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Izzywing
hi

Easy

00:14:539 (4,1,2) - When two sliders are blanketing the same circle, it looks nice if the thickness of the gap between the sliders and the circle is the same for both.

00:14:539 (4,2,3) - On that note, the blanket here can be improved

00:17:792 (1,2,3) - Not good flow; an Easy player does not know about slider leniency so they will follow the sliders literally, here you require the players to end the slider and then turn sharply to the right to get the next one, which is hard.

00:25:021 (3,1) - Blanket looks nicer here. Be sure to fix the shapes of 00:27:189 (2,3) - after you make this change

00:40:924 (1,2) - Not good flow for similar reason to above; player has to make a sharp turn from the end of 1 to hit 2 which is not fitting in an Easy.

00:41:647 (2,3) - If you arrange these so that 3 blankets 2, it looks nicer.

00:58:274 (1,2,3,4) - This pattern looks good but does not flow well, same reason as I said before.

01:14:900 (3,1) - This is literally the only 1/2 gap in the entire difficulty, just make a 1/1 gap

You use the questionable flow (that requires knowledge of slider leniency, pretty much) a lot in this diff, and I disagree with it. I guess if it's your style or whatever, you can hope that it's fine later, but I really suggest changing it.

01:41:647 (1) - Make this shape more symmetrical

01:45:804 (3) - ^

Gyro's Normal

00:20:683 (1) - Better if it ends on 00:21:949 - to match the strong drum?

00:39:659 - You could place a note here to avoid the 3/2 gap in the rhythm.

00:42:912 (6) - Not a big deal, but why does the end of this point down when the next note is in a different direction

00:50:683 (2,3) - make parallel?

Your combos are not consistent, so I've focused a lot of combos to help you out.

00:17:069 (1) - If you are to be consistent with your pattern of putting NCs every 2 downbeats, move this NC to 00:17:792 (2) -
00:26:467 (6) - New combo to match your every 2 downbeats pattern
00:28:816 (1) - Move the NC to 00:29:358 (2) -
00:32:069 (1) - Move the NC to 00:32:250 (2) -
00:38:033 (6) - NC
01:03:876 (2) - NC because the kiai starts here
01:15:262 (1) - move NC to 01:15:442 (2) -
01:17:973 (1) - move NC to 01:18:153 (2), also I dont like how 01:18:153 (2) - is skipping the vocal on 01:18:334 -
01:21:045 (1) - move NC to 01:21:406 (2) -
01:32:250 (1) - move NC to 01:32:973 (2) -
01:38:033 (1) - move NC to 01:38:756 (2) -
01:43:816 (1) - move NC to 01:44:358 (3) -

Abhor's Hard

00:07:491 (1) - This extended slider is skipping the sound on 00:07:671 - (which is a downbeat even) so I think it's better to just be a 1/2 slider

00:15:623 (1) - this NC isn't needed

00:23:575 (6) - NC should be here since downbeat

01:24:117 (5,1) - This jump is a bit excessive

01:47:430 (1) - This diff ends so much earlier than the other ones, the drain time is a whopping 8 seconds shorter

Nirvana

00:12:370 (4,5) - This would look a lot better if this was a blanket.

00:14:177 (4,6,7) - Perhaps make these the same distance from each other? Bonus points if they're not overlapping

00:20:141 (4,5,6,7,8,1) - Why not claps for these?

00:27:551 (1) - move NC to 00:27:732 (2) -
00:30:623 (1) - move NC to 00:30:804 (3) -

00:34:238 (3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3) - some kind of hitsound would be nice here to emphasize these triplets

I suggest going through this diff and cleaning up blankets. Patterns like 01:11:286 (1,3) - would look much better if they were blanketted, or if the sliders at least complemented each other instead of just looking like random curves.

This mapset has promise but needs some work in terms of aesthetics, rhythm and combos. Tried to suggest whatever I could. Good luck!
Topic Starter
kanor

Hobbes2 wrote:

hi

Easy

00:14:539 (4,1,2) - When two sliders are blanketing the same circle, it looks nice if the thickness of the gap between the sliders and the circle is the same for both. I have tried to blanket but failed beacuse the DS,and there is a distance between 1and 3 so is im possible if i use 2 to blanket both 1 and 3,so I blanket 1 :(

00:14:539 (4,2,3) - On that note, the blanket here can be improved fixed

00:17:792 (1,2,3) - Not good flow; an Easy player does not know about slider leniency so they will follow the sliders literally, here you require the players to end the slider and then turn sharply to the right to get the next one, which is hard.

00:25:021 (3,1) - Blanket looks nicer here. Be sure to fix the shapes of 00:27:189 (2,3) - after you make this change

00:40:924 (1,2) - Not good flow for similar reason to above; player has to make a sharp turn from the end of 1 to hit 2 which is not fitting in an Easy.

00:41:647 (2,3) - If you arrange these so that 3 blankets 2, it looks nicer. OK

00:58:274 (1,2,3,4) - This pattern looks good but does not flow well, same reason as I said before.

