Garven wrote:

A little IRC modding with minor fixes in Easy (grid modding, combos, and a note soon after spinner)

Re-bubbled!

:U

Komeiji Yuki wrote:

Go ranked :3 !!

1. I generally find 1/1 repeat sliders with more than 1 repeat to be confusing, because since it's an Easy, the slider speed is generally low, and the cursor often overlaps the second beat and hides the repeat arrow, which results in an unexpected repeat and often a combobreak. You should consider re-arranging patterns that use such sliders.
2. 00:01:466 (1,1) - You can avoid this overlap by curving 00:01:466 (1) - up instead of down.
3. 00:09:695 (1) - You can rearrange this curve to make it cuter by adding a sliderpoint. You can actually even make it blanket, which will make it look a lot better: http://puu.sh/2WpI To use this slider, find the line starting with 328,136,9695 and replace it with:

328,136,9695,6,2,B|360:107|360:48|336:15,2,125

1. 00:41:237 (1) - End this on the white tick before ? I don't see why it is on a blue tick.
2. 01:38:837 (1) - This slightly overlaps with a circle and a slider. If you turn the curve up, it will fix the overlap.
3. 02:17:237 (3) - Try reworking the slider so that the curve is less sharp ?
4. 02:29:923 (4) - Haven't you been using only circle for this part of the chorus ? It'd be better to use circles here as well

1. I find the spacing rather high for a Normal... It makes the 1/2 streams really hard. Also, same comment about repeat sliders that have more than one repeat.
2. The claps don't seem to follow specific patterns. I think you should revise the clap placement to make it sound more consistent.
3. 00:19:295 (1) - End on the white tick before ?
4. 00:50:837 (3,4,5) - Unstack ? They stop the cursor movement and break the flow...
5. 01:05:923 (1) - This slider's repeat is hidden by the text after completing the spinner.
6. 01:07:295 (2) - Why is this a 3/2 repeat slider ? I think it would be better to make it a 2/1 slider. It would follow the lyrics and be more intuitive, while the 3/2 slider doesn't seem to follow anything.
7. 01:18:266 (3) - Reworking this slider's curve would fix the overlap with the next slider.
8. 01:38:837 (1,2,3) - I find this to be really too hard for a Normal. I don't think the 1/2 follows anything ? On top of that, two 1/2 repeat sliders with one repeat are follow by a 1/2 repeat slider with 5 repeats, which might be extremely confusing for new players, as they'd expect only one repeat and stop holding the slider, and combobreak. (also very nazily move the endpoint of (3) to the left so it doesn't overlap the long slider after it.
9. 02:24:095 (4,5) - This is too hard too. It even confused me. I didn't expect the 1/2 repeat slider to be immediately followed by (5)... I suggest you replaced (4) with two circles 1/1 apart. The 1/2 repeat slider is confusing.

1. This is an Insane difficulty. There are too many added 1/2, too many 1/4s, and too many very difficult patterns and confusing patterns for this to be a Hard.
2. The score gap between this and Normal is really too high...
3. Make this start at the same point as the other diffs ? Remember to add the audio lead-in.
4. Use the same kiai as in the other diffs.
5. 00:22:037 (1) - This slider's hidden by the text that comes after completing the spinner.

1. AR9 feels so forced onto the map. AR8 would do fine.
2. I honestly didn't like this... It feels extremely overmapped. There are also extremely confusing patterns such as 00:31:637 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - made even more confusing because of the very fast approach circles. The spacing in some comboes is inconsistent as well like 00:43:980 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) -
3. 01:18:266 (1,2) - Why this unnecessary 1/4 here ? It's more confusing than anything, adds nothing to the song, and doesn't really make sense to the rhythm...
4. 01:27:866 (2) - At this speed I'm not sure people will see the repeat arrow... Try orientating the slider in a different direction
5. 02:27:866 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I don't see what could justufy those jumps. I'd just consider this is a spacing issue.
6. 02:32:837 (2) - Here again, I'm not sure people will see the repeat here. Try turning it to the left.

Odaril wrote:

Hello~ bubble check

Please reply to this mod saying what you didn't fix (and what you did) and why. Remember these are all suggestions.
Also, if you have any question, feel free to ask in-game

General
Seems fine.

