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JauiPlaY wrote:

hihi~
now let's see...
[General]
nice song~
and i think you should mapping till the end, very very seriously.
I dunno, I think it ends at a good spot. If I change my mind later I'll fill it in, but argh effort! >_<

[Beginner]
nicely playable but is it really a beginner diff? imo it's too hard for beginners XD
I think it's fine for beginners.
00:18:461(3) - new combo.
I'm trying to keep the combos mostly with the music.
00:47:880(1) - the spinner is too short, try some other things here.
Yeah this was rather annoying. It's probably too short for Beginner, but I couldn't really move it or lengthen it without it messing up the flow. I've just removed it.
01:29:686(5) - new combo.
Done.
01:35:300(1) - remove new combo.
Yeah that was an accident, thanks.
01:35:880(1) - i think this spinner do not needs any vocal. try to reduce the sound volume?
I've lowered the hitsound for that a bit.

[Normal]
00:17:106(x) - add a note.
I dun wanna... :(
00:33:945(6) - new combo.
Done.
00:40:138(1) - remove new combo.
Done.
01:31:041(1) - the spinner does not fits the lyric...
I've extended the spinner a bit and lowered the hitsound.

[Hyper]
00:18:267(3) - try to overlay the next note?
00:22:138(4) - ^
Uhh... I don't get you :/
00:27:751(4,5) - don't like this jumpoh well...
I do...
00:32:977(2) - try to overlay the next note?
00:34:526(5) - ^
Still don't get you.

[Another]
00:19:622(2) - add clap
I prefer the whistle.
00:19:816(x) - add a note with clap
Don't wanna... >_>
01:04:912(1) - quite noisy...
I removed some claps.
01:20:396 - 01:23:299 - maybe use some jump here? also you can make the hitsound very light at first, but more and more heavy with the combo.
Nice idea, but I think I like it as it is.

great song and great map.
so
star~
Thanks. :)
posted
good><
star :D
posted
very very niice...maybe map hyper and another full lenght

special kiai effect storyboard if u like

Download: Kiai effect.zip
posted

XepherX3 wrote:

very very niice...maybe map hyper and another full lenght

special kiai effect storyboard if u like

[attachment=0:24e8a]Kiai effect.zip[/attachment:24e8a]
Wow, thanks for kudosu star. :)
That's two suggestions for an extended map, so I'll do that tonight.
Also the storyboard you supplied is just a blank one... >_>
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It forgot to put it.
posted
hmm

oh well place this in the .osb

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posted
Ok as per request in IRC:

Here is some Ayeen's mod:

Beginner:
All seem good except silence on 02:03:654

Normal:
AR+2
00:38:396 Delete (7)
02:03:654 Make it silence here
Funny thing is i think your normal is much harder than hyper, maybe that because of much circles here compared to your hyper.

Hyper:
AR+2
01:02:396 (1,2,3,4,5) make it more curvy (Nazi nazi mod :) )
01:03:945 (1,2,3,4,5) ^
01:54:461 (1,2,3,4) Hitsound on blue tick is odd/ not rythmic with song. Either make the blue tick silence or make circles on white and red ticks. For me, 8 circles with finish on every red ticks here is sound better. just suggestion here.
02:03:654 make it silence here.

Another:
Hitsound suggestion from me
00:13:816 (1) Delete clap
00:14:009 (2,3,4,5,6,7) add finish on (3,4,6,7)
00:15:751 (1) add finish
00:15:945 (2,3,4,5,6,7) add finish on (2,4,5,7)
00:17:299 (3) remove clap, add finish
00:17:686 (6) ^
00:20:396 (3) ^
00:20:783 (6) ^
02:03:654 make it silence here
The rest should just leave it.

Mostly suggestion :)

Good luck in ranking the 3rd map :)
posted

Ayeen wrote:

Ok as per request in IRC:

Here is some Ayeen's mod:
Beginner:
All seem good except silence on 02:03:654
kk

Normal:
AR+2
+1
00:38:396 Delete (7)
No :(
02:03:654 Make it silence here
Yep
Funny thing is i think your normal is much harder than hyper, maybe that because of much circles here compared to your hyper.
Hyper has more jumps.

Hyper:
AR+2
Yep
01:02:396 (1,2,3,4,5) make it more curvy (Nazi nazi mod :) )
01:03:945 (1,2,3,4,5) ^
Done
01:54:461 (1,2,3,4) Hitsound on blue tick is odd/ not rythmic with song. Either make the blue tick silence or make circles on white and red ticks. For me, 8 circles with finish on every red ticks here is sound better. just suggestion here.
I made the bounce and end on each slider quieter.
02:03:654 make it silence here.
Yep

Another:
Hitsound suggestion from me
00:13:816 (1) Delete clap
Hmm... ok.
00:14:009 (2,3,4,5,6,7) add finish on (3,4,6,7)
00:15:751 (1) add finish
00:15:945 (2,3,4,5,6,7) add finish on (2,4,5,7)
I don't want that many finishes.
00:17:299 (3) remove clap, add finish
Ok
00:17:686 (6) ^
00:20:396 (3) ^
00:20:783 (6) ^
I'll leave these ones I think.
02:03:654 make it silence here
Yep
The rest should just leave it.

