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xierbaliti

Colin Hou wrote:

source: Tomoyo After ~It's a Wonderful Life~
title: dear old home
wo zi zhong orz, bu yong gei kds le [stress]
o hao nan ren , bu lai yi fa ma?
gdeath
awa
sayounara
TA真美
jnkinsu
:(
Rare
star xD
[Ghost]
:!: fa xian zhong yu you ren zuo le
ke his bu shi piano=-=
K i R a
Please note I'm new at modding and this are only suggestions (except offset).

~General~

Offset: 323 (1 or 0 ms)

~Easy~

Easy is ok i think, i revised all, hitsounds, combo, spacing and align and are ok.

~Kotori's Normal~

00:34:464 - From here it sounds very low. I think you need some timing points with volume.
01:48:782 (2,3) - What the, normal? lol, Well, A little hard to normal.
02:43:782 (1,2) - ^
02:56:282 (2,3) - ^

Collab is perfect I think. Sorry if cant mod more, but I think is ok, T.T, well, good luck and star ~

Rating:

Song: 8.2
Map: 8.8 (Slow for me xDD)

And if you have some free time... mod4mod? please... http://osu.ppy.sh/s/28529

Bye ^^
DeadAlready
喜老大吉祥 ></
JauiPlaY
HI~
第三張 :)

[General]
Tags里面沒有一個腦?

[Easy]
00:24:720(T) - 這條綠線有用...?
00:30:032(1) - 我覺得換成一個在00:30:345的note會好些
01:04:095(1,2,3) - 改成折返slider?
01:14:095(3,4) - ^
02:34:095(2,3,4) - ^
03:15:345(4) - nc

[Normal]
00:19:407(1) - remove nc
01:36:595(1) - ^
01:56:907(1) - ^
02:24:095(7,8) - 改成一個折返slider?
02:34:095(7,8) - ^
02:51:595(3,4) - ^
03:09:876(x) - add a note?

[Collab]
不弄個姓名sb沒問題嗎?
01:56:282(2) - 為什麼要加sliderwhistle...
02:03:157(5) - 頭加clap并移到02:03:470,如果這樣做,請再在02:03:313處加個note
03:25:345(1) - 我覺得這個spinner弄得和easy的一樣長會比較好一點

good map~
so
star~
IceBeam
Hello.

Folder is clean and everything else seems fine too.

[Easy]
Easy is..not that easy.
I like how you mapped it.Yeah,it’s gentle and unusual,but it looks like an relaxing stuff for advanced players,but not for beginners.
I mean lots of stacks,and not only them.
I’ll point out only those,that could heavily confuse beginners.
If you’re aiming to make your map really easy,then you should fix it.

00:18:782 (5) – This slider could look a little better.Make something like this:
00:29:407 (3) – Rotate it to avoid overlapping with 00:28:470 (2)
00:36:907 (3) – Same as above.Could you avoid this overlap?
00:44:095 (5) –This note sounds off rhytm.
00:47:845 (1,1,1) – Acceptable,maybe..but still don’t think if such things fit well in Easy.
00:51:907 (2) – It’s almost hidden by 00:50:345 (1),make it visible.
00:54:407 (4) -^
01:36:595 (3) –Remove this note?
01:37:845 (1) –Shorten this slider to 01:38:470.
02:21:595 (2,1) – Unstack it,please.
02:34:095 (2,3,4) – Blue ticks in Easy are always hard for beginners. So,I suggest you to make a slider instead of circles.

[Kotori’s Normal]
00:19:407 (1) – Remove NC?
00:52:845 (4,5,6) – Distance between them isn’t equal,fix it.
01:48:938 (3) – You haven’t used blue tick yet..remove it?
02:43:938 (2) - ^ Same.Doesn’t really fit the rhytm or anything else.
02:56:438 (3) - ^ Sound better here,you may leave,unless you followed my suggestions above.

[Collab]
01:02:688 – Add a note?
01:23:782 (4) – I think you should reduce this jump,cause spacing looks similar to 01:20:970 (3,4,5) and it’s confusing.

