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Koji Wada - re-fly

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kanor
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2016年10月24日 at 23:32:52

Artist: Koji Wada
Title: re-fly
Tags: Digimon Adventure monster refly Kouji Gyro Zeppeli [_Abhor_] Kencho デジモンアドベンチャー tri.
BPM: 166
Filesize: 5146kb
Play Time: 01:50
Difficulties Available:
  1. Abhor's Hard (3.23 stars, 306 notes)
  2. Easy (1.47 stars, 133 notes)
  3. Gyro's Normal (1.95 stars, 190 notes)
  4. Insane (4.47 stars, 425 notes)
  5. Kencho's Nirvana (4.7 stars, 477 notes)


Download: Koji Wada - re-fly
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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#2 Ranked
RIP Wada Kouji, we are missing you.
Happy Birthday Gyro!
Diffs
Easy by | Me
Gyro's Normal by | Gyro Zeppeli
Abhor's Hard by | [ Abhor ]
Insane by | Me
Kencho's Nirvana by |Kencho

Butter-Fly~tri.Version~here!
- Angelia
[nir]

你看着改 别管这个傻逼下面的意见


00:26:446 (1,2,3,4,1) -
↓1以后只有这两个地方有音
00:27:078 (2) -
00:27:349 (3) -

00:35:120 (3) - finish不好听

00:38:012 (1) - ctrl+g

01:03:494 (1) - nc
01:03:856 (3) - nc

01:03:856 (3,4) - 有点远

01:07:199 (4,5,6,7) - 有迷惑性

我只会做in 不会摸其他的
Topic Starter
kanor

- Angelia wrote:

[nir]

你看着改 别管这个傻逼下面的意见


00:26:446 (1,2,3,4,1) -
↓1以后只有这两个地方有音
00:27:078 (2) -
00:27:349 (3) - OK

00:35:120 (3) - finish不好听 这个曲子里有,不放等着被挑X

00:38:012 (1) - ctrl+g 改了之后不合flow,现在的锐角跳也挺好

01:03:494 (1) - nc 这个我NC了呀
01:03:856 (3) - nc 因为我01:06:385 (1,2,3) - 也没NC,就不NC了

01:03:856 (3,4) - 有点远 改了改,不过感觉应该差不多......

01:07:199 (4,5,6,7) - 有迷惑性 改了

我只会做in 不会摸其他的
你只会做I
Ryuusei Aika
来了

General
Source加上 デジモンアドベンチャーtri
Tag写你们能联想到的一切日语英语中文的跟数码宝贝有关的东西
Easy和Hard在01:50:301之后的旋律有点浪费,懒的话可以直接学Normal转到最后,不过Hard建议要是能摆几下的话还是摆几下然后在01:56:084这里再下转盘
尽量统一一下kiai结束时间
hitsound的问题都是主观意见,改不改都无所谓

Easy
kiai忘加了?
00:27:891 (3) - 滑条尾的whistle去掉会好点,这个地方节奏感觉不用下那么密
00:31:506 (4) - 滑条头那个whistle也建议去掉,理由同上
00:32:229 (1) - 叠得有点歪,移到284|223试试
00:55:361 (1) - 这里没包对称,改一下比较好

Normal
00:14:879 (6) - 一直到转盘之前的NC这么改会比较好

00:30:783 (5) - 滑条尾的whistle去掉
00:31:506 (6) - 头跟尾的whistle换一下
00:32:771 (3) - 头加一个whitsle
00:34:217 (6) - ^
(上面四个都是我觉得这么放节奏会好点,因为你这段跟的是vocal,所以在几个人声比较高的地方下whistle会很棒)
01:09:458 加个圈比较好,这里有比较明显的鼓点
01:33:675 (3) - 也是改NC


我觉得我上面说的意思完全就是“我摸不出啥来”

Hard
00:23:012 (3) - 你试试在这里加一个whistle+clap
01:23:193 (2) - 这里是想摆对称?是的话这个移到408|229会好点

Nirvana
Hard cs4 with Nirvana cs3.8?
00:23:012 (4) - 同Hard
00:57:530 (3,4,5,6) - 建议你改成这个样子比较顺手