Mostly suggestion :)

Good luck in ranking the 3rd map :)
Thanks! :D
posted
3.08 star is too high for the easiest diff :o

~Beginner~
00:47:880 - add note (?)

~Normal~
Fine.

~Hyper~
00:27:751 (4) OR (5) - new combo
00:36:848 (3) - ^
01:40:332 (5) - ^

~Another~
Volume levels are different from other diffs.
01:12:654 (7) - new combo
01:12:848 (1) - remove new combo


+Star
posted

DJPop wrote:

3.08 star is too high for the easiest diff :o
I was hoping no-one would notice... ;) Fixed.

~Beginner~
00:47:880 - add note (?)
Added note and slider.

~Normal~
Fine.

~Hyper~
00:27:751 (4) OR (5) - new combo
Done.
00:36:848 (3) - ^
Done.
01:40:332 (5) - ^
Done, and I also changed the first chorus's version of it.

~Another~
Volume levels are different from other diffs.
I might leave this, because it sounds like a mess if I match the volumes with the other diffs.
01:12:654 (7) - new combo
Done.
01:12:848 (1) - remove new combo
Done.

+Star
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I ilke :)
posted
star- :)
posted
HI
Here is my m4m of http://osu.ppy.sh/s/27700
All suggestions

[Beginner]
Ah..I think it's an Easy but not Beginner
00:40:138 (2,3,4,5) - noisy
00:56:977 (4,5,1,2,3,4) - things on red line is too hard for a beginner I think
01:09:364 (4,5,1,2) - ^
01:46:525 (4,5,1,2,3) - ^
01:50:977 (1,2,3) - change to slider
02:02:203 (1) - end at 02:05:299 ?

[Normal]
00:47:880 (1) - short
02:02:203 (1) - end at 02:05:299 ?

[Hyper]
AR+1
02:02:203 (1) - end at 02:05:299 ?

[Another]
AR+1
02:02:396 (1) - end at 02:05:299 ?

Good map~
Star~
posted

wcx19911123 wrote:

HI
Here is my m4m of http://osu.ppy.sh/s/27700
All suggestions
[Beginner]
Ah..I think it's an Easy but not Beginner
For my maps, generally Beginner = Easy, Normal = Normal, Hyper = Hard, Another = Insane.
00:40:138 (2,3,4,5) - noisy
I think it fits.
00:56:977 (4,5,1,2,3,4) - things on red line is too hard for a beginner I think
No. :(
01:09:364 (4,5,1,2) - ^
^
01:46:525 (4,5,1,2,3) - ^
^
01:50:977 (1,2,3) - change to slider
^
02:02:203 (1) - end at 02:05:299 ?
I want it to end on the bar.

To be honest the reason I said no to the Beginner changes is because when I simplified things the star rating went UP (over 3). I have no idea how osu! calculates that, but it's fail. :/

[Normal]
00:47:880 (1) - short
It's fine for normal.
02:02:203 (1) - end at 02:05:299 ?
See above.

[Hyper]
AR+1
02:02:203 (1) - end at 02:05:299 ?
See above.

[Another]
AR+1
02:02:396 (1) - end at 02:05:299 ?
See above.

Good map~
Star~
Thanks anyway, kudosu for putting in a decent effort. ;)
posted
Not doing Another because it's such a high level of difficulty that I feel I can't mod it properly. Anyways...

All of these suggestions I recommend you try out, and then just revert back if you don't like how it plays. Pretty much all of these are "feel" things, really.

Hyper:

The main problem here is having too many sliders that disrupt the map's flow. The input of a "click" is different from that of a "hold and release", if that makes sense. Do remember that when I'm referring to splitting up a slider, I mean to place hit circles timeline-wise where the sliders start and end; you'll often have to make new patterns.