01:14:900 (3,1) - This is literally the only 1/2 gap in the entire difficulty, just make a 1/1 gap Just cuz this place is the only one used 1/2 gap so I want to keep it, I try my best to avoid 1/2 gap in the whole music but in this place i will miss a improtant drum if I still keep 1/1

You use the questionable flow (that requires knowledge of slider leniency, pretty much) a lot in this diff, and I disagree with it. I guess if it's your style or whatever, you can hope that it's fine later, but I really suggest changing it.
Ohhhhh that's my mapping style! Rotation sliders may be difficult to read in the edit but trust me they are easy and interesting in the playing. In fact flow is the mapper's imagination but in real the players will not consider it too much , they would just clean the slider and put attention to the next but not follow the flow , so I will keep most of the flow. ;)

01:41:647 (1) - Make this shape more symmetrical OK, ill try my best to make it seems symmetrical :)

01:45:804 (3) - ^ ^


Nirvana

00:12:370 (4,5) - This would look a lot better if this was a blanket. im not tend to blanket it but just make a triangle like 00:12:370 (4,5,6) -

00:14:177 (4,6,7) - Perhaps make these the same distance from each other? Bonus points if they're not overlapping fixed it but IDK wether is good><

00:20:141 (4,5,6,7,8,1) - Why not claps for these? Yes! Fixed it .

00:27:551 (1) - move NC to 00:27:732 (2) - thats ok if 1 and 2 is stack because it looks more comfortable than mix the two colors
00:30:623 (1) - move NC to 00:30:804 (3) - ^

00:34:238 (3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3) - some kind of hitsound would be nice here to emphasize these triplets Yes! clap them and strike balance in the volun

I suggest going through this diff and cleaning up blankets. Patterns like 01:11:286 (1,3) - would look much better if they were blanketted, or if the sliders at least complemented each other instead of just looking like random curves.
well, imo always careless in the blanket or I just ignore that may be a blanket.....its my habbit fault , I will check the map and to fixed the blanket. I still cant make all the blanket best so if you find it plz point it out! :)

This mapset has promise but needs some work in terms of aesthetics, rhythm and combos. Tried to suggest whatever I could. Good luck!
THX for modding! :)
Plaudible

kanor wrote:

Ohhhhh that's my mapping style! Rotation sliders may be difficult to read in the edit but trust me they are easy and interesting in the playing. In fact flow is the mapper's imagination but in real the players will not consider it too much , they would just clean the slider and put attention to the next but not follow the flow , so I will keep most of the flow. ;)
Pretty poor reason to reject a change like this imo, and I agree with Hobbes. When a newbie plays a map, they will click and drag to the end of a slider. Having to go back and forth constantly to play a slider is not something really appropriate for them, hence why an Easy should generally have higher quality flow to make sure they don't get thrown off by things like this. If you're of reasonable experience and can play normals and above, yes, this is perfectly suitable for a map. But think of this: this could be someone's first map. Having to play something with mechanics like that that they are not used to doesn't really work. I strongly suggest reconsidering his suggestion, because as it sits right now it's fairly inappropriate for this difficulty.

Also, using your mapping style is, for the most part, not a valid excuse to justify something you mapped. Thoroughly consider what a person says: yes, it may go against your style, but if you want your beatmap to be ranked (which I'm assuming is what you're going for) there are certain criteria you have to meet, and rejecting changes with that reasoning will only hinder that process.

Good luck! no kds.
Lobelia

Hobbes2 wrote:

hi



Abhor's Hard

00:07:491 (1) - This extended slider is skipping the sound on 00:07:671 - (which is a downbeat even) so I think it's better to just be a 1/2 sliderfixed

00:15:623 (1) - this NC isn't neededfixed

00:23:575 (6) - NC should be here since downbeatfixed

01:24:117 (5,1) - This jump is a bit excessivei reduce the distance~

01:47:430 (1) - This diff ends so much earlier than the other ones, the drain time is a whopping 8 seconds shorterumm,i will consider about it but the guest diff not must follow the other diffs,and i think end at here also sound fine :)
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256,192,107430,12,0,110322,0:0:0:0:
Lv9
搞事
  • Nirvana
00:15:262 (2,5) - 没包好。。往下挪一点就完美了
00:15:783 (4,1) - ^
保持这个滑条形状的话可能不太好包,因为右边已经顶到边界了。。感觉拉成这样会好一点?
https://puu.sh/qW3g0/caea046cf8.png
00:37:129 (2,4) - 没包好,00:37:129 (2) - 的尾放在00:35:051 (2) - 上就行
01:15:442 (1) - 不对称的S形滑条看着有点那啥。。我的话会选择开GS拉一个标准的再缩放调整
像这样https://puu.sh/qW3R4/c2cfe6c84f.png
01:31:346 (3) - ^
01:45:804 (5) - ^
01:43:816 (1) - 我的建议是放在这里https://puu.sh/qW4c2/8c0e78812e.png
01:47:430 (1) - 蝴蝶不对称 而且感觉略僵硬。。这图https://osu.ppy.sh/s/311463末尾有一个滑条可以作为参考

摸的全是关于Mapping style的东西。。改不改应该都是rankable的。。每个人想法都不一样,不想改的话就不用回了(
Topic Starter
kanor

Level9 wrote:

搞事
  • Nirvana
00:15:262 (2,5) - 没包好。。往下挪一点就完美了好,改了
00:15:783 (4,1) - ^ OK
保持这个滑条形状的话可能不太好包,因为右边已经顶到边界了。。感觉拉成这样会好一点? OK
https://puu.sh/qW3g0/caea046cf8.png
00:37:129 (2,4) - 没包好,00:37:129 (2) - 的尾放在00:35:051 (2) - 上就行
01:15:442 (1) - 不对称的S形滑条看着有点那啥。。我的话会选择开GS拉一个标准的再缩放调整 尽量改了,中间红点看起来有点僵硬就没用
像这样https://puu.sh/qW3R4/c2cfe6c84f.png
01:31:346 (3) - ^
01:45:804 (5) - ^
01:43:816 (1) - 我的建议是放在这里https://puu.sh/qW4c2/8c0e78812e.png
01:47:430 (1) - 蝴蝶不对称 而且感觉略僵硬。。这图https://osu.ppy.sh/s/311463末尾有一个滑条可以作为参考 这个图里的我摆不动......改了几个描点,这个不用记事本改坐标估计很难完全对称了(

摸的全是关于Mapping style的东西。。改不改应该都是rankable的。。每个人想法都不一样,不想改的话就不用回了(
可以,很强 :)
Chalwa
Hello! M4M from your queue!
[General]
  1. Ending time is no consistent, cause in Abhor's diff endind time is 01:50:322. In other is 01:58:816.
[Easy]
  1. 00:15:623 (2,3) - Try to blanket end of 00:15:623 (2) with end of 00:17:069 (3). It looks better then.
  2. 00:32:250 (1,3) - Make this two parallel??
  3. 00:33:696 (3,4) - Blanket improve
  4. 01:48:153 (2,1) - Try to blanket it?? (sugestion)
  5. Wow, it's really good diff :D
[Normal]
  1. 00:42:912 (6) - Why this slider is weird?? :(
  2. 00:50:683 (2,3) - Make this two parralel?
  3. 01:03:876 (2) - NC
[Hard]
  1. 00:29:358 (1) - Anchor point to x: 267 y:108
  2. 00:34:689 - Make here clickable pls, cause it's too hard to read imo
  3. Tbh best diif in mapset
END!
It's very good map! Take my two stars :D.
GOOD LUCK!
Topic Starter
kanor

Chalwa wrote:

Hello! M4M from your queue!

[Easy]
  1. 00:15:623 (2,3) - Try to blanket end of 00:15:623 (2) with end of 00:17:069 (3). It looks better then.OK, I change the shape of the slider
  2. 00:32:250 (1,3) - Make this two parallel?? well
  3. 00:33:696 (3,4) - Blanket improve fixed
  4. 01:48:153 (2,1) - Try to blanket it?? (sugestion) Yes! Nice Idea!
  5. Wow, it's really good diff :D
THX :)

END!
It's very good map! Take my two stars :D.
GOOD LUCK!
THX for modding! :) Enjoy the song and map>< :)
Lobelia

Chalwa wrote:

Hello! M4M from your queue!

[Hard]
  1. 00:29:358 (1) - Anchor point to x: 267 y:108ok
  2. 00:34:689 - Make here clickable pls, cause it's too hard to read imono,there is a strong beat on the blue line
  3. Tbh best diif in mapset Thank you~

GOOD LUCK!
fixed
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 63494
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 8
TimelineZoom: 3.299999

[Metadata]
Title:re-fly
TitleUnicode:re-fly
Artist:Koji Wada
ArtistUnicode:和田光司
Creator:kanor
Version:Abhor's Hard
Source:デジモンアドベンチャーtri
Tags:Digimon Adventure Gyro Zeppeli [_Abhor_]
BeatmapID:1063901
BeatmapSetID:499976

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.4
SliderTickRate:1

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Lobelia
我的最新难度还没更新啊QWQ

[ Normal ]
00:12:370 (2,3,4) - 2,3之间FLOW差了点,然后虽然跟着DS走的但是这里目测看起来2,3和3,4两个差距有点大,00:42:009 (4) - 去掉?还没到对鼓的地方,这里应该继续保持人声吧?
00:42:912 (6) - 这种类似鱼钩滑条的,轨迹不清楚,尾巴带钩与滑条自身重叠的,属于UNRANK
01:25:563 (4) - 这里去掉比较好,没有很明显重音,而且这里明显开始比较舒缓的感觉
01:24:840 (2,3,4,5) - 这段跟人声还是鼓声?跟人声4去掉,2开始跟滑条到01:25:382 - 这里结束,跟鼓就2,4去掉。我建议你跟人声吧,01:27:732 (2) - 因为这里你也是跟的人声,这属于一段节奏里的部分。

[ Easy ]
00:53:936 (4) - 这貌似看起来出界了?然后顺便00:52:852 (2,4) - 包起来
00:55:382 (1) - 这个向左弯曲吧,跟后面FLOW比较顺

[ Insane ]
00:24:208 (2,3) - 不要这样做三连啊,跟着DS走吧,你全篇主歌就这里一个,副歌都没怎么用这种梗,去掉
00:25:563 (2,3,4) - 23和4换位置FLOW更顺前后都顺
00:38:033 (1,3,4) - 这三个ctrl+g?我看着觉得FLOW好看多了
01:07:220 (2,3) - 01:04:328 (2,3) - 这两处你能给出理由,就继续留着吧,不然还是去掉吧,这个三连不好,缺少整体性,要不然你副歌里面尾巴接的三连全部都改成这样蓝线跳← ←?
01:32:611 (2) - 为什么突然拉开间距啊,没理由啊
01:32:882 (3,1) - 我前面说了,你想拉开就都拉开。01:14:449 (1,2) - 01:15:894 (2,3) - 这两个也拉开
01:47:430 (1) - ctrl+g吧,这个跳太大了
Gyro Zeppeli

Hobbes2 wrote:

Gyro's Normal

00:20:683 (1) - Better if it ends on 00:21:949 - to match the strong drum? FIX

00:39:659 - You could place a note here to avoid the 3/2 gap in the rhythm. uhmm,u are good,let's fix it

00:42:912 (6) - Not a big deal, but why does the end of this point down when the next note is in a different direction FIX

00:50:683 (2,3) - make parallel? nope,that is good

Your combos are not consistent, so I've focused a lot of combos to help you out.

