star！ nice map！
I think the timing is no problem
I think the timing is no problem
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WHITE-LIPS - Kouyou (Short ver.)
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No timing problem for me.
Just some opinions...
~Easy~
00:32:577 (2) - should be ended on the next red tick
~Normal~
Slider is too fast for Normal diff.
~Summer~
Fine.
~Insane~
00:34:423 (2,3) - delete, they're not matched the song
Just some opinions...
~Easy~
00:32:577 (2) - should be ended on the next red tick
~Normal~
Slider is too fast for Normal diff.
~Summer~
Fine.
~Insane~
00:34:423 (2,3) - delete, they're not matched the song
:3
[Easy]
00:30:269 (3,1) - 这两个稍微拉开点 新手容易误判成00:29:807 (2,3)这样.
01:00:731 (4) - 头部的whistle去掉
01:14:807 (3) - 复制(1) 然后ctrl+h ctrl+j 这样会好看些.
[Normal]
00:01:192 (1,2) - 改成这样我感觉会好些
00:25:423 (1) - 尽量避免出现这种多次repeat(>1)的短slider接其他东西. 因为AR比较低 判断它什么时候结束对于新手来说比较难. 我建议把它别的
01:00:731 (1) - ^
01:11:807 (1) - 去掉最后的那个clap吧
[Summer]
00:06:731 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - 这两个正方形都歪了
00:12:961 (4) - 我觉得和(5)叠起来更好一些.
00:21:731 (3,4,5,1,2) - 这几个可以往右移几格 离那个slider太近了
00:30:038 (3) - 关掉grid修一下spacing, 有一点不同.
00:32:115 (3,4,5) - 往左上移一点会美观些
00:47:577 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 这几个看起来随意了些 试着摆个形状之类的.
01:11:807 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这五个排得不好看 重新排一下吧
[Insane]
00:13:423 (4,5) - 把它们摆在(3)的后面 像这样玩起来会流畅些
00:46:423 (1,2) - 因为前面都是跳 所以这个很容易也被当成跳. 把new combo放在(2)上吧
01:16:192 (7) - 往下一格 这样就不会和01:16:423 (1) 的结尾重叠
> < 赶紧rank呀 等了万年了
[Easy]
00:30:269 (3,1) - 这两个稍微拉开点 新手容易误判成00:29:807 (2,3)这样.
01:00:731 (4) - 头部的whistle去掉
01:14:807 (3) - 复制(1) 然后ctrl+h ctrl+j 这样会好看些.
[Normal]
00:01:192 (1,2) - 改成这样我感觉会好些
00:25:423 (1) - 尽量避免出现这种多次repeat(>1)的短slider接其他东西. 因为AR比较低 判断它什么时候结束对于新手来说比较难. 我建议把它别的
01:00:731 (1) - ^
01:11:807 (1) - 去掉最后的那个clap吧
[Summer]
00:06:731 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - 这两个正方形都歪了
00:12:961 (4) - 我觉得和(5)叠起来更好一些.
00:21:731 (3,4,5,1,2) - 这几个可以往右移几格 离那个slider太近了
00:30:038 (3) - 关掉grid修一下spacing, 有一点不同.
00:32:115 (3,4,5) - 往左上移一点会美观些
00:47:577 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 这几个看起来随意了些 试着摆个形状之类的.
01:11:807 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这五个排得不好看 重新排一下吧
[Insane]
00:13:423 (4,5) - 把它们摆在(3)的后面 像这样玩起来会流畅些
00:46:423 (1,2) - 因为前面都是跳 所以这个很容易也被当成跳. 把new combo放在(2)上吧
01:16:192 (7) - 往下一格 这样就不会和01:16:423 (1) 的结尾重叠
> < 赶紧rank呀 等了万年了
;_; 路过骗kd
maybe try this for tick sounds?
好图所以只能胡乱nazi一下orz 纯建议
[Easy]
00:15:038 (1) - 初见莫名被坑orz
00:31:192 (1) - Easy弄anti jump真的合适吗o.o
others fine
[Normal]
00:31:654 - 这里空出来我感觉对新手其实更难打的...看你了
00:32:346 - ^
00:40:654 (2) - 新手向的图还是多考虑下vocal可能合适点 移到00:40:423 - ?
01:05:577 - 这里加个note和下一个统一下 可能对新手更友善 (我觉得听起来也更好
01:19:654 - 或许加个note更好..?
[Summer]
00:10:654 (1) - 提早1/4开始?