00:13:816 (1,2,3) - Try making this a combo of five hit circles. The sliders feel weird. Place them at the sliders' start and end points.
00:17:299 (1) - Try making this two hit circles, where the sliders start and end.
00:20:396 (1) - This would also feel better as two hit circles instead of a slider.
00:23:880 (2,3,4,5) - I would just get rid of the sliders here period, and make these hit circles. Wherever there's currently a slider start, end, or repeat, put a hit circle there (with a different pattern of course).
00:36:267 (2) - Try splitting this slider up, also. It feels better to me.
00:39:557 (4,5) - I would move these away from (2,3). I feel movement between 3 and 4, and no movement just feels weird.
00:45:945 (3) - Again, try making it into 2 hit circles.
01:08:396 (1,2) - As usual, try splitting these sliders up into hit circles where these sliders start and end.
01:13:429 (3,4,5,6) - I would add another hit circle on the red tick between 3 and 4 and make this a stream. Just me, though.
01:20:396 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This feels cramped to me. That's just me, though.
01:45:171 (1,2,3,4,5) - I feel that these should all be hit circles.
01:47:687 (1) - Feels weird, probably just me, though.

Good map overall, though. I just think it would play better.

Normal:

I would space the 1/2s out so they're not overlapping like that. Just me, though. Only thing I can find is a few 1/2s that just play too fast for this difficulty.

00:14:783 (3) - Consider deleting that. Feels too fast here IMO.
00:16:138 (5,6,7,8) - Consider deleting this and putting a 1-beat-long repeat slider 1/2 before the (5).
00:25:428 (5,6) - Consider making this a stack of just 3 1/2 notes.
00:38:590 (1) - This slider looks funny. :P
01:27:557 (3) - Feels too fast IMO, try deleting it.
01:29:106 (3) - ^

Pretty good map. Flowed better than Hard IMO.

Beginner:

I'd tap that. ~

Good map set overall. Star. I feel Hyper could flow better, but that's about all I could really find. Mod4Mod this was, BTW. *posts in your Mod Queue now*
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Ekaru wrote:

Not doing Another because it's such a high level of difficulty that I feel I can't mod it properly. Anyways...
Awwww cmon it's not that hard... D:

All of these suggestions I recommend you try out, and then just revert back if you don't like how it plays. Pretty much all of these are "feel" things, really.

Hyper:

The main problem here is having too many sliders that disrupt the map's flow. The input of a "click" is different from that of a "hold and release", if that makes sense. Do remember that when I'm referring to splitting up a slider, I mean to place hit circles timeline-wise where the sliders start and end; you'll often have to make new patterns.
I like sliders. :(

00:13:816 (1,2,3) - Try making this a combo of five hit circles. The sliders feel weird. Place them at the sliders' start and end points.
Nope.
00:17:299 (1) - Try making this two hit circles, where the sliders start and end.
^
00:20:396 (1) - This would also feel better as two hit circles instead of a slider.
^
00:23:880 (2,3,4,5) - I would just get rid of the sliders here period, and make these hit circles. Wherever there's currently a slider start, end, or repeat, put a hit circle there (with a different pattern of course).
^
00:36:267 (2) - Try splitting this slider up, also. It feels better to me.
^
00:39:557 (4,5) - I would move these away from (2,3). I feel movement between 3 and 4, and no movement just feels weird.
^
00:45:945 (3) - Again, try making it into 2 hit circles.
^
01:08:396 (1,2) - As usual, try splitting these sliders up into hit circles where these sliders start and end.
^
01:13:429 (3,4,5,6) - I would add another hit circle on the red tick between 3 and 4 and make this a stream. Just me, though.
Added that circle and rearranged a bit, but not as a stream.
01:20:396 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This feels cramped to me. That's just me, though.
That's because it's 0.75x.
01:45:171 (1,2,3,4,5) - I feel that these should all be hit circles.
You just hate sliders! D:
01:47:687 (1) - Feels weird, probably just me, though.
Maybe, but it matches the vocals.

Good map overall, though. I just think it would play better.

Normal:

I would space the 1/2s out so they're not overlapping like that. Just me, though. Only thing I can find is a few 1/2s that just play too fast for this difficulty.

00:14:783 (3) - Consider deleting that. Feels too fast here IMO.
I think it's fine.
00:16:138 (5,6,7,8) - Consider deleting this and putting a 1-beat-long repeat slider 1/2 before the (5).
Nah.
00:25:428 (5,6) - Consider making this a stack of just 3 1/2 notes.
Hmm... I tried it but it messes up the spacing with the next combo and I don't want to move that.
00:38:590 (1) - This slider looks funny. :P
If by funny you mean AWESOME. I can't really think of anything more symmetric to do with it, so it'll be ok I think.
01:27:557 (3) - Feels too fast IMO, try deleting it.
I like it.
01:29:106 (3) - ^
^

Pretty good map. Flowed better than Hard IMO.