01:02:229 (1,2,3,4,5) - 间距太大了,改成1.1x的连打会好点
01:03:494 (1) 后面那四个建议改成下面那样的NC,不然可能会读成那个1/4滑条和之后单点之间隔了半拍,这么改也刚好让NC在副歌开始

01:28:976 (3,4) - Ctrl+G
01:36:345 (2) - UNSNAP
01:47:409 (1) - 蝴蝶很漂亮 ;)

这歌居然没有Rank版的,惊了
GL for Rank :)
Lobelia
有人送摸,羡慕

Neanmoins wrote:

来了
Hard
00:23:012 (3) - 你试试在这里加一个whistle+clap音效Kanor弄的,交给他
01:23:193 (2) - 这里是想摆对称?是的话这个移到408|229会好点
@Kanor 我这个都是很简单的MOD,你帮我改改就好啦,谢谢~
Topic Starter
kanor

Neanmoins wrote:

来了

General
Source加上 デジモンアドベンチャーtri
Tag写你们能联想到的一切日语英语中文的跟数码宝贝有关的东西 这个等等再加,现在我自己也不确定
Easy和Hard在01:50:301之后的旋律有点浪费,懒的话可以直接学Normal转到最后,不过Hard建议要是能摆几下的话还是摆几下然后在01:56:084这里再下转盘 可以,Easy改了,Hard看GDer
尽量统一一下kiai结束时间 OK
hitsound的问题都是主观意见,改不改都无所谓

Easy
kiai忘加了? 恩,加上了
00:27:891 (3) - 滑条尾的whistle去掉会好点,这个地方节奏感觉不用下那么密
00:31:506 (4) - 滑条头那个whistle也建议去掉,理由同上 可以
00:32:229 (1) - 叠得有点歪,移到284|223试试
00:55:361 (1) - 这里没包对称,改一下比较好
OK


Nirvana
Hard cs4 with Nirvana cs3.8? 就要 CS3.8 不用 不做图(其实是我自己用不习惯CS4)
00:23:012 (4) - 同Hard OK
00:57:530 (3,4,5,6) - 建议你改成这个样子比较顺手 改了

01:02:229 (1,2,3,4,5) - 间距太大了,改成1.1x的连打会好点 这里刻意放了大间距,后面也有差不多DS的串,就不改了
01:03:494 (1) 后面那四个建议改成下面那样的NC,不然可能会读成那个1/4滑条和之后单点之间隔了一拍,这么改也刚好让NC在副歌开始

01:28:976 (3,4) - Ctrl+G OK,跳我一直不是拿的很准怎么跳才舒服><
01:36:345 (2) - UNSNAP 改了
01:47:409 (1) - 蝴蝶很漂亮 ;)
THX<3

这歌居然没有Rank版的,惊了
GL for Rank :)
THX for mod>< :)
顺便求个mu厚不厚呀(。ò ∀ ó。)
Topic Starter
kanor

[ Abhor ] wrote:

有人送摸,羡慕

Neanmoins wrote:

来了
Hard
00:23:012 (3) - 你试试在这里加一个whistle+clap音效Kanor弄的,交给他
01:23:193 (2) - 这里是想摆对称?是的话这个移到408|229会好点
@Kanor 我这个都是很简单的MOD,你帮我改改就好啦,谢谢~
Ryuusei Aika

kanor wrote:

Neanmoins wrote:

来了

General
Source加上 デジモンアドベンチャーtri
Tag写你们能联想到的一切日语英语中文的跟数码宝贝有关的东西 这个等等再加,现在我自己也不确定
Easy和Hard在01:50:301之后的旋律有点浪费,懒的话可以直接学Normal转到最后,不过Hard建议要是能摆几下的话还是摆几下然后在01:56:084这里再下转盘 可以,Easy改了,Hard看GDer
尽量统一一下kiai结束时间 OK
hitsound的问题都是主观意见,改不改都无所谓

Easy
kiai忘加了? 恩,加上了
00:27:891 (3) - 滑条尾的whistle去掉会好点,这个地方节奏感觉不用下那么密
00:31:506 (4) - 滑条头那个whistle也建议去掉,理由同上 可以
00:32:229 (1) - 叠得有点歪,移到284|223试试
00:55:361 (1) - 这里没包对称,改一下比较好
OK