00:17:069 (1) - If you are to be consistent with your pattern of putting NCs every 2 downbeats, move this NC to 00:17:792 (2) -
00:26:467 (6) - New combo to match your every 2 downbeats pattern
00:28:816 (1) - Move the NC to 00:29:358 (2) -
00:32:069 (1) - Move the NC to 00:32:250 (2) -
00:38:033 (6) - NC
01:03:876 (2) - NC because the kiai starts here
01:15:262 (1) - move NC to 01:15:442 (2) -
01:17:973 (1) - move NC to 01:18:153 (2), also I dont like how 01:18:153 (2) - is skipping the vocal on 01:18:334 -
01:21:045 (1) - move NC to 01:21:406 (2) -
01:32:250 (1) - move NC to 01:32:973 (2) -
01:38:033 (1) - move NC to 01:38:756 (2) -
01:43:816 (1) - move NC to 01:44:358 (3) -
u are right,ALL FIX
Gyro Zeppeli

[ Abhor ] wrote:

[ Normal ]
00:12:370 (2,3,4) - 2,3之间FLOW差了点,然后虽然跟着DS走的但是这里目测看起来2,3和3,4两个差距有点大,很好,修了
00:42:009 (4) - 去掉?还没到对鼓的地方,这里应该继续保持人声吧? 嗯,对的
00:42:912 (6) - 这种类似鱼钩滑条的,轨迹不清楚,尾巴带钩与滑条自身重叠的,属于UNRANK FIX
01:25:563 (4) - 这里去掉比较好,没有很明显重音,而且这里明显开始比较舒缓的感觉 好,本来是为了overmap
01:24:840 (2,3,4,5) - 这段跟人声还是鼓声?跟人声4去掉,2开始跟滑条到01:25:382 - 这里结束,跟鼓就2,4去掉。我建议你跟人声吧,01:27:732 (2) - 因为这里你也是跟的人声,这属于一段节奏里的部分。 你说得对
Topic Starter
kanor

[ Abhor ] wrote:

我的最新难度还没更新啊QWQ
我在等Normal的改完摸集体UPDATE一下

[ Easy ]
00:53:936 (4) - 这貌似看起来出界了?然后顺便00:52:852 (2,4) - 包起来
00:55:382 (1) - 这个向左弯曲吧,跟后面FLOW比较顺

[ Insane ]
00:24:208 (2,3) - 不要这样做三连啊,跟着DS走吧,你全篇主歌就这里一个,副歌都没怎么用这种梗,去掉 这里我听了很久还是觉得加上更舒服,这个音太明显了不压我打起来反而觉得不舒服
00:25:563 (2,3,4) - 23和4换位置FLOW更顺前后都顺
00:38:033 (1,3,4) - 这三个ctrl+g?我看着觉得FLOW好看多了 改了
01:07:220 (2,3) - 01:04:328 (2,3) - 这两处你能给出理由,就继续留着吧,不然还是去掉吧,这个三连不好,缺少整体性,要不然你副歌里面尾巴接的三连全部都改成这样蓝线跳← ←? 想想还是改了,一开始只是觉得Kiai会不会太简单了所以塞点东西加下难度,后面觉得好像也没啥必要
01:32:611 (2) - 为什么突然拉开间距啊,没理由啊 OK
01:32:882 (3,1) - 我前面说了,你想拉开就都拉开。01:14:449 (1,2) - 01:15:894 (2,3) - 这两个也拉开 这两个拉不开呀,如果后面是圈+滑条那我可以拉开,因为来开之后看起来不违和,但是两个单独的单点拉开就更没有整体性了.......
01:47:430 (1) - ctrl+g吧,这个跳太大了
Lobelia

kanor wrote:

[ Insane ]
00:24:208 (2,3) - 不要这样做三连啊,跟着DS走吧,你全篇主歌就这里一个,副歌都没怎么用这种梗,去掉 这里我听了很久还是觉得加上更舒服,这个音太明显了不压我打起来反而觉得不舒服这里,真的很建议你改了,这里刚开始唱,又不是很强的音,还是跟DS走比较好,我没要你删掉蓝线啊,只是要你三连跟着DS走
01:32:882 (3,1) - 我前面说了,你想拉开就都拉开。01:14:449 (1,2) - 01:15:894 (2,3) - 这两个也拉开 这两个拉不开呀,如果后面是圈+滑条那我可以拉开,因为来开之后看起来不违和,但是两个单独的单点拉开就更没有整体性了.......其实我一开始就想到你会说是因为这里不是接的滑条所不拉开的,我还打出来了后来删掉了。。。不过KIAI作难没关系吧=W=,我只是觉得不太好
Topic Starter
kanor

