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WHITE-LIPS - Kouyou (Short ver.)

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Garven
IRC modding.

SPOILER
07:13 <Garven> : In Insane: 01:09:961 - Start kiai here
07:14 <Shinki> : fix(include all diff?...
07:14 <Garven> : All other diffs start there. ;p
07:14 <Garven> : Only insane didn't
07:14 <Shinki> : my mistake ;_;
07:15 <Garven> : In Easy: 00:52:884 (3) - This didn't play well to me. Felt better at 00:52:654 -
07:17 <Garven> : Normal: 00:35:346 (1) - This was kind of strange. Would work better as just two circles at 00:35:346 - and 00:35:807 -
07:17 <Garven> : 00:45:038 (5) - A four-hit repeat was kind of weird - especially when you stacked it
07:19 <Garven> : I think I see why Sakura was thinknig the timing was weird
07:19 <Garven> : 01:13:192 (1,2,3,4) -
07:19 <Garven> : The singer gets really off during this part
07:20 <Garven> : But the background music stays in time.
07:20 <Shinki> : hmm, yup..
07:21 <Garven> : Summer: 00:21:731 (3,4,5,1,2) - Strange having the increased spacing here.
07:21 <Garven> : 00:39:500 (1,2) - Eeeh
07:22 <Garven> : Felt better like this: http://puu.sh/6MSS
07:24 <Garven> : 00:42:731 (5) - This is kinda ugly. Maybe something like this? http://puu.sh/6MT5
07:24 <Shinki> : I havent finish fixing the normal part OTZ so sorry....
07:24 <Garven> : No worries, the chat won't go away. :P
07:24 <Garven> : Ugh, that example I gave is pretty ugly too
07:25 <Shinki> : :O
07:26 <Garven> : http://puu.sh/6MTl
07:26 <Garven> : There we go
07:27 <Garven> : 01:06:500 (1,2,3,4) - I didn't like how this flowed
07:27 <Garven> : You move up then go for the smooth long slider in the opposite direction.
07:27 <Garven> : It's not very smooth to play.
07:28 <Garven> : It'd be cool if you could continue the counter-clockwise motion with the slider instead of going down and clockwise
07:28 <Garven> : 01:09:500 (1,2,3,4) - This just sounds really bad against the music - especially during such a powerful moment.
07:29 <Garven> : 01:18:269 (1) - Lower the volume on this please ><
07:30 <Garven> : In Insane: 00:25:654 (4,5,6) - This is a really awkward place to put this kind of rhythm
07:30 <Garven> : Doing it at 00:25:192 - would fit better
07:31 <Garven> : 00:33:961 (1) - It'd be cool to put this in the center of the two triangles you made
07:32 <Garven> : 00:35:346 (1) - Why is spacing so huge during such a soft part of the song?
07:33 <Garven> : 01:09:269 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - Instead of a stream leading into this part, I think a triplet rhythm would give a more powerful feel.
07:33 <Garven> : http://puu.sh/6MU3

Edit:

After like 4 more rounds of IRC modding, I think we're good to go here.

Bubbled!

:U
Topic Starter
Shinki

Garven wrote:

IRC modding.

