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iconoclasm - Zirkfied [OsuMania]

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Valentrixe
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Valentrixe
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Friday, March 17, 2017 at 4:23:58 PM

Artist: iconoclasm
Title: Zirkfied
Source: beatmania IIDX 20 tricoro
Tags: Eon- SPACE REQUIEM (スペースレクイエム) Votum stellarum perditus†paradisus wac dj TAKA pop'n music Sunny Park REFLEC BEAT colette -summer- Q-pro, Mimi, Nyami & Pastel-kun no minna de uchuu sensou!!
BPM: 210
Filesize: 6192kb
Play Time: 02:03
Difficulties Available:
  1. Another - 4Key (4.47 stars, 1458 notes)
  2. Beginner - 4Key (1.12 stars, 290 notes)
  3. Hyper - 4Key (3.37 stars, 1012 notes)
  4. Normal - 4Key (2.12 stars, 542 notes)
Download: iconoclasm - Zirkfied
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Last edited by Valentrixe , edited 35 times in total.
Critical_Star
Beatmap Nominator
1,210 posts
Joined December 2013
Critical_Star
some stuff in irc mod
21:21 Valentrixe: hey there
21:21 Critical_Star: hey
21:23 Valentrixe: are you busy?
21:25 Critical_Star: not really busy
21:27 Valentrixe: ah
21:27 Valentrixe: umm
21:27 Valentrixe: do you able to do some testplay?
21:27 Critical_Star: :?
21:27 Critical_Star: oh
21:27 Critical_Star: sure
21:27 Critical_Star: :3
21:27 Critical_Star: np me
21:28 *Valentrixe is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1059753 iconoclasm - Zirkfied]
21:28 Valentrixe: probably you already know this song
21:28 Critical_Star: yea in 7K 
21:28 Valentrixe: now in 4K :D
21:28 Critical_Star: :D
21:28 Valentrixe: with better audio too
21:28 Valentrixe: haha
21:28 Critical_Star: 7K hard :c
21:28 *Critical_Star is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1059753 iconoclasm - Zirkfied]
21:28 Critical_Star: sorry for badplay in advance ahaha
21:29 Valentrixe: np
21:31 Critical_Star: cool!
21:31 Valentrixe: that's a good play
21:31 Valentrixe: how the last part do?
21:31 Critical_Star: still a bad play for me xD
21:32 Valentrixe: i'm not really sure about the last kiai
21:32 Valentrixe: nahh 97% is good xD
21:32 Critical_Star: 00:52:609 (52609|0,52609|1,52704|2,52704|3,52751|0,52751|1,52799|3,52799|2,52894|0,52894|1,52989|3,52989|2,53037|1,53037|0,53085|2,53085|3,53180|0,53180|1) -  i think is better to make full 1/6?
21:33 Valentrixe: isn't the kick only on those part?
21:33 Critical_Star: yea
21:33 Critical_Star: but idk it play a little odd for me
21:33 Critical_Star: but is fine too
21:33 Valentrixe: something new
21:34 Valentrixe: i never seen pattern like that before so..
21:34 Valentrixe: haha xD
21:34 Critical_Star: which last part u mentioned?
21:34 Critical_Star: lol xD
21:34 Critical_Star: good
21:34 Valentrixe: start from
21:34 Valentrixe: 01:53:751
21:35 Critical_Star: 01:44:609 -  till 01:48:037 -  not planning to map?
21:35 Valentrixe: nope
21:36 Critical_Star: last part snapped correct
21:36 Critical_Star: no problem  for me
21:37 Valentrixe: is it?
21:37 Valentrixe: hm
21:37 Valentrixe: idk i feel like something missing
21:37 Critical_Star: yea 1/6
21:37 Valentrixe: where?
21:37 Critical_Star: snare 1/6 here is fine
21:37 Critical_Star: 01:52:609 -  start here till the end
21:37 Critical_Star: 1/3
21:38 Critical_Star: i mean 1/3
21:38 Critical_Star: lol
21:38 Critical_Star: 1/3 till the end
21:38 Critical_Star: yep
21:38 Valentrixe: aww i thought i miss some 1/6 snap
21:39 Critical_Star: 01:53:942 (113942|0,114228|1,114513|3,114799|3,115085|2,115370|1,115656|1) -  if u like u can use double here
21:40 Critical_Star: and so on
21:40 Critical_Star: for the kick sound
21:40 Valentrixe: what is that
21:40 Valentrixe: oh
21:40 Valentrixe: oh right, just like the hyper
21:40 Critical_Star: there is like double kick each time
21:40 Valentrixe: i forgot lol
21:40 Critical_Star: yea lol
21:41 Critical_Star: i think this is the part u feel empty xD
21:42 Critical_Star: rest looks fine, nice
21:43 Valentrixe: thanks haha
21:43 Valentrixe: i'll try to use double
21:43 Valentrixe: but i think it will boost the sr too much
21:43 Critical_Star: 00:53:466 -  actually is just like the same u did at 
21:43 Critical_Star: start there
21:44 Critical_Star: hmm
21:44 Valentrixe: hm now you mention it
21:44 Critical_Star: i dont think it will jack up really high
21:44 Valentrixe: @_@
21:44 Critical_Star: :3
21:44 Valentrixe: okay i'll try xD
21:48 Valentrixe: you know what
21:48 Valentrixe: it don't even increase
21:48 Valentrixe: still at 4.4
21:48 Valentrixe: lol
21:48 Valentrixe: xD
21:48 Critical_Star: because u have the similiar pattern like before, SR shouldn't raise high haha
21:48 Valentrixe: yeahh it feel better
21:49 Critical_Star: sweet
