JauiPlaY wrote:

hi~
一些建议:

[General]
fine.

[Easy]
00:03:448(x) - 加个有whistle的note
00:06:258(x) - ^
00:15:719(x) - 去掉这个note?
00:20:565(1,2) - 把1折返3次,然后去掉2?
00:23:334(1) - 去掉所有折返,然后在00:24:027加个note?
01:19:410(x) - 加个note

[Summer]
这个难度名有点怪异...
00:09:027(1) - 去掉nc
00:09:258(2) - 去掉这个note
00:09:488(3) - nc
00:10:411(7,1) - 后面那个spinner应该在7那里开始...
00:17:565(9) - 去掉这个note
00:26:104(1,2) - 这两个调换一下正好合歌词...
00:27:719(4) - 我觉得用00:27:027(3)的对称体会好看得多...
00:32:565(5,1) - 后面那个spinner应该在5那里开始...
00:37:181(x) - 这里和后面的两根白线加note
00:38:796(2,3) - spacing
00:40:873(5,6) - ^
00:47:795(6) - nc
01:01:873(9,1,2,3) - !@#@$%&^spacing
剩下的combo最好也规范一下,建议5-9之间

[Hard]
01:19:871(1) - 起始于01:19:756
combo最好规范一下,建议5-9之间
awesome diff!

fartownik wrote:

General:

- Add a space in the title between the word "Redleaf" and "(Short ver.)"
- Timing fix:
offset: 725 (+6)
time signature : 3/4
Delete all red sections apart from the first one. They're unneeded because the entire song should be made with 3/4 metronome.
Do it on all difficulties.


[Hard]

This is totally not a Hard. Rename to Insane.

HP Drain & Overall Difficulty +1/2 ticks?

00:43:642 (4) - Every different slider velocity must start with a new combo.
00:50:564 (3) - ^
01:19:871 (1) - Silent the spinner?


[Summer]

THIS is a Hard.

00:39:488 (3) - New combo (read up).
00:50:564 (3,1) - Spacing.
01:01:873 (9,1) - SPACING. If it's meant to be a anti-jump, you didn't do it very well. Fix.
01:03:026 - I miss a note here. Add one please.
01:12:719 (5) - New combo?
01:13:411 (8,1,2) - Spacing. Again.

Really weird spacing changes in some places. Please take care of it.


[Easy]

00:17:334 (5,1) - Please... no anti-jumps on easy. Fix spacing.


That's all I can find.
Good map, I really enjoyed these hitsounds.

fartownik wrote:

Re-re-check

The proper name of this novel should be "Kitto, Sumiwataru Asairo Yori mo", write it as the source.

[Normal]

AR -1?

00:39:500 (4) - Add a new combo (different slider velocity)
00:40:654 (1,2) - Swap new combos
00:50:577 (3) - Add a new combo (different slider velocity)
00:54:269 (1,2) - Swap new combos (different slider velocity)
00:58:884 (4) - New combo.
01:05:807 (4,1) - Swap new combos (different slider velocity)

no kd

jericho2442 wrote:

you have a silenced sliderslide and slidertick, this is Not allowed. You can have one silenced, but not both

Easy
00:27:500 (4) - timing on this note is odd and does not really follow the song good, i advise a timing like this


01:00:269 (3,4,5) - broken spacing, all have the same timing but different spacing, you need to move (4,5) more apart
01:16:192 (1,2,3,4) - smaller spacing here feels like an small anti jump pattern, we really advise to not do such spacing changes in a easy
00:38:577 (1,2) - due to the song having no proper beat at this point, i would advise to unstack this note so it is easier to read
00:48:269 (3,4) - same
01:12:731 (4) - i would suggest a new combo here to split the vocal lines up

Normal
00:53:346 (3,4) - i would suggest unstacking these notes, that way it makes the timing of the pattern easier to read and also makes the slider after easier to read

Summer
01:13:192 (3,4) - this jump played bad, i would really advise to give this the same spacing as the two notes before it

Insane
00:51:961 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - im really really not sure about the spacing in this combo, the way the first part does a stack then 1/2 movement, then at (5,6,1) it does the same size movement but at 1/1 timing, its extremely confusing and i found it very annoying when playing, i do advise to have a fiddle with this part and try to space it out abit better.
01:12:731 (1,2,3) - this plays really bad, the spacing is all the same even though the timing is completely different, it does not feel like a antijump or z-spacing, you need to make the spacing here make sense

Shiki wrote:

Let's go!

看来只有hitsound能处理下了

[Easy]
00:15:961 (3,4) - 我建议把(3)尾部的whistle加到(4)上去
00:22:654 (4) - 尾部whistle
00:23:346 (1) - 去掉whistle
00:27:731 (4,5) - (4)的开头和(5)都加上whistle?
00:33:500 (3) - 最后一个whistle
00:38:115 (4) - whistle漏掉了??
00:43:654 (1) - new combo?