Well,cute music and nice mapset overall.
Have my star and good luck to you.
hez
\:D/
Breeze
[General]
  1. Tag不加一个脑么
[Easy]
  1. 00:51:907 (2) - 这个slider还是向左吧,往右路径全被挡住了
  2. 00:54:407 (4) - 或者左下也行啊
[Collab]
  1. 00:46:907 (5) - 删掉这个note,把slider拉到这儿来,听着实在是不顺啊
  2. 00:47:376 (7) - 这个删掉,00:47:845 (1)移到00:47:532去,00:48:001加个note,然后那4个1/4拍的note加whistle
  3. 01:17:688 (1) - no clap
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Topic Starter
xierbaliti

IceBeam wrote:

Hello.

Folder is clean and everything else seems fine too.

[Easy]
Easy is..not that easy.
I like how you mapped it.Yeah,it’s gentle and unusual,but it looks like an relaxing stuff for advanced players,but not for beginners.
I mean lots of stacks,and not only them.
I’ll point out only those,that could heavily confuse beginners.
If you’re aiming to make your map really easy,then you should fix it.

00:18:782 (5) – This slider could look a little better.Make something like this:
00:29:407 (3) – Rotate it to avoid overlapping with 00:28:470 (2)
00:36:907 (3) – Same as above.Could you avoid this overlap?
00:44:095 (5) –This note sounds off rhytm.
00:47:845 (1,1,1) – Acceptable,maybe..but still don’t think if such things fit well in Easy.
00:51:907 (2) – It’s almost hidden by 00:50:345 (1),make it visible.
00:54:407 (4) -^
01:36:595 (3) –Remove this note?
01:37:845 (1) –Shorten this slider to 01:38:470.
02:21:595 (2,1) – Unstack it,please.
02:34:095 (2,3,4) – Blue ticks in Easy are always hard for beginners. So,I suggest you to make a slider instead of circles.

[Kotori’s Normal]
00:19:407 (1) – Remove NC?
00:52:845 (4,5,6) – Distance between them isn’t equal,fix it.
01:48:938 (3) – You haven’t used blue tick yet..remove it?
02:43:938 (2) - ^ Same.Doesn’t really fit the rhytm or anything else.
02:56:438 (3) - ^ Sound better here,you may leave,unless you followed my suggestions above.

[Collab]
01:02:688 – Add a note?
01:23:782 (4) – I think you should reduce this jump,cause spacing looks similar to 01:20:970 (3,4,5) and it’s confusing.

Well,cute music and nice mapset overall.
Have my star and good luck to you.
fixed a bit, thank for modding!

Breeze wrote:

[General]
  1. Tag不加一个脑么
oops, 加了

[Easy]
  1. 00:51:907 (2) - 这个slider还是向左吧,往右路径全被挡住了
  2. 00:54:407 (4) - 或者左下也行啊
用默认skin看了一下似乎不影响读图 所以懒比

[Collab]
  1. 00:46:907 (5) - 删掉这个note,把slider拉到这儿来,听着实在是不顺啊 改了
  2. 00:47:376 (7) - 这个删掉,00:47:845 (1)移到00:47:532去,00:48:001加个note,然后那4个1/4拍的note加whistle 试了一下 发现改不改差不多 依然懒比
    [attachment=0:abade]0.jpg[/attachment:abade]
  3. 01:17:688 (1) - no clap
没拿掉 倒是减了20%的音量

star
thanks :3
Natteke
Man I love this song. Good luck with this.
THE GAME IS SO PERVERTED
Topic Starter
xierbaliti
\:D/ forget to move this map to pending. \:D/
Nymph
I love tomoyo!
Colin Hou
gorget nani \:D/
Topic Starter
xierbaliti

Colin Hou wrote:

gorget nani \:D/
\:D/ baka colin \:D/
Natteke
Kurai
Hello xier-sama ~

General
  1. You use inherited timing sections with 0% to silence notes. It's unrankable because it has to be done via editing the .osu file. Adjust the volume to 5% please.
Easy
  1. 00:18:782 (5) - Don't silence this slider, it doesn't make sense and it's unrankable. Make its volume around 30~35% instead
That's all ~
kanpakyin
膜拜喜老大 _o-L _|-O_
Topic Starter
xierbaliti

KuraiPettan wrote:

Hello xier-sama ~

General
  1. You use inherited timing sections with 0% to silence notes. It's unrankable because it has to be done via editing the .osu file. Adjust the volume to 5% please.
it's an old map, so I forget to fix it ~_~ thanks for point it out!