21:49 Valentrixe: thanks a lot xD
21:49 Critical_Star: aaaa just a little mention xD
21:49 Critical_Star: no problem~
21:50 Valentrixe: at leaset it helps
21:50 Valentrixe: at least*
21:50 Valentrixe: want to post it? for kudos? xD
21:51 Critical_Star: if u like me to post xD
21:51 Valentrixe: sureee
21:51 Valentrixe: it haven't modded yet
erlinadewi-
1,074 posts
Joined November 2013
erlinadewi-
IRC
21:09 erlinadewi-: mana map mu yg mau dimod?
21:11 *Valentrixe is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1059460 iconoclasm - Zirkfied]
21:14 erlinadewi-: mod dari irc aja ya
21:14 Valentrixe: irc
21:14 Valentrixe: ok
21:15 erlinadewi-: sekarang?
21:15 erlinadewi-: bisa?
21:17 Valentrixe: bisa
21:17 Valentrixe: bntar aku spec 1x
21:20 Valentrixe: ayo
21:20 erlinadewi-: yo
21:21 *erlinadewi- is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/1059460 iconoclasm - Zirkfied [Beginner]]
21:22 erlinadewi-: 00:00:609 (609|2) - col 1?
21:22 erlinadewi-: pitch nya naik keknya
21:22 Valentrixe: ok
21:23 erlinadewi-: dan col 1 jg kosong
21:23 erlinadewi-: owo
21:24 erlinadewi-: 00:11:751 (11751|2,12037|0) - gimana klo jadiin 4 2
21:24 erlinadewi-: biar match sama bawahnya
21:24 erlinadewi-: 00:12:323 (12323|1) - klo acc ini ke 1
21:25 Valentrixe: sip
21:25 erlinadewi-: 00:28:894 (28894|0) - col 2 lebih balance
21:26 erlinadewi-: 00:38:323 - add ln? udah ganti pitch
21:27 Valentrixe: itu kyk sama suaranya
21:27 erlinadewi-: 00:45:751 (45751|2) - col 4 lebih rapi
21:27 Valentrixe: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5908832
21:27 Valentrixe: kyk gitu kedengerannya
21:28 Valentrixe: definisikan 'rapi'
21:29 erlinadewi-: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5908841 saran
21:30 Valentrixe: itu kan nadanya naik semua
21:30 Valentrixe: 00:37:751 - di 3
21:30 Valentrixe: 00:38:323 - di 4
21:31 Valentrixe: 00:38:894 - di 2
21:31 Valentrixe: gimana?
21:31 erlinadewi-: 00:37:751 - dari sini turun kok
21:31 erlinadewi-: bisa 4 3 2 1
21:32 Valentrixe: 00:38:894 - bukannya ini naik?
21:32 erlinadewi-: klo aku sih dengerinnya turun
21:34 Valentrixe: yasudah deh nurut aja
21:34 Valentrixe: lagipula hedset ku rusak sebelah
21:34 Valentrixe: lol
21:34 erlinadewi-: dah itu aja yg beginner
21:34 erlinadewi-: oh wkwkwk
21:34 *erlinadewi- is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/1059461 iconoclasm - Zirkfied [Normal]]
21:35 Valentrixe: wah
21:35 Valentrixe: lebih sedikit dari yg aku kira
21:35 erlinadewi-: 00:18:323 - disini gak double?
21:36 erlinadewi-: 00:17:751 - suara sama kek itu
21:36 erlinadewi-: 00:26:037 (26037|3) - col 1 lebih balance
21:36 Valentrixe: hm iya
21:36 Valentrixe: tapi biar ga jack gmana ya
21:37 erlinadewi-: 00:28:609 (28609|0) - col 2?
21:37 Valentrixe: nvm wkwk
21:37 erlinadewi-: >.>
21:38 Valentrixe: lanjut
21:38 erlinadewi-: 00:44:323 (44323|1) - col 4 avoid jaack
21:39 Valentrixe: oh iya
21:40 erlinadewi-: 01:16:894 - loud piano. add?
21:40 erlinadewi-: 01:18:894 - ini jga ada
21:41 erlinadewi-: itu aja untuk diff normal nya
21:42 *erlinadewi- is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/1059448 iconoclasm - Zirkfied [Hyper]]
21:43 erlinadewi-: 00:10:609 (10609|2) - col 1?
21:44 erlinadewi-: 00:30:704 (30704|0) - itu end di 00:31:037 - ?
21:44 erlinadewi-: kok rasanya kurang nyaman ada ln 1/4 single note /2
21:45 erlinadewi-: 1/2
21:46 Valentrixe: sorry" abis dari dapur
21:46 erlinadewi-: ok2
21:47 Valentrixe: 00:10:609 (10609|2) - ngapain col 1 ?
21:47 Valentrixe: bakal anchor kalau aku taruh di 1
21:47 erlinadewi-: 14 23
21:48 Valentrixe: itu 1/3 bukan 1/4
21:48 Valentrixe: 00:30:704 (30704|0) -
21:48 Valentrixe: sengaja dikasih jack sih itu
21:48 erlinadewi-: 1/4
21:49 erlinadewi-: itu ln start disini 00:30:751 -
21:49 erlinadewi-: end di 00:31:037 -
21:49 Valentrixe: oh wait salah snap
21:50 Valentrixe: ok
21:50 erlinadewi-: dibilangin
21:50 Valentrixe: ;w;
21:51 erlinadewi-: 01:31:466 - double kan
21:51 Valentrixe: ngga
21:51 erlinadewi-: 01:32:609 - sama
21:51 Valentrixe: ngikutin pianonya aja
21:52 erlinadewi-: temen2 nya pada double atuh
21:53 Valentrixe: hm
21:53 Valentrixe: ;;
21:53 erlinadewi-: 01:56:799 (116799|0) - col 4 avoid jack?
21:54 erlinadewi-: itu aja buat hypernya
21:54 Valentrixe: sip
21:55 erlinadewi-: sampai hyper aja ya
21:55 erlinadewi-: males ngemod another
21:56 Valentrixe: lho kenapa?
21:56 Valentrixe: D:
21:56 erlinadewi-: pusing uwu
21:56 erlinadewi-: banyak stream
21:56 Valentrixe: males karena banyak salahnya atau kenapa
21:56 Valentrixe: oo ;;
21:57 erlinadewi-: 3 cukup dong
21:57 Valentrixe: cukup nget
21:57 erlinadewi-: oke done ya

good luck ya~ ;)
Protastic101
Elite Nominator
1,160 posts
Joined July 2015
Protastic101
Alright, coming to mod Another since I left mid mod in irc.