00:37:192 (7) - 这张图不涉及overlap 这样挡了一点的reverse不大好看 我觉得可以改为和00:38:807 (2) - 平行
00:55:884 (5) - 这个note好像凭空冒出来的...delete或者move to 00:56:115 (spinner晚1/4开始) ?
01:13:423 (2) - 这个...HP条小心再被戳一次啊
[Insane]
00:01:423 (2,3) - 感觉这两个+whistle更好听点..?
00:06:038 (3) - 这个三角歪了点 玩的时候还是挺明显的..向右移一格半左右..
00:25:654 (4,5) - 我觉得降到35%左右听起来会舒服些..?
00:30:038 (4,5) - ^
01:03:038 (1) - 这个slider尾是不是去掉clap更好o.o?
01:11:346 (4,5) - (4)上+clap然后(5)不加..?
01:18:500 (3,4) - 目前这两个note来看的趋势是在微弱逆时针旋转, 虽然是跳不过看起来挤了. 考虑改为顺时针?...或者至少修成平行也好.
Nice map. 祝快rank ;_;
maybe try this for tick sounds?
好图所以只能胡乱nazi一下orz 纯建议
[Easy]
00:31:192 (1) - Easy弄anti jump真的合适吗o.o
others fine
[Normal]
00:31:654 - 这里空出来我感觉对新手其实更难打的...看你了
00:32:346 - ^
00:40:654 (2) - 新手向的图还是多考虑下vocal可能合适点 移到00:40:423 - ?
01:05:577 - 这里加个note和下一个统一下 可能对新手更友善 (我觉得听起来也更好
01:19:654 - 或许加个note更好..?
[Summer]
00:10:654 (1) - 提早1/4开始?
00:37:192 (7) - 这张图不涉及overlap 这样挡了一点的reverse不大好看 我觉得可以改为和00:38:807 (2) - 平行
00:55:884 (5) - 这个note好像凭空冒出来的...delete或者move to 00:56:115 (spinner晚1/4开始) ?
01:13:423 (2) - 这个...HP条小心再被戳一次啊
[Insane]
00:01:423 (2,3) - 感觉这两个+whistle更好听点..?
00:06:038 (3) - 这个三角歪了点 玩的时候还是挺明显的..向右移一格半左右..
00:25:654 (4,5) - 我觉得降到35%左右听起来会舒服些..?
00:30:038 (4,5) - ^
01:03:038 (1) - 这个slider尾是不是去掉clap更好o.o?
01:11:346 (4,5) - (4)上+clap然后(5)不加..?
01:18:500 (3,4) - 目前这两个note来看的趋势是在微弱逆时针旋转, 虽然是跳不过看起来挤了. 考虑改为顺时针?...或者至少修成平行也好.
Nice map. 祝快rank ;_;
IRC modding.
Edit:
After like 4 more rounds of IRC modding, I think we're good to go here.
Bubbled!
:U
SPOILER
07:13 <Garven> : In Insane: 01:09:961 - Start kiai here
07:14 <Shinki> : fix(include all diff?...
07:14 <Garven> : All other diffs start there. ;p
07:14 <Garven> : Only insane didn't
07:14 <Shinki> : my mistake ;_;
07:15 <Garven> : In Easy: 00:52:884 (3) - This didn't play well to me. Felt better at 00:52:654 -
07:17 <Garven> : Normal: 00:35:346 (1) - This was kind of strange. Would work better as just two circles at 00:35:346 - and 00:35:807 -
07:17 <Garven> : 00:45:038 (5) - A four-hit repeat was kind of weird - especially when you stacked it
07:19 <Garven> : I think I see why Sakura was thinknig the timing was weird
07:19 <Garven> : 01:13:192 (1,2,3,4) -
07:19 <Garven> : The singer gets really off during this part
07:20 <Garven> : But the background music stays in time.
07:20 <Shinki> : hmm, yup..
07:21 <Garven> : Summer: 00:21:731 (3,4,5,1,2) - Strange having the increased spacing here.
07:21 <Garven> : 00:39:500 (1,2) - Eeeh
07:22 <Garven> : Felt better like this: http://puu.sh/6MSS
07:24 <Garven> : 00:42:731 (5) - This is kinda ugly. Maybe something like this? http://puu.sh/6MT5
07:24 <Shinki> : I havent finish fixing the normal part OTZ so sorry....
