might make newbie confuse especially (4) is circle (when they have to click it) so try this instead http://puu.sh/tKQbz/3305637564.jpg
- 01:26:776 (1) - easy diff needs 1 full measure for recovery after spinner so you have to remove this
- 01:27:894 - whistle for strong piano and guitar snare
- 01:30:689 (4,5) - 1/2 gap isnt allowed

Normal :
- combo color?
- 00:02:180 - has strong sound so why not map it? using 1/2 slider starts from 00:01:994 -
- 00:04:975 (3) - move to 256,40. circular flow feels better
- 00:08:888 (2,3) - try follow 1 music only like u follow drum with 00:08:888 - 1/1 slider 00:09:447 - ? since i think drum is higher sound here and more clear to hear
- 00:10:379 - whistle for piano
- 00:12:615 (5) - finish / whistle for strong sound
- 00:15:782 (6,1) - swap nc
- 00:18:577 (3) - same with 00:12:615 (5) -
- 00:21:745 (6,1) - same as 00:15:782 (6,1) -
- 00:27:335 (6) - 00:28:826 (3) - 00:33:671 - any reason why finish here?
- 00:46:900 - finish for cymbal
- well the diff from rhythms and design is ok but the hitsound needs more work on it. you have to hitsound the drum as well because you follow it like 01:03:857 - 01:05:348 - etc

Hard :
- 00:02:180 (4) - whistle?
- 00:03:484 - ^
- 00:18:577 (1) - just curious why no jump in this cymbal when you do all jumps when they have cymbal
- 00:59:757 (1) - personally i think this slider is too fast because it changes 2x faster. try reduce a bit the sv change like use 1,0x?
- 01:02:366 (2) - personally i think the flow can be better here with rotate -15 degree.

Insane :
- 00:01:994 (4,5) - ctrl+g it so you can have a jump for catch 00:02:366 (1) -
- 00:03:484 (5,1) - fix the blanket i guess
- 00:06:466 (5) - rather than a 1/2 slider imo you can add 4 circles of 1/4 start from 00:06:466 - for stream instead
- 00:09:447 (2) - 243,132 instead for make jump in strong music 00:09:633 -
- 00:15:037 (5) - why spacing 1,09x here?
- 00:17:087 (1,2) - is stacked then 00:17:832 (1,1) - stack them as well for consistency?
- 00:18:950 (3,4,5,1) - try use consistent spacing :C
- 00:21:559 (2) - same as above, move to 336,48
- 00:35:161 (1) - how about move to 496,112 for make same pattern with 00:35:534 (3,1) -
- 00:38:143 (7,1) - swap nc for consistency
- 00:41:310 (6) - nc for consistency
- 00:48:205 (2) - how about ctrl+g for make jump in next slider? emphasis the cymbal
- 01:06:093 (3) - same as above
- 00:57:335 (5) - nc for consistency
- 01:06:466 (4,1) - swap nc for consistency
- 01:11:497 (1) - remove nc for consistency
- 01:16:528 - its weird to skip this drum pls keep map
- 01:17:087 (2) - same as 00:48:205 (2) -
- 01:22:304 (5) - nc for consistency
- 01:27:149 (2) - move to 288,224 for smoother flow
- 01:31:435 (2) - nazi move to 336,176 for better triangle shape

the map is still can improve more more and more. dont give up ><

good luck~
Topic Starter
-Latias-

Xinely wrote:

m4m
Insane :
- 00:01:994 (4,5) - ctrl+g it so you can have a jump for catch 00:02:366 (1) -
- 00:03:484 (5,1) - fix the blanket i guess
- 00:06:466 (5) - rather than a 1/2 slider imo you can add 4 circles of 1/4 start from 00:06:466 - for stream instead
- 00:09:447 (2) - 243,132 instead for make jump in strong music 00:09:633 -
- 00:15:037 (5) - why spacing 1,09x here?
- 00:17:087 (1,2) - is stacked then 00:17:832 (1,1) - stack them as well for consistency?i dont want to stack since 00:18:205 (1) starts a new part of music, so thats why its not stack
- 00:18:950 (3,4,5,1) - try use consistent spacing :C
- 00:21:559 (2) - same as above, move to 336,48
- 00:35:161 (1) - how about move to 496,112 for make same pattern with 00:35:534 (3,1) -
- 00:38:143 (7,1) - swap nc for consistency
- 00:41:310 (6) - nc for consistency
- 00:48:205 (2) - how about ctrl+g for make jump in next slider? emphasis the cymbal
- 01:06:093 (3) - same as above
- 00:57:335 (5) - nc for consistency
- 01:06:466 (4,1) - swap nc for consistency
- 01:11:497 (1) - remove nc for consistency
- 01:16:528 - its weird to skip this drum pls keep map
- 01:17:087 (2) - same as 00:48:205 (2) -
- 01:22:304 (5) - nc for consistency
- 01:27:149 (2) - move to 288,224 for smoother flow
- 01:31:435 (2) - nazi move to 336,176 for better triangle shape

the map is still can improve more more and more. dont give up ><

good luck~
no reply=fixed
thanks for the mod !:D
Shunao

Xinely wrote:

m4m

Normal :
- combo color?
- 00:02:180 - has strong sound so why not map it? using 1/2 slider starts from 00:01:994 -
- 00:04:975 (3) - move to 256,40. circular flow feels better
- 00:08:888 (2,3) - try follow 1 music only like u follow drum with 00:08:888 - 1/1 slider 00:09:447 - ? since i think drum is higher sound here and more clear to hear
- 00:10:379 - whistle for piano
- 00:12:615 (5) - finish / whistle for strong sound
- 00:15:782 (6,1) - swap nc
- 00:18:577 (3) - same with 00:12:615 (5) -
- 00:21:745 (6,1) - same as 00:15:782 (6,1) -
- 00:27:335 (6) - 00:28:826 (3) - 00:33:671 - any reason why finish here?
- 00:46:900 - finish for cymbal
- well the diff from rhythms and design is ok but the hitsound needs more work on it. you have to hitsound the drum as well because you follow it like 01:03:857 - 01:05:348 - etc

good luck~
All fixed! Thanks for modding~ :D

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CelsiusLK

Xinely wrote:

m4m

Hard :
- 00:02:180 (4) - whistle? :arrow:yea
- 00:03:484 - ^ :arrow:same
- 00:18:577 (1) - just curious why no jump in this cymbal when you do all jumps when they have cymbal :arrow:fixed
- 00:59:757 (1) - personally i think this slider is too fast because it changes 2x faster. try reduce a bit the sv change like use 1,0x? :arrow:mmm ok i decreased a bit
- 01:02:366 (2) - personally i think the flow can be better here with rotate -15 degree. :arrow:i agree

good luck~
all fixed

thanks xinely

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