Nirvana
Hard cs4 with Nirvana cs3.8? 就要 CS3.8 不用 不做图(其实是我自己用不习惯CS4)
00:23:012 (4) - 同Hard OK
00:57:530 (3,4,5,6) - 建议你改成这个样子比较顺手 改了

01:02:229 (1,2,3,4,5) - 间距太大了,改成1.1x的连打会好点 这里刻意放了大间距,后面也有差不多DS的串,就不改了
01:03:494 (1) 后面那四个建议改成下面那样的NC,不然可能会读成那个1/4滑条和之后单点之间隔了一拍,这么改也刚好让NC在副歌开始

01:28:976 (3,4) - Ctrl+G OK,跳我一直不是拿的很准怎么跳才舒服><
01:36:345 (2) - UNSNAP 改了
01:47:409 (1) - 蝴蝶很漂亮 ;)
THX<3

这歌居然没有Rank版的,惊了
GL for Rank :)
THX for mod>< :)
顺便求个mu厚不厚呀(。ò ∀ ó。)
好啊 :D
CrystilonZ
oi
from your queue

[General]
  1. Hitsounds volume is quite low
  2. Where do all the tags go?
    Tags: Digimon Adventure Gyro Zeppeli [_Abhor_]
  3. Timing is off. too early


[Easy]
  1. Please fix blankets yourself. They are pretty obvious that they are off orz.
    ea. 00:42:349 (3) - 00:14:879 (1) - 00:15:602 (2) - etc.
  2. 00:15:602 (2) - I don't recommend putting that strong sound on slider reverse. It should be clickable
  3. 00:43:072 (4,1,2) - this rhythm doesn't fit too well because you skip a lot of strong sounds and land sliders on weaker sounds orz
  4. 01:35:482 (4,1) - blanket them?


[Gyro's]
Okay. uhmm imo this diff relies too much on the vocals
It's not wrong to rely on the vocals, but you need to map the instrument too, or else it will turn out weird
  1. 00:27:711 (8,1) - This gap is really really weird ;__; considering the music is still going.
  2. 00:38:554 (7,8,9) - The rhythm here is also weird. 00:39:096 - and 00:39:458 have very strong sounds but were skipped.
    etc.


[Abhor's]
  1. 00:13:434 (1) - This extended slider does not fit. There's a guitar sound on 00:13:614
  2. 00:39:458 (1) - also this slider. It doesn't follow any dragging sound.
  3. 00:45:693 - This beat here is really strong and should not be skipped.
  4. 01:08:735 (2,3) - I don't see a reason behind this spacing increase here. If you don't have one, stick with the normal DS owo
  5. 01:09:458 (4) - just saying but a small jump here might fit
  6. 01:34:397 (1) - same as 00:13:434 (1) -
    pretty decent diff


[Nirvana]
Okay I will state thing generally here.
Not because it's bad, the pattern ideas are pretty good actually. The thing this diff needs is polishing~ which you can do this yourself~*
The suggestions below apply to all similar patterns in the diff
  1. 00:34:217 (3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3) - I don't suggest stacking 00:34:940 (1,2,3) - . Because in actual gameplay, it will be spread out and ruin the pattern. Spread them out manually with low DS
  2. 01:02:048 (5,1) - 01:03:313 (1,2) - rip DS. They are very hard to read, especially being near on the timeline
  3. 01:05:662 (2,1) - rip blankets
  4. 01:09:819 (5,7,9) - these patterns will look much nicer with proper blanket
  5. 01:11:265 (1,3,5) - ^
  6. 01:33:313 (2,3,4) - ^
  7. 01:14:428 (1,2) -

    CrystilonZ wrote:

    I don't suggest stacking them. Because in actual gameplay, it will be spread out and ruin the pattern. Spread them out manually with low DS
  8. 01:47:409 (1) - ooh nice monstrata butterfly


GL~
Lobelia

CrystilonZ wrote:

[Abhor's]
  1. 00:13:434 (1) - This extended slider does not fit. There's a guitar sound on 00:13:614i think it sounds well to me
  2. 00:39:458 (1) - also this slider. It doesn't follow any dragging sound.ok
  3. 00:45:693 - This beat here is really strong and should not be skipped.it's seems the offset is not really accurate,so sounds a little late?
  4. 01:08:735 (2,3) - I don't see a reason behind this spacing increase here. If you don't have one, stick with the normal DS owook!
  5. 01:09:458 (4) - just saying but a small jump here might fitok
  6. 01:34:397 (1) - same as 00:13:434 (1) -same as the first
    pretty decent diffThank you!




