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Ohi~ Please take this all as suggestions. ^_^
Lucifer's Easy
The sliderslide hitsound used in sliders like 00:44:819 (1) and 01:09:647 (1) sounds kinda weird for me D: maybe it's too loud, maybe i'm crazy but well.. it'll be up to you
00:12:750 (x) - hmm.. add a note here? without it sounds a little weird imo >_<
00:21:233 (1) - consider starting it at 00:21:026. the way it is now sounds a little late for me
01:18:336 (1,2,3) - this spacing change may be a little confusing for beginers.. I mean, you used the same spacing for 2 diferent times.. well, idk, it's up to you anyways
Normal
00:07:371 (3) - start it at 00:07:164? it sounds a little late to me D:
00:46:888 (4) - i'm not a big fan of short combos, but i think the rhythm here changes >< consider new combo for this slider
00:58:061 (2) - nyuu this placement is so down D: i'd make it like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/70735
01:31:992 (1) - change this new combo to 01:33:026 (4) ? seems better to me
Insane
Ohwell. I'm really not gonna bitch at your new combos and sliders.. The map is just great as it is. <3
I hope it was useful.. aand if you want a recheck to [Hard] you know what to do. x3
Starr'd
Lucifer's Easy
The sliderslide hitsound used in sliders like 00:44:819 (1) and 01:09:647 (1) sounds kinda weird for me D: maybe it's too loud, maybe i'm crazy but well.. it'll be up to you
00:12:750 (x) - hmm.. add a note here? without it sounds a little weird imo >_<
00:21:233 (1) - consider starting it at 00:21:026. the way it is now sounds a little late for me
01:18:336 (1,2,3) - this spacing change may be a little confusing for beginers.. I mean, you used the same spacing for 2 diferent times.. well, idk, it's up to you anyways
Normal
00:07:371 (3) - start it at 00:07:164? it sounds a little late to me D:
00:46:888 (4) - i'm not a big fan of short combos, but i think the rhythm here changes >< consider new combo for this slider
00:58:061 (2) - nyuu this placement is so down D: i'd make it like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/70735
01:31:992 (1) - change this new combo to 01:33:026 (4) ? seems better to me
Insane
Ohwell. I'm really not gonna bitch at your new combos and sliders.. The map is just great as it is. <3
I hope it was useful.. aand if you want a recheck to [Hard] you know what to do. x3
Starr'd
yuinyan~ :3
andrea gogo~ >w</
andrea gogo~ >w</
Yeah,
Taiko diff Done>w<
Download: Sakakibara Yui - Mecha Koi Ranman (Short Ver.) (osuplayer111) [Kana's Taiko].osu
Taiko diff Done>w<
Download: Sakakibara Yui - Mecha Koi Ranman (Short Ver.) (osuplayer111) [Kana's Taiko].osu
Since the BG problem.
The new BG here.
The new BG here.
some suggestion of taiko 
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I think it is more chaos on hitsound and i suggest u try to add 連打 next to the big white link.
if my moding have something wrong , don't be agree.
Forgive me 
Shoot a star 
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[Kana's Taiko]
00:06:647 (12) - del
00:06:543 (11,12) - k d
00:07:061 (14) - add note
00:07:164 (15) - k
00:08:198 (18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25) - k d ddk d d k
00:09:854 (26,27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34) - kkd ddk d d k
00:11:509 (35) - k
00:12:130 (37) - ^
00:14:198 (47) - add d
00:14:819 (50) - add k
00:17:198 (60) - del
00:17:509 (62,63,64,65,66) - kkddk
00:18:336 (67,68,69,70,71) - k kkk d , 這不使用二連比較好 , 之後 落1/2 更加好 如 00:19:165 (72) 開始 k d k d kkd k d
00:23:302 (93,94,95,96) - k ddk
00:24:957 (103,104,105,106) - ^
00:26:095 (111) - add note
00:27:026 (117) - k
00:28:474 (125,126,127,128) - kkd k
00:30:130 (135,136,137,138,139,140,141,142) - k ddk kdddk
00:33:854 (159,160,161,162,163,164) - try to use 25% to listen it dk kdkk
00:35:923 (172) - k
00:37:372 (180,181,182,183,184,185) - dkddk d
00:39:234 (192) - k
00:39:854 (195,196,197,198,199) - kdkkk
00:42:750 (213,214,215) - 索性kkk 吧
00:45:647 (226,227,228,229,230,231) - k ddkkd ?
00:49:578 (248,249,250,251,252) - kkddk?
