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xierbaliti

Colin Hou wrote:

source: Tomoyo After ~It's a Wonderful Life~
title: dear old home
wo zi zhong orz, bu yong gei kds le [stress]
o hao nan ren , bu lai yi fa ma?
gdeath
awa
sayounara
TA真美
jnkinsu
:(
Rare
star xD
[Ghost]
:!: fa xian zhong yu you ren zuo le
ke his bu shi piano=-=
K i R a
Please note I'm new at modding and this are only suggestions (except offset).

~General~

Offset: 323 (1 or 0 ms)

~Easy~

Easy is ok i think, i revised all, hitsounds, combo, spacing and align and are ok.

~Kotori's Normal~

00:34:464 - From here it sounds very low. I think you need some timing points with volume.
01:48:782 (2,3) - What the, normal? lol, Well, A little hard to normal.
02:43:782 (1,2) - ^
02:56:282 (2,3) - ^

Collab is perfect I think. Sorry if cant mod more, but I think is ok, T.T, well, good luck and star ~

Rating:

Song: 8.2
Map: 8.8 (Slow for me xDD)

And if you have some free time... mod4mod? please... http://osu.ppy.sh/s/28529

Bye ^^
DeadAlready
喜老大吉祥 ></
JauiPlaY
HI~
第三張 :)

[General]
Tags里面沒有一個腦?

[Easy]
00:24:720(T) - 這條綠線有用...?
00:30:032(1) - 我覺得換成一個在00:30:345的note會好些
01:04:095(1,2,3) - 改成折返slider?
01:14:095(3,4) - ^
02:34:095(2,3,4) - ^
03:15:345(4) - nc

[Normal]
00:19:407(1) - remove nc
01:36:595(1) - ^
01:56:907(1) - ^
02:24:095(7,8) - 改成一個折返slider?
02:34:095(7,8) - ^
02:51:595(3,4) - ^
03:09:876(x) - add a note?

[Collab]
不弄個姓名sb沒問題嗎?
01:56:282(2) - 為什麼要加sliderwhistle...
02:03:157(5) - 頭加clap并移到02:03:470,如果這樣做,請再在02:03:313處加個note
03:25:345(1) - 我覺得這個spinner弄得和easy的一樣長會比較好一點

good map~
so
star~
IceBeam
Hello.

Folder is clean and everything else seems fine too.

[Easy]
Easy is..not that easy.
I like how you mapped it.Yeah,it’s gentle and unusual,but it looks like an relaxing stuff for advanced players,but not for beginners.
I mean lots of stacks,and not only them.
I’ll point out only those,that could heavily confuse beginners.
If you’re aiming to make your map really easy,then you should fix it.

00:18:782 (5) – This slider could look a little better.Make something like this:
00:29:407 (3) – Rotate it to avoid overlapping with 00:28:470 (2)
00:36:907 (3) – Same as above.Could you avoid this overlap?
00:44:095 (5) –This note sounds off rhytm.
00:47:845 (1,1,1) – Acceptable,maybe..but still don’t think if such things fit well in Easy.
00:51:907 (2) – It’s almost hidden by 00:50:345 (1),make it visible.
00:54:407 (4) -^
01:36:595 (3) –Remove this note?
01:37:845 (1) –Shorten this slider to 01:38:470.
02:21:595 (2,1) – Unstack it,please.
02:34:095 (2,3,4) – Blue ticks in Easy are always hard for beginners. So,I suggest you to make a slider instead of circles.

[Kotori’s Normal]
00:19:407 (1) – Remove NC?
00:52:845 (4,5,6) – Distance between them isn’t equal,fix it.
01:48:938 (3) – You haven’t used blue tick yet..remove it?
02:43:938 (2) - ^ Same.Doesn’t really fit the rhytm or anything else.
02:56:438 (3) - ^ Sound better here,you may leave,unless you followed my suggestions above.

[Collab]
01:02:688 – Add a note?
01:23:782 (4) – I think you should reduce this jump,cause spacing looks similar to 01:20:970 (3,4,5) and it’s confusing.