GL~
@Kanor,offset问题有点严重,你看看弄439-445之间看看,我弄得443听起来还可以
Topic Starter
kanor

[ Abhor ] wrote:

CrystilonZ wrote:

[Abhor's]
  1. 00:13:434 (1) - This extended slider does not fit. There's a guitar sound on 00:13:614i think it sounds well to me
  2. 00:39:458 (1) - also this slider. It doesn't follow any dragging sound.ok
  3. 00:45:693 - This beat here is really strong and should not be skipped.it's seems the offset is not really accurate,so sounds a little late?
  4. 01:08:735 (2,3) - I don't see a reason behind this spacing increase here. If you don't have one, stick with the normal DS owook!
  5. 01:09:458 (4) - just saying but a small jump here might fitok
  6. 01:34:397 (1) - same as 00:13:434 (1) -same as the first
    pretty decent diffThank you!




GL~
@Kanor,offset问题有点严重,你看看弄439-445之间看看,我弄得443听起来还可以
改成443了.....忘了是原来随便坐的tming现在纸张了()
Topic Starter
kanor

CrystilonZ wrote:

oi
from your queue


General
Hitsounds volume is quite low I m afraid that loud hs may make the music a little noisy :(
Where do all the tags go? oh IDK how to make a right tag so it was delayedORz
Code:
Tags: Digimon Adventure Gyro Zeppeli [_Abhor_] OK,fixed it
Timing is off. too early fiexed offest is 443


Easy
Please fix blankets yourself. They are pretty obvious that they are off orz. OK, its my habbit misstake,thx
ea. 00:42:349 (3) - 00:14:879 (1) - 00:15:602 (2) - etc.
00:15:602 (2) - I don't recommend putting that strong sound on slider reverse. It should be clickable revoke it
00:43:072 (4,1,2) - this rhythm doesn't fit too well because you skip a lot of strong sounds and land sliders on weaker sounds orz
Image imo afraid it may add the difficulty of reading beacause the new player cant fit such a thythm...
01:35:482 (4,1) - blanket them? OK




Nirvana
Okay I will state thing generally here.
Not because it's bad, the pattern ideas are pretty good actually. The thing this diff needs is polishing~ which you can do this yourself~*
The suggestions below apply to all similar patterns in the diff
00:34:217 (3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3) - I don't suggest stacking 00:34:940 (1,2,3) - . Because in actual gameplay, it will be spread out and ruin the pattern. Spread them out manually with low DS OK,got it
01:02:048 (5,1) - 01:03:313 (1,2) - rip DS. They are very hard to read, especially being near on the timeline hahahha its funny,isnt it><
01:05:662 (2,1) - rip blankets fixed it
01:09:819 (5,7,9) - these patterns will look much nicer with proper blanket fixed it, i never notice these place before now ,THX><
01:11:265 (1,3,5) - ^
01:33:313 (2,3,4) - ^
01:14:428 (1,2) -
CrystilonZ wrote:
I don't suggest stacking them. Because in actual gameplay, it will be spread out and ruin the pattern. Spread them out manually with low DS I think the music have such a heavier rhythm, so the DS should be higher and higher
01:47:409 (1) - ooh nice monstrata butterfly >w<

GL~
THX for mod>< Especially for timing! :)
Lobelia
既然OFFSET改了,那么
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TitleUnicode:re-fly
Artist:Koji Wada
ArtistUnicode:和田光司
Creator:kanor
Version:Abhor's Hard
Source:デジモンアドベンチャーtri
Tags:
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Gyro Zeppeli

Neanmoins wrote:

来了


Normal
00:14:879 (6) - 一直到转盘之前的NC这么改会比较好 FIX

00:30:783 (5) - 滑条尾的whistle去掉 FIX
00:31:506 (6) - 头跟尾的whistle换一下 FIX
00:32:771 (3) - 头加一个whitsle FIX
00:34:217 (6) - ^ FIX
(上面四个都是我觉得这么放节奏会好点,因为你这段跟的是vocal,所以在几个人声比较高的地方下whistle会很棒)
01:09:458 加个圈比较好,这里有比较明显的鼓点 nope,有意空的,节奏已经很满
01:33:675 (3) - 也是改NC FIX


我觉得我上面说的意思完全就是“我摸不出啥来”
非常感谢!!

