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EGOIST - Ame, Kimi wo Tsurete

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Mekki
Kept my old mapping and mapped the end part
osu file format v14

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[Metadata]
Title:Ame, Kimi wo tsurete
TitleUnicode:Ame, Kimi wo tsurete
Artist:EGOIST
ArtistUnicode:EGOIST
Creator:Seto Kousuke
Version:Mk's Easy
Source:Guilty Crown
Tags:ryo supercell inori yuzuriha shu ouma extra terrestrial biological entities ギルティクラウン MkGuh
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Monstrata
Copy my metadata :D.
Topic Starter
Seto Kousuke

Monstrata wrote:

Copy my metadata :D.
ohhh yeah...and sorry for stealing your mp3 without asking also aaaa *dies*
Ataraxia
i don't accept any diffname alteration in my GD with seto
vao se ferrar
Mekki
né non manos se esses BN gringo aí vier atacar nois ataca de volta, infelizmente essa é vida monamoures, ninguém vence os BR.
Topic Starter
Seto Kousuke
acho que não precisa mudar, o nome ta simples e bem instintivo em relação a música~

não vejo nada demais
Logic Agent
Hiya! M4m stuff~

[General]
  1. Disable countdown on your Easy and Normal diffs
  2. Enable Widescreen Support on your insane diff
[Sotarks' Extra]
  1. it's perfect
  2. 00:51:430 (1,2,3,1) - Imo the big spacing used here isn't really fitting. There's definitely a spike in the music but it's not this drastic. Maybe something like this would be more fitting, because the combo color change can show that a new pattern is coming as well with the spike with the lil stream.
[Insane]
  1. 00:07:082 (1,3) - blanket could be better
  2. 00:10:343 (2,3) - these two are slightly off from being perfectly stacked with 00:08:876 (2)
  3. 00:13:604 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - the spacing of this section is kinda big when compared to 00:10:995 (1,2,3,4,1,2) this section with the same music. I suggest toning down the second section a bit.
  4. 00:13:441 (6) - you could remove this note if you wanted to, just a thought
  5. 00:22:734 (1,2) - blanket could be better (ctrl g the slider to see how to line it up better hehe)
  6. 00:25:832 (2,4) - maybe move the 4 so that it blankets into the 2?
  7. 00:52:082 (1,2,3,4,1) - maybe move this up a bit so that it's equally between 00:51:756 (3,4)
  8. 00:57:952 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - check your hitsounds here, something sounds off with your whistles and I'm too lazy to figure out what exactly. Just know that the hitsound scheme you had at the very beginning of the kiai was good and you should continue with it lol
  9. 01:03:821 (3,4) - make the 4 closer to the 3? I think it cleans up this bit aesthetically
  10. 01:05:778 (1,2) - I would just make this a 1/2 imo
  11. 01:05:941 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I feel like the spacing of this section could be improved, 01:06:104 (3,4,5,6) being all the same with 01:06:593 (6,7) being basically double kinda feels bad, not to mention aesthetically using the same ds in a triangle pattern is kinda boring.
  12. 01:08:387 (1) - move to the right a bit imo, easy to avoid touching with 01:07:571 (3) this
  13. 01:14:895 (1,2,3,4,5) - angles here are kinda meh, maybe make them sharper... like this or something


Hope the mod helps! Gl~
Topic Starter
Seto Kousuke
Logic Agent's Mod

Logic Agent wrote:

Hiya! M4m stuff~

[General]
  1. Disable countdown on your Easy and Normal diffs - done
  2. Enable Widescreen Support on your insane diff
- okay
[Insane]
  1. 00:07:082 (1,3) - blanket could be better - yeah, adjusted it
  2. 00:10:343 (2,3) - these two are slightly off from being perfectly stacked with 00:08:876 (2) - hawk eyes, thank you c:
  3. 00:13:604 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - the spacing of this section is kinda big when compared to 00:10:995 (1,2,3,4,1,2) this section with the same music. I suggest toning down the second section a bit. - hmmm yeah, i made a similar thing as the first section, now it's more consistent
  4. 00:13:441 (6) - you could remove this note if you wanted to, just a thought - yeah, good idea o:
  5. 00:22:734 (1,2) - blanket could be better (ctrl g the slider to see how to line it up better hehe) - seems fine but adjusted it a bit
  6. 00:25:832 (2,4) - maybe move the 4 so that it blankets into the 2? - I wanted to make a small jump to the slider since there is more intensity there, but i'll do your way since it makes the map looks more polished :3 nice
  7. 00:52:082 (1,2,3,4,1) - maybe move this up a bit so that it's equally between 00:51:756 (3,4) - ohh nice
  8. 00:57:952 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - check your hitsounds here, something sounds off with your whistles and I'm too lazy to figure out what exactly. Just know that the hitsound scheme you had at the very beginning of the kiai was good and you should continue with it lol - ahh it was 1 missing whistle, found it, thanks
  9. 01:03:821 (3,4) - make the 4 closer to the 3? I think it cleans up this bit aesthetically - hmmm okay
  10. 01:05:778 (1,2) - I would just make this a 1/2 imo - hmmm, nah...i think the muted kick sliders helps a bit on the jump from the stream to the single note...but i'll keep an eye on this and change both times if needed c:
  11. 01:05:941 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I feel like the spacing of this section could be improved, 01:06:104 (3,4,5,6) being all the same with 01:06:593 (6,7) being basically double kinda feels bad, not to mention aesthetically using the same ds in a triangle pattern is kinda boring. - Remade entire pattern
  12. 01:08:387 (1) - move to the right a bit imo, easy to avoid touching with 01:07:571 (3) this -
  13. 01:14:895 (1,2,3,4,5) - angles here are kinda meh, maybe make them sharper... like this or something
- adjusted a bit

