M4M~ It was WIP with only two diff, so I used 100x concentration
[captin1]
00:13:044 (2,3) - I think distance should be a bit higher than this because it has sugoi clap and high melody. and I couldn't find any direct patterning.
00:13:215 (3,4,5) - too far so almost same distance with 00:13:044 (2,3) - . I think like 00:15:958 (3,4,5) - is ok
00:38:415 (4) - how about NC? xD
01:17:330 (1,2) - can I know this antijump's intention?
01:19:730 (3) - how about use a bit fast slider to show sound in 01:19:730 - ?
01:47:158 (4,1) - I think these two is a bit far considering volume. make it like here? 00:49:558 (4,1) -
01:52:815 (1) - how about moving NC to 01:52:644 (9) - ? because strong beat is in 01:52:644 (9) - .
00:55:044 (9) - ^
02:17:330 (4,5) - I know you're lowering SV, but how about using faster slider to emphasize vocal?
02:27:958 (5) - NC?
It was hard time modding such a nice map.
[Extra]
00:03:615 (2) - It's really just 'how about this?' http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5939308
00:13:729 (2,3,4) - I think http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5939319 this or http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5939327 this is more suitable to this melody.
00:13:558 (1) - how about moving NC to 00:13:729 (2) - to emphasize this sound and pattern?
00:32:072 - you missed strong beat..I felt a bit weird.
00:38:415 (5,6) - you were mainly following vocal, so I think slider-circle is better.
00:50:158 (2,3) - 00:50:158 (2,3,1) - different time gap but same distance was a bit confusing. how about stacking 00:50:158 (2,3) - or use lower distance between 00:50:415 (3,1) - ?
01:00:530 (3,4) - you can use faster slider here.
01:58:130 (3,4) - ^
01:04:472 (2) - it has a sound in 01:04:558 - . so how about using 1/4 slider? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5939397
02:02:072 (2) - ^
01:13:901 (1,2,3,4,5) - I can't know which sound you mapped.
01:16:815 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
01:25:044 (1) - triplet sound start in here, so http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5939409 this rhythm is correct.
01:44:072 (1,2,3,4,1) - shape? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5939420
01:52:730 (6,7,8) - overmapped 00:55:043 (1,2,1) - is correct
01:54:530 (2,3) - considering vocal sound, this should have more distance than 01:54:358 (1,2) - , but almost same. how about this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5939441
02:03:700 (2,4) - overmapped?
02:06:187 (4) - triplet sound from here, so this rhythm http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5939452 is correct i think
I know you are following vocal mainly, but I don't think missing 02:16:301 - , 02:16:644 - these strong beats is a not a good idea. It lookes wierd
Good Luck~
[captin1]
00:13:044 (2,3) - I think distance should be a bit higher than this because it has sugoi clap and high melody. and I couldn't find any direct patterning.
00:13:215 (3,4,5) - too far so almost same distance with 00:13:044 (2,3) - . I think like 00:15:958 (3,4,5) - is ok
00:38:415 (4) - how about NC? xD
01:17:330 (1,2) - can I know this antijump's intention?
01:19:730 (3) - how about use a bit fast slider to show sound in 01:19:730 - ?
01:47:158 (4,1) - I think these two is a bit far considering volume. make it like here? 00:49:558 (4,1) -
01:52:815 (1) - how about moving NC to 01:52:644 (9) - ? because strong beat is in 01:52:644 (9) - .
00:55:044 (9) - ^
02:17:330 (4,5) - I know you're lowering SV, but how about using faster slider to emphasize vocal?
02:27:958 (5) - NC?
It was hard time modding such a nice map.
[Extra]
00:03:615 (2) - It's really just 'how about this?' http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5939308
00:13:729 (2,3,4) - I think http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5939319 this or http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5939327 this is more suitable to this melody.
00:13:558 (1) - how about moving NC to 00:13:729 (2) - to emphasize this sound and pattern?
00:32:072 - you missed strong beat..I felt a bit weird.
00:38:415 (5,6) - you were mainly following vocal, so I think slider-circle is better.
00:50:158 (2,3) - 00:50:158 (2,3,1) - different time gap but same distance was a bit confusing. how about stacking 00:50:158 (2,3) - or use lower distance between 00:50:415 (3,1) - ?
01:00:530 (3,4) - you can use faster slider here.
01:58:130 (3,4) - ^
01:04:472 (2) - it has a sound in 01:04:558 - . so how about using 1/4 slider? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5939397
02:02:072 (2) - ^
01:13:901 (1,2,3,4,5) - I can't know which sound you mapped.
01:16:815 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
01:25:044 (1) - triplet sound start in here, so http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5939409 this rhythm is correct.
01:44:072 (1,2,3,4,1) - shape? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5939420
01:52:730 (6,7,8) - overmapped 00:55:043 (1,2,1) - is correct
01:54:530 (2,3) - considering vocal sound, this should have more distance than 01:54:358 (1,2) - , but almost same. how about this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5939441
02:03:700 (2,4) - overmapped?
02:06:187 (4) - triplet sound from here, so this rhythm http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5939452 is correct i think
I know you are following vocal mainly, but I don't think missing 02:16:301 - , 02:16:644 - these strong beats is a not a good idea. It lookes wierd
Good Luck~