Hanatan - Sekai wa Koi ni Ochiteiru

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Beomsan
he y
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Cellina

Beomsan wrote:

he y
wh y
Seijiro
#modreqs

02:09:112 (2) - maybe a ctrl + g?
02:33:805 (5,6,7) - I fee like this triplet should be different than 02:33:343 (2,3,4) - , so maybe unstack it?
I'd make 03:09:343 - 03:24:112 - this section with a lower SV in general, since it's really really quiet in comparison to the rest
03:44:420 (1) - (nazi) second curve can be done better, like this
03:45:805 (3) - either add a repeat on it, or reduce spacing between 03:45:343 (2,3) - , since the spacing between 03:45:805 (3,1) - is misleading right now (as a player I'll think it's still a 1/4 snap)
03:52:036 (2,4) - I'd really reduce the jumps on them, since they are really soft and background sounds here, so it's a bit strange to have such big spacing on them
04:30:112 (3) - idk, it feels a bit misleading having it like that, since it looks like a generic 1/4 jump. Try something like this or similar

poke me
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Cellina

MrSergio wrote:

#modreqs

02:09:112 (2) - maybe a ctrl + g?
02:33:805 (5,6,7) - I fee like this triplet should be different than 02:33:343 (2,3,4) - , so maybe unstack it? replaced them as a 1/4 slider
I'd make 03:09:343 - 03:24:112 - this section with a lower SV in general, since it's really really quiet in comparison to the rest well I disagree with it, cuz imo there are enough sounds if it's compared with 02:54:574 - (or even higher), and there are no much difference to use a different sv, so I will leave it.
03:44:420 (1) - (nazi) second curve can be done better, like this
03:45:805 (3) - either add a repeat on it, or reduce spacing between 03:45:343 (2,3) - , since the spacing between 03:45:805 (3,1) - is misleading right now (as a player I'll think it's still a 1/4 snap) added a 1/4
03:52:036 (2,4) - I'd really reduce the jumps on them, since they are really soft and background sounds here, so it's a bit strange to have such big spacing on them not really, i think guitar sounds can make a emphasis for those notes
04:30:112 (3) - idk, it feels a bit misleading having it like that, since it looks like a generic 1/4 jump. Try something like this or similar

poke me
no comment = fixed xD
Seijiro
bul bul #2
Topic Starter
Cellina

IamKwaN wrote:

that english name is unofficial translation, so feel free to ignore

and no, i don't think you need to add ver 花たん there simply because you have artist field for that purpose already

current meta is fine, Electoz also asked me the correct romanisation for 花たん, i have answered him as follows:

IamKwaN wrote:

i think i have searched about this before, here's what i have

She uses various styles for the Hanatan part in her album covers, so we don't have to make things complicated here.
https://image-proxy.namuwikiusercontent ... L1500_.jpg
http://static.zerochan.net/Hanatan.full.1414031.jpg
http://4.bp.blogspot.com/--QIzJRmDuSY/V ... /cover.jpg
Hanatan is good to go
good luck!
Metadata is fine
Electoz
Sry for the late

[General]

  1. Isn't one of the tags is supposed to be "honeyworks" instead of "honeywork"? Correct me if I'm wrong.


[Storyboard]

  1. 01:22:266 -The lyrics(ly-15) here should be "くて" instead of "くって". According to this which is from the official video(Thanks to Kanau).


[Falling in Love]

  1. 00:29:420 (3) - Pretty sure this is 1/6.
  2. 04:37:036 (1) - Remove NC? Since you didn't NC 01:21:343 (2) - 02:40:728 (2) either.
  3. 04:49:959 (1,7) - Swap NC?


Popped the bubble due to a wrong snap slider on 00:29:420 (3) . Call me back for a rebubble after you fixed the snap~
Topic Starter
Cellina
@Electoz all fixed, and I decided to remove storyboard cuz i lost my psd file (...) and it doesn't shows much stuffs
and I guess honeyworks is the right one..
Electoz
To other BNs: Storyboard is now removed.
#1
Rebubbled!
Kibbleru
#2
Seijiro
Can I?
Stjpa
woooooo more Hanatannnnn
Electoz
wait what that was too fast lmao gratz
Topic Starter
Cellina
2 bubbles and 1 heart in 30 min yay
thanks everyone!
GugUCorn
오 랭 되셨군요 축하드립니다!
congratz!
si35
Gratzzz!! :D:D
Reillia
앙기무
Gaia
nice hitsounds XD grats/
Winnie
This mapping is already better than Gaia's congrats 8-)
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