Sorry for making you wait 15 minutes
[Another]00:21:609 (21609|3,21609|1,21680|0) - Feel like you should control J this since the accent comes on the blue tick rather than the red tick.
00:22:180 (22180|1,22180|0) - Also, the note here (hihat click) is much quieter than the note at 00:22:251 (22251|3) which is similar to 00:22:037 (22037|2,22037|1) -
00:28:680 (28680|0,28751|1) - Would look cleaner imo if you control J cause you'd make a roll with 00:28:609 (28609|2)
00:48:466 (48466|2,48537|0) - Might try control H, looks a little cleaner since it's more of a left->right roll after.
00:48:751 (48751|2,48823|3,48894|2,48966|3) - Feels a bit right hand heavy. You might consider moving 00:48:966 (48966|3) to 2 and then control H 00:49:037 (49037|1,49109|2) so it's a two handed minitrill.
00:52:751 (52751|1,52751|0,53037|0,53037|1) - I can't hear what these notes are for. There's a piano for sure, but there's no kick like there is at 00:52:704 (52704|3,52704|2) , so maybe consider reducing the first notes I highlighted to single notes?
01:02:323 (62323|3,62323|2) - The kick here is really quiet, and lacking a crash, so maybe reduce this to one note? It'll be anticlimactic which would give a nice effect since the player would expect the kiai or some denser patterns to appear due to how the song is structured.
01:18:609 - 01:18:894 - Why didn't you map the piano here? It's audible enough, and you mapped similar stuff at 01:17:466 (77466|2,77751|1)
01:23:466 (83466|3,83537|2,83609|3,83680|2,83751|3,83823|2,83894|3,83966|2,84037|1,84037|0) - You should really consider flipping this to mirror the trill at 01:21:751 (81751|2,81823|3,81894|2,81966|3,82037|2,82109|3,82180|2) because this transition is really right hand heavy then.

[Normal]01:28:466 (88466|2) - This sudden switch from 1/3 to 1/2 is pretty confusing, and the player is going to automatically try and hit a 1/3 rhythm. I'd highly suggest moving the note down to 01:28:418 instead.
02:02:037 (122037|0,122037|3) - I'm kind of against using doubles inside of a 1/3 burst cause at 210bpm, 1/3 is already really fast, and I'd be careful with using it too often.
Valentrixe
463 posts
Joined June 2013
Topic Starter
Valentrixe

Protastic101 wrote:

Alright, coming to mod Another since I left mid mod in irc.

Sorry for making you wait 15 minutes
[Another]00:21:609 (21609|3,21609|1,21680|0) - Feel like you should control J this since the accent comes on the blue tick rather than the red tick. | following the synth with doubles ..
00:22:180 (22180|1,22180|0) - Also, the note here (hihat click) is much quieter than the note at 00:22:251 (22251|3) which is similar to 00:22:037 (22037|2,22037|1) - | check above
00:28:680 (28680|0,28751|1) - Would look cleaner imo if you control J cause you'd make a roll with 00:28:609 (28609|2) | too many jacks on the col 2 if i flip it
00:52:751 (52751|1,52751|0,53037|0,53037|1) - I can't hear what these notes are for. There's a piano for sure, but there's no kick like there is at
00:52:704 (52704|3,52704|2) , so maybe consider reducing the first notes I highlighted to single notes? | yup it's for piano, so i won't reduce it

[Normal]01:28:466 (88466|2) - This sudden switch from 1/3 to 1/2 is pretty confusing, and the player is going to automatically try and hit a 1/3 rhythm. I'd highly suggest moving the note down to 01:28:418 instead. | nah i'm following the synth, there's no synth in that tick you mentioned. you know.. pattern is for the music not music for the pattern
updated ;;
been busy all these weeks
Alsty-
638 posts
Joined March 2016
Alsty-
hi mas valen.
1|2|3|4
mod
Another :
00:05:609 - 00:05:894 - disini isi aja , masih jelas banget suaranya kok :/
00:09:180 (9180|1) - ini LN nya abisin aja , mungkin kek gini nanti https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6414084
00:22:466 (22466|2) - 00:23:609 (23609|1) - 00:24:751 (24751|0) - 00:28:751 (28751|1) - 00:28:180 (28180|1) - bagian yang kek gini di jadiin double aja semua , ikutin dari sini 00:21:323 (21323|2,21323|3) - ato kalo gamau bisa di kurangin yang 2 nya jadi satu yang doublenya. kek hard lebih mantep , mending kesampingin dulu hihat nya , utamain bass.
00:52:751 (52751|0,52751|1,53037|0,53037|1) - note ini present suara apaa? coba di jadiin triple jump 1/3 ajaa..
01:12:037 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6414173
01:22:251 - miss , place di 3
01:23:394 - miss . place di 2
01:25:609 - miss 1/8 notes https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6414194
01:32:037 - s/d 01:33:180 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6414214 (blue mark itu ctrl+H dari pattern asli) , pitchnya lebih bagus ntar.
01:44:609 - sebenernya rada berharap ini ga kosong XD
the rest is fine.
Hyper :
00:30:751 (30751|0,31037|3) - ctrl + h
00:34:037 - s/d 00:35:180 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6414266 pitch
01:16:894 - add note di 3
01:25:609 - sama kek another
02:03:751 - add note jadiin triple
uhh suka buta kalo ngeliat stream @@
maap dikit ~ btw GL yaa. kalo bisa adain diff ungu , biar mantep :u
cyaao
Valentrixe
463 posts
Joined June 2013
Topic Starter
Valentrixe