Hope the mod helps! Gl~ - Sankyu c:

<3
Net0
Sobre a estrutura do Seto Insane:

Você captou bem as transições da música e criou as patterns de acordo com elas, gj. Basicamente está assim:

Soft Intro 00:00:561 - 00:10:995 -
Intro com bateria: 00:10:995 - 00:21:430 -
1° Verso: 00:21:430 - 00:42:300 -
2°Verso: 00:42:300 - 00:53:957 -

Chorus kiai: 00:54:039 - 01:16:199 -
Vocal outro: 01:16:199 - 01:36:742 -

Vou falar sobre algumas delas analisando principalmente a estrutura/consistência e apontar possíveis falhas ou dar sugestões para ficar ainda mais legal :D

Soft Intro 00:00:561 - 00:10:995 -
A estrutura aqui é essa;

I)00:00:561 (1,2,3,4) –
II)00:02:028 (1,2,3,4) –
I) 00:03:169 (1,2,3,4) -
II) 00:04:637 (1,2,3,4) –

Essas mesmas frases se repetem mas vc varia no pattern até pra não ficar chato fica assim:

III) 00:05:778 (1,2,3,4,5) –
IV)00:07:082 (1,2,3,4) –
III) 00:08:387 (1,2,3,4) –
IV)00:09:854 (1,2,3,4) –

O mapping e os combos estão ótimos, mas eu vou dar uma sugestão que pode melhorar ainda mais isso:

a)Você poderia usar as combo colors diferente nessa parte da música.

Ao invés de usar o padrão 1/2/3/4 + 1/2/3/4; 00:00:561 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 00:03:169 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - + 00:05:778 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - 00:08:387 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Roxo/Rosa/Vermelho Forte/Vermelho fraco

Você poderia tentar 1/2/1/2 + 1/2 1/2 - Rosa/Vermelho fraco

A sugestão é por esse motivo: Os dois primeiros combos são muito idênticos e semelhantes mas o mapping muda a partir daqui 00:10:995 (1) - .

b)Como vc pode ver todos os combos estão terminando em 4, com uma exceção.
Eu até entendo que isso é muito preciosismo, mas não deixa de ser uma ideia. Mudar esse combo 00:05:778 (1,2,3,4,5) - .

Primeiro motivo: O que eu falei sobre a estruturação dos combos.
Segundo motivo: Todos os 7 combos usam o mesmo flow angular (triângulos) ,mas esse combo em específico 00:05:778 (1,2,3,4,5) - segue um outro tipo de flow (que por sinal eu gosto bastante). O que acha de ajustar essa pattern pra manter no mesmo flow?

Intro com bateria: 00:10:995 - 00:21:430 –
Eu recomendo que vc faça a mesma repetição também nessa parte, mas ao invés de usar as combo colors mais opacas, vc pode usar as mais fortes nessa parte.

1° Verso: 00:21:430 - 00:42:300 –
Aqui você está usando um padrão 1-4+1-3 pra cada linha do vocal
I)00:21:430 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Totsuzen furidashita ame
II)00:24:039 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Tsuchikemuri wo agete *
I)00:26:647 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Kono machi ni ochitekita
II)00:29:256 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Gou gou oto tate
III)00:31:213 (1,2,3) – Transição
I)00:31:865 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Kasa wo motanu hitotachi wa
II)00:34:474 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) – Nurekisou Seija no mure
I)00:37:082 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) – Futari nagemetetanda *
II)00:38:387 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,1) – Ate mo naku Doko yuku?
II)00:41:647 (1,1) - Transição