CrystilonZ wrote:

Okay. uhmm imo this diff relies too much on the vocals
It's not wrong to rely on the vocals, but you need to map the instrument too, or else it will turn out weird eh..i mapped the vocals and instrument,not only vocals,i will change some yet
00:27:711 (8,1) - This gap is really really weird ;__; considering the music is still going. this gap is main map the instrument :) u know~
00:38:554 (7,8,9) - The rhythm here is also weird. 00:39:096 - and 00:39:458 have very strong sounds but were skipped. uhmm..i will fix it but not now
etc.
thanks
Hobbes2
hi

Easy

00:14:539 (4,1,2) - When two sliders are blanketing the same circle, it looks nice if the thickness of the gap between the sliders and the circle is the same for both.

00:14:539 (4,2,3) - On that note, the blanket here can be improved

00:17:792 (1,2,3) - Not good flow; an Easy player does not know about slider leniency so they will follow the sliders literally, here you require the players to end the slider and then turn sharply to the right to get the next one, which is hard.

00:25:021 (3,1) - Blanket looks nicer here. Be sure to fix the shapes of 00:27:189 (2,3) - after you make this change

00:40:924 (1,2) - Not good flow for similar reason to above; player has to make a sharp turn from the end of 1 to hit 2 which is not fitting in an Easy.

00:41:647 (2,3) - If you arrange these so that 3 blankets 2, it looks nicer.

00:58:274 (1,2,3,4) - This pattern looks good but does not flow well, same reason as I said before.

01:14:900 (3,1) - This is literally the only 1/2 gap in the entire difficulty, just make a 1/1 gap

You use the questionable flow (that requires knowledge of slider leniency, pretty much) a lot in this diff, and I disagree with it. I guess if it's your style or whatever, you can hope that it's fine later, but I really suggest changing it.

01:41:647 (1) - Make this shape more symmetrical

01:45:804 (3) - ^

Gyro's Normal

00:20:683 (1) - Better if it ends on 00:21:949 - to match the strong drum?

00:39:659 - You could place a note here to avoid the 3/2 gap in the rhythm.

00:42:912 (6) - Not a big deal, but why does the end of this point down when the next note is in a different direction

00:50:683 (2,3) - make parallel?

Your combos are not consistent, so I've focused a lot of combos to help you out.

00:17:069 (1) - If you are to be consistent with your pattern of putting NCs every 2 downbeats, move this NC to 00:17:792 (2) -
00:26:467 (6) - New combo to match your every 2 downbeats pattern
00:28:816 (1) - Move the NC to 00:29:358 (2) -
00:32:069 (1) - Move the NC to 00:32:250 (2) -
00:38:033 (6) - NC
01:03:876 (2) - NC because the kiai starts here
01:15:262 (1) - move NC to 01:15:442 (2) -
01:17:973 (1) - move NC to 01:18:153 (2), also I dont like how 01:18:153 (2) - is skipping the vocal on 01:18:334 -
01:21:045 (1) - move NC to 01:21:406 (2) -
01:32:250 (1) - move NC to 01:32:973 (2) -
01:38:033 (1) - move NC to 01:38:756 (2) -
01:43:816 (1) - move NC to 01:44:358 (3) -

Abhor's Hard

00:07:491 (1) - This extended slider is skipping the sound on 00:07:671 - (which is a downbeat even) so I think it's better to just be a 1/2 slider

00:15:623 (1) - this NC isn't needed

00:23:575 (6) - NC should be here since downbeat

01:24:117 (5,1) - This jump is a bit excessive

01:47:430 (1) - This diff ends so much earlier than the other ones, the drain time is a whopping 8 seconds shorter

Nirvana

00:12:370 (4,5) - This would look a lot better if this was a blanket.