07:24 <Garven> : No worries, the chat won't go away. :P
07:24 <Garven> : Ugh, that example I gave is pretty ugly too
07:25 <Shinki> : :O
07:26 <Garven> : http://puu.sh/6MTl
07:26 <Garven> : There we go
07:27 <Garven> : 01:06:500 (1,2,3,4) - I didn't like how this flowed
07:27 <Garven> : You move up then go for the smooth long slider in the opposite direction.
07:27 <Garven> : It's not very smooth to play.
07:28 <Garven> : It'd be cool if you could continue the counter-clockwise motion with the slider instead of going down and clockwise
07:28 <Garven> : 01:09:500 (1,2,3,4) - This just sounds really bad against the music - especially during such a powerful moment.
07:29 <Garven> : 01:18:269 (1) - Lower the volume on this please ><
07:30 <Garven> : In Insane: 00:25:654 (4,5,6) - This is a really awkward place to put this kind of rhythm
07:30 <Garven> : Doing it at 00:25:192 - would fit better
07:31 <Garven> : 00:33:961 (1) - It'd be cool to put this in the center of the two triangles you made
07:32 <Garven> : 00:35:346 (1) - Why is spacing so huge during such a soft part of the song?
07:33 <Garven> : 01:09:269 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - Instead of a stream leading into this part, I think a triplet rhythm would give a more powerful feel.
07:33 <Garven> : http://puu.sh/6MU3
07:14 <Shinki> : fix(include all diff?...
07:14 <Garven> : All other diffs start there. ;p
07:14 <Garven> : Only insane didn't
07:14 <Shinki> : my mistake ;_;
07:15 <Garven> : In Easy: 00:52:884 (3) - This didn't play well to me. Felt better at 00:52:654 -
07:17 <Garven> : Normal: 00:35:346 (1) - This was kind of strange. Would work better as just two circles at 00:35:346 - and 00:35:807 -
07:17 <Garven> : 00:45:038 (5) - A four-hit repeat was kind of weird - especially when you stacked it
07:19 <Garven> : I think I see why Sakura was thinknig the timing was weird
07:19 <Garven> : 01:13:192 (1,2,3,4) -
07:19 <Garven> : The singer gets really off during this part
07:20 <Garven> : But the background music stays in time.
07:20 <Shinki> : hmm, yup..
07:21 <Garven> : Summer: 00:21:731 (3,4,5,1,2) - Strange having the increased spacing here.
07:21 <Garven> : 00:39:500 (1,2) - Eeeh
07:22 <Garven> : Felt better like this: http://puu.sh/6MSS
07:24 <Garven> : 00:42:731 (5) - This is kinda ugly. Maybe something like this? http://puu.sh/6MT5
07:24 <Shinki> : I havent finish fixing the normal part OTZ so sorry....
07:24 <Garven> : No worries, the chat won't go away. :P
07:24 <Garven> : Ugh, that example I gave is pretty ugly too
07:25 <Shinki> : :O
07:26 <Garven> : http://puu.sh/6MTl
07:26 <Garven> : There we go
07:27 <Garven> : 01:06:500 (1,2,3,4) - I didn't like how this flowed
07:27 <Garven> : You move up then go for the smooth long slider in the opposite direction.
07:27 <Garven> : It's not very smooth to play.
07:28 <Garven> : It'd be cool if you could continue the counter-clockwise motion with the slider instead of going down and clockwise
07:28 <Garven> : 01:09:500 (1,2,3,4) - This just sounds really bad against the music - especially during such a powerful moment.
07:29 <Garven> : 01:18:269 (1) - Lower the volume on this please ><
07:30 <Garven> : In Insane: 00:25:654 (4,5,6) - This is a really awkward place to put this kind of rhythm
07:30 <Garven> : Doing it at 00:25:192 - would fit better
07:31 <Garven> : 00:33:961 (1) - It'd be cool to put this in the center of the two triangles you made
07:32 <Garven> : 00:35:346 (1) - Why is spacing so huge during such a soft part of the song?
07:33 <Garven> : 01:09:269 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - Instead of a stream leading into this part, I think a triplet rhythm would give a more powerful feel.
07:33 <Garven> : http://puu.sh/6MU3
Edit:
After like 4 more rounds of IRC modding, I think we're good to go here.
Bubbled!
:U
Topic Starter
ThanksGarven wrote:
IRC modding.SPOILER07:13 <Garven> : In Insane: 01:09:961 - Start kiai here
07:14 <Shinki> : fix(include all diff?...