Tem algumas coisas que podem ser melhoradas aqui:

a)Tem dois combos fugindo da regra do 4+3;
Caso você queira manter tudo uniforme aqui vão algumas ideias:
Na segunda parte antes da transição full 1-4+1-3, mudar esses dois circles 00:39:365 (3,4) – por um slider não afetaria tanto assim. Muda por um slider 1/2 fazendo um blanket com o sliderend disso aqui 00:39:691 (1) - . Outro efeito interessante nessa mudança é que todo esse combo 00:38:387 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,1,1,1) - vai ficar feito inteiramente por sliders. O mesmo se aplica a esses dois circles 00:26:321 (3,4) - . O slider poderia ser assim:


b)As combo colors estão seguindo um padrão até a primeira transição e na sequência elas estão seguindo outro. Na primeira parte elas estão indo do vermelho forte para o fraco e assim sucessivamente. Na segunda parte no entanto, elas estão indo do vermelho fraco para o roxo forte e ficou um tanto quanto aleatório. Se vc puder manter a estrutura da mesma forma que a anterior ficaria bem mais legal.

c)Alguns Inherited Points

4. Offset: 31.376ms BPM: Inherited (1x)

Eu realmente não entendi o motivo de acelerar justamente nesse tick vermelho. Nesse caso é gosto pessoal meu, mas fazer essa aceleração pro kick slider ficaria melhor aqui 00:31:539 - ; com dois kick sliders 1/4sendo um deles aqui 00:31:539 - e o outro aqui 00:31:702 (3) - .



O motivo é simples, o som que parece ser acelerado só acontece aqui 00:31:620 - . O tick branco e vermelho que o precedem são exatamente a mesma coisa que já vinha acontecendo anteriormente. Mas como vc não pode iniciar nesse tick azul, iniciar no branco me parece razoável, mas no vermelho já pode ser que esteja iniciando muito antes.

Obs: Isso aqui está legal e divertido 00:40:995 (1,1) - , mas algumas pessoas podem achar ruim, enfim, eu entendi e concordo que funciona. Mas algum BN pode acabar não gostando da mudança de

6. Offset: 40.914ms BPM: Inherited (0,8x)
7. Offset: 41.240ms BPM: Inherited (0,9x)

Isso porque nem todos vão se dar ao trabalho de escutar “doko yoku” mais de uma vez pra perceber que o yo fica um pouco mais alto. Caso seja necessário veja se realmente vale a pena manter isso. Só um head-up.



2°Verso: 00:42:300 - 00:53:957 –
O segundo verse tem um ritmo diferente.
A frase musical aqui começa a se repetir nesses pontos

00:42:300 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2) –
00:44:908 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3) –
00:47:517 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2) –

Na ultima parte ela se mistura com a stream então não tem problema em ser diferente 00:50:126 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - .

Entretanto como vc pôde ver, os combos nessa parte estão baseados nos ticks brancos que finalizam e iniciam o ritmo 1/4, mas considerando seu mapping isso gerou combos meio aleatórios nessa parte.

Fica aqui então a sugestão:

00:42:300 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) –
00:44:908 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) –
00:47:517 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2) –

Tendo em mente essa organização acho que o kiai vc vai acabar repensando se vai manter da mesma forma ou mudar.

Sobre o mapping não tenho nada a acrescentar, está tudo bem encaixado (fiz algumas sugestões ^^), pronto pra rank. Não fiz um mod mais completo porque acho que não preciso passar pelo mapa inteiro, está tudo indo bem em ambas as dificuldades sua e do Sotarks. Boa sorte com esse set o/
Topic Starter
Seto Kousuke

Net0 wrote:

Sobre a estrutura do Seto Insane: - não é seto's insane porque o mapset é meu cara... HADEOUHDEAUO

Você captou bem as transições da música e criou as patterns de acordo com elas, gj. Basicamente está assim:

Soft Intro 00:00:561 - 00:10:995 -
Intro com bateria: 00:10:995 - 00:21:430 -
1° Verso: 00:21:430 - 00:42:300 -
2°Verso: 00:42:300 - 00:53:957 -

Chorus kiai: 00:54:039 - 01:16:199 -
Vocal outro: 01:16:199 - 01:36:742 -

Vou falar sobre algumas delas analisando principalmente a estrutura/consistência e apontar possíveis falhas ou dar sugestões para ficar ainda mais legal :D

Soft Intro 00:00:561 - 00:10:995 -
A estrutura aqui é essa;

I)00:00:561 (1,2,3,4) –
II)00:02:028 (1,2,3,4) –
I) 00:03:169 (1,2,3,4) -
II) 00:04:637 (1,2,3,4) –

Essas mesmas frases se repetem mas vc varia no pattern até pra não ficar chato fica assim:

III) 00:05:778 (1,2,3,4,5) –
IV)00:07:082 (1,2,3,4) –
III) 00:08:387 (1,2,3,4) –
IV)00:09:854 (1,2,3,4) –

O mapping e os combos estão ótimos, mas eu vou dar uma sugestão que pode melhorar ainda mais isso:

a)Você poderia usar as combo colors diferente nessa parte da música. Eu não padronizei nenhuma combo colour porque agora que o mapset ta send modado, então as patterns podem mudar, ritmos podem mudar...então é inútil eu padronizar NC agora se qualquer mudança vai desestruturar tudo

Ao invés de usar o padrão 1/2/3/4 + 1/2/3/4; 00:00:561 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 00:03:169 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - + 00:05:778 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - 00:08:387 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Roxo/Rosa/Vermelho Forte/Vermelho fraco

Você poderia tentar 1/2/1/2 + 1/2 1/2 - Rosa/Vermelho fraco

A sugestão é por esse motivo: Os dois primeiros combos são muito idênticos e semelhantes mas o mapping muda a partir daqui 00:10:995 (1) - .

b)Como vc pode ver todos os combos estão terminando em 4, com uma exceção.
Eu até entendo que isso é muito preciosismo, mas não deixa de ser uma ideia. Mudar esse combo 00:05:778 (1,2,3,4,5) - .

Primeiro motivo: O que eu falei sobre a estruturação dos combos.
Segundo motivo: Todos os 7 combos usam o mesmo flow angular (triângulos) ,mas esse combo em específico 00:05:778 (1,2,3,4,5) - segue um outro tipo de flow (que por sinal eu gosto bastante). O que acha de ajustar essa pattern pra manter no mesmo flow? nah, ta de boa

Intro com bateria: 00:10:995 - 00:21:430 –
Eu recomendo que vc faça a mesma repetição também nessa parte, mas ao invés de usar as combo colors mais opacas, vc pode usar as mais fortes nessa parte. - ja expliquei sobre as NC

1° Verso: 00:21:430 - 00:42:300 –
Aqui você está usando um padrão 1-4+1-3 pra cada linha do vocal
I)00:21:430 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Totsuzen furidashita ame
II)00:24:039 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Tsuchikemuri wo agete *
I)00:26:647 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Kono machi ni ochitekita
II)00:29:256 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Gou gou oto tate
III)00:31:213 (1,2,3) – Transição
I)00:31:865 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Kasa wo motanu hitotachi wa
II)00:34:474 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) – Nurekisou Seija no mure
I)00:37:082 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) – Futari nagemetetanda *
II)00:38:387 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,1) – Ate mo naku Doko yuku?
II)00:41:647 (1,1) - Transição

Tem algumas coisas que podem ser melhoradas aqui:

a)Tem dois combos fugindo da regra do 4+3;
Caso você queira manter tudo uniforme aqui vão algumas ideias:
Na segunda parte antes da transição full 1-4+1-3, mudar esses dois circles 00:39:365 (3,4) – por um slider não afetaria tanto assim. Muda por um slider 1/2 fazendo um blanket com o sliderend disso aqui 00:39:691 (1) - . Outro efeito interessante nessa mudança é que todo esse combo 00:38:387 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,1,1,1) - vai ficar feito inteiramente por sliders. O mesmo se aplica a esses dois circles 00:26:321 (3,4) - . o próximo slider 1/1 em ambos os casos é uma intensidade, eu preciso disso pra dar uma ênfase maior, principalmente no caso do 00:26:321 (3,4) - esse ângulo com os 2 cliques é uma ênfase suficiente já, se eu botar um slider onde o start dele fica logo ali na blanket, fica mt fraco e fora do padrão que eu tava fazendo

b)As combo colors estão seguindo um padrão até a primeira transição e na sequência elas estão seguindo outro. Na primeira parte elas estão indo do vermelho forte para o fraco e assim sucessivamente. Na segunda parte no entanto, elas estão indo do vermelho fraco para o roxo forte e ficou um tanto quanto aleatório. Se vc puder manter a estrutura da mesma forma que a anterior ficaria bem mais legal. não mantive estrutura nenhuma, todas as combo colours estão random aedhouaedhuaoed eu só vo padronizar elas (talvez) quando isso estiver bem perto de estar qualified

c)Alguns Inherited Points

4. Offset: 31.376ms BPM: Inherited (1x)

Eu realmente não entendi o motivo de acelerar justamente nesse tick vermelho. Nesse caso é gosto pessoal meu, mas fazer essa aceleração pro kick slider ficaria melhor aqui 00:31:539 - ; com dois kick sliders 1/4sendo um deles aqui 00:31:539 - e o outro aqui 00:31:702 (3) - .

