o hao nan ren , bu lai yi fa ma?Colin Hou wrote:
source: Tomoyo After ~It's a Wonderful Life~
title: dear old home
wo zi zhong orz, bu yong gei kds le [stress]
o hao nan ren , bu lai yi fa ma?Colin Hou wrote:
source: Tomoyo After ~It's a Wonderful Life~
title: dear old home
wo zi zhong orz, bu yong gei kds le [stress]
fixed a bit, thank for modding!IceBeam wrote:
Hello.
Folder is clean and everything else seems fine too.
[Easy]
Easy is..not that easy.
I like how you mapped it.Yeah,it’s gentle and unusual,but it looks like an relaxing stuff for advanced players,but not for beginners.
I mean lots of stacks,and not only them.
I’ll point out only those,that could heavily confuse beginners.
If you’re aiming to make your map really easy,then you should fix it.
00:18:782 (5) – This slider could look a little better.Make something like this:
00:29:407 (3) – Rotate it to avoid overlapping with 00:28:470 (2)
00:36:907 (3) – Same as above.Could you avoid this overlap?
00:44:095 (5) –This note sounds off rhytm.
00:47:845 (1,1,1) – Acceptable,maybe..but still don’t think if such things fit well in Easy.
00:51:907 (2) – It’s almost hidden by 00:50:345 (1),make it visible.
00:54:407 (4) -^
01:36:595 (3) –Remove this note?
01:37:845 (1) –Shorten this slider to 01:38:470.
02:21:595 (2,1) – Unstack it,please.
02:34:095 (2,3,4) – Blue ticks in Easy are always hard for beginners. So,I suggest you to make a slider instead of circles.
[Kotori’s Normal]
00:19:407 (1) – Remove NC?
00:52:845 (4,5,6) – Distance between them isn’t equal,fix it.
01:48:938 (3) – You haven’t used blue tick yet..remove it?
02:43:938 (2) - ^ Same.Doesn’t really fit the rhytm or anything else.
02:56:438 (3) - ^ Sound better here,you may leave,unless you followed my suggestions above.
[Collab]
01:02:688 – Add a note?
01:23:782 (4) – I think you should reduce this jump,cause spacing looks similar to 01:20:970 (3,4,5) and it’s confusing.
Well,cute music and nice mapset overall.
Have my star and good luck to you.
thanks :3Breeze wrote:
[General]oops, 加了
- Tag不加一个脑么
[Easy]用默认skin看了一下似乎不影响读图 所以懒比
- 00:51:907 (2) - 这个slider还是向左吧,往右路径全被挡住了
- 00:54:407 (4) - 或者左下也行啊
[Collab]没拿掉 倒是减了20%的音量
- 00:46:907 (5) - 删掉这个note,把slider拉到这儿来,听着实在是不顺啊 改了
- 00:47:376 (7) - 这个删掉,00:47:845 (1)移到00:47:532去,00:48:001加个note,然后那4个1/4拍的note加whistle 试了一下 发现改不改差不多 依然懒比
[attachment=0:abade]0.jpg[/attachment:abade]- 01:17:688 (1) - no clap
star
\:D/ baka colin \:D/Colin Hou wrote:
gorget nani \:D/
thank you Kurai! fixed~KuraiPettan wrote:
Hello xier-sama ~
Generalit's an old map, so I forget to fix it ~_~ thanks for point it out!
- You use inherited timing sections with 0% to silence notes. It's unrankable because it has to be done via editing the .osu file. Adjust the volume to 5% please.
Easytried, but 30~35% vol is not good imo, changed it to 10%.
- 00:18:782 (5) - Don't silence this slider, it doesn't make sense and it's unrankable. Make its volume around 30~35% instead
That's all ~
it's a style in this diff, so i am not going to fix stacked notes ~_~ sorry Hana.Sakura Hana wrote:
[General]
"ign" is pointless as a tag since the search feature doesnt work with anything less than 4 characters afaik. fixed~
[Easy]
01:04:095 (1,2,3) - 3/4 rythms can be quite hard for new players to follow, replace with a repeat slider? fixed~
01:20:345 (1) - Remove new combo so the player doesnt see 2 Geki/Katu hitbursts, makes it anti-climatic, also i'd recommend you unstack this note. removed nc
01:48:470 (1,1,1) - This (and the previous pattern that looks like this one) can be quite hard for new players since it creates a cluster of sliders that makes it harder to read, i'd suggest unstacking. fixed~
02:45:345 (1,3) - Make these sliders' curves more curvy? something like http://puu.sh/8vVA is more aesthetically appealing imo emm.. it's fine imo, so did't do a fix
Due to the low slider speed+bpm, all 1/2 sliders start and end are touching each other, this will make stacked sliders at the end of slider ends be harder to read, as well as kick sliders, i'd recommend you think something else for these (1/2 repeat sliders with 1 reverse are fine tho).
居然挺带感的...xierbaliti wrote:
to DT players: don't forget to turn your system time to April 1st and enjoy the nice nightcore mix :3
\:D/Colin Hou wrote:
居然挺带感的...xierbaliti wrote:
to DT players: don't forget to turn your system time to April 1st and enjoy the nice nightcore mix :3