Alsty- wrote:

hi mas valen.
1|2|3|4
Another :
00:05:609 - 00:05:894 - disini isi aja , masih jelas banget suaranya kok :/ | hedset mu kebagusan mas wkwk. itu echo, gaperlu dimap
00:22:466 (22466|2) - 00:23:609 (23609|1) - 00:24:751 (24751|0) - 00:28:751 (28751|1) - 00:28:180 (28180|1) - bagian yang kek gini di jadiin double aja semua , ikutin dari sini 00:21:323 (21323|2,21323|3) - ato kalo gamau bisa di kurangin yang 2 nya jadi satu yang doublenya. kek hard lebih mantep , mending kesampingin dulu hihat nya , utamain bass. | err layer aku terlalu susah untuk dimengerti kali ya? hahaha. aku ngikutin synth, bukan ngikutin bass .. cek diff normal buat referensi, aku cuma pasang double note di synth
00:52:751 (52751|0,52751|1,53037|0,53037|1) - note ini present suara apaa? coba di jadiin triple jump 1/3 ajaa.. | synth .. di bagian ini pakai double juga buat ngikutin synth
01:12:037 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6414173 | 01:12:037 (72037|3) - ini untuk violinnya, kenapa dipendekkin? dan main pianonya aku sengaja pakai single note
01:22:251 - miss , place di 3 | sengaja sebenernya, buat estetika lol. biar controlnya lebih baik, sengaja dikasih jeda untuk ganti posisi trill, playability purpose
01:23:394 - miss . place di 2 | ^
01:32:037 - s/d 01:33:180 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6414214 (blue mark itu ctrl+H dari pattern asli) , pitchnya lebih bagus ntar. | nice catch <3
01:44:609 - sebenernya rada berharap ini ga kosong XD | sengaja wkwk. efek radio jadul(?) ~ lebih enak dikosongin juga imo, ada burst di section sebelumnya, jadi wajar kalau aku kasih break
the rest is fine.
maap dikit ~ btw GL yaa. kalo bisa adain diff ungu , biar mantep :u | mindblock aku wkwk. gabakat bikin diff susa
cyaao
selain yg aku sebutin di atas, aku accept
thanks modnya <3
Adot
742 posts
Joined August 2015
Adot
m4m. sori aku janjinya kemaren kemaren, tapi kmrn hotspotku udah ditarik, jadi postnya sekarang.
|1|2|3|4|

01:44:609 - sampe 01:48:037 - aku gayakin. apa alasanmu buat skip satu ini. tetapi, lebih baik di isi lah. walau semuanya 1 note. aku ingin tau alasanya.

gabut
[Another]
  1. 00:20:037 - add 1, suara cymbal sama buat end double trill.
  2. 00:27:180 (27180|1) - move ke 1 biar balance\
  3. 00:31:323 (31323|2,31323|3) - ini single aja? aku kira doublenya itu fokus ke chord piano, tp disitu suara pianonya gak sekuat 00:31:037 (31037|2,31037|0,31180|0,31180|1) - dan malah familiar kek 00:25:609 (25609|1) -
  4. 00:34:609 (34609|0) - pindah ke 2 buat mbedain not2 ini 00:34:323 (34323|0,34323|3,34894|0,34894|3) - nada chordnya gak sama
  5. 00:37:609 - add 1 buat chord piano
  6. 00:38:180 - ^
  7. 01:22:466 (82466|3,82751|3) - dari sni bisa dikasih dobel deng, buat emphasize oktafnya.
[Hyper]
  1. 00:37:323 (37323|1,37323|2) - setahuku double habis dobel di garis birama itu doblenya ngikut chord. tp double ini tidak jelas ngikut ke mana
  2. 00:37:466 (37466|0) - entah buat apa ini LN, gak kayak LN di 00:36:466 (36466|1) - , itu ngikut ke suara piano.
  3. 00:37:609 - di sini jelas ada nada yang mentransisi ke 00:37:751 - . sebaiknya diisi
  4. 00:42:894 (42894|3) - di sini LN nya sebaiknya di pecah dua di 00:43:466 - karena pas di situ. nada chordnya berubah. jadi lebih baik di split jadi 2
  5. 01:11:466 (71466|3) - ini juga. di sini 01:12:037 - dia pindah chord lagunya, jadi seharusnya split LN jadi 2 dari situ
  6. 01:20:609 (80609|3) - aku kurang tau. mungkin LN ini ngeskip pianonya. atau ngikutiin bass pianonya? tapi aku lebih sense kalo LN nya end di 01:21:323 - dan dikasih 1 note buat pemanis end LN nya.
[Normal]
  1. 00:28:323 aku mikirnya dari sini notenya diikutin piano dan doublenya ngikut cymbal di garis birama. 00:28:323 (28323|2) - ini seharusnya ditaruh di 00:28:466 - . suara pianonya di situ
  2. 00:37:466 (37466|1) - sini juga
  3. 01:11:466 - same issue with Hyper. seharusnya displit dari 01:12:037 - due to pindah chord
  4. 01:20:609 (80609|1) - same issue with hyper

udah itu aja. sori dikit
Valentrixe
463 posts
Joined June 2013
Topic Starter
Valentrixe