O motivo é simples, o som que parece ser acelerado só acontece aqui 00:31:620 - . O tick branco e vermelho que o precedem são exatamente a mesma coisa que já vinha acontecendo anteriormente. Mas como vc não pode iniciar nesse tick azul, iniciar no branco me parece razoável, mas no vermelho já pode ser que esteja iniciando muito antes. - é 1 single e 2 triplets, se eu não acelerasse aquele reverse slider, ele ia ficar muito pequeno porque eu tava usando 0.75x e isso ia confundir demais, quanto ao outro kick slider, novamente, era pra ser uma triplet, mas eu preferi fazer aquele jogo de 1/4

Obs: Isso aqui está legal e divertido 00:40:995 (1,1) - , mas algumas pessoas podem achar ruim, enfim, eu entendi e concordo que funciona. Mas algum BN pode acabar não gostando da mudança de

6. Offset: 40.914ms BPM: Inherited (0,8x)
7. Offset: 41.240ms BPM: Inherited (0,9x)

Isso porque nem todos vão se dar ao trabalho de escutar “doko yoku” mais de uma vez pra perceber que o yo fica um pouco mais alto. Caso seja necessário veja se realmente vale a pena manter isso. Só um head-up. - Vale a pena e Pau no cu do BN que reclamar disso adeokfdsapfdf o lance dessa pattern é meramente preparar o jogador pro novo ritmo constante de 1/2 enquanto força a leitura um pouco...antes era muito clean e havia varios 1/1, mas a partir daqui eles tem que estar atentos pra reading e pro novo ritmo 1/2



2°Verso: 00:42:300 - 00:53:957 –
O segundo verse tem um ritmo diferente.
A frase musical aqui começa a se repetir nesses pontos

00:42:300 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2) –
00:44:908 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3) –
00:47:517 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2) –

Na ultima parte ela se mistura com a stream então não tem problema em ser diferente 00:50:126 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - .

Entretanto como vc pôde ver, os combos nessa parte estão baseados nos ticks brancos que finalizam e iniciam o ritmo 1/4, mas considerando seu mapping isso gerou combos meio aleatórios nessa parte. - eu to seguindo a guitarra lol

Fica aqui então a sugestão:

00:42:300 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) –
00:44:908 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) –
00:47:517 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2) –

Tendo em mente essa organização acho que o kiai vc vai acabar repensando se vai manter da mesma forma ou mudar. - why? O.o não entendi seu ponto ahdeouhaedou

Sobre o mapping não tenho nada a acrescentar, está tudo bem encaixado (fiz algumas sugestões ^^), pronto pra rank. Não fiz um mod mais completo porque acho que não preciso passar pelo mapa inteiro, está tudo indo bem em ambas as dificuldades sua e do Sotarks. Boa sorte com esse set o/ nois o/
valeus, de qualquer forma, quando tiver mais pronto eu ajeito as NC, não vale a pena agora, nois <3
Asserin
Easy
  1. 01:24:025 (1,2,3) - Its mistake! New players cant read maps and after 01:24:025 (1) - they will see two ways for click 01:25:003 (2,3) - they will feel lost :c
Setoxia's coupled geometric about a tragic love normal
  1. 00:03:658 (2) - should not be used that rigid sliders
  2. 00:16:213 (1) - Its not good idea too ^
  3. 01:00:560 (1,2,3,4) - Really nice pattern, but for hards etc. New players will dead there.
Bastionior
oizinho sorry for delay
[Normal]
  1. 00:29:256 (1) - unrankeable slider shape for a normal diff x-x, apenas extende ela um pouco para que o final nao encoste no inicio, para nao confudir os novatos.
  2. 00:54:039 (1) - same.
[Insane]
  1. 00:31:702 (3) - Creio que está overlap em relação a esse amigo 00:31:865 (1) - .
  2. 00:39:691 (1) - uuh.. a shape desse slider desfavorece a estética das outras patterns que vc fez anteriormente :(, e as outras shapes eram curvadas e retas, essa tinha que ser uma diferentona. Se puder melhorar ela agradeço e muito <3
  3. Ah, tem umas pausas de 1/1 que vc fez em torno dessa sessão 00:42:300 - porém, creio que tem algumas faltando e outras que foram "inesperadas"( como essa: 00:49:310 - , 00:49:963 - ) , que possa ocasionar uma pequena confusão ao jogar, sabe que não sou nazi nem nada do tipo, mas apenas relato algum conflito que possa ocasionar problemas futuramente.
  4. 00:54:691 (3,1,2) - O flow disso está um pouco estranho amigo, creio que o problema esteja nesse slider 00:54:854 (1) - , se possível que possa deixar o slider direcionado para próxima nota ja resolveria o problema.
  5. a mesma coisa em relação a essas 2 notas 00:59:745 (4,5) -
  6. 01:10:669 (4,1) - a transição de uma nota para outra é muito alta para insane amigo, melhor fixar esse.
  7. 01:13:590 (1,2,3,4) - isso tá muito confuso amigo, o flow nessa pattern é quase inexistente amigo, melhor reformular ela, posso fazer um modelo de como ficou na minha visao http://puu.sh/r30tq.jpg.