[ Abhor ] wrote:

kanor wrote:

[ Insane ]
00:24:208 (2,3) - 不要这样做三连啊,跟着DS走吧,你全篇主歌就这里一个,副歌都没怎么用这种梗,去掉 这里我听了很久还是觉得加上更舒服,这个音太明显了不压我打起来反而觉得不舒服这里,真的很建议你改了,这里刚开始唱,又不是很强的音,还是跟DS走比较好,我没要你删掉蓝线啊,只是要你三连跟着DS走 等等,这个flow不好改成按DS来的啊......
01:32:882 (3,1) - 我前面说了,你想拉开就都拉开。01:14:449 (1,2) - 01:15:894 (2,3) - 这两个也拉开 这两个拉不开呀,如果后面是圈+滑条那我可以拉开,因为来开之后看起来不违和,但是两个单独的单点拉开就更没有整体性了.......其实我一开始就想到你会说是因为这里不是接的滑条所不拉开的,我还打出来了后来删掉了。。。不过KIAI作难没关系吧=W=,我只是觉得不太好
AIR
m4m

[Easy]

  • 01:03:334 - 01:14:900 - 最好保持下一致性,比如在第一处加个圈啥的
    01:35:864 (1) - 可以整理一下
[Gyro's Normal]
  • 00:18:334 (2) - 换个方向试试,现在斜斜的挺奇怪
    00:38:575 (2,3) - 前边这一段听起来有点拿不准是在跟鼓点或是人声,我个人不推荐两者交叉
    00:58:997 (3) - 可以试试一弯一直的搭配
    01:09:840 (1,2) - 有点失控,还是互换长短跟人声吧
    01:17:973 (1) - 失控,稍动下排列试试
    01:31:888 - 加个圈吧,作为鼓点的停顿
[Abhor's Hard]
  • 00:17:069 (2,3) - 单点多好,像00:15:623 (2,3,4) -
    00:19:599 (2) - 00:34:057 - 3/4真的不太合适,建议考虑使用连续三连作为节奏交接,比较有气势。
    kiai部分有点没放开的感觉
[Nirvana]
  • 00:12:370 (4) - 01:35:864 (1,2) - 是不是有点远了。。
    00:17:430 (5,6,7) - 并不是像开头那样的移动梗,建议普通的叠在一起
    01:01:708 (1,2,3,4,5) - 移到248,304
    其他美丽
goodluck :)
Lobelia

AIR wrote:

m4m



[Abhor's Hard]
  • 00:17:069 (2,3) - 单点多好,像00:15:623 (2,3,4) - 这两处 我听起来并不是一个声音,而且最后一段我是用了相同处理方式的,所以不改啦
    00:19:599 (2) - 00:34:057 - 3/4真的不太合适,建议考虑使用连续三连作为节奏交接,比较有气势。可以QWQ好看,不过只改了19秒的地方,34秒的这样做貌似overmap了?
    kiai部分有点没放开的感觉QWQ下次再做难一些
fixed
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231,327,81045,2,0,L|196:363,3,35,8|8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,349,81406,6,0,P|121:333|86:238,1,140,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
67,84,81949,1,0,0:0:0:0:
67,84,82129,2,0,P|102:95|139:96,1,70,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
219,86,82491,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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216,174,88635,6,0,P|170:181|142:171,1,70,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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435,233,106346,2,0,P|369:208|344:127,1,140,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
381,49,106888,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,107430,12,0,110322,0:0:0:0:

goodluck :)
Topic Starter
kanor

AIR wrote:

m4m

[Easy]

  • 01:03:334 - 01:14:900 - 最好保持下一致性,比如在第一处加个圈啥的 加了之后感觉还是有点不舒服,干脆keep
    01:35:864 (1) - 可以整理一下

[Nirvana]
  • 00:12:370 (4) - 01:35:864 (1,2) - 是不是有点远了。。 还好吧,打起来没什么违和感
    00:17:430 (5,6,7) - 并不是像开头那样的移动梗,建议普通的叠在一起
    01:01:708 (1,2,3,4,5) - 移到248,304 这个不是很懂,能不能详细说一下?我把整个串的坐标改了之后串都飞到屏幕外面去了......
    其他美丽
goodluck :)
THX for modding! :)
Ashton
I'm applying for BN this december so please rate and leave suggestions on how I can become a better modder

m4m from your que

Easy

- 00:18:515 (2) - look throughout your whole map and find sliders like these that can have less curve on them please
- 01:05:503 (3,1) - I personally do not like how this flows and looks
- 01:35:503 (4,1) - this can be blanketed better
- good diff



Gero's Normal

- 00:14:177 (5,1) - this blanket can be improved because as you can see it's not blanketed right, go through your whole map and find things like this
- 00:17:611 - I think a beat should go here
- good diff wuuw gero sempai


I modded 2 diffs, I expect at least ONE diff done for me



here's my map: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/487377
Topic Starter
kanor

Whirl wrote:

I'm applying for BN this december so please rate and leave suggestions on how I can become a better modder

m4m from your que

Easy

- 00:18:515 (2) - look throughout your whole map and find sliders like these that can have less curve on them please OK,fixedit
- 01:05:503 (3,1) - I personally do not like how this flows and looks i changed the shape of slider
- 01:35:503 (4,1) - this can be blanketed better well, 1cant blanket because the tail of 1 is blanketed by 3 ,it will destroyed the next blanket if I blanekt 4.
- good diff THX :)
Gyro Zeppeli

Whirl wrote:




[size=150]Gero's Normal


- 00:14:177 (5,1) - this blanket can be improved

because as you can see it's not blanketed right, go through your whole map and find things like this

- 00:17:611 - I think a beat should go here eh..i dont want map a beat hear bcz it will be hard.
- good diff wuuw gero sempai
I'M GYRO!! ;;;;;;;;w;;;;;;;;;;;
Blitzfrog
From your m4m queue
Sorry for only doing 2 but it's quite late here...