[Normal]
00:02:577 (3) - 尾部whistle
00:03:500 (5) - whistle
00:05:346 (4) - 尾部whistle
00:06:038 (5) - ^
00:20:115 (4) - whistle?
00:20:577 (1,2,3,4) - 不要把(1)(2)(3)都堆到(4)的头上来, 三个以上的堆叠我感觉不太好, 把它们分开?
00:25:423 (1) - 后移1/2拍, 然后减一repeat, ctrl+r, 记得要重新弄hitsound
00:42:731 (5) - new combo?
00:48:269 (5) - 去掉头上的whistle, 改到尾巴那里

[Summer]
前面那一段我觉得有点奇怪，明明都是whistle为主，突然插入一段clap的，然后后面又是whistle为主 ;_;
00:46:423 (1) - 头部的whistle可以去掉了
我觉得这个音效有点乱，找不到什么规律 ;_;

[Insane]
00:12:500 (2) - 这里你有两个选择，一个是头部改clap，另一个是把下面三个弄了

SPOILER

00:15:038 (1) - 尾巴whistle?
00:18:038 (2) - 头部whistle?
00:20:807 (2) - 头部whistle?

00:22:654 (4) - whistle
00:34:884 (2) - 像这样??

SPOILER

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00:46:077 (4) - 去掉whistle
01:09:038 (9) - 如果jump就不要静音, 这个声音很小
最后那里clap有点乱 D:

/me hugs 326

_Kiva wrote:

some suggestions spacing and hitsounds in ['Summer] mod via irc.
00:57:961 (1,2,3,4,1) - SPACING
01:16:884 (3) - CLAP
good luck

1. "game" is too generic of a tag imo. Remove it ?

1. The difficulty settings are way too high for an Easy.
2. I honestly found this to be... extremely weird. I was first surprised by the hitsounds, then the map itself felt weird (but I can't really explain why since I don't know it myself ><). And there are way too many 1/2 beats to my taste
3. 00:12:269 (1) - This slider appears too soon after the spinner. Remember new players spin slowly, and need some time to readjust their aim. It is also way too far from the center of the screen so soon after the spinner.
4. 00:20:577 (1,2) - I tend to think stacks are too confusing for Easy diffs, because they make rhythms unclear and harder to read.
5. 00:24:961 (4) - For notes stacked under sliders, add to the stacking issues the fact that due to the stacking, it often looks bad :/
6. 00:28:423 (5,1) - Extremely confusing jumps. It makes the timing look like 2/1 while it is 1/1.
7. 00:45:038 (6) - Kick sliders are confusing because the number of repeats can't really be guessed, and generally in Easy diffs, the slider speed is so low that the cursor hides the repeat arrow.
8. 01:18:269 (4) - Same, except this time the repeat arrow is also hidden by the hitburst.

1. I think tick rate 2 sounds better (and it would be more consistent with the other diffs)
2. This is way to difficult for a Normal for various reasons. Renaming it to Hard is the easiest way to go. Assuming you did rename to Hard:
3. 00:20:577 (1,2,3,4) - These anti-jumps are too unexpected and confusing, even for a Hard.

1. If this is the guest diff, name it "MisakaMikoto's Summer" at least. I still don't see why this has a custom name when all the over diffs have a regular one.
2. Sweet Hard =o just a few things:
3. 00:22:654 (1,2) - Weird jump. Why did you use a jump here ? o.o
4. 00:37:654 (1,2,3) - These notes sound weird. Mapping to silence is difficult, I know, so I think it'd be better to just leave this part noteless ?
5. 00:45:038 (1,2,3) - Same.
6. 01:04:423 (3,4) - Confusing placement: it looks like (3) has actually 2 repeats and makes the rhythm after (3) confusing.

1. I find this not to fit the song at all. The AR seems too high to me, and the 1/4 and jumps don't fit imo... The diff is fine and plays well though.

Odaril wrote:

As per your request.

Please reply to this mod saying what you didn't fix (and what you did) and why. Remember these are all suggestions.
Also, if you have any question, feel free to ask me in-game.

