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Lon - Yuru Fuwa Jukai Girl

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tmg0345
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tmg0345
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2022年8月24日 at 21:39:27

Artist: Lon
Title: Yuru Fuwa Jukai Girl
Tags: -_Angelia kanor
BPM: 216
Filesize: 5738kb
Play Time: 03:04
Difficulties Available:
  1. Extra (6.73 stars, 758 notes)
  2. FuwaFuwa (7.22 stars, 805 notes)
  3. Insane (5.14 stars, 711 notes)
  4. kanor's Normal (1.99 stars, 244 notes)
  5. Rainy's Hard (3.81 stars, 469 notes)
  6. YuruYuru (8.23 stars, 803 notes)
Download: Lon - Yuru Fuwa Jukai Girl
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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万年炒冷饭

I really really really want to rank/loved this map :(

kanor's Normal by kanor
Rainy's Hard by - Angelia
Insane by me
Extra by me
FuwaFuwa by me
YuruYuru by me

Redownload please if you got it before 2020-3-2!!!
Hope you can enjoy it :>

Last edited by tmg0345 , edited 84 times in total.
kanor
925 posts
Joined August 2013
kanor
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osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 45490
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 8
TimelineZoom: 2

[Metadata]
Title:Yuru Fuwa Jukai Girl
TitleUnicode:ゆるふわ樹海ガール
Artist:Lon
ArtistUnicode:ろん
Creator:tmg0345
Version:Easy
Source:
Tags:
BeatmapID:1087227
BeatmapSetID:500408

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:2
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:2
ApproachRate:4
SliderMultiplier:0.899999999999999
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"48901133_p0.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
2,116940,124309
2,132495,137642
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
10074,277.777777777778,4,1,1,30,1,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 200,255,0
Combo2 : 0,200,100
Combo3 : 0,200,200
Combo4 : 200,100,100

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ItashaS13
678 posts
Joined January 2014
ItashaS13
Hi from my q sorry for wait

  • FuwaFuwa

    00:11:185 (1,2,3) - move this to the left like 460/365 it looks better imo
    00:14:101 (4) - why not a triplet here :<? a triplet here would be funnier to play rather than a reverse :/
    00:15:212 (4,5,6) - spacing here isnt too much considering the rest of the map?
    00:17:574 (4) - make this into 2 circles? :p the sound of here 00:17:712 - should be clickable. so.. something like http://prntscr.com/crc4sm
    00:27:296 (3,4) - spacing here isnt too much?
    00:30:351 (2,3) - spacing here and 00:30:490 (3,4) - should be.. more!! http://prntscr.com/crc6d8
    00:31:740 (1,2) - spacing here isnt too much?
    00:32:435 (2,1) - stack
    00:36:740 (1) - this slider should end at 00:37:157 - no? if following vocals, why not make something like http://prntscr.com/crc7hr 00:36:740 -
    00:41:185 (1) - is this on porpuse?
    00:45:074 (1,1) - spacing here is too much-
    01:03:962 (3,4,5) - this triplet should be at 01:04:518 (1) - actually there's no sound for a triplet at 01:03:962 (3,4,5) - but at 01:04:518 (1) - there is
    01:07:296 (4) - this reverse (well, I'd recommend to use more triplets :T) but this reverse should start at 01:07:435 - and end at 01:07:574 -
    01:16:671 (4,1) - spacing here should be equal to 01:16:393 (2,3) - or oposite since you used this here 01:20:837 (2,3) -
    01:21:185 (1,2) - both shapes should be equal, like http://prntscr.com/crcf2d
    01:25:282 (2,3) - spacing isnt too much? also move the slider a bit up- equal to the previous one
    01:30:074 (1) - ok this is on porpuse I see, don't change xd
    01:35:629 (1,2) - these two should be stacked :<
    01:39:518 (3,4) - rotate these two to smth like http://prntscr.com/crceh5
    02:04:796 (2,3) - you know what I will say here
    02:06:740 (1) - this blanket isnt perfect with the other slider xd
    02:27:851 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - more spacing here pls
    why not add stacked circles on 02:29:240 - 02:29:518 - 02:29:796 - :p?
    02:30:351 (2,3) - morre spacing!
    02:38:546 (6) - why not make this a kickslider to fill up the sound of the song ? something like http://prntscr.com/crccsv (also move the 1 to stack its end :p)
    02:57:018 - this sould be clickable - strong beat
    02:54:101 - the triplet should be here instead of 02:53:685 (3,4,5) - (like in the other part i pointed it)

GLGLGL
tmg0345
20 posts
Joined August 2012
Topic Starter
tmg0345

Itasha_S13 wrote:

Hi from my q sorry for wait

  • FuwaFuwa

    00:11:185 (1,2,3) - move this to the left like 460/365 it looks better imo
    00:14:101 (4) - why not a triplet here :<? a triplet here would be funnier to play rather than a reverse :/
    00:15:212 (4,5,6) - spacing here isnt too much considering the rest of the map?
    00:17:574 (4) - make this into 2 circles? :p the sound of here 00:17:712 - should be clickable. so.. something like http://prntscr.com/crc4sm
    00:27:296 (3,4) - spacing here isnt too much?
    00:30:351 (2,3) - spacing here and 00:30:490 (3,4) - should be.. more!! http://prntscr.com/crc6d8
    00:31:740 (1,2) - spacing here isnt too much?
    00:32:435 (2,1) - stack
    00:36:740 (1) - this slider should end at 00:37:157 - no? if following vocals, why not make something like http://prntscr.com/crc7hr 00:36:740 -
    00:41:185 (1) - is this on porpuse?
    00:45:074 (1,1) - spacing here is too much-
    01:03:962 (3,4,5) - this triplet should be at 01:04:518 (1) - actually there's no sound for a triplet at 01:03:962 (3,4,5) - but at 01:04:518 (1) - there is
    01:07:296 (4) - this reverse (well, I'd recommend to use more triplets :T) but this reverse should start at 01:07:435 - and end at 01:07:574 -
    01:16:671 (4,1) - spacing here should be equal to 01:16:393 (2,3) - or oposite since you used this here 01:20:837 (2,3) -
    01:21:185 (1,2) - both shapes should be equal, like http://prntscr.com/crcf2d
    01:25:282 (2,3) - spacing isnt too much? also move the slider a bit up- equal to the previous one
    01:30:074 (1) - ok this is on porpuse I see, don't change xd
    01:35:629 (1,2) - these two should be stacked :<
    01:39:518 (3,4) - rotate these two to smth like http://prntscr.com/crceh5
    02:04:796 (2,3) - you know what I will say here
    02:06:740 (1) - this blanket isnt perfect with the other slider xd
    02:27:851 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - more spacing here pls
    why not add stacked circles on 02:29:240 - 02:29:518 - 02:29:796 - :p?
    02:30:351 (2,3) - morre spacing!
    02:38:546 (6) - why not make this a kickslider to fill up the sound of the song ? something like http://prntscr.com/crccsv (also move the 1 to stack its end :p)
    02:57:018 - this sould be clickable - strong beat
    02:54:101 - the triplet should be here instead of 02:53:685 (3,4,5) - (like in the other part i pointed it)

GLGLGL
changed most of them,thank you!!! :)
DJMax
112 posts
Joined March 2015
DJMax
难度range相差有点大
建议加个ex
最高难度
00:41:185 (1) - 这个滑条太突然，建议改成3/4拍
00:41:740 (3) - 稍微调整形状
00:51:602 (3) - 可以包好点
01:11:046 (1) - 这个干脆单点，不过现在也不错，可以不改
01:15:629 (1,2,3,4) - 不要挨在一块
01:30:074 (1) - 同第一个
02:06:740 (1,2) - 最好不要挨着
总体很不错，有的地方有点乱，建议稍微调整下
我仿佛又看到一张pp图横空出世
tmg0345
20 posts
Joined August 2012
Topic Starter
tmg0345

Dynamix wrote:

难度range相差有点大硬伤 正在想办法
建议加个ex
最高难度
00:41:185 (1) - 这个滑条太突然，建议改成3/4拍这个我再斟酌
00:41:740 (3) - 稍微调整形状ok
00:51:602 (3) - 可以包好点ok
01:11:046 (1) - 这个干脆单点，不过现在也不错，可以不改
01:15:629 (1,2,3,4) - 不要挨在一块ok
01:30:074 (1) - 同第一个
02:06:740 (1,2) - 最好不要挨着ok
总体很不错，有的地方有点乱，建议稍微调整下
我仿佛又看到一张pp图横空出世
靴靴！ :)
nika mika
397 posts
Joined January 2014
nika mika
咕咕咕
[fuwafuwa]
Flow方面
00:11:462 (4) -ctrl g 00:11:740 (5,9) – 要么两个都改要么都不改
00:14:796 (2) -ctrl h贴回去，3 和456的位置对调
00:30:907 (5,6,7,8,9) -详见https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6311482
00:45:351 (1) -换成两个圈？
01:40:074 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -详见https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6311521
01:42:295 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -note位置不动 先把5给ctrl g了， 顺序再改成51234678
02:01:185 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -详见https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6311543
美观方面
00:12:296 (1) -和2用一样的形状？
00:28:962 (1) -^虽然该不该没什么问题 不过我总觉得前后形状一致会好看点……之后类似的我就不提了
00:23:407 (1) -向下弯？1和2摆在一起有点难看
00:25:074 (7) -用弧形的滑条
00:36:740 (1,1) -推荐都用慢速处理
00:38:962 (1,3) -选一用慢速处理。我觉得前面的变速很好，这里不用有点可惜
00:45:907 (2) -向下弯
00:47:852 (1,2) -形状互换一下或者考虑竖过来 因为前面的67也是差不多样子有点单调
01:01:185 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2) -可以用四方跳两次……或者把蓝色的nc去掉
01:30:074 (1) -在01:30:074 (1) -处的变速不考虑再用一次咩 当然你要是觉得这样更好也可以，反正都比我摆得好
音效节奏方面
00:13:962 (3,4,5,6,7) -全是whistle都糊在一起了
00:34:171 -漏音啦
02:05:629 (1,1,2,1) -02:07:851 (1) -都这么高星级了，干脆下连打啊2333
叠叠叠
00:34:518 (1,2,3,4) -虽然是个好梗……但是叠起来了就有点不爽，而且和前面跳来跳去有冲突，不过我也没什么好办法，纯当我发句牢骚（
01:23:407 (1,2) -会不会叠太过头了？大半个2都看不见了，01:24:240 (5) -也是放开点会好点吧？
01:51:740 (5,6,7) -羡慕你们敢这么叠 能不能放开点啊;w;
这……得有……400pp了……吧？
发抖
其他难度太懒了能不能不摸呀
tmg0345
20 posts
Joined August 2012
Topic Starter
tmg0345

