[General]
- Don't you think OD 8 is a little over kill for a Normal difficulty? Maybe 7 is better.
- Also HP 8 for hyper. Maybe 7.5 works better?
- I feel like OD 9 for Another is simply too much. While there's only a few LNs, there's also not that many notes either. ~8.5 would be ideal.
[Normal]00:03:647 - Since you're following the piano here, like at 00:02:522 (2522|3,2709|5,3084|6,3272|4) , I'd highly recommend adding a note since there's also a piano there
00:07:584 - ^^
00:10:209 (10209|4,10397|6) - Idk if a jack is appropriate for this difficulty, but since these two notes are the same pitch, you might consider putting them in the same column.
00:11:147 - Shouldn't this be a triple is you made similar sounds like 00:06:647 (6647|4,6647|0,6647|7) triples too?
00:12:647 - Also, note for piano here too.
00:14:897 (14897|2,15084|4,15272|6,15459|4) - Since the pitch is all descending, why not try something like this instead
00:15:647 - Also, triple since it's the same sound as 00:06:647 (6647|4,6647|0,6647|7)
00:17:147 - Piano, and etc, you get the point of what I'm going at in this intro section.
00:17:897 (17897|3,18272|5) - Since these are the same pitch, put these in the same column as each other?
00:18:084 (18084|4,18459|2) - The first note is lower in pitch than the second, so you might consider control J or something.
00:29:709 (29709|6,29709|4,30272|3,30272|5,30834|4,30834|2) - Control H and shift one column to the right or something because the pitch of each chord is going up. Basically, 00:29:709 (29709|4,29709|6) is lower pitched than 00:30:272 (30272|3,30272|5) which is lower pitched than 00:30:834 (30834|2,30834|4) and etc.
01:05:147 - Starting in this section, I'd highly recommend following not only the piano, but the drum too, in order to make this section play differently than the beginning, and to have a constant 1/1 beat to help players keep time. Examples of where you'd add notes for the kicks would be like 01:05:522 - 01:05:897 - 01:06:647 - 01:07:022 - 01:08:147 - 01:10:022 and etc.
[Hyper]00:10:209 (10209|5,10397|3) - Might want to consider jacking this for pitch relevancy. If not, I'd consider making 00:10:022 (10022|7,10209|5,10397|3,10584|1) go from left -> right since the pitch gets higher.
00:18:834 - Add a note here for the piano? Despite it being kind of quieter, you mapped the piano at 00:21:459 (21459|4) when it's around the same volume.
00:23:709 - 00:27:084 - And these too?
00:43:022 (43022|3,43209|1) - I'd consider removing these notes since they're really difficult to hear over the crash at 00:42:647 . To add, you didn't map it at 00:38:522 - 00:38:709 either
00:48:272 - Missing note here for the piano?
00:50:897 (50897|1,51084|4,51272|6,51459|7) - I would consider making this go from right -> left since the pitch is descending.
00:53:334 (53334|4,53709|7) - Shouldn't these be jacked since they're the same pitch as each other? Similar to what you did at 00:48:834 (48834|4,49209|4)
01:05:147 (65147|4) - I'd consider moving this to 7 to create an even 3 note jack like at 01:04:772 (64772|1,64959|1,65147|1)
01:49:772 (109772|6,109865|5,109959|6,110053|5) - If you mapped this here, why didn't you map it the other times it appeared like at 00:51:272 - 01:13:772 - 01:22:772 - and especially at 01:45:272 - since it's in the same section of the music.
01:54:647 (114647|0,114647|1,114647|4,114647|6) - Honestly, for such a simple and quiet sound, 4 notes feels overdone. At most, 3 notes would be fitting, but 2 notes at the most would work best imo.
Also, is it normal to have long stacks like 01:27:647 (87647|1,88022|1,88397|1,88772|1,89147|1,89522|1,89897|1,90272|1,90647|1,91022|1,91397|1,91772|1,92147|1,92522|1,92897|1,93272|1,93647|1,94022|1,94397|1,94772|1,95147|1,95522|1,95897|1,96272|1,96647|1,97022|1,97397|1,97772|1,98147|1,98522|1,98897|1,99272|1,99647|1,100022|1,100397|1,100772|1,101147|1,101522|1,101897|1,102272|1,102647|1,103022|1,103397|1,103772|1,104147|1,104334|2,104522|1,104897|1,105272|1,105647|1,106022|1,106397|1,106772|1,107147|1,107522|1,107897|1,108272|1,108647|1,109022|1,109397|1,109772|1,110147|1,110522|1,110897|1,111272|1,111647|1,112022|1,112397|1,112584|1,112772|1,112959|1,113147|1,113334|1,113522|1,113709|1,113897|1,114084|1,114272|1,114459|1,114647|1) - and etc. in 7K + 1 maps? I've never really played them before, so idk if that's a common thing or not. Just raising a question.
[Another]00:06:365 (6365|4) - This note is redundant if you're not going to map any of the other 1/4 clicks in this section, and there's no 1/4 piano here either, so remove?
00:15:365 (15365|6) - ^^
00:33:647 - Imo, it feels strange to have been following the piano so closely in all the other diffs and even the beginning of this difficulty, then stopping completely and instead mapping a 1/1 rhythm instead. I'd highly suggest adding notes for the piano like you did at 00:37:397 (37397|4,37584|5,37772|6,37959|7)
01:35:334 (95334|4,95522|4,95897|4) - I think the jack might be a bit too surprising since it isn't all that clear in the music that you're mapping the vocal a's here. I'd consider moving these notes to different columns since it's harder to hear the vocal at these places than at 01:36:084 for example.