creio que é isso
Topic Starter
Seto Kousuke
Fofindraz' mod

Kalindraz wrote:

oizinho sorry for delay

[Insane]
  1. 00:31:702 (3) - Creio que está overlap em relação a esse amigo 00:31:865 (1) - - é, eu sei -q
  2. 00:39:691 (1) - uuh.. a shape desse slider desfavorece a estética das outras patterns que vc fez anteriormente :(, e as outras shapes eram curvadas e retas, essa tinha que ser uma diferentona. Se puder melhorar ela agradeço e muito <3 - Indeed, re ajustei a pattern inteira
  3. Ah, tem umas pausas de 1/1 que vc fez em torno dessa sessão 00:42:300 - porém, creio que tem algumas faltando e outras que foram "inesperadas"( como essa: 00:49:310 - , 00:49:963 - ) , que possa ocasionar uma pequena confusão ao jogar, sabe que não sou nazi nem nada do tipo, mas apenas relato algum conflito que possa ocasionar problemas futuramente. - re-estruturei essa parte então, creio estar bem melhor agora
  4. 00:54:691 (3,1,2) - O flow disso está um pouco estranho amigo, creio que o problema esteja nesse slider 00:54:854 (1) - , se possível que possa deixar o slider direcionado para próxima nota ja resolveria o problema. - applied
  5. a mesma coisa em relação a essas 2 notas 00:59:745 (4,5) - -Na real eu gosto desse flow, mas o segundo slider tava feinho, eu fiz uma shape melhorzinha e ajeitei a direção dele, agora está visualmente melhor[
  6. 01:10:669 (4,1) - a transição de uma nota para outra é muito alta para insane amigo, melhor fixar esse. - fixed
  7. 01:13:590 (1,2,3,4) - isso tá muito confuso amigo, o flow nessa pattern é quase inexistente amigo, melhor reformular ela, posso fazer um modelo de como ficou na minha visao http://puu.sh/r30tq.jpg. - dei um remake nessa area

creio que é isso - creio que vc é fofo

bigado <3
Maelstrrom
m4m

General
  • Too much empty space at the end. Consider cutting mp3 file.
Easy and Normal
  • Well done!
Lumael's Hard
  • 01:31:199 (3,4,5,6) - unreadable
Insane
  • 00:38:387 (1) - Ctrl+G (no reason for this spasing and flow)
    00:25:832 (2) - ^
    01:05:696 - add note and make mini stream with 01:05:452 (3,4,5) - triple to the beginning of 01:05:778 (1) -
Sotarks' Extra
  • gray combo colour + gray background = heavy readability problrems. For example here 00:14:582 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -

    00:13:604 (1) - blanket

    Flow:
    00:02:191 (4) - bad flow comparing to other ones. Turn it to the left
    00:32:354 (2) - move to the right side of 00:31:865 (1) -
    00:48:821 (1) - stack slider's end with the beginning of 00:49:310 (3) - and do 00:49:147 (2,3) - as blanket
    00:49:800 (4) - curve to another side
    01:17:829 (3,4,5,6) - make a cross pattern by moving 01:18:482 (6) -
Ataraxia
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apliquei tudo
Ashton
hello nm from my que


--insane--

00:04:147 (3,4) - personally I don't think you should stack here because idk it just feels weird
00:24:039 (1) - I think adding a clap here would be good
00:46:213 (2) - curve this so the sliderend is pointing right to 3
00:58:278 (2,3,4) - imo the fact that you have 2 3 horizantal singletaps ruins the flow
00:59:745 (4) - I don't understand this shape
01:29:242 (1) - move this up more



okay I won't mod the other diffs because yes I don't wan't to mod the other diffs because such a map like this is like really good and i'm not really good meaning i'd probably just point out random suggestions and also the fact that this is a nm meaning that this is a favour not a chore okay bye

good luck :P
Topic Starter
Seto Kousuke

Whirl wrote:

hello nm from my que

mod
--insane--

00:04:147 (3,4) - personally I don't think you should stack here because idk it just feels weird - If you stop to listen to the actual song and have a minimum of musical ear, you'll notice that this note is repeated in the guitar, I translated that to the map, during this entire section
00:24:039 (1) - I think adding a clap here would be good - not necessary, too agressive for this calm part, i'm building the hitsounds around the whistles
00:46:213 (2) - curve this so the sliderend is pointing right to 3 - nah
00:58:278 (2,3,4) - imo the fact that you have 2 3 horizantal singletaps ruins the flow - actually it doesn't, because flow isn't simply putting triangles and stuff like that, the movement isn't agressive neither too linear to hurt the player's aim, it's fine
00:59:745 (4) - I don't understand this shape - Blanket with 00:59:256 (1) - and slider end stacks with 00:59:419 (2) - , it plays like a regular curved vertical slider, but different, it's not that difficult to understand
01:29:242 (1) - move this up more - nah, but a changed this a bit