nika mika wrote:

咕咕咕
[fuwafuwa]
Flow方面
00:11:462 (4) -ctrl g 00:11:740 (5,9) – 要么两个都改要么都不改√
00:14:796 (2) -ctrl h贴回去，3 和456的位置对调我觉得现在这样挺好的
00:30:907 (5,6,7,8,9) -详见https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6311482看不懂
00:45:351 (1) -换成两个圈？
01:40:074 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -详见https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6311521
01:42:295 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -note位置不动 先把5给ctrl g了， 顺序再改成51234678
02:01:185 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -详见https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6311543√
美观方面
00:12:296 (1) -和2用一样的形状？ok
00:28:962 (1) -^虽然该不该没什么问题 不过我总觉得前后形状一致会好看点……之后类似的我就不提了其他的慢慢找吧
00:23:407 (1) -向下弯？1和2摆在一起有点难看ok
00:25:074 (7) -用弧形的滑条ok
00:36:740 (1,1) -推荐都用慢速处理
00:38:962 (1,3) -选一用慢速处理。我觉得前面的变速很好，这里不用有点可惜ok
00:45:907 (2) -向下弯 ok
00:47:852 (1,2) -形状互换一下或者考虑竖过来 因为前面的67也是差不多样子有点单调ok
01:01:185 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2) -可以用四方跳两次……或者把蓝色的nc去掉ok
01:30:074 (1) -在01:30:074 (1) -处的变速不考虑再用一次咩 当然你要是觉得这样更好也可以，反正都比我摆得好
音效节奏方面
00:13:962 (3,4,5,6,7) -全是whistle都糊在一起了ok
00:34:171 -漏音啦???
02:05:629 (1,1,2,1) -02:07:851 (1) -都这么高星级了，干脆下连打啊2333
叠叠叠
00:34:518 (1,2,3,4) -虽然是个好梗……但是叠起来了就有点不爽，而且和前面跳来跳去有冲突，不过我也没什么好办法，纯当我发句牢骚（试着改了一下
01:23:407 (1,2) -会不会叠太过头了？大半个2都看不见了，01:24:240 (5) -也是放开点会好点吧？ok
01:51:740 (5,6,7) -羡慕你们敢这么叠 能不能放开点啊;w;
ok
这……得有……400pp了……吧？
发抖
其他难度太懒了能不能不摸呀
nm能摸得这么细我已经很开熏惹 靴靴 :)
shizukanoto
61 posts
Joined November 2014
shizukanoto
NM from my queue

[FuwaFuwa]
  1. the shapes in the first minute look VERY GOOD, much better than the last minute
  2. 02:07:296 (2) - ctrl+g to match 02:05:629 (1,1) pattern
  3. 02:11:323 (2,3) - ctrl+g for better flow
  4. 02:25:629 (1,2) - weird shape, make it flatter like this?
[Insane]
  1. 00:45:074 (5) - spacing error
  2. 00:45:629 (1) - try to make this shape :D
[Rainy's Hard]
  1. 00:32:018 (4) - (376, 332)
  2. 00:34:379 (2) - (144, 132)
  3. 00:35:629 (1,2,1) - stack like this
  4. 00:37:574 (2) - (312, 12) make triangle
  5. the last minute is PERFECT; middle part of song could improve
Crystar
121 posts
Joined February 2014
Crystar
谭mg奶奶牛B

怎么又蹦出个7.4(
tmg0345
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Joined August 2012
Topic Starter
tmg0345

iCeya wrote:

谭mg奶奶牛B

怎么又蹦出个7.4(
才不会告诉你主难度原名叫Jumping吸吸
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