00:52:061 (262) - k
00:52:475 (265) - ^
00:57:026 (290,291) - kd
00:57:854 (295,296,297,298) - kkd k
01:00:647 (308,309,310,311) - kkdk
01:01:785 (315,316) - kk
01:02:923 (322) - move to 01:03:336
01:03:647 (326) - k
01:03:750 (327) - del
01:04:164 (329) - add k
01:04:785 (333) - move to 01:04:888
01:05:509 (337) - add d
01:06:130 (339,340,341,342,343,344,345,346,347) - ddk k d kkd k
01:07:578 (349) - add k
01:11:405 (366) - move to 01:11:509
01:11:923 (369) - d
01:14:716 (384) - move to 01:14:923
01:15:234 (387) - k
01:20:612 (415,416,417,418,419) - del 416 418 and 415 417 K 419 D
01:22:681 (424) - add k
01:27:233 (449,450,451,452) - kkd k
01:27:854 (453,454) - kk
01:28:475 (457) - d
00:06:647 (12) - del
00:06:543 (11,12) - k d
00:07:061 (14) - add note
00:07:164 (15) - k
00:08:198 (18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25) - k d ddk d d k
00:09:854 (26,27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34) - kkd ddk d d k
00:11:509 (35) - k
00:12:130 (37) - ^
00:14:198 (47) - add d
00:14:819 (50) - add k
00:17:198 (60) - del
00:17:509 (62,63,64,65,66) - kkddk
00:18:336 (67,68,69,70,71) - k kkk d , 這不使用二連比較好 , 之後 落1/2 更加好 如 00:19:165 (72) 開始 k d k d kkd k d
00:23:302 (93,94,95,96) - k ddk
00:24:957 (103,104,105,106) - ^
00:26:095 (111) - add note
00:27:026 (117) - k
00:28:474 (125,126,127,128) - kkd k
00:30:130 (135,136,137,138,139,140,141,142) - k ddk kdddk
00:33:854 (159,160,161,162,163,164) - try to use 25% to listen it dk kdkk
00:35:923 (172) - k
00:37:372 (180,181,182,183,184,185) - dkddk d
00:39:234 (192) - k
00:39:854 (195,196,197,198,199) - kdkkk
00:42:750 (213,214,215) - 索性kkk 吧
00:45:647 (226,227,228,229,230,231) - k ddkkd ?
00:49:578 (248,249,250,251,252) - kkddk?
00:52:061 (262) - k
00:52:475 (265) - ^
00:57:026 (290,291) - kd
00:57:854 (295,296,297,298) - kkd k
01:00:647 (308,309,310,311) - kkdk
01:01:785 (315,316) - kk
01:02:923 (322) - move to 01:03:336
01:03:647 (326) - k
01:03:750 (327) - del
01:04:164 (329) - add k
01:04:785 (333) - move to 01:04:888
01:05:509 (337) - add d
01:06:130 (339,340,341,342,343,344,345,346,347) - ddk k d kkd k
01:07:578 (349) - add k
01:11:405 (366) - move to 01:11:509
01:11:923 (369) - d
01:14:716 (384) - move to 01:14:923
01:15:234 (387) - k
01:20:612 (415,416,417,418,419) - del 416 418 and 415 417 K 419 D
01:22:681 (424) - add k
01:27:233 (449,450,451,452) - kkd k
01:27:854 (453,454) - kk
01:28:475 (457) - d
I think it is more chaos on hitsound and i suggest u try to add 連打 next to the big white link.
if my moding have something wrong , don't be agree.
Forgive me Shoot a star Yeah i fixed some in your modding.koko6162006 wrote:
some suggestion of taiko
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00:06:647 (12) - del
00:06:543 (11,12) - k d
00:07:061 (14) - add note
00:07:164 (15) - k
00:08:198 (18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25) - k d ddk d d k
00:09:854 (26,27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34) - kkd ddk d d k
00:11:509 (35) - k
00:12:130 (37) - ^
00:14:198 (47) - add d
00:14:819 (50) - add k
00:17:198 (60) - del
00:17:509 (62,63,64,65,66) - kkddk
00:18:336 (67,68,69,70,71) - k kkk d , 這不使用二連比較好 , 之後 落1/2 更加好 如 00:19:165 (72) 開始 k d k d kkd k d
00:23:302 (93,94,95,96) - k ddk
00:24:957 (103,104,105,106) - ^
00:26:095 (111) - add note
00:27:026 (117) - k
00:28:474 (125,126,127,128) - kkd k
00:30:130 (135,136,137,138,139,140,141,142) - k ddk kdddk
00:33:854 (159,160,161,162,163,164) - try to use 25% to listen it dk kdkk
00:35:923 (172) - k
00:37:372 (180,181,182,183,184,185) - dkddk d
00:39:234 (192) - k
00:39:854 (195,196,197,198,199) - kdkkk
00:42:750 (213,214,215) - 索性kkk 吧
00:45:647 (226,227,228,229,230,231) - k ddkkd ?