Beginner:

I'd tap that. ~

Good map set overall. Star. I feel Hyper could flow better, but that's about all I could really find. Mod4Mod this was, BTW. *posts in your Mod Queue now*
I'm a stickler for symmetry (in certain areas), so if a change would mess it up, I'll skip it.
Thanks. :D
posted
01:14:203 - Logically, kiai time should end here instead of at 01:05:299. Seems to do this on difficulties but Another anyway. As for the second point, it should restart at 01:51:364 and end at 02:03:751; the storyboard should also continue until that point and not fade out until then.

Normal:

Very similar to Hyper in terms of object density and difficulty. In fact, it only has 8 less objects than Hyper. I highly recommend you tone this down a bit by removing some stuff. That will give the set as a whole more variety and appeal to a wider audience.

Hyper:

00:15:170 (3) - Move one space to the right on grid level 3 to make the spacing more consistent and less unnecessarily overlappy.
00:25:622 (5) - Move one space down on grid level for more correct symmetry.
00:27:751 (1,2) - I think this jump is too cruel for this difficulty. I'd switch the start and end points around on 2 to combat this.
00:36:267 (2,1) - Same jump problem. Actually, it's more like a recurring theme. I'd still make these styles of jumps weaker though.

Another:

Hitsounds on this difficulty are a lot quieter than the others. I think they're more suitable like this, so change the others to match. This includes the final spinner, don't make it quiet!

01:04:912 (1) - I suggest changing this to a 1/4 kick slider instead because I don't think it makes much sense for this to be 1/8.
01:12:848 (2) - Increase the spacing (moving down three spaces on grid level 3 is adequate) to avoid confusion with this.
01:26:590 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I think it would be a good idea to add whistles to the ends of all of these sliders to complement the changed percussion. This would also make sense at 01:01:816 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) actually.
01:56:783 (3,4) - AAAA UNSYMMETRICAL. So move 4 one space to the right on grid level 3.
posted

Jarby wrote:

01:14:203 - Logically, kiai time should end here instead of at 01:05:299. Seems to do this on difficulties but Another anyway. As for the second point, it should restart at 01:51:364 and end at 02:03:751; the storyboard should also continue until that point and not fade out until then.
Ah thanks, that was an accident from adding the volume change.
As for the second point, the map ended there originally, until I got told to map the rest. Looks like I forgot to fix the kiai for it.


Normal:

Very similar to Hyper in terms of object density and difficulty. In fact, it only has 8 less objects than Hyper. I highly recommend you tone this down a bit by removing some stuff. That will give the set as a whole more variety and appeal to a wider audience.
Removed some stuff.

Hyper:

00:15:170 (3) - Move one space to the right on grid level 3 to make the spacing more consistent and less unnecessarily overlappy.
Ok.
00:25:622 (5) - Move one space down on grid level for more correct symmetry.
That breaks spacing.
00:27:751 (1,2) - I think this jump is too cruel for this difficulty. I'd switch the start and end points around on 2 to combat this.
I tried that but then I need to move (3) too and I couldn't find an aesthetic spot for it.
00:36:267 (2,1) - Same jump problem. Actually, it's more like a recurring theme. I'd still make these styles of jumps weaker though.
Yeah this one's a bit of a killer. I've reduced it somewhat.

Another:

Hitsounds on this difficulty are a lot quieter than the others. I think they're more suitable like this, so change the others to match. This includes the final spinner, don't make it quiet!
I've changed the hitsound volumes, but I want to reduce the impact from the final spinner.

01:04:912 (1) - I suggest changing this to a 1/4 kick slider instead because I don't think it makes much sense for this to be 1/8.
Ok.
01:12:848 (2) - Increase the spacing (moving down three spaces on grid level 3 is adequate) to avoid confusion with this.
I moved the following notes up instead.
01:26:590 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I think it would be a good idea to add whistles to the ends of all of these sliders to complement the changed percussion. This would also make sense at 01:01:816 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) actually.
Too noisy. D:
01:56:783 (3,4) - AAAA UNSYMMETRICAL. So move 4 one space to the right on grid level 3.
That's the first time I've ever done that... :)
Thanks. :)
I'll resubmit once the SB is fixed up.
posted
posted
General:
- Remove the letterboxing. During breaks with the flashing-ish storyboard, it looks weird and ugly :/

Beginner:
- This is a pretty hard easy diff., because of the very frequent beats on the white ticks, eg.
00:18:461 (3,4,5,6) -
00:40:138 (2,3,4,5,1) -

Stuff like that would normally be in a normal diff.

Normal:
- Rename to Normal+? Otherwise make it easier a bit, this one is hard-ish because of the beats on the red ticks, eg.
00:14:590 (2,3,4) -
00:16:138 (6,7,8,9) -

Another:
- A lot of the streams and mini-streams don't really fit, they feel more like they're there just to make the difficulty more difficult.
00:29:299 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Personally, I don't like this. It looks weird and it plays funny imo.
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