07:14 <Garven> : All other diffs start there. ;p
07:14 <Garven> : Only insane didn't
07:14 <Shinki> : my mistake ;_;
07:15 <Garven> : In Easy: 00:52:884 (3) - This didn't play well to me. Felt better at 00:52:654 -
07:17 <Garven> : Normal: 00:35:346 (1) - This was kind of strange. Would work better as just two circles at 00:35:346 - and 00:35:807 -
07:17 <Garven> : 00:45:038 (5) - A four-hit repeat was kind of weird - especially when you stacked it
07:19 <Garven> : I think I see why Sakura was thinknig the timing was weird
07:19 <Garven> : 01:13:192 (1,2,3,4) -
07:19 <Garven> : The singer gets really off during this part
07:20 <Garven> : But the background music stays in time.
07:20 <Shinki> : hmm, yup..
07:21 <Garven> : Summer: 00:21:731 (3,4,5,1,2) - Strange having the increased spacing here.
07:21 <Garven> : 00:39:500 (1,2) - Eeeh
07:22 <Garven> : Felt better like this: http://puu.sh/6MSS
07:24 <Garven> : 00:42:731 (5) - This is kinda ugly. Maybe something like this? http://puu.sh/6MT5
07:24 <Shinki> : I havent finish fixing the normal part OTZ so sorry....
07:24 <Garven> : No worries, the chat won't go away.
07:24 <Garven> : Ugh, that example I gave is pretty ugly too
07:25 <Shinki> : :O
07:26 <Garven> : http://puu.sh/6MTl
07:26 <Garven> : There we go
07:27 <Garven> : 01:06:500 (1,2,3,4) - I didn't like how this flowed
07:27 <Garven> : You move up then go for the smooth long slider in the opposite direction.
07:27 <Garven> : It's not very smooth to play.
07:28 <Garven> : It'd be cool if you could continue the counter-clockwise motion with the slider instead of going down and clockwise
07:28 <Garven> : 01:09:500 (1,2,3,4) - This just sounds really bad against the music - especially during such a powerful moment.
07:29 <Garven> : 01:18:269 (1) - Lower the volume on this please ><
07:30 <Garven> : In Insane: 00:25:654 (4,5,6) - This is a really awkward place to put this kind of rhythm
07:30 <Garven> : Doing it at 00:25:192 - would fit better
07:31 <Garven> : 00:33:961 (1) - It'd be cool to put this in the center of the two triangles you made
07:32 <Garven> : 00:35:346 (1) - Why is spacing so huge during such a soft part of the song?
07:33 <Garven> : 01:09:269 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - Instead of a stream leading into this part, I think a triplet rhythm would give a more powerful feel.
07:33 <Garven> : http://puu.sh/6MU3
Edit:
After like 4 more rounds of IRC modding, I think we're good to go here.
Bubbled!
:U
[Summer]
00:24:038 (2,3,4) - The spacing between these notes doesn't seem so good. Space them properly.
01:22:423 (x) - Make the kiai end here like you did on the other difficulties.
[Insane]
00:34:654 (x) - Remove this break, it's totally useless.
Let me know when you've fixed everything so I'll be able to rank this.
00:24:038 (2,3,4) - The spacing between these notes doesn't seem so good. Space them properly.
01:22:423 (x) - Make the kiai end here like you did on the other difficulties.
[Insane]
00:34:654 (x) - Remove this break, it's totally useless.
Let me know when you've fixed everything so I'll be able to rank this.
Topic Starter
osuplayer111 wrote:
[Summer]
00:24:038 (2,3,4) - The spacing between these notes doesn't seem so good. Space them properly.
01:22:423 (x) - Make the kiai end here like you did on the other difficulties.
[Insane]
00:34:654 (x) - Remove this break, it's totally useless.
Let me know when you've fixed everything so I'll be able to rank this.
all fix X)
Looks pretty good now to me!
Ranked~
Ranked~
Topic Starter
osuplayer111 wrote:
Looks pretty good now to me!
Ranked~
thanksyeahyeahyeah~~~~
Kouyou disgust me
恭喜神触326~:3
祝贺啊
恭喜啊=w=总算是rank了
326>~<
居然还有我名。。
噗 色卡居然选了神器菌的图让post
怎么说呢 当初这图刚作出来的时候我就有在看了
中间经历里很多 找mod 找泡 被戳 又找泡 再被rank 感觉好像昨天一样啊
总的来说这是一张能够让人放松的 十分文艺的好图吧
怎么说呢 当初这图刚作出来的时候我就有在看了
中间经历里很多 找mod 找泡 被戳 又找泡 再被rank 感觉好像昨天一样啊
总的来说这是一张能够让人放松的 十分文艺的好图吧