Adot wrote:

m4m. sori aku janjinya kemaren kemaren, tapi kmrn hotspotku udah ditarik, jadi postnya sekarang.
|1|2|3|4|

01:44:609 - sampe 01:48:037 - aku gayakin. apa alasanmu buat skip satu ini. tetapi, lebih baik di isi lah. walau semuanya 1 note. aku ingin tau alasanya. | another nya mz .. high burst di kiai nya .. aku gak mau nyiksa player, lagipula suara synthnya juga beda sama 01:49:180 - , yg dikosongin itu kayak ada effect khususnya gitu (aku gatau apa namanya zzz), meskipun nadanya sama.
gabut
[Another]
  1. 00:31:323 (31323|2,31323|3) - ini single aja? aku kira doublenya itu fokus ke chord piano, tp disitu suara pianonya gak sekuat 00:31:037 (31037|2,31037|0,31180|0,31180|1) - dan malah familiar kek 00:25:609 (25609|1) - | idc sama volumenya .. itu chord piano uda 1 set .. 00:31:037 (31037|0,31037|2,31180|1,31180|0,31323|2,31323|3,31466|3,31466|1)
  2. 00:37:609 - add 1 buat chord piano | gak ada chord piano ah di sana :/
  3. 00:38:180 - ^ | ^
  4. 01:22:466 (82466|3,82751|3) - dari sni bisa dikasih dobel deng, buat emphasize oktafnya. | gak ah, terlalu samar itu ..
[Hyper]
  1. 00:37:323 (37323|1,37323|2) - setahuku double habis dobel di garis birama itu doblenya ngikut chord. tp double ini tidak jelas ngikut ke mana | yg Hyper di bagian sana doublenya ngikutin kick
  2. 00:37:466 (37466|0) - entah buat apa ini LN, gak kayak LN di 00:36:466 (36466|1) - , itu ngikut ke suara piano. | lha itu ikutin piano juga kok
  3. 00:37:609 - di sini jelas ada nada yang mentransisi ke 00:37:751 - . sebaiknya diisi | layernya kan LN buat piano, double buat kick, kalau dikasih note di sana bakal ngerusak layer atuh :d
  4. 01:20:609 (80609|3) - aku kurang tau. mungkin LN ini ngeskip pianonya. atau ngikutiin bass pianonya? tapi aku lebih sense kalo LN nya end di 01:21:323 - dan dikasih 1 note buat pemanis end LN nya. | yap memang untuk bass, makanya aku kasih double di 01:20:609 (80609|2)
[Normal]
  1. 00:28:323 aku mikirnya dari sini notenya diikutin piano dan doublenya ngikut cymbal di garis birama. 00:28:323 (28323|2) - ini seharusnya ditaruh di 00:28:466 - . suara pianonya di situ | mabok kamu @@
  2. 00:37:466 (37466|1) - sini juga | mabok juga @@ gk ada piano di sana mz
  3. 01:11:466 - same issue with Hyper. seharusnya displit dari 01:12:037 - due to pindah chord | due to pindah chord awkwk .. ngakak baca ini :v
  4. 01:20:609 (80609|1) - same issue with hyper | bass

udah itu aja. sori dikit
makasih doy <3
Adot
742 posts
Joined August 2015
Adot
anjing gw gk fokus

mod jam 11 malem di tengah kegelapan dengan ketakutan mak dateng ke kamar lalu dikasih kuliah malam.
Arzenvald
4,033 posts
Joined July 2013
Arzenvald
OwO what's this
Valentrixe
463 posts
Joined June 2013
Topic Starter
Valentrixe

ajeemaniz wrote:

OwO what's this
jumpstream map
mod pls :d
MEGAtive
1,656 posts
Joined August 2013
MEGAtive
Mark4Mod
Nitip Sendal
HXJ_Crafter
207 posts
Joined October 2015
HXJ_Crafter
hey Valen :3
4key column | 0 | 1 | 2 | 3 |

Beginner the Nazi mod
00:02:894 (2894|3,3180|0,3466|1,3751|2) - That is my first suggestion. I think Ctrl+H is better here. This note 00:02:894 (2894|0) - to make column 0 more notes, and 00:03:466 (3466|2,3751|1) - Also don't obey the pitch.
00:04:037 (4037|3,4609|1) - And these LNs are a little strange here. Just make it different with 00:05:180 (5180|0,5751|2) - and so on, because they're quite different.
00:13:180 (13180|2) - move to column 3, 00:14:037 (14037|3) - move to column 2; First make column 3 more notes, and make this pattern 00:14:037 (14037|3) - closer. If u do that, pls remember to move 00:15:180 -.
00:16:609 (16609|2) - I suggest to move this to col 3 to make it different from the former.
00:18:323 (18323|0,18609|1) - What about changing to notes?
00:24:609 (24609|0,25466|3,26037|0) - Is it Ctrl+H better here? For a little pitch
01:28:037 (88037|1) - What about move this note to col 3? I think that's more comfortable for Beginner.
01:33:180 (93180|2,93751|1) - Ctrl+H to full col 1
Ah and sorry, I find that 01:53:751 - quite few notes in col 3..
Normal
00:07:751 (7751|1) - Column 3
01:51:751 (111751|2,111751|3,112323|0,112323|1) - look at this part. 00:12:037 -
Hyper
00:57:847 (57847|2,57942|1) - Ctrl+H or column 1 will be kinda strange
01:35:323 - What about https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6772441 ?
01:53:275 - This note should be double too I think.
01:56:132 (116132|1,116228|2) - Ctrl+H and also add a note at 01:56:323 -
Notice this part 01:57:751 -to 01:58:323 -. I'm not good at some musical words.. or what? I don't know how to discribe.
Valentrixe
463 posts
Joined June 2013
Topic Starter
Valentrixe

