Normal
00:01:700 (1) - The end of this blanket is too close.
00:05:700 (3,4,5,6) - Maybe a rhythm like this would be better? http://imgur.com/Mh3dFGh
00:15:034 (1,3) - Stack these properly
00:16:367 (3) - Delete the middle tick in this slider, then re-add it with ctrl+click. This will reset the curve and make it more perfect
00:25:700 (1,2,3) - Too hard for a normal IMO
00:27:700 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - The placement of these sliders seem random. Try to make some patterns with them.
00:33:700 (5) - The Blanket is off (By the way you can use the approach circle of 4 to tell if it's good.)
00:35:034 (7,8) - Why not make these parallel
00:39:700 (5) - Copy 4 and replace this slider with it. Ctrl+h and ctrl+j to make them symmetrical
00:40:367 (1,1) - These aren't stacked
00:44:367 (1,2,3,1) - Not a perfect square (Try Ctrl+D)
00:46:367 (3,1) - Not stacked
00:48:367 (3,4) - This pattern feels a bit boring. Try switching it up a bit?
00:52:367 (1) - The curve of this is natural. Like last time, remove the two middle ticks and replace it with one to reset the curve.
00:57:367 (3) - This slider ends on a heavy beat (large white tick on the timeline.) It's much more preferable to START a note or slider on a heavy beat than to end one
01:00:034 (5) - ^
01:04:034 (4) - ^
01:10:700 (4) - ^
01:07:367 (1,2,3) - Try and make this triangle better.
01:18:367 (3,1) - Not stacked
01:00:034 (5) - I feel like this part has too many straight sliders. Feels a bit boring.
Overall nice difficulty, but the shapes could use cleaning up and some more interesting patterns. Otherwise well done!
00:05:700 (3,4,5,6) - Maybe a rhythm like this would be better? http://imgur.com/Mh3dFGh
00:15:034 (1,3) - Stack these properly
00:16:367 (3) - Delete the middle tick in this slider, then re-add it with ctrl+click. This will reset the curve and make it more perfect
00:25:700 (1,2,3) - Too hard for a normal IMO
00:27:700 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - The placement of these sliders seem random. Try to make some patterns with them.
00:33:700 (5) - The Blanket is off (By the way you can use the approach circle of 4 to tell if it's good.)
00:35:034 (7,8) - Why not make these parallel
00:39:700 (5) - Copy 4 and replace this slider with it. Ctrl+h and ctrl+j to make them symmetrical
00:40:367 (1,1) - These aren't stacked
00:44:367 (1,2,3,1) - Not a perfect square (Try Ctrl+D)
00:46:367 (3,1) - Not stacked
00:48:367 (3,4) - This pattern feels a bit boring. Try switching it up a bit?
00:52:367 (1) - The curve of this is natural. Like last time, remove the two middle ticks and replace it with one to reset the curve.
00:57:367 (3) - This slider ends on a heavy beat (large white tick on the timeline.) It's much more preferable to START a note or slider on a heavy beat than to end one
01:00:034 (5) - ^
01:04:034 (4) - ^
01:10:700 (4) - ^
01:07:367 (1,2,3) - Try and make this triangle better.
01:18:367 (3,1) - Not stacked
01:00:034 (5) - I feel like this part has too many straight sliders. Feels a bit boring.
Hard
00:01:700 (1,4) - Blanket (Man I feel SO bad for starting with "blanket" but whatever)
00:05:200 (4) - Replace this with a note and then a 1/2 slider because this current one skips a beat and it feels weird.
00:08:034 (3) - Ends on a strong beat. Refer to normal section about this.
00:09:367 (1) - ^
00:09:867 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - This patterns timing seems really weird, mainly because of the hitsounds on the ends of the sliders and not the beginning.
00:14:700 - Add a beat here
00:15:367 (2,3) - I wouldn't stack the notes here as they are far apart from eachother on the timeline.
00:16:867 (2) - Make this one more perfectly blanket 1
00:19:034 (1,2,3,4,5) - Way too hard. You have this really slow part then BAM. You know what I mean?
00:23:367 (3,1,2) - Stack?
00:27:367 (2,3) - Blanket?
00:30:700 (8) - This shape seems a bit forced. Try just a regular curved slider
00:46:534 (3,1) - This jump is a bit unnatural. I suggest you just remove it.
00:48:700 (6,1) - I think this jump is a bit weird as well.
00:47:034 (2,3,5,6,2,3,5,6) - Turn these into sliders. The rapid mashing of the keys is sure to kill any hard more player.
00:52:867 (2,3) - Blanket?
00:54:867 (1) - I think you should move this two ticks forward to start on the large white tick. It feels too early.