okay I won't mod the other diffs because yes I don't wan't to mod the other diffs because such a map like this is like really good and i'm not really good meaning i'd probably just point out random suggestions and also the fact that this is a nm meaning that this is a favour not a chore okay bye - chill out sugar boy, no need to explain your choices, we all have lifes okay bye

good luck :P - sankyu
srry for not applying anything, but thanks anyway <3
Ataraxia
3928752309874239578 semanas depois olha so quem apareceu surprise!

é o seguinte eu vi cada post aqui e tive que da meio que um remap bem hotfix, mas acredito estar viavel e nois eu vi o mod do kalindraz tb valeu amigao me beja

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Topic Starter
Seto Kousuke
I'll just leave this img here to represent Ataraxia's stupidity by thinking that [code] was [quote] before he edits it
No_Gu
M4M from my queue

Unicode:雨、キミを連れて
Romanised:Ame, Kimi wo Tsurete
add chelly to tags cuz she is the vocal

[Easy]
00:52:735 (1) - this sound is the long sound from 00:52:409 (4) - ,better to delete and replace 00:52:409 (4) - with a 1/1 slider
00:54:040 (1) - a short spinner is not good in easy for such rhythm,try sth like normal or sth else may be better
01:36:416 (3) - this should end at 01:36:742 -

[Normal]
no whistle at the beginning?
00:02:680 (5) - the end of this slider is so weak that I think it's ok to ignore it in normal
00:05:289 (5) - ^ and the next some ones
00:39:691 (1) - the next two beats do have sound,you followed many vocals but ignore these two,not good imo
00:52:734 (1) - this sound is the long sound from 00:52:409 (4) - ,better to delete and replace 00:52:409 (4) - with a 1/1 slider
01:07:082 (1) - remove NC
01:09:691 (1) - ^ and the same things after
01:24:677 (2) - touch HP bar
the first half may be a little hard that it has a gap with easy imo

[Hard]
00:27:137 (2) - 344,235 for better flow
00:35:615 (4,2) - i'm not sure for now but long time ago one map got unranked because the score bar covered the reverse arrow
01:00:560 (1) - finish at the beginning
01:10:669 (3) - move above a little to be consistent with 01:10:180 (2,1) -

[Insane]
00:20:126 (1,2,3,4,5) - a little out of shape?
00:20:615 (4,5,1,2,3) - the flow for 5123 is a little bad imo
00:40:995 (1,1,1) - idk the meaning of this fading,and it doesn't stack well
01:13:590 (1) - this one gives me a sense of breaking flow,though it can be played by another feeling
01:15:058 (2) - ^
01:26:471 (2) - ^


[Extra]
00:14:093 (3,4) - flow is a little bad imo
00:15:887 (3) - ^ ctrl+g will be better
00:58:278 (2,3) - ^
01:24:188 (2,3) - ^ 3 to the right may be better
Topic Starter
Seto Kousuke
Maelstrom

Maelstrrom wrote:

m4m

General
  • Too much empty space at the end. Consider cutting mp3 file. - nah, it's cool
Lumael's Hard
  • 01:31:199 (3,4,5,6) - unreadable - no lol~ well, I used NCs, i think it's better?
Insane
  • 00:38:387 (1) - Ctrl+G (no reason for this spasing and flow) - Intensity in vocals and I've used this during entire section, it's cool and playin nice
    00:25:832 (2) - ^ - same
    01:05:696 - add note and make mini stream with 01:05:452 (3,4,5) - triple to the beginning of 01:05:778 (1) - I really do not understand what do you mean...like..there's a stream there...on every timestamp...i really don't understand your point and idea xD

No_Gu's mod

No_Gu wrote:

Unicode:雨、キミを連れて
Romanised:Ame, Kimi wo Tsurete
add chelly to tags cuz she is the vocal - ohhh thanks

[Normal]
no whistle at the beginning? - yah
00:02:680 (5) - the end of this slider is so weak that I think it's ok to ignore it in normal - but dun want to ;w;
00:05:289 (5) - ^ and the next some ones - gonna leave it
00:39:691 (1) - the next two beats do have sound,you followed many vocals but ignore these two,not good imo - Ataraxia
00:52:734 (1) - this sound is the long sound from 00:52:409 (4) - ,better to delete and replace 00:52:409 (4) - with a 1/1 slider - Ataraxia
01:07:082 (1) - remove NC - fixed all NCs
01:09:691 (1) - ^ and the same things after
01:24:677 (2) - touch HP bar - fixed c:
the first half may be a little hard that it has a gap with easy imo - gonna keep a look at is