General

1. "game" is too generic of a tag imo. Remove it ?

hmm...It seems ..there is no 'game' in the tagbut if you mean the message's, ive change into 'EmotionAVG/ADV'

Easy

1. The difficulty settings are way too high for an Easy.
2. I honestly found this to be... extremely weird. I was first surprised by the hitsounds, then the map itself felt weird (but I can't really explain why since I don't know it myself ><). And there are way too many 1/2 beats to my taste
   1.weird hitsound D: maybe use the standard better but i prefer this one XD
   2.about the 1/2 ive change some of it
   delete00:15:731 (2) -
   delete00:21:500 (2) - and00:20:577 (1) - finish at 00:21:500
   delete00:26:807 (2) -
3. 00:12:269 (1) - This slider appears too soon after the spinner. Remember new players spin slowly, and need some time to readjust their aim. It is also way too far from the center of the screen so soon after the spinner.
   delete00:12:269 (1) -and add a note 00:12:500 (1) -
4. 00:20:577 (1,2) - I tend to think stacks are too confusing for Easy diffs, because they make rhythms unclear and harder to read.
   
5. 00:24:961 (4) - For notes stacked under sliders, add to the stacking issues the fact that due to the stacking, it often looks bad :/
   00:24:961 (4) - fix
6. 00:28:423 (5,1) - Extremely confusing jumps. It makes the timing look like 2/1 while it is 1/1.
   00:28:423 (5) -delete 00:27:731 (4) -finish at 00:28:423
7. 00:45:038 (6) - Kick sliders are confusing because the number of repeats can't really be guessed, and generally in Easy diffs, the slider speed is so low that the cursor hides the repeat arrow.
   change into a slider
8. 01:18:269 (4) - Same, except this time the repeat arrow is also hidden by the hitburst.

after fix the errors before this one the comboburst doesnt hidden the repeat>< adjust spacing
I think the difficulty settings that is no need to change, so sorry
Normal

1. I think tick rate 2 sounds better (and it would be more consistent with the other diffs)
   sounds great XD
2. This is way to difficult for a Normal for various reasons. Renaming it to Hard is the easiest way to go. Assuming you did rename to Hard:
   i wonder normal ;_; so sorry orz
3. 00:20:577 (1,2,3,4) - These anti-jumps are too unexpected and confusing, even for a Hard.

fix too (i think it's hard to read this part


Summer

1. If this is the guest diff, name it "MisakaMikoto's Summer" at least. I still don't see why this has a custom name when all the over diffs have a regular one.
   The creator agree the name of this diff called 'summer', I think it's find XD (why isnt it called fall or autumn D:)
2. Sweet Hard =o just a few things:
3. 00:22:654 (1,2) - Weird jump. Why did you use a jump here ? o.o
   fix
4. 00:37:654 (1,2,3) - These notes sound weird. Mapping to silence is difficult, I know, so I think it'd be better to just leave this part noteless ?
   00:35:346 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - add'6',and '7'turn intorepeat
5. 00:45:038 (1,2,3) - Same.
   00:45:038 (1,2,3) - delete
6. 01:04:423 (3,4) - Confusing placement: it looks like (3) has actually 2 repeats and makes the rhythm after (3) confusing.

fix
all fuix by myself he is lazy ！(╯‵□′)╯︵┻━┻
Insane

1. I find this not to fit the song at all. The AR seems too high to me, and the 1/4 and jumps don't fit imo... The diff is fine and plays well though.

AR6 I think it's find maybe more jump will made it closer to insane

• Title: Use "Kouyou" instead because original name is 紅葉 and I remember someone said use romaji instead of translation if there's no official English translation. Also there's no need to have "Short Ver." because it's the full opening animation
  
  (Use viewtopic.php?f=25&t=33919 to change title)
  
  Tags: Add "Red Leaf" (Translation) "Propeller" (Producer)
  
  For hitsounds...hitnormal/hitclap don't fit well imo...sounds a little noisy...(Copy paste?)
  
  http://puu.sh/3qVB

• 00:30:269 (3,1) - Spacing...move 1 to here?
  00:38:577 (1,2) - hmm...I really don't like stack like this in Easy...kinda hard to read due to low AR...move 2 ?
  01:00:269 (3,4) - Spacing.

• 00:25:423 (X) - Add a note here?

• 00:39:500 (1) - Remove new combo?
  00:46:423 (1) - ^

• 01:08:115 (X) - Personally I'd add a note here and arrange like this...
  01:14:115 (5,1) - Increase spacing for a little for the jump?
  01:09:615 (T) - Add kiai and add a line at 01:09:731 to disable kiai
  01:09:903 (T) - move this to 01:09:961

Rukarioman wrote:

General:
- From what I know Anime openings/endings have to be called TV Size and not Short Ver.

Easy:
00:20:577 (1) - Short sliders with more than one repeat are confusing for new players to read.
00:38:577 (1) - ^
00:58:884 (1,2,3) - Please widen this spacing more, so the spacing in the combo is consistent.
01:18:269 (4) - Again, short sliders with more than one repeat.

Normal:
00:25:423 (1,2) - A jump like this in a normal is a bit too much imo

Summer:
01:02:807 (3,4,5) - Move all the notes 2 grids to the left so the spacing is right.