HXJ_Crafter wrote:

hey Valen :3
4key column | 0 | 1 | 2 | 3 |

Beginner the Nazi mod
00:02:894 (2894|3,3180|0,3466|1,3751|2) - That is my first suggestion. I think Ctrl+H is better here. This note 00:02:894 (2894|0) - to make column 0 more notes, and 00:03:466 (3466|2,3751|1) - Also don't obey the pitch. | 00:02:894 (2894|3,3180|0) - the pitch in here is decreasing while 00:03:466 (3466|1,3751|2,4037|3) - is increasing, i think it's already good
00:18:323 (18323|0,18609|1) - What about changing to notes? | no
Hyper
01:35:323 - What about https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6772441 ? | too generic, i'll stick with my pattern
01:53:275 - This note should be double too I think. | i'm following the synth with double, hear it carefully
01:56:132 (116132|1,116228|2) - Ctrl+H and also add a note at 01:56:323 - | the double is for piano, hear again carefully
thanks a lot! except mentioned above is accepted
Abraxos
855 posts
Joined October 2014
Abraxos
eye are see
16:45 Abraxos: a
16:45 Abraxos: sigh youll have to wait a while
16:46 Abraxos: you can do your stuff first ill tell you when the dl is finished
16:48 Valentrixe: okay okay ;w;
16:48 Valentrixe: don't worry about it
16:48 Abraxos: ah, alright
16:49 *Abraxos is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1059753 iconoclasm - Zirkfied]
16:49 Abraxos: finally
16:50 Valentrixe: great
16:52 Abraxos: seems slightly underwhelming
16:52 Valentrixe: nice play
16:52 Abraxos: thx
16:52 Valentrixe: underwhelming?
16:52 Abraxos: i thought the SVs to follow that piano section was pretty smart
16:52 Abraxos: well the jacky sections are
16:52 Abraxos: but its fine generally
16:52 Valentrixe: haha thanks
16:53 Abraxos: p solid chart otherwise
16:53 Valentrixe: i'm kinda not confident in the slowjam at the middle
16:53 Valentrixe: what do you think about it?
16:53 Abraxos: hmm
16:53 Abraxos: middle?
16:54 Abraxos: mm
16:54 Abraxos: hold on
16:54 Valentrixe: yeah
16:54 Valentrixe: the slowjam
16:54 Abraxos:  it threw me off somewhat, yeah
16:54 Abraxos: didnt really expect it 
16:55 Abraxos: you can make the patterns much more obvious - like anchor the 1/2s around a particular column
16:56 Abraxos: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6884178 e.g.
16:56 Abraxos: the anchor keeps the player on the rhythm whilst making it such that you can slow down the scroll speed
16:58 Abraxos: 00:41:751 - second portion is much more tilting since its on 1/3s and the SVs make it hard to catch the rhythm
17:01 Valentrixe: i ended up anchoring the whole column
17:01 Valentrixe: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6884197
17:01 Valentrixe: how about that
17:01 Valentrixe: the idea to keep the beat
17:01 Abraxos: hmm
17:01 Abraxos: i think its fine 
17:01 Abraxos: people will complain about how its not "PR" though so id suggest shifting the anchor column and stuff
17:02 Valentrixe: make the anchor to the col 4?
17:03 Abraxos: mhm
17:03 Abraxos: like change it midway and however
17:04 Valentrixe: hmm
17:04 Abraxos: i think anchoring is one of the options - id personally go with that
17:05 Abraxos: but making the notes come down intuitively is enough too - like 12341234 or smth like that
17:08 Valentrixe: yeah i'd prefer using anchor too
17:09 Valentrixe: it's come out pretty well
17:09 Valentrixe: wait i'll update it
17:09 Abraxos: aite
17:09 Valentrixe: ok
17:10 Abraxos: done?
17:10 Valentrixe: yup
17:10 Abraxos: hold on
17:10 *Abraxos is playing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1059753 iconoclasm - Zirkfied [Another]] <osu!mania> |4K|
17:12 Abraxos: its much more natural to play now yeah
17:13 Valentrixe: great!
17:13 Valentrixe: thanks a lot man
17:13 Abraxos: np dude
17:13 Valentrixe: post our chat pls so i can give you kudos
17:13 Abraxos: oh yey
Kyousuke-
1,796 posts
Joined May 2013
Kyousuke-
alo sori telat awkwkw

[General]
  1. Hyper : | OD 7.5 | HP 7.5 |
  2. Unchecklist widescreen support on all diffs except Hyper
[Normal]
00:13:751 - add note like 00:18:323 - thiss ?_?

00:32:323 (32323|1,32609|2) - hmm ctrl + g this, it gives a better pattern and flows imo

00:48:609 - http://puu.sh/sZwDV/cd341d8f27.jpg since the song starts to build up there, its nice to differentiate the pattern (something like on the ss). so the players could feel it xd

01:04:609 (64609|1) - move to 1, so it won't empty along the way on the col 1 :^) (01:04:037 (64037|2,64609|1,65180|2,65751|1,66323|2) - although this is weird to me lol)

01:18:894 (78894|2) - eh misplaced notes? 01:18:609 - should've on here instead xd

01:26:418 (86418|0,86513|1) - 01:35:561 (95561|1,95656|2) - what sound are you trying to follow here? D: there's no sound that are capable to be followed on 1/6 while the melodies and the instrument are on 1/4. recommend to only follow the hat sound (like 01:40:037 - ) on there (though the usage of 1/6 are already much on there and quite hard on normal tho)

01:48:609 (108609|2,108894|1,110037|3,110323|0,110323|1) - ctrl + h so it won't the same with the next pattern?