00:49:578 (248,249,250,251,252) - kkddk?
00:52:061 (262) - k
00:52:475 (265) - ^
00:57:026 (290,291) - kd
00:57:854 (295,296,297,298) - kkd k
01:00:647 (308,309,310,311) - kkdk
01:01:785 (315,316) - kk
01:02:923 (322) - move to 01:03:336
01:03:647 (326) - k
01:03:750 (327) - del
01:04:164 (329) - add k
01:04:785 (333) - move to 01:04:888
01:05:509 (337) - add d
01:06:130 (339,340,341,342,343,344,345,346,347) - ddk k d kkd k
01:07:578 (349) - add k
01:11:405 (366) - move to 01:11:509
01:11:923 (369) - d
01:14:716 (384) - move to 01:14:923
01:15:234 (387) - k
01:20:612 (415,416,417,418,419) - del 416 418 and 415 417 K 419 D
01:22:681 (424) - add k
01:27:233 (449,450,451,452) - kkd k
01:27:854 (453,454) - kk
01:28:475 (457) - d
Thanks for suggestion.
Edit. Also i change some patterns form myself.
I guess it's Taiko Oni Level 7+.
Download: Sakakibara Yui - Mecha Koi Ranman (Short Ver.) (osuplayer111) [Kana's Taiko].osu
Topic Starter
Moved to Pending.
Thanks guys for supporting this map
Thanks guys for supporting this map
General:
Why do you have Audio Lead in - 3 seconds?
Lucifer's Easy:
Such a low HP drain - maybe you should put 2-3?
01:07:992 - I guess this slider has to end in : - 01:08:612
Normal:
Hp Drain - 4?
01:20:819 - I guess it is better to delete this circle and to put instead of it a circle here : - 01:20:612
Vicho's Hard:
Hp Drain - 5?
Insane:
Hp Drain - 6?
That is all,what I found. Star!
Why do you have Audio Lead in - 3 seconds?
Lucifer's Easy:
Such a low HP drain - maybe you should put 2-3?
01:07:992 - I guess this slider has to end in : - 01:08:612
Normal:
Hp Drain - 4?
01:20:819 - I guess it is better to delete this circle and to put instead of it a circle here : - 01:20:612
Vicho's Hard:
Hp Drain - 5?
Insane:
Hp Drain - 6?
That is all,what I found. Star!
General
- Whats that blank.png image for?
Lucifer's Easy
Suggestion
00:59:923 (1,1) Not much recovery time for the noob players.
well nice job on making a perfect map
star
- Whats that blank.png image for?
Lucifer's Easy
Suggestion
00:59:923 (1,1) Not much recovery time for the noob players.
well nice job on making a perfect map
star
[Lucifer's Easy]
0:00:130 (1,2) - ...is this following music at all? if i was you, i'd try using a spinner at this point. :p
[Normal]
0:00:130 (1,2,3,4) - pretty much like in Easy
[Vicho's Hard]
0:52:164 (5) - i dont really like this finish at it's beginning at all. :<
1:34:061 (1,1) - are those new combos really that necessary?
[Insane]
0:01:785 (1) - for some reason i'd like you to delete this note. :P
1:16:267 (7,1) - i'd swap new combos between those notes
[General]
like Weezy said, unused "blank.png" file
barely could find anything in map that's perfect already... o.o
THAT VIDEOOO <3
0:00:130 (1,2) - ...is this following music at all? if i was you, i'd try using a spinner at this point. :p
[Normal]
0:00:130 (1,2,3,4) - pretty much like in Easy
[Vicho's Hard]
0:52:164 (5) - i dont really like this finish at it's beginning at all. :<
1:34:061 (1,1) - are those new combos really that necessary?
[Insane]
0:01:785 (1) - for some reason i'd like you to delete this note. :P
1:16:267 (7,1) - i'd swap new combos between those notes
[General]
like Weezy said, unused "blank.png" file
barely could find anything in map that's perfect already... o.o
THAT VIDEOOO <3
[General]
Suggestion:
Offset +5
[Insane]
00:09:440 (8,9) - reverse wistle
00:47:509 (5) - Since this slider is a bit too close, move 00:46:474 (1,2,3,4) one grid up, or two?
Besides that little thing in insane I really can't find anything wrong in the whole mapset, sorry ;-;.
Suggestion:
Offset +5
[Insane]
00:09:440 (8,9) - reverse wistle
00:47:509 (5) - Since this slider is a bit too close, move 00:46:474 (1,2,3,4) one grid up, or two?