00:14:177 (4,6,7) - Perhaps make these the same distance from each other? Bonus points if they're not overlapping

00:20:141 (4,5,6,7,8,1) - Why not claps for these?

00:27:551 (1) - move NC to 00:27:732 (2) -
00:30:623 (1) - move NC to 00:30:804 (3) -

00:34:238 (3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3) - some kind of hitsound would be nice here to emphasize these triplets

I suggest going through this diff and cleaning up blankets. Patterns like 01:11:286 (1,3) - would look much better if they were blanketted, or if the sliders at least complemented each other instead of just looking like random curves.

This mapset has promise but needs some work in terms of aesthetics, rhythm and combos. Tried to suggest whatever I could. Good luck!
Topic Starter
kanor

Hobbes2 wrote:

hi

Easy

00:14:539 (4,1,2) - When two sliders are blanketing the same circle, it looks nice if the thickness of the gap between the sliders and the circle is the same for both. I have tried to blanket but failed beacuse the DS,and there is a distance between 1and 3 so is im possible if i use 2 to blanket both 1 and 3,so I blanket 1 :(

00:14:539 (4,2,3) - On that note, the blanket here can be improved fixed

00:17:792 (1,2,3) - Not good flow; an Easy player does not know about slider leniency so they will follow the sliders literally, here you require the players to end the slider and then turn sharply to the right to get the next one, which is hard.

00:25:021 (3,1) - Blanket looks nicer here. Be sure to fix the shapes of 00:27:189 (2,3) - after you make this change

00:40:924 (1,2) - Not good flow for similar reason to above; player has to make a sharp turn from the end of 1 to hit 2 which is not fitting in an Easy.

00:41:647 (2,3) - If you arrange these so that 3 blankets 2, it looks nicer. OK

00:58:274 (1,2,3,4) - This pattern looks good but does not flow well, same reason as I said before.

01:14:900 (3,1) - This is literally the only 1/2 gap in the entire difficulty, just make a 1/1 gap Just cuz this place is the only one used 1/2 gap so I want to keep it, I try my best to avoid 1/2 gap in the whole music but in this place i will miss a improtant drum if I still keep 1/1

You use the questionable flow (that requires knowledge of slider leniency, pretty much) a lot in this diff, and I disagree with it. I guess if it's your style or whatever, you can hope that it's fine later, but I really suggest changing it.
Ohhhhh that's my mapping style! Rotation sliders may be difficult to read in the edit but trust me they are easy and interesting in the playing. In fact flow is the mapper's imagination but in real the players will not consider it too much , they would just clean the slider and put attention to the next but not follow the flow , so I will keep most of the flow. ;)

01:41:647 (1) - Make this shape more symmetrical OK, ill try my best to make it seems symmetrical :)

01:45:804 (3) - ^ ^


Nirvana

00:12:370 (4,5) - This would look a lot better if this was a blanket. im not tend to blanket it but just make a triangle like 00:12:370 (4,5,6) -

00:14:177 (4,6,7) - Perhaps make these the same distance from each other? Bonus points if they're not overlapping fixed it but IDK wether is good><

00:20:141 (4,5,6,7,8,1) - Why not claps for these? Yes! Fixed it .

00:27:551 (1) - move NC to 00:27:732 (2) - thats ok if 1 and 2 is stack because it looks more comfortable than mix the two colors
00:30:623 (1) - move NC to 00:30:804 (3) - ^

00:34:238 (3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3) - some kind of hitsound would be nice here to emphasize these triplets Yes! clap them and strike balance in the volun

I suggest going through this diff and cleaning up blankets. Patterns like 01:11:286 (1,3) - would look much better if they were blanketted, or if the sliders at least complemented each other instead of just looking like random curves.
well, imo always careless in the blanket or I just ignore that may be a blanket.....its my habbit fault , I will check the map and to fixed the blanket. I still cant make all the blanket best so if you find it plz point it out! :)

This mapset has promise but needs some work in terms of aesthetics, rhythm and combos. Tried to suggest whatever I could. Good luck!
THX for modding! :)
Plaudible

kanor wrote:

Ohhhhh that's my mapping style! Rotation sliders may be difficult to read in the edit but trust me they are easy and interesting in the playing. In fact flow is the mapper's imagination but in real the players will not consider it too much , they would just clean the slider and put attention to the next but not follow the flow , so I will keep most of the flow. ;)
Pretty poor reason to reject a change like this imo, and I agree with Hobbes. When a newbie plays a map, they will click and drag to the end of a slider. Having to go back and forth constantly to play a slider is not something really appropriate for them, hence why an Easy should generally have higher quality flow to make sure they don't get thrown off by things like this. If you're of reasonable experience and can play normals and above, yes, this is perfectly suitable for a map. But think of this: this could be someone's first map. Having to play something with mechanics like that that they are not used to doesn't really work. I strongly suggest reconsidering his suggestion, because as it sits right now it's fairly inappropriate for this difficulty.

Also, using your mapping style is, for the most part, not a valid excuse to justify something you mapped. Thoroughly consider what a person says: yes, it may go against your style, but if you want your beatmap to be ranked (which I'm assuming is what you're going for) there are certain criteria you have to meet, and rejecting changes with that reasoning will only hinder that process.

Good luck! no kds.
Lobelia

Hobbes2 wrote:

hi



Abhor's Hard

00:07:491 (1) - This extended slider is skipping the sound on 00:07:671 - (which is a downbeat even) so I think it's better to just be a 1/2 sliderfixed

00:15:623 (1) - this NC isn't neededfixed

00:23:575 (6) - NC should be here since downbeatfixed

01:24:117 (5,1) - This jump is a bit excessivei reduce the distance~

01:47:430 (1) - This diff ends so much earlier than the other ones, the drain time is a whopping 8 seconds shorterumm,i will consider about it but the guest diff not must follow the other diffs,and i think end at here also sound fine :)
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  • Nirvana

00:15:262 (2,5) - 没包好。。往下挪一点就完美了
00:15:783 (4,1) - ^
保持这个滑条形状的话可能不太好包,因为右边已经顶到边界了。。感觉拉成这样会好一点?
https://puu.sh/qW3g0/caea046cf8.png
00:37:129 (2,4) - 没包好,00:37:129 (2) - 的尾放在00:35:051 (2) - 上就行
01:15:442 (1) - 不对称的S形滑条看着有点那啥。。我的话会选择开GS拉一个标准的再缩放调整
像这样https://puu.sh/qW3R4/c2cfe6c84f.png
01:31:346 (3) - ^
01:45:804 (5) - ^
01:43:816 (1) - 我的建议是放在这里https://puu.sh/qW4c2/8c0e78812e.png
01:47:430 (1) - 蝴蝶不对称 而且感觉略僵硬。。这图https://osu.ppy.sh/s/311463末尾有一个滑条可以作为参考

摸的全是关于Mapping style的东西。。改不改应该都是rankable的。。每个人想法都不一样,不想改的话就不用回了(
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kanor

Level9 wrote:

搞事
  • Nirvana

00:15:262 (2,5) - 没包好。。往下挪一点就完美了好,改了
00:15:783 (4,1) - ^ OK
保持这个滑条形状的话可能不太好包,因为右边已经顶到边界了。。感觉拉成这样会好一点? OK
https://puu.sh/qW3g0/caea046cf8.png
00:37:129 (2,4) - 没包好,00:37:129 (2) - 的尾放在00:35:051 (2) - 上就行
01:15:442 (1) - 不对称的S形滑条看着有点那啥。。我的话会选择开GS拉一个标准的再缩放调整 尽量改了,中间红点看起来有点僵硬就没用
像这样https://puu.sh/qW3R4/c2cfe6c84f.png
01:31:346 (3) - ^
01:45:804 (5) - ^
01:43:816 (1) - 我的建议是放在这里https://puu.sh/qW4c2/8c0e78812e.png
01:47:430 (1) - 蝴蝶不对称 而且感觉略僵硬。。这图https://osu.ppy.sh/s/311463末尾有一个滑条可以作为参考 这个图里的我摆不动......改了几个描点,这个不用记事本改坐标估计很难完全对称了(

摸的全是关于Mapping style的东西。。改不改应该都是rankable的。。每个人想法都不一样,不想改的话就不用回了(
可以,很强 :)
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