01:55:180 (115180|3) - move to 2? it's more suitable to be jack on 01:54:894 - here than on 01:55:466 - here, bcs the melody are so different to me

01:59:180 (119180|3) - move to 3 is more better for the pattern i guess xd


[Hyper]

00:21:609 (21609|1) - move to 4 according to the pitch, 00:21:466 (21466|2,21609|3,21894|2,22037|3) - since this was basically on the same pitch (like 00:26:037 (26037|1,26180|0,26609|1,26751|0) - this too)

00:43:609 (43609|1) - this supposed to be on 00:43:656 - here on 1/6? the piano was started on there xd (check the BMS chart to be more accurate i guess)

00:58:513 (58513|0,58609|1,58609|2) - move one column to the right for better stairs and smoother pattern? also it was better to play lol xd

01:02:323 (62323|1,62894|1) - hmm this should not be on the same column? i do think that 01:02:894 (62894|1,63466|2,63466|3,64037|0,64609|1,64609|3,65180|2) - this can be reversed, http://puu.sh/sYu5C/949fc58bbb.jpg maybe something like that will works

01:18:609 - add note on here? since there's a melody and you consistenly following it before

01:28:394 - add note on here too? there's a melody sound and quite prominent, also you're layering that sound i guess http://puu.sh/sYuCy/dcb4ebf212.jpg

01:26:894 - 01:36:037 - 01:40:609 - should be double too? like you doubled the other kick sound, quite weird to play though with the emptiness of the notes there xd

01:33:180 (93180|2) - move to 1? so the note won't be stacked on column 3

01:34:894 - add note for the loud kick

01:43:180 (103180|0) - the LN should be ended on 01:43:466 - here?

01:44:037 - 01:44:323 - tbh this should be doubled too, since you make it double here 01:44:180 - 01:44:466 - but yeah its up to you lol

01:55:180 - 01:56:323 - add note since you make it double every 1/1s?

kinda like how you map dat 1/6 pattern owo


okkie goodluck valen xd
Valentrixe
463 posts
Joined June 2013
Topic Starter
Valentrixe

Kyousuke- wrote:

alo sori telat awkwkw

[Hyper]

01:28:394 - add note on here too? there's a melody sound and quite prominent, also you're layering that sound i guess http://puu.sh/sYuCy/dcb4ebf212.jpg | aku ga denger ada suara di sana, malah denger suara synth di 01:28:537 - , aku add note di sana aja

01:34:894 - add note for the loud kick | di situ aku cuma kasih double buat synth

01:55:180 - 01:56:323 - add note since you make it double every 1/1s? | gak semua 1/1 , perhatiin lagi, aku cuma kasih double di pianonya

kinda like how you map dat 1/6 pattern owo


okkie goodluck valen xd
huehue modnya keren
selain yg aku sebutin di atas, aku terima modnya
thanks a lot!
lenpai
Beatmap Nominator
1,772 posts
Joined December 2014
lenpai
svs are coolio but there are some stuff i personally dont really like

00:13:751 - to 00:14:323 - and 00:18:323 - to 00:18:894 - has SVs that really do work but by SV-ing these isntead of going for the 1/3 stream just feels very inadequate as a playing experience.

00:41:751 - value is a bit too low for my tastes. x0.85 could be the better value maybe so that it doesnt feel too different from the previous slowjam.

that's all. Good luck!
Arzenvald
4,033 posts
Joined July 2013
Arzenvald
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/340295 m4m edisi males isi q

[General]
is that really necessary to add the bg editor in tag? i mean i would add tag the name of the author / artist who actually made the original bg instead, no offense intended ><

[Another]
00:03:180 (3180|1,3180|0) - thinking of using single note for lower pitch

00:18:894 (18894|3,18894|2,18989|0,18989|1,19085|3,19085|2) - i'd make this 34 12 12 34 12 12 tbh

00:57:751 (57751|0,58323|1) - if you get the idea https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6899876

01:12:894 - 01:15:180 - missing some flute thing

01:18:323 (78323|2,78609|1) - move 1 column to left, pr thing

01:28:823 (88823|0) - 01:29:394 (89394|2) - 01:29:966 (89966|1) - 01:30:537 (90537|2) - remove for flow?

01:44:537 (104537|1,104609|2) - i'd ctrl+h this for right hand trill

bout the sv

02:03:609 - i'd make this increasingly faster to the end, more like 1.2 > 1.4 > 1.6 > 1.8 for surprise note, as it would emphasize the last notes better

[Hyper]

add SV to smoothen the gap between hyper & another, just few sv would works

00:13:656 (13656|1) - 00:18:228 (18228|2) - add note to layer kiiick, wouldn't be hurt for hyper

00:44:037 (44037|3) - i'd make this part with single 1/1 LN, like another doe

00:55:466 (55466|3,55466|1,55561|0,55656|2,55751|3,55751|1,55847|0,55942|3,56037|0,56037|2) - i'd make this stairy 1/3 with 12 23 34 combination to break that repetitive 13 14 24 doubles https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6899925
01:54:894 (114894|1) - refer to ^

01:20:609 (80609|3) - i think 1/4 stream would fit here, to make a smaller gap between hyper and another as well
01:33:323 - ^
01:41:823 - ^

[Normal]
00:30:323 (30323|0,30466|1,30609|2,30751|0) - 00:36:751 (36751|0,36894|1,37037|2,37180|0) - i see you copas here :'V
00:44:609 (44609|2,45180|1) - i think doubles on each 2/1 doesn't hurt for normal

[Beginner]
01:20:609 (80609|0) - y u only use single ln, mimick the piano with simple LN

01:43:466 (103466|2,103751|0,104037|3,104323|1) - 4 3 1 2, don't make a repetitive things after 4/1 bars pls

01:53:751 (113751|1) - i think its great to introduce some doubles in the end of this part, even beginner players would feel the 'climax' when they plays doubles in the end

ok great and clean map, i think this one ready for telolet
Valentrixe
463 posts
Joined June 2013
Topic Starter
Valentrixe