Abhor's Hard
00:25:924 (3,1) - Stack, although concentrated on vocal, the guitar in the background suits this way and it looks better
00:38:033 (1) - Curving anti-clockwise looks better
Stack 00:43:455 (4,5) and 00:43:997 (1,2) to not cause confusion and the music is paired up this way
Move 00:50:683 (4) to about (145,280) and 00:50:864 (5) to about (65, 310), - better flow and no awkward overlapped object
00:56:105 (3) - Point this towards the bottom left, makes it less clustered
Make 00:59:720 (1,2,3,4,5) a similar patter to 00:58:274 (1,2,3,4)
01:12:009 (3) - Point this NorthWest and 01:12:551 (4) to somewhere near (150,95)
01:17:069 (1) - Remove combo, same stanza
01:17:973 (3) - NC, new stanza
01:21:045 (4) - NC^
01:45:804 (1) - Stanza doesn't sound finished

Nirvana
00:14:539 (6,7) - Looks better when stacked
00:15:171 - Something like this would look better


00:18:153 (2) - move this to somewhere near (200, 110) and blanket it with 00:18:696 (4)
00:40:563 (5) - Swap this with 00:40:744 (6) and move 00:40:744 (6) to about (450, 160)
01:08:756 (2,4) - Stack this or move 01:08:756 (2) away
01:20:503 (3) - Since you already done many back and forths why not this one as well? (Keeps style more consistent)
01:32:611 (2) - Looks a bit odd, try this?

01:36:587 (3,5) - Stack these 2, or put 01:36:587 (3,4,5) in a straight line to go in sync with the guitar
01:39:117 (6,7) - This overlap looks kind of awkward
01:47:430 (1) - Maybe make it symmetrical for better looks

Hope I helped :)
Lobelia

Blitzfrog wrote:

From your m4m queue
Sorry for only doing 2 but it's quite late here...

Abhor's Hard
00:25:924 (3,1) - Stack, although concentrated on vocal, the guitar in the background suits this way and it looks better
00:38:033 (1) - Curving anti-clockwise looks better
Stack 00:43:455 (4,5) and 00:43:997 (1,2) to not cause confusion and the music is paired up this way
Move 00:50:683 (4) to about (145,280) and 00:50:864 (5) to about (65, 310), - better flow and no awkward overlapped object
00:56:105 (3) - Point this towards the bottom left, makes it less clustered
Make 00:59:720 (1,2,3,4,5) a similar patter to 00:58:274 (1,2,3,4)
01:12:009 (3) - Point this NorthWest and 01:12:551 (4) to somewhere near (150,95)
01:17:069 (1) - Remove combo, same stanza
01:17:973 (3) - NC, new stanza
01:21:045 (4) - NC^
01:45:804 (1) - Stanza doesn't sound finished
Thanks for mod but i don't think there are some problems.so..no fix
Topic Starter
kanor

Blitzfrog wrote:

From your m4m queue
Sorry for only doing 2 but it's quite late here...


Nirvana
00:14:539 (6,7) - Looks better when stacked I think its better for a little move
00:15:171 - Something like this would look better

OK fixed
00:18:153 (2) - move this to somewhere near (200, 110) and blanket it with 00:18:696 (4) No,00:17:069 (3,1,2) - is a small triangle
00:40:563 (5) - Swap this with 00:40:744 (6) and move 00:40:744 (6) to about (450, 160) a little movement can be friendly to HD
01:08:756 (2,4) - Stack this or move 01:08:756 (2) away ^
01:20:503 (3) - Since you already done many back and forths why not this one as well? (Keeps style more consistent) for a better flow
01:32:611 (2) - Looks a bit odd, try this?
If done like this ,the flow will be destoried
01:36:587 (3,5) - Stack these 2, or put 01:36:587 (3,4,5) in a straight line to go in sync with the guitar ^ not tend to stack
01:39:117 (6,7) - This overlap looks kind of awkward a kind of stack can make the map more interesting imo><
01:47:430 (1) - Maybe make it symmetrical for better looks do my best, and follow the song re-fly

Hope I helped :)
THX for modding>< :)
Blitzfrog
Wasn't of much help, don't think I deserve a kudosu here
Lobelia
加油飞QWQ差不多了吧?大概
Topic Starter
kanor

Blitzfrog wrote:

Wasn't of much help, don't think I deserve a kudosu here
No!Dont be upset! I havent change the note but I have consider them seriously for another way ! your advice are useful,too! lol
Blitzfrog

kanor wrote:

Blitzfrog wrote:

Wasn't of much help, don't think I deserve a kudosu here
No!Dont be upset! I havent change the note but I have consider them seriously for another way ! your advice are useful,too! lol
Hahaha, not upset, just actually thought I didn't deserve the kudosu here (didn't really make much changes, whether you applied them or not), gave it to ya, twas a good map hahaha
ZZHBOY
[Easy]
  1. 00:27:916 (3,4) - 可以包好点 后面复制粘贴的也是
  2. 01:17:073 (3) - 这里可以不用折返滑条 和01:14:904 (3,1) - 这里用一样的节奏可以避免3/2拍空隔 感觉会让新人好打点
[Normal]
  1. 00:39:121 (3,4) - 可以包一下?
  2. 00:57:916 (1,2) - 换下nc?
  3. 01:17:977 (7,1) - 这节奏好奇怪 重新摆一下吧
  4. 01:45:808 (3,4) - 可以包一下
[Hard]
  1. 00:31:892 (4,5) - 咋忽然跳了下
  2. 00:34:422 (4) - 换成1/2如何 这里有点难打
[Insane]
  1. 01:06:410 (2,3) - 试试这样?忽然变近感觉不好 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6143851
  2. 01:13:458 (3,4,5,6) - 有点卡手 试试这样? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6143852
xixi
Topic Starter
kanor

ZZHBOY wrote:

[Easy]
  1. 00:27:916 (3,4) - 可以包好点 后面复制粘贴的也是
  2. 01:17:073 (3) - 这里可以不用折返滑条 和01:14:904 (3,1) - 这里用一样的节奏可以避免3/2拍空隔 感觉会让新人好打点
为了尽量避免1/2还是没压
[Normal]
Normal在remap,就不改了
[Insane]
  1. 01:06:410 (2,3) - 试试这样?忽然变近感觉不好 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6143851 这样改前面的1滑条那里又突然近了
  2. 01:13:458 (3,4,5,6) - 有点卡手 试试这样? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6143852


xixi
xixi
Lobelia

ZZHBOY wrote:

[Hard]
  1. 00:31:892 (4,5) - 咋忽然跳了下其实这里有个重音,不过 看着的确不是很好看,也觉得不是那么舒服所以改了
  2. 00:34:422 (4) - 换成1/2如何 这里有点难打
你还要不要找摸QAQ还要找,我一次性改完再发
Topic Starter
kanor

[ Abhor ] wrote:

ZZHBOY wrote:

[Hard]
  1. 00:31:892 (4,5) - 咋忽然跳了下其实这里有个重音,不过 看着的确不是很好看,也觉得不是那么舒服所以改了
  2. 00:34:422 (4) - 换成1/2如何 这里有点难打
你还要不要找摸QAQ还要找,我一次性改完再发
不着了
mardoka
Hi, modback

[Easy]
  1. 00:17:073 (3,1) - make this blanket look better
  2. 00:33:699 (3,4) - fix blanket pls
  3. 00:43:097 (4) - curve could be better http://puu.sh/rmnhq/8e86d64acf.jpg
  4. 01:30:085 (1,2) - blanket is off
  5. 01:41:651 (1) - I can't think of a reason as to why this slider is so different and stands out from other sliders. Like the other sliders you used are repeated throughout the map. Maybe I'm missing something in the song... x.x
[Normal]
  1. 00:48:880 (4,1) - looks a little ugly imo... maybe blanket it a little better
  2. 00:50:326 (2,3,4) - triangle can maybe look better
[Hard]
  1. 00:08:394 (4,5) - make spacing same as 00:08:214 (3,4) - ? looks better and easier to read
[Insane]
  1. 00:34:242 (3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3) - I think it makes more sense if the triples increased in ds. The music doesnt slow down here so I think it might be better to keep equal distance or increasing distance to emphasize the cymbal crash at 00:35:145 (3) -
  2. 00:42:013 (4,1) - fix blanket
  3. 01:47:434 (1) - nice shape :o
[Kencho's Insane]
  1. 00:14:724 (6,1) - deserves more spacing than 00:14:543 (5,6) - to emphasize downbeat
  2. 00:16:169 (1) - ^ same with this
Kencho

nubery wrote:

[Kencho's Insane]
  1. 00:14:724 (6,1) - deserves more spacing than 00:14:543 (5,6) - to emphasize downbeat fixed
  2. 00:16:169 (1) - ^ same with this fixed
Kencho's Nirvana
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Topic Starter
kanor

nubery wrote:

Hi, modback

[Easy]
  1. 00:17:073 (3,1) - make this blanket look better OK
  2. 00:33:699 (3,4) - fix blanket pls FIXED
  3. 00:43:097 (4) - curve could be better http://puu.sh/rmnhq/8e86d64acf.jpg you are right,fixed
  4. 01:30:085 (1,2) - blanket is off dont tend to blanket but fixed
  5. 01:41:651 (1) - I can't think of a reason as to why this slider is so different and stands out from other sliders. Like the other sliders you used are repeated throughout the map. Maybe I'm missing something in the song... x.x ohhhhh I just want to make more kinds of sliders so that players would not feel boried if it is only 2 kind of sliders :)