00:56:034 (4) - Ends on a strong beat
00:56:534 (1,2,3) - These are started on the offbeat (red ticks). I suggest you move then forwards or backwards two ticks to make it play much better.
Much like 00:59:034 (1,2,3)
01:10:034 (6,7) - Put the clap hitsounds on the beginning of the sliders
01:16:367 (1) - This slider is too small to make a GOOD wavy shape.
01:18:367 (4) - ^
01:17:700 (3) - Curve is unnatural. Redo the middle tick.
01:28:034 (1) - Ends on the final strong beat. I HIGHLY suggest that you end on a note or something.
Overall, this difficulty suffers from a lot of things being off beat and from some weird patterns. However, that's pretty much the only thing that really stands out to me.
00:05:200 (4) - Replace this with a note and then a 1/2 slider because this current one skips a beat and it feels weird.
00:08:034 (3) - Ends on a strong beat. Refer to normal section about this.
00:09:367 (1) - ^
00:09:867 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - This patterns timing seems really weird, mainly because of the hitsounds on the ends of the sliders and not the beginning.
00:14:700 - Add a beat here
00:15:367 (2,3) - I wouldn't stack the notes here as they are far apart from eachother on the timeline.
00:16:867 (2) - Make this one more perfectly blanket 1
00:19:034 (1,2,3,4,5) - Way too hard. You have this really slow part then BAM. You know what I mean?
00:23:367 (3,1,2) - Stack?
00:27:367 (2,3) - Blanket?
00:30:700 (8) - This shape seems a bit forced. Try just a regular curved slider
00:46:534 (3,1) - This jump is a bit unnatural. I suggest you just remove it.
00:48:700 (6,1) - I think this jump is a bit weird as well.
00:47:034 (2,3,5,6,2,3,5,6) - Turn these into sliders. The rapid mashing of the keys is sure to kill any hard more player.
00:52:867 (2,3) - Blanket?
00:54:867 (1) - I think you should move this two ticks forward to start on the large white tick. It feels too early.
00:56:034 (4) - Ends on a strong beat
00:56:534 (1,2,3) - These are started on the offbeat (red ticks). I suggest you move then forwards or backwards two ticks to make it play much better.
Much like 00:59:034 (1,2,3)
01:10:034 (6,7) - Put the clap hitsounds on the beginning of the sliders
01:16:367 (1) - This slider is too small to make a GOOD wavy shape.
01:18:367 (4) - ^
01:17:700 (3) - Curve is unnatural. Redo the middle tick.
01:28:034 (1) - Ends on the final strong beat. I HIGHLY suggest that you end on a note or something.
Insane
00:10:034 (2,4) - Stack?
00:16:367 (1,2) - Good opportunity for a blanket
00:19:867 (4,5) - Oh man this is a big jump. I know it's insane but are you sure?
00:20:867 (3) - Bring the middle tick down to blanket better
00:23:034 (1,3) - Make the curve of these two more natural by redoing the middle ticks
00:28:367 (1,2) - ^
00:54:367 (4,1) - Blanket
00:54:867 (1,2) - ^
00:56:034 (4,1) - Why have a clap on both? Sounds odd.
00:59:700 (5,6,7) - The triplet is a bit forced here.
01:03:034 (1) - I suggest moving this farther away from 4.
01:10:367 (5,7) - Stack
01:22:034 (2,3) - I suggest you move 2 closer to 1, and 3 farther from 1. Makes it easier to read.
01:26:200 (6,7) - Spread these apart.
01:26:868 (1) - This shape could use some cleaning up.
01:27:700 (2,3,4) - Make a triangle?
Quite a nice difficulty. It could just use some cleaning up here and there. Nice job!
00:16:367 (1,2) - Good opportunity for a blanket
00:19:867 (4,5) - Oh man this is a big jump. I know it's insane but are you sure?
00:20:867 (3) - Bring the middle tick down to blanket better
00:23:034 (1,3) - Make the curve of these two more natural by redoing the middle ticks
00:28:367 (1,2) - ^
00:54:367 (4,1) - Blanket
00:54:867 (1,2) - ^
00:56:034 (4,1) - Why have a clap on both? Sounds odd.
00:59:700 (5,6,7) - The triplet is a bit forced here.
01:03:034 (1) - I suggest moving this farther away from 4.
01:10:367 (5,7) - Stack
01:22:034 (2,3) - I suggest you move 2 closer to 1, and 3 farther from 1. Makes it easier to read.
01:26:200 (6,7) - Spread these apart.
01:26:868 (1) - This shape could use some cleaning up.
01:27:700 (2,3,4) - Make a triangle?