SPOILER
07:13 <Garven> : In Insane: 01:09:961 - Start kiai here
07:14 <Shinki> : fix(include all diff?...
07:14 <Garven> : All other diffs start there. ;p
07:14 <Garven> : Only insane didn't
07:14 <Shinki> : my mistake ;_;
07:15 <Garven> : In Easy: 00:52:884 (3) - This didn't play well to me. Felt better at 00:52:654 -
07:17 <Garven> : Normal: 00:35:346 (1) - This was kind of strange. Would work better as just two circles at 00:35:346 - and 00:35:807 -
07:17 <Garven> : 00:45:038 (5) - A four-hit repeat was kind of weird - especially when you stacked it
07:19 <Garven> : I think I see why Sakura was thinknig the timing was weird
07:19 <Garven> : 01:13:192 (1,2,3,4) -
07:19 <Garven> : The singer gets really off during this part
07:20 <Garven> : But the background music stays in time.
07:20 <Shinki> : hmm, yup..
07:21 <Garven> : Summer: 00:21:731 (3,4,5,1,2) - Strange having the increased spacing here.
07:21 <Garven> : 00:39:500 (1,2) - Eeeh
07:22 <Garven> : Felt better like this: http://puu.sh/6MSS
07:24 <Garven> : 00:42:731 (5) - This is kinda ugly. Maybe something like this? http://puu.sh/6MT5
07:24 <Shinki> : I havent finish fixing the normal part OTZ so sorry....
07:24 <Garven> : No worries, the chat won't go away. :P
07:24 <Garven> : Ugh, that example I gave is pretty ugly too
07:25 <Shinki> : :O
07:26 <Garven> : http://puu.sh/6MTl
07:26 <Garven> : There we go
07:27 <Garven> : 01:06:500 (1,2,3,4) - I didn't like how this flowed
07:27 <Garven> : You move up then go for the smooth long slider in the opposite direction.
07:27 <Garven> : It's not very smooth to play.
07:28 <Garven> : It'd be cool if you could continue the counter-clockwise motion with the slider instead of going down and clockwise
07:28 <Garven> : 01:09:500 (1,2,3,4) - This just sounds really bad against the music - especially during such a powerful moment.
07:29 <Garven> : 01:18:269 (1) - Lower the volume on this please ><
07:30 <Garven> : In Insane: 00:25:654 (4,5,6) - This is a really awkward place to put this kind of rhythm
07:30 <Garven> : Doing it at 00:25:192 - would fit better
07:31 <Garven> : 00:33:961 (1) - It'd be cool to put this in the center of the two triangles you made
07:32 <Garven> : 00:35:346 (1) - Why is spacing so huge during such a soft part of the song?
07:33 <Garven> : 01:09:269 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - Instead of a stream leading into this part, I think a triplet rhythm would give a more powerful feel.
07:33 <Garven> : http://puu.sh/6MU3

Edit:

After like 4 more rounds of IRC modding, I think we're good to go here.

Bubbled!

:U
Thanks :)
Andrea
[Summer]

00:24:038 (2,3,4) - The spacing between these notes doesn't seem so good. Space them properly.
01:22:423 (x) - Make the kiai end here like you did on the other difficulties.


[Insane]

00:34:654 (x) - Remove this break, it's totally useless.

Let me know when you've fixed everything so I'll be able to rank this.
Topic Starter
Shinki

osuplayer111 wrote:

[Summer]

00:24:038 (2,3,4) - The spacing between these notes doesn't seem so good. Space them properly.
01:22:423 (x) - Make the kiai end here like you did on the other difficulties.


[Insane]

00:34:654 (x) - Remove this break, it's totally useless.

Let me know when you've fixed everything so I'll be able to rank this.

all fix X)
Andrea
Looks pretty good now to me!

Ranked~
Topic Starter
Shinki

osuplayer111 wrote:

Looks pretty good now to me!

Ranked~

:) thanks
S h i o n
yeahyeahyeah~~~~

Kouyou disgust me
Megurine Luka
恭喜神触326~:3
JauiPlaY
Hello sir,
and congrats sir.
Curisu
祝贺啊
Shirakawa Kotori
恭喜啊=w=总算是rank了
AoiX
326GJ
Kotone
326>~<
IkkiMinami
congrats :)
Nymph

Shiki
>A< Congratz~~~!!!
Topic Starter
Shinki
>A< thanks, allll guys
MisakaMikoto
居然还有我名。。
JauiPlaY
噗 色卡居然选了神器菌的图让post
怎么说呢 当初这图刚作出来的时候我就有在看了
中间经历里很多 找mod 找泡 被戳 又找泡 再被rank 感觉好像昨天一样啊
总的来说这是一张能够让人放松的 十分文艺的好图吧
jogfi2002
原来是这张图……

第一次打的时候觉得音效好棒,配上这首安静的曲子,让人很享受。
然后就想起了当时在萌乃妹组里看他们讨论翻译的时候,哈哈,文艺的朱门优。
大概澄色这游戏本身就文艺得不得了吧,从OP的感觉也能看出来。
有空得补补这作w还有朱门的代表作,いつか、あの空に、届く
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