Hiyaa~
I'm here from my queue, i've been modding all day.. phew, so i'm a bit tired, but ill do my best
End of the World
thzz's Insane
Insane
thats all from me, i hope this is useful!
I'm here from my queue, i've been modding all day.. phew, so i'm a bit tired, but ill do my best
End of the World
SPOILER
00:03:867 (5,6,7,1,2,3) - this looks kind of messy in my opinion, i think maybe you should make some neat looking triangles instead of the linear jumps with messy overlaps. https://puu.sh/sl85P/0b9919ee9f.jpg
00:09:701 (2,4) - maybe make these tilted to the same degree
00:10:034 (3,5) - overlap these
00:30:367 (4,5) - maybe done overlap these sliders, it doesn't flow very well and looks less than pleasing. Maybe just blanket them on each other and ctrl + g so it flows much better?
00:44:534 (2,5) - This section looks and plays really nice in my opinion
01:11:367 (3,5) - either overlap these or move 5 so it doesn't overlap at all
01:26:034 (4,1) - spacing from 4 to 1 is ridiculously big.
00:09:701 (2,4) - maybe make these tilted to the same degree
00:10:034 (3,5) - overlap these
00:30:367 (4,5) - maybe done overlap these sliders, it doesn't flow very well and looks less than pleasing. Maybe just blanket them on each other and ctrl + g so it flows much better?
00:44:534 (2,5) - This section looks and plays really nice in my opinion
01:11:367 (3,5) - either overlap these or move 5 so it doesn't overlap at all
01:26:034 (4,1) - spacing from 4 to 1 is ridiculously big.
thzz's Insane
SPOILER
00:10:534 (5,2) - Blanket 5 around the slider end of 2?
00:12:534 (2) - maybe don't have this angled up, as it goes against the flow and is a bit off putting
00:30:367 (4,5) - overlap these
00:40:034 (3,1) - the way 3 overlaps the end of 1 is kind of messy, maybe make it a complete overlap, or blanket it with 1.
00:44:034 (4,1) - overlap?
00:50:367 (2,3,4) - Possibly reduce the space from 2 to 3, its really awkward to play and doesn't really look good either.
01:28:451 (1) - extend the slider until the end of the piano sound?
00:12:534 (2) - maybe don't have this angled up, as it goes against the flow and is a bit off putting
00:30:367 (4,5) - overlap these
00:40:034 (3,1) - the way 3 overlaps the end of 1 is kind of messy, maybe make it a complete overlap, or blanket it with 1.
00:44:034 (4,1) - overlap?
00:50:367 (2,3,4) - Possibly reduce the space from 2 to 3, its really awkward to play and doesn't really look good either.
01:28:451 (1) - extend the slider until the end of the piano sound?
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SPOILER
00:03:367 (2,4) - you can probably rotate 4 a bit and then move 2 over, so 2 is also blanketed by the slider 3 as well as 4. https://puu.sh/sl8S1/dd89b18ba4.jpg
00:15:367 (2,4) - maybe make the slider curved and blanket 2 with it?
00:19:867 (4,5) - this jump is rather large, even though theres nothing to emphasise on that beat.
00:20:034 (5,1) - also overlap these
00:37:700 (1,1) - overlap these maybe? its just weird having the previous one 00:36:367 (1) - be overlapped by 00:37:700 (1) - but then 00:39:034 (1) - isnt overlapped
00:41:700 (3,1) - overlap?
00:53:367 (5,1) - also overlap these ones
00:54:367 (4,1) - overlap just a tiny bit, but it still looks messy
00:55:367 (2) - maybe if this was ctrl + h, ctrl + j and then ctrl + g then put back where it was, it would look and play a lot better https://puu.sh/sl9bv/a715bc9889.jpg
00:56:034 (4,1) - theres a really big space here which shouldn't be there, its really hard to play especially for a 4 star
01:23:034 (7,8) - overlap
00:15:367 (2,4) - maybe make the slider curved and blanket 2 with it?
00:19:867 (4,5) - this jump is rather large, even though theres nothing to emphasise on that beat.
00:20:034 (5,1) - also overlap these
00:37:700 (1,1) - overlap these maybe? its just weird having the previous one 00:36:367 (1) - be overlapped by 00:37:700 (1) - but then 00:39:034 (1) - isnt overlapped
00:41:700 (3,1) - overlap?
00:53:367 (5,1) - also overlap these ones
00:54:367 (4,1) - overlap just a tiny bit, but it still looks messy
00:55:367 (2) - maybe if this was ctrl + h, ctrl + j and then ctrl + g then put back where it was, it would look and play a lot better https://puu.sh/sl9bv/a715bc9889.jpg
00:56:034 (4,1) - theres a really big space here which shouldn't be there, its really hard to play especially for a 4 star
01:23:034 (7,8) - overlap
thats all from me, i hope this is useful!