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00:01:020 (1,2) - here you map the instrument over the vocal as you skip over 00:01:395 -
but then at 00:03:020 (3,1,2) - which is ensentially the same 00:03:395 - you start on this vocal and miss out on 00:03:520 -
also nothing is at 00:02:520 (1) -
and at 00:04:395 (3) - how come you end the slider on nothing as opposed to the vocal on 00:04:770 -
i would prioritize the instrument in this section imo but your rhythm choice atm doesnt make much sense to me
00:17:020 (1) - more spacing
00:17:770 (3) - why are you not mapping the stuff that the slider goes over?
00:23:020 (5,6,1) - http://puu.sh/qNEyu/beafb2232b.jpg http://puu.sh/qNEwl/95e48b0196.jpg maybeone of those would be better?
00:25:770 (2,3,4) - just a 1/2 slider
00:32:020 (1,2,3,4) - id just do a stream instead, its only 120bpm so its not going to be that hard
00:35:020 (7) - more spacing, youve shown your map can use more spacing at 00:17:270 (2,3) - and makes a lot of sense here
00:36:520 - start note here
00:37:895 - start note here and 00:38:270 - http://puu.sh/qNEMm/7f78b730a1.jpg so itd look like that instead
00:43:020 - start note here
00:45:020 - ^
00:45:770 (7) - why is this a 1/1 slider when you miss over 00:46:020 - and theres not much of a hold sound
00:53:020 - start note here
01:11:020 - start the second spinner here
01:20:520 - start note here
01:52:020 (3) - emphais somehow that at 3 the stream got a lot louder
02:12:520 (4) - should start a note on each vocal here
02:21:270 (2,3,4) - why is there a triple here? i think you got it mixed up with over 02:21:895 -
03:08:020 - you shouldnt be starting strong sounds on slider ends on that as far as im aware
04:09:520 (4,5,6) - id just do one repeat slider here because going to 1/6 would be to tricky for a 3 star diff imo
04:15:020 -
04:23:020 - downbeats should almost always have a note starting on them
04:43:020 - like places like here tho would be your choice
05:24:020 (3,4) - i think this is 1/6 here
i didnt list everything but a lot of your rhythm choice seems wrong to me please fix that up or explain why im wrong.
but then at 00:03:020 (3,1,2) - which is ensentially the same 00:03:395 - you start on this vocal and miss out on 00:03:520 -
also nothing is at 00:02:520 (1) -
and at 00:04:395 (3) - how come you end the slider on nothing as opposed to the vocal on 00:04:770 -
i would prioritize the instrument in this section imo but your rhythm choice atm doesnt make much sense to me
00:17:020 (1) - more spacing
00:17:770 (3) - why are you not mapping the stuff that the slider goes over?
00:23:020 (5,6,1) - http://puu.sh/qNEyu/beafb2232b.jpg http://puu.sh/qNEwl/95e48b0196.jpg maybeone of those would be better?
00:25:770 (2,3,4) - just a 1/2 slider
00:32:020 (1,2,3,4) - id just do a stream instead, its only 120bpm so its not going to be that hard
00:35:020 (7) - more spacing, youve shown your map can use more spacing at 00:17:270 (2,3) - and makes a lot of sense here
00:36:520 - start note here
00:37:895 - start note here and 00:38:270 - http://puu.sh/qNEMm/7f78b730a1.jpg so itd look like that instead
00:43:020 - start note here
00:45:020 - ^
00:45:770 (7) - why is this a 1/1 slider when you miss over 00:46:020 - and theres not much of a hold sound
00:53:020 - start note here
01:11:020 - start the second spinner here
01:20:520 - start note here
01:52:020 (3) - emphais somehow that at 3 the stream got a lot louder
02:12:520 (4) - should start a note on each vocal here
02:21:270 (2,3,4) - why is there a triple here? i think you got it mixed up with over 02:21:895 -
03:08:020 - you shouldnt be starting strong sounds on slider ends on that as far as im aware
04:09:520 (4,5,6) - id just do one repeat slider here because going to 1/6 would be to tricky for a 3 star diff imo
04:15:020 -
04:23:020 - downbeats should almost always have a note starting on them
04:43:020 - like places like here tho would be your choice
05:24:020 (3,4) - i think this is 1/6 here
i didnt list everything but a lot of your rhythm choice seems wrong to me please fix that up or explain why im wrong.