Easy

1. I generally find 1/1 repeat sliders with more than 1 repeat to be confusing, because since it's an Easy, the slider speed is generally low, and the cursor often overlaps the second beat and hides the repeat arrow, which results in an unexpected repeat and often a combobreak. You should consider re-arranging patterns that use such sliders.
2. 00:01:466 (1,1) - You can avoid this overlap by curving 00:01:466 (1) - up instead of down.
3. 00:09:695 (1) - You can rearrange this curve to make it cuter by adding a sliderpoint. You can actually even make it blanket, which will make it look a lot better: http://puu.sh/2WpI To use this slider, find the line starting with 328,136,9695 and replace it with:

start at 00:11:066 -

328,136,9695,6,2,B|360:107|360:48|336:15,2,125

1. 00:41:237 (1) - End this on the white tick before ? I don't see why it is on a blue tick.fixed
2. 01:38:837 (1) - This slightly overlaps with a circle and a slider. If you turn the curve up, it will fix the overlap.fixed
3. 02:17:237 (3) - Try reworking the slider so that the curve is less sharp ?fixed
4. 02:29:923 (4) - Haven't you been using only circle for this part of the chorus ? It'd be better to use circles here as well

fixed

Normal

1. I find the spacing rather high for a Normal... It makes the 1/2 streams really hard. Also, same comment about repeat sliders that have more than one repeat.
2. The claps don't seem to follow specific patterns. I think you should revise the clap placement to make it sound more consistent.fixed
3. 00:19:295 (1) - End on the white tick before ?fixed
4. 00:50:837 (3,4,5) - Unstack ? They stop the cursor movement and break the flow...fixed
5. 01:05:923 (1) - This slider's repeat is hidden by the text after completing the spinner.fixed
6. 01:07:295 (2) - Why is this a 3/2 repeat slider ? I think it would be better to make it a 2/1 slider. It would follow the lyrics and be more intuitive, while the 3/2 slider doesn't seem to follow anything.fixed
7. 01:18:266 (3) - Reworking this slider's curve would fix the overlap with the next slider.fixed
8. 01:38:837 (1,2,3) - I find this to be really too hard for a Normal. I don't think the 1/2 follows anything ? On top of that, two 1/2 repeat sliders with one repeat are follow by a 1/2 repeat slider with 5 repeats, which might be extremely confusing for new players, as they'd expect only one repeat and stop holding the slider, and combobreak. (also very nazily move the endpoint of (3) to the left so it doesn't overlap the long slider after it.fixed
9. 02:24:095 (4,5) - This is too hard too. It even confused me. I didn't expect the 1/2 repeat slider to be immediately followed by (5)... I suggest you replaced (4) with two circles 1/1 apart. The 1/2 repeat slider is confusing.

fixed

gowww's Hard

1. This is an Insane difficulty. There are too many added 1/2, too many 1/4s, and too many very difficult patterns and confusing patterns for this to be a Hard.renamed
2. The score gap between this and Normal is really too high...
3. Make this start at the same point as the other diffs ? Remember to add the audio lead-in.other diffs start at same point~
4. Use the same kiai as in the other diffs.
5. 00:22:037 (1) - This slider's hidden by the text that comes after completing the spinner.

Insane

1. AR9 feels so forced onto the map. AR8 would do fine.i want to keep...
2. I honestly didn't like this... It feels extremely overmapped. There are also extremely confusing patterns such as 00:31:637 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - made even more confusing because of the very fast approach circles. The spacing in some comboes is inconsistent as well like 00:43:980 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) fixed
3. 01:18:266 (1,2) - Why this unnecessary 1/4 here ? It's more confusing than anything, adds nothing to the song, and doesn't really make sense to the rhythm...fixed
4. 01:27:866 (2) - At this speed I'm not sure people will see the repeat arrow... Try orientating the slider in a different directionfixed
5. 02:27:866 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I don't see what could justufy those jumps. I'd just consider this is a spacing issue.fixed
6. 02:32:837 (2) - Here again, I'm not sure people will see the repeat here. Try turning it to the left.

fixed


I'm sorry, this is not ready for a bubble yet.

laport wrote:

great map‼

Garven wrote:

[Easy]
00:49:466 (1) - Sliders like this with more than one repeat are the ones Odaril and I were talking about that can be quite confusing to new players. I really recommend that you change it up here.
00:58:380 (4,5) - Spacing
01:34:723 (1) - Remove nc
01:40:209 (1) - ^
01:44:323 - Drag break to here

[Normal]
01:44:323 - Drag break to here

[Lunatic]
01:44:323 - Drag break to here

Garven wrote:

[Easy]
Oops
00:34:380 (2,1) - Spacing

Anonymus wrote:

[Easy]
{
00:49:123 - adding a circle
01:03:180 - spinner till 01:06:952
}
[Normal]
{
00:15:866 - slider extend to 00:16:037
00:19:295 - spinner till 00:21:695
}
[gowww]
{
nothing to bitch about
}
[lunatic]
{
see above
}

Anonymus wrote:

SPOILER

[Easy]
{
00:49:123 - adding a circle
01:03:180 - spinner till 01:06:952
}
[Normal]
{
00:15:866 - slider extend to 00:16:037
00:19:295 - spinner till 00:21:695
}
[gowww]
{
nothing to bitch about
}
[lunatic]
{
see above
}