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- 00:00:530 (1,2,3) - too straight tbh, there is a high pitch on 00:01:412 - that should be enphasized with a movement to the opposite, the current transition doesn't emphasize such high pitch.
- 00:04:500 (1,2,3) - same as above about the straight movement, also I have a doubt about the distance between 00:01:853 (4,1,2,3) -, why not consistency with the first part if they have the same sound? e.g: 00:01:853 (4,1) - this is a normal transition but the current distance is longer than 00:00:971 (2,3) - when you have a high pitch on 00:01:412 -, why 00:04:941 (2,3) - have the same distance than 00:04:500 (1,2) -? why not the same distance as you did on 00:01:412 (3,4) -? I'll leave it to you.
- 00:05:382 (3,1) - don't you wanna add a hyper dash here? you have lot of reasons imo:
1.- High pitch on 00:07:588 -
2.- The beginning of a new stanza
3.- Also you emphasized with NewCombo
4.- Finish Hitsound - 00:12:441 (4,5) - following the distances around this pattern, 00:10:677 (8,1) - and 00:12:441 (4,5) - should have the same distance, I rather less distance at 00:10:677 (8,1) - than more distance at 00:12:441 (4,5) -, but it's up to you.
- 00:14:647 (1,2) - the distance could be reduced a bit imo, it feels like 00:15:971 (3,4) - deserve more distance than 00:14:647 (1,2) -, so it would be better if you move 00:15:530 (2,3) - to x:308
- 00:16:412 (4,5,1,2) - nice movement but... I'm sure that there is a high pitch at 00:18:177 - that is stronger than 00:18:177 - right? so why your current distance show the opposite? reduce at 00:16:412 (4,5) - and increase at 00:16:412 (4,5) -.
- 00:19:059 (2,3) - the current distance is too long imo also 00:20:382 (4,5) - doesn't have enough space to add more distance, at least same as 00:13:324 (6,7) -, so I strongly recommend you to move 00:19:941 (3,4) - around x:384
- 00:32:956 - aren't you skipping an important sound here? it might looks nicer if you add a note.
- 00:35:824 (1,2,3) - mmm why did you change your pattern? following your distances and structure: 00:34:059 (5,6,7) - 00:37:588 (4,5,6) - 00:38:471 (6,7,1) - 00:47:294 (2,3,4) - 00:48:177 (4,5,6) - etc... you always add more enphasis on the last object. So I suggest you to reduce the distance between 00:35:824 (1,2) - and increase at 00:36:485 (2,3) - to be more consistant.
- 00:42:000 (6,7) - increase the distance a bit to keep consistency with some similar patterns ( 00:13:765 (7,8,9,10) - 00:20:824 (5,6,7,8) - 00:40:235 (2,3,4) - ) I recommend you to move 00:42:000 (6) - to x:252.
- 00:43:765 (2,3,4,5) - I have troubles with this movement tbh:
1.- I feel that there is only one different sound at 00:44:647 - but your current transition between 00:43:765 (2,3,4) - is too straight.
2.- 00:44:647 (4,5) - this movement should be between 00:44:206 (3,4) - to enphasize the high pitch on 00:44:647 - - 01:02:294 - add NC, you have a change on the melody and there is a high pitch too.
- 01:07:368 (6,1) - the change will be minimun but try to add more distance here, e.g you could move 01:07:588 (1) - to x:416 to feel the jump as you did on your previous patterns ( 00:14:427 (10,1) - 00:21:485 (8,1) - 00:32:074 (6,1) - 01:00:309 (5,1) - 01:01:853 (4,5) - etc... )
- Why 01:09:353 (4,5) - have more distance than 01:10:015 (7,8) - if the stronger sound is on 01:10:235 -?
- One more time I feel that 01:13:324 (4,5) - deserve more distance than 01:12:000 (2,3) -, it could be fixed easily moving 01:12:441 (3,4) - to x:72
- 01:21:706 (1,2,3,4,5) - this movement reminds me at 00:47:294 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1) -, so don't you wanna add a hyper dash between 01:23:250 (4,5) -?
Hope to help you~~ :3