Easy
  1. 00:18:782 (5) - Don't silence this slider, it doesn't make sense and it's unrankable. Make its volume around 30~35% instead
tried, but 30~35% vol is not good imo, changed it to 10%.

That's all ~
thank you Kurai! fixed~

oh, and btw I fixed the two sliders at 00:51:907 and 00:54:407 in Easy diff :3
Kurai
Excuse my late recheck please >w<!!

Awesome map and awesome music, Bubbled ~ :3
Colin Hou
\:D/ 爹老房泡了 \:D/
Topic Starter
xierbaliti
thank you Kurai~
Sakura
[General]
"ign" is pointless as a tag since the search feature doesnt work with anything less than 4 characters afaik.

[Easy]
01:04:095 (1,2,3) - 3/4 rythms can be quite hard for new players to follow, replace with a repeat slider?
01:20:345 (1) - Remove new combo so the player doesnt see 2 Geki/Katu hitbursts, makes it anti-climatic, also i'd recommend you unstack this note.
01:48:470 (1,1,1) - This (and the previous pattern that looks like this one) can be quite hard for new players since it creates a cluster of sliders that makes it harder to read, i'd suggest unstacking.
02:45:345 (1,3) - Make these sliders' curves more curvy? something like http://puu.sh/8vVA is more aesthetically appealing imo
Due to the low slider speed+bpm, all 1/2 sliders start and end are touching each other, this will make stacked sliders at the end of slider ends be harder to read, as well as kick sliders, i'd recommend you think something else for these (1/2 repeat sliders with 1 reverse are fine tho).
Topic Starter
xierbaliti
thank you for modding, Hana!

Sakura Hana wrote:

[General]
"ign" is pointless as a tag since the search feature doesnt work with anything less than 4 characters afaik. fixed~

[Easy]
01:04:095 (1,2,3) - 3/4 rythms can be quite hard for new players to follow, replace with a repeat slider? fixed~
01:20:345 (1) - Remove new combo so the player doesnt see 2 Geki/Katu hitbursts, makes it anti-climatic, also i'd recommend you unstack this note. removed nc
01:48:470 (1,1,1) - This (and the previous pattern that looks like this one) can be quite hard for new players since it creates a cluster of sliders that makes it harder to read, i'd suggest unstacking. fixed~
02:45:345 (1,3) - Make these sliders' curves more curvy? something like http://puu.sh/8vVA is more aesthetically appealing imo emm.. it's fine imo, so did't do a fix
Due to the low slider speed+bpm, all 1/2 sliders start and end are touching each other, this will make stacked sliders at the end of slider ends be harder to read, as well as kick sliders, i'd recommend you think something else for these (1/2 repeat sliders with 1 reverse are fine tho).
it's a style in this diff, so i am not going to fix stacked notes ~_~ sorry Hana.

waiting for your recheck :3
Sakura
That's alright, map is pretty good now, and there wasnt much that changed, so

Ranked!
Magicphoenix
congratulations on rank =) !
nice soundtrack !!!
Natteke
Yay! Best song from Tomoyo After
Nymph
Tomoyo~
Colin Hou
爹老房还我ACC...
Jeffreychhem
Congratulations on being ranked! I liked these calm and soothing songs from KEY's VNs.
Kawayi Rika
恭喜 喜儿姐姐 ~ :)
Topic Starter
xierbaliti
thanku everyone~
Topic Starter
xierbaliti
to DT players: don't forget to turn your system time to April 1st and enjoy the nice nightcore mix :3
Colin Hou

xierbaliti wrote:

to DT players: don't forget to turn your system time to April 1st and enjoy the nice nightcore mix :3
居然挺带感的...
Topic Starter
xierbaliti

Colin Hou wrote:

xierbaliti wrote:

to DT players: don't forget to turn your system time to April 1st and enjoy the nice nightcore mix :3
居然挺带感的...
\:D/
Breeze
哇ლ(◕ω◕ლ
[Ghost]

xierbaliti wrote:

to DT players: don't forget to turn your system time to April 1st and enjoy the nice nightcore mix :3
竟然还能这样么...
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