[Normal]
  1. 00:48:880 (4,1) - looks a little ugly imo... maybe blanket it a little better OK,fixed
  2. 00:50:326 (2,3,4) - triangle can maybe look better OK,fxied
[Insane]
  1. 00:34:242 (3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3) - I think it makes more sense if the triples increased in ds. The music doesnt slow down here so I think it might be better to keep equal distance or increasing distance to emphasize the cymbal crash at 00:35:145 (3) -
    because it is the end of a paragraph which has a process of pack the last paragraph and start the next one so i want to stess it by the different ds.01:14:452 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3) - is the same way but just in contrast
  2. 00:42:013 (4,1) - fix blanket OK
  3. 01:47:434 (1) - nice shape :o thx because its re-fly!>///////<
thx for modding! Help a lot :)
Blitzfrog
Played Abhor's hard just then and really got to say that at 01:24:302 the hitsound is really loud when it should probably gradually crescendo at every strong down beat.
Lobelia

nubery wrote:

Hi, modback

[Hard]
00:08:394 (4,5) - make spacing same as 00:08:214 (3,4) - ? looks better and easier to readactually i follow the ds here so i think it will nice

Blitzfrog wrote:

Played Abhor's hard just then and really got to say that at 01:24:302 the hitsound is really loud when it should probably gradually crescendo at every strong down beat.
fix
osu file format v14

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Artist:Koji Wada
ArtistUnicode:和田光司
Creator:kanor
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Shiranai
Hello~
Sugestion,

Easy
  1. 00:17:073 (3,1) - Blanket could be better
  2. 00:19:965 (3,4,1) - Maybe you can do ctrl+g on (3,4) then do ctrl+j on (1)? I think how the cursor turn could be more less sharp there especially the flow on 00:20:326 (4,1) - and 00:20:687 (1,2) - , visually they will be look like this http://puu.sh/rqi7E/1e5683e143.jpg
  3. 00:45:989 (2) - Add finish on tail for cymbal sound?

    Seems nice, all I can say is some of your blanket is pretty off I think you can make them neater by yourself :p
Normal
  1. 00:19:965 (4) - A bit improve the flow there imo, you can make the slider shape into like this http://puu.sh/rqiEv/31954b8d24.jpg
  2. 00:46:712 (1) - Add finish on head? I hear a faint cymbal there
  3. 00:47:434 (2,3,4) - Make the shape more paralel? I think that will looks neater http://puu.sh/rqiN3/7a253d74d9.jpg
  4. 01:07:675 (4,5) - The rhythm seems weird to play imo, isn't that one supposed to be more consistent like 01:19:242 (4,5,6) - ? Based on music literally the rhythm supposed to be at least consistent

    I have a little concern on rhythm usement on kiai around 01:03:880 - until 01:24:302 - . Mostly because you use too many 1/2 rhythm that make the gameplay denser and harder than it should be e.g. 01:21:049 (8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3) - etc, my sugestion try to get rid some 1/2 rhythm with something easier like 1/1 rhythm or something else to make the gameplay less dense
Hard
  1. 00:28:820 (4) - Why use a larger spacing there? imo nothing to emphsized there same as you did on 00:31:531 (3,4) - that have same music, I think it is better to use regular 1.2 spacing like the rest or at least more consistent
  2. 00:40:928 (1) - Move to x:164 y:36? to make the overlap on 00:40:567 (4,1) - neater like http://puu.sh/rqpjK/44e9ee25b6.jpg
  3. 00:46:712 (1) - Add finish on head? I hear a faint cymbal there
  4. 01:44:181 (4) - Too quite, I think you can add some hitsound on that one either whistle or clap to cover the drum sound
Insane
  1. 00:34:242 (3) - Obvious should be nc for consistency with 00:34:603 (1,2,3) - and 00:34:965 (1,2,3) -
  2. 00:46:712 (7) - Add finish for cymbal
  3. 01:01:169 (1,2,3,4,5) - Make them more straight lol, you can move 01:01:260 (2,3,4,5) - to x:385 y:206
  4. 01:14:452 (1) - Doesn't really need nc imo, it will more consistence like this http://puu.sh/rqq1j/0a1182ada2.jpg
Great set, gl :)
Vert
kd够了啊朋友

算了我再混一个好了
[kencho]
摸个屁啊,我都不愿意打开,直接飞吧
[Insane]
00:13:459 (1,2,3) - 这种直flow不推荐,个人不是特别喜欢
00:24:212 (2) - 没用啊,删了吧
01:47:434 (1) - 滑条和后面转盘的衔接略显奇怪,没有明显的音啊,不过如果是为了配合滑条的形状那就也只能这样了吧
01:19:061 (6) - 放到01:19:422 (8,9) - 之间

低难度依旧不想看,嘻嘻水个kd就跑
Lobelia

Mako Sakata wrote:

Hello~
Sugestion,


Hard
  1. 00:28:820 (4) - Why use a larger spacing there? imo nothing to emphsized there same as you did on 00:31:531 (3,4) - that have same music, I think it is better to use regular 1.2 spacing like the rest or at least more consistentok
  2. 00:40:928 (1) - Move to x:164 y:36? to make the overlap on 00:40:567 (4,1) - neater like http://puu.sh/rqpjK/44e9ee25b6.jpgok
  3. 00:46:712 (1) - Add finish on head? I hear a faint cymbal thereok
  4. 01:44:181 (4) - Too quite, I think you can add some hitsound on that one either whistle or clap to cover the drum soundok
fix
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381,49,106892,1,2,3:0:0:0:
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