Besides that little thing in insane I really can't find anything wrong in the whole mapset, sorry ;-;.
Topic Starter
Thanks for modding guys, updated.
Go~
[General]
as i rememembered spinnerspin is not allowed to be set silenced. just use a timing point to make them at very low volume.
[Lucifer's Easy]
diff is well made, but do you think using massive SB hitsounds is a good idea? i can't agree. especially when you can solve them with tick-sounds. it may be some extra work but i think you'd better do it. anyway it's the EASY diff.
[Normal]
00:04:061 (2) - also add clap to the beginning. it'll be covered by the finish, but make the slider sounds better.
00:08:405 (5) - remove whistle at the end, to make the hitsounds flow like whistle-normal-whistle
01:22:681 (1) - just a circle at 01:22:888 would be better
[Kana's Taiko]
song is really slow and i'll suggest Slider Velocity 1.6. OD+1 maybe
00:06:647 (12) - remove
00:12:130 (38) - oox from here and remove 00:12:440 (40,41), add a kat at 00:12:957
00:54:751 (274) - remove finish
01:21:647 (416,417,418,419,420,421) - maybe similar to 00:12:130 (38), don't like this part
[Vicho's Hard]
00:01:785 - just feels "miss a beat" here.
00:46:474 (1,2,3,4) - make a jump here?
[Insane]
00:02:819 (6) - SC1 finish+clap at slider's end
00:18:130 (7) - whistle
00:40:267 (3,4,5,6) - tbh i think it looks not so good
00:51:854 (2,5) - clap at 2 and 5's beginning
00:53:095 (1) - use a volume increase here (90%~100%)
00:58:888 (5,1) - remove clap at 5 and 1's beginning
01:31:992 (4) - remove clap
as i rememembered spinnerspin is not allowed to be set silenced. just use a timing point to make them at very low volume.
[Lucifer's Easy]
diff is well made, but do you think using massive SB hitsounds is a good idea? i can't agree. especially when you can solve them with tick-sounds. it may be some extra work but i think you'd better do it. anyway it's the EASY diff.
[Normal]
00:04:061 (2) - also add clap to the beginning. it'll be covered by the finish, but make the slider sounds better.
00:08:405 (5) - remove whistle at the end, to make the hitsounds flow like whistle-normal-whistle
01:22:681 (1) - just a circle at 01:22:888 would be better
[Kana's Taiko]
song is really slow and i'll suggest Slider Velocity 1.6. OD+1 maybe
00:06:647 (12) - remove
00:12:130 (38) - oox from here and remove 00:12:440 (40,41), add a kat at 00:12:957
00:54:751 (274) - remove finish
01:21:647 (416,417,418,419,420,421) - maybe similar to 00:12:130 (38), don't like this part
[Vicho's Hard]
00:01:785 - just feels "miss a beat" here.
00:46:474 (1,2,3,4) - make a jump here?
[Insane]
00:02:819 (6) - SC1 finish+clap at slider's end
00:18:130 (7) - whistle
00:40:267 (3,4,5,6) - tbh i think it looks not so good
00:51:854 (2,5) - clap at 2 and 5's beginning
00:53:095 (1) - use a volume increase here (90%~100%)
00:58:888 (5,1) - remove clap at 5 and 1's beginning
01:31:992 (4) - remove clap
Topic Starter
@MoodyRPG: Thanks for your star :3~
@NatsumeRin: Fixed most of your mod, thanks!
@jnkinsu: Thanks for your star, too :3~
Waiting for KanaRin's fixes now.
@NatsumeRin: Fixed most of your mod, thanks!
@jnkinsu: Thanks for your star, too :3~
Waiting for KanaRin's fixes now.
Thanks Rin sama~>w<NatsumeRin wrote:
[General]
[Kana's Taiko]
song is really slow and i'll suggest Slider Velocity 1.6. OD+1 maybe No , i won't change this because i hope it's more easy to Harkrock.
00:06:647 (12) - remove Fixed? I haven't note here..
00:12:130 (38) - oox from here and remove 00:12:440 (40,41), add a kat at 00:12:957 Umm, Okay~
00:54:751 (274) - remove finish Okay
01:21:647 (416,417,418,419,420,421) - maybe similar to 00:12:130 (38), don't like this part
Ok
Download: Sakakibara Yui - Mecha Koi Ranman (Short Ver.) (osuplayer111) [Kana's Taiko].osu
discussed in irc and fixed a few minor things. looks great now
Topic Starter
Thanks a lot ign for all the help
sorry for late 
sorry Andrea
sorry Andrea
oh lol this song
Andea always so fast :3
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