[Hard]
00:27:137 (2) - 344,235 for better flow - Didn't put on that exact coordinate because of DS, but did just like your idea c:
00:35:615 (4,2) - i'm not sure for now but long time ago one map got unranked because the score bar covered the reverse arrow - Yeah, I think so too~ Re-arranged his position
01:00:560 (1) - finish at the beginning - oh right, added
01:10:669 (3) - move above a little to be consistent with 01:10:180 (2,1) - fixed

[Insane]
00:20:126 (1,2,3,4,5) - a little out of shape? - seems fine o:
00:20:615 (4,5,1,2,3) - the flow for 5123 is a little bad imo - yah, supposed to be a bit tricky for aim, but it's flowing well
00:40:995 (1,1,1) - idk the meaning of this fading,and it doesn't stack well - the stack error was a mistake, fixed. About the meaning, you can clearly hear how the guitar starts pumping up, it fits nice c:
01:13:590 (1) - this one gives me a sense of breaking flow,though it can be played by another feeling -
01:15:058 (2) - ^
01:26:471 (2) - ^ nah, they're playng fine, specially the jumpy one


Thank you very much <3
Ataraxia
Applied all things No_Gu mentioned, thanks !

Ai seto seu lindo
osu file format v14

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 54039
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
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LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

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DistanceSpacing: 1.6
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4
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[Metadata]
Title:Ame, Kimi wo Tsurete
TitleUnicode:雨、キミを連れて
Artist:EGOIST
ArtistUnicode:EGOIST
Creator:Seto Kousuke
Version:Setoxia's coupled geometric about a tragic love normal
Source:Guilty Crown
Tags:ryo supercell inori yuzuriha shu ouma extra terrestrial biological entities ギルティクラウン MkGuh Sotarks Ataraxia chelly
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Topic Starter
Seto Kousuke
Rest in Piece Sotarks, one day he shall answer his mods
Sotarks
Heh I look at all mods, fixed some stuffs...
And mainly changed brightness on combo colors.

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osu file format v14

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Title:Ame, Kimi wo Tsurete
TitleUnicode:雨、キミを連れて
Artist:EGOIST
ArtistUnicode:EGOIST
Creator:Seto Kousuke
Version:Sotarks' Extra
Source:Guilty Crown
Tags:ryo supercell inori yuzuriha shu ouma extra terrestrial biological entities ギルティクラウン MkGuh Sotarks Ataraxia chelly
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369,225,74405,1,0,1:0:0:0:
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241,205,76199,22,0,P|280:153|249:32,1,185.640001133057,4|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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296,257,78971,1,0,1:0:0:0:
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318,27,81579,1,0,1:0:0:0:
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308,268,82068,1,0,1:0:0:0:
283,172,82232,1,0,1:0:0:0:
239,355,82395,2,0,P|228:291|226:248,1,92.8200005665283,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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150,148,82884,1,0,1:0:0:0:
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283,74,83536,1,0,1:0:0:0:
198,258,83699,2,0,P|219:182|237:145,1,92.8200005665283,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
366,104,84025,37,0,1:0:0:0:
213,47,84188,1,0,1:0:0:0:
412,188,84351,2,0,P|340:175|296:154,1,92.8200005665283,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
297,145,84596,1,0,1:0:0:0:
278,114,84677,1,0,1:0:0:0:
248,272,84840,1,0,1:0:0:0:
371,95,85003,1,8,0:0:0:0:
453,274,85166,1,0,0:0:0:0:
215,182,85329,21,12,3:0:0:0:
355,292,85492,1,0,1:0:0:0:
355,292,85574,1,0,1:0:0:0:
355,292,85655,2,0,P|347:236|341:217,1,46.4100002832642,0|0,1:0|1:0,1:0:0:0:
317,159,85818,1,0,1:0:0:0:
112,250,85982,5,0,1:0:0:0:
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194,259,86145,1,8,3:0:0:0:
236,254,86226,1,8,3:0:0:0:
276,243,86308,1,8,3:0:0:0:
63,175,86471,2,4,P|33:218|26:235,1,46.4100002832642,4|4,3:0|3:0,3:0:0:0:
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150,182,88264,2,0,P|127:245|117:287,1,92.8200005665283,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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118,334,88590,1,0,1:0:0:0:
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414,306,89405,1,0,1:0:0:0:
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8,180,96742,5,6,3:0:0:0:
Lumael
I'm back :3

well, i saw that you mapped the end, I really liked the patterns, but don't you think it's a bit too hard for a hard? :p

look this jump: 01:31:199 (1,2,1,2) - 01:34:786 (3,4,5,1,2,3) -

anyway i liked it ^^ at first i thought i mapped it because it's so similar xD
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