Well,cute music and nice mapset overall.
Have my star and good luck to you.
hez
\:D/
Breeze
[General]
  1. Tag不加一个脑么


[Easy]
  1. 00:51:907 (2) - 这个slider还是向左吧,往右路径全被挡住了
  2. 00:54:407 (4) - 或者左下也行啊


[Collab]
  1. 00:46:907 (5) - 删掉这个note,把slider拉到这儿来,听着实在是不顺啊
  2. 00:47:376 (7) - 这个删掉,00:47:845 (1)移到00:47:532去,00:48:001加个note,然后那4个1/4拍的note加whistle
  3. 01:17:688 (1) - no clap


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Topic Starter
xierbaliti

IceBeam wrote:

Hello.

Folder is clean and everything else seems fine too.

[Easy]
Easy is..not that easy.
I like how you mapped it.Yeah,it’s gentle and unusual,but it looks like an relaxing stuff for advanced players,but not for beginners.
I mean lots of stacks,and not only them.
I’ll point out only those,that could heavily confuse beginners.
If you’re aiming to make your map really easy,then you should fix it.

00:18:782 (5) – This slider could look a little better.Make something like this:
00:29:407 (3) – Rotate it to avoid overlapping with 00:28:470 (2)
00:36:907 (3) – Same as above.Could you avoid this overlap?
00:44:095 (5) –This note sounds off rhytm.
00:47:845 (1,1,1) – Acceptable,maybe..but still don’t think if such things fit well in Easy.
00:51:907 (2) – It’s almost hidden by 00:50:345 (1),make it visible.
00:54:407 (4) -^
01:36:595 (3) –Remove this note?
01:37:845 (1) –Shorten this slider to 01:38:470.
02:21:595 (2,1) – Unstack it,please.
02:34:095 (2,3,4) – Blue ticks in Easy are always hard for beginners. So,I suggest you to make a slider instead of circles.

[Kotori’s Normal]
00:19:407 (1) – Remove NC?
00:52:845 (4,5,6) – Distance between them isn’t equal,fix it.
01:48:938 (3) – You haven’t used blue tick yet..remove it?
02:43:938 (2) - ^ Same.Doesn’t really fit the rhytm or anything else.
02:56:438 (3) - ^ Sound better here,you may leave,unless you followed my suggestions above.

[Collab]
01:02:688 – Add a note?
01:23:782 (4) – I think you should reduce this jump,cause spacing looks similar to 01:20:970 (3,4,5) and it’s confusing.

Well,cute music and nice mapset overall.
Have my star and good luck to you.
fixed a bit, thank for modding!

Breeze wrote:

[General]
  1. Tag不加一个脑么
oops, 加了

[Easy]
  1. 00:51:907 (2) - 这个slider还是向左吧,往右路径全被挡住了
  2. 00:54:407 (4) - 或者左下也行啊
用默认skin看了一下似乎不影响读图 所以懒比

[Collab]
  1. 00:46:907 (5) - 删掉这个note,把slider拉到这儿来,听着实在是不顺啊 改了
  2. 00:47:376 (7) - 这个删掉,00:47:845 (1)移到00:47:532去,00:48:001加个note,然后那4个1/4拍的note加whistle 试了一下 发现改不改差不多 依然懒比
    [attachment=0:abade]0.jpg[/attachment:abade]
  3. 01:17:688 (1) - no clap
没拿掉 倒是减了20%的音量

star
thanks :3
Natteke
Man I love this song. Good luck with this.
THE GAME IS SO PERVERTED
Topic Starter
xierbaliti
\:D/ forget to move this map to pending. \:D/
Nymph
I love tomoyo!
Colin Hou
gorget nani \:D/
Topic Starter
xierbaliti

Colin Hou wrote:

gorget nani \:D/
\:D/ baka colin \:D/
Natteke
Kurai
Hello xier-sama ~

General
  1. You use inherited timing sections with 0% to silence notes. It's unrankable because it has to be done via editing the .osu file. Adjust the volume to 5% please.


Easy
  1. 00:18:782 (5) - Don't silence this slider, it doesn't make sense and it's unrankable. Make its volume around 30~35% instead


That's all ~
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