Lenfried- wrote:

svs are coolio but there are some stuff i personally dont really like

00:13:751 - to 00:14:323 - and 00:18:323 - to 00:18:894 - has SVs that really do work but by SV-ing these isntead of going for the 1/3 stream just feels very inadequate as a playing experience. | nuuu .. we've discussed this in-game
i expected more tbh
thanks anyway fried ;w;

ajeemaniz wrote:

https://osu.ppy.sh/s/340295 m4m edisi males isi q

[General]
is that really necessary to add the bg editor in tag? i mean i would add tag the name of the author / artist who actually made the original bg instead, no offense intended >< | yes i know it's strange but i'm just following the other previous ranked map, i will consider to add author name in the tags too later

[Another]

01:12:894 - 01:15:180 - missing some flute thing | i think they just echo? not audible enough to deserve a note / ln

01:28:823 (88823|0) - 01:29:394 (89394|2) - 01:29:966 (89966|1) - 01:30:537 (90537|2) - remove for flow? | um no, i think the flow is better if the notes in there

[Normal]
00:30:323 (30323|0,30466|1,30609|2,30751|0) - 00:36:751 (36751|0,36894|1,37037|2,37180|0) - i see you copas here :'V | kebetulan doang @@, i no copas copas yaa :v

ok great and clean map, i think this one ready for telolet | bubble pls :>
ty ajeeeeeeee
m4m incoming
REUSE-ABLE
360 posts
Joined October 2015
REUSE-ABLE
YOYOYOYOYO!
WAZAPP gua janji kan bakal mod nih map :U
dan ini lah saatnya \:u/ yey

|1|2|3|4|

Another
Another:
00:37:180 (37180|2,37180|0,37323|1,37323|0) - kalo lu denger 50% atau mungkin headset lu bagus. itu suara beatnya sama jadi... kalo bisa note yang 00:37:323 (37323|1) - pindahin ke 3
00:37:751 (37751|2,37751|3,37894|3,37894|1) - sama
00:38:323 (38323|0,38323|1,38466|2,38466|1) - sama juga :v
01:25:573 - add note 1/8 di 3 bagian garis kuning
02:03:751 (123751|2,123751|3,123751|0) - jadi 4 ajah biar endingnya sades :U
Hyper
00:51:085 - knp gak 2 note ajah? kan beat
00:51:370 - sama
00:51:656 - sama
00:51:942 - sama

GL :v mod map gua lagi dong :U
Valentrixe
463 posts
Joined June 2013
Topic Starter
Valentrixe

REUSE-ABLE wrote:

YOYOYOYOYO!
WAZAPP gua janji kan bakal mod nih map :U
dan ini lah saatnya \:u/ yey

|1|2|3|4|

[Another]
00:37:180 (37180|2,37180|0,37323|1,37323|0) - kalo lu denger 50% atau mungkin headset lu bagus. itu suara beatnya sama jadi... kalo bisa note yang 00:37:323 (37323|1) - pindahin ke 3 | itu sudah aku jack kok
00:37:751 (37751|2,37751|3,37894|3,37894|1) - sama | ^
00:38:323 (38323|0,38323|1,38466|2,38466|1) - sama juga :v | ^
01:25:573 - add note 1/8 di 3 bagian garis kuning | cuma 3 yg aku denger
02:03:751 (123751|2,123751|3,123751|0) - jadi 4 ajah biar endingnya sades :U | 3 biar konsisten
[Hyper]00:51:085 - knp gak 2 note ajah? kan beat | cuma pasang 2 di synth
00:51:370 - sama | ^
00:51:656 - sama | ^
00:51:942 - sama | ^
GL :v mod map gua lagi dong :U
:v
DoNotMess
485 posts
Joined May 2012
DoNotMess
m4m burp
AANNOOTTHHEERR
00:07:609 (7609|1) - D: 00:07:466 - :D
00:08:609 (8609|3) - D: 00:09:180 - :D
00:25:537 - ada suara tpi kecil, terserah
00:52:037 (52037|2,52037|3,52323|3,52323|1) - bkin 3 note?
00:52:751 (52751|0,52751|1,53037|1,53037|0) - mungkin ilangin aja kali, biar feelnya dapet..
01:32:109 (92109|3,92109|2,92180|1,92180|0,92251|3,92251|2,92323|0,92323|1,92394|0,92394|1) - kejam, nerf pls
01:53:180 (113180|0,113275|3) - ln-in jg aja

rank pls
Valentrixe
463 posts
Joined June 2013
Topic Starter
Valentrixe

DoNotMess wrote:

m4m burp | y
AANNOOTTHHEERR | y
00:07:609 (7609|1) - D: 00:07:466 - :D | g
00:08:609 (8609|3) - D: 00:09:180 - :D | y
00:25:537 - ada suara tpi kecil, terserah | g
00:52:037 (52037|2,52037|3,52323|3,52323|1) - bkin 3 note? | y
00:52:751 (52751|0,52751|1,53037|1,53037|0) - mungkin ilangin aja kali, biar feelnya dapet.. | y
01:32:109 (92109|3,92109|2,92180|1,92180|0,92251|3,92251|2,92323|0,92323|1,92394|0,92394|1) - kejam, nerf pls | y
01:53:180 (113180|0,113275|3) - ln-in jg aja | g

rank pls | g
y
genkicho
449 posts
Joined May 2013
genkicho
M4M


Waw mantap audionya high quality :D
akhirnya ada yg buat Zirkfied
Col 1 2 3 4
Another
kalo menurut gw sih gausa takut2 kasih jacknya kalo pake 1/3, soalnya enak dipencet
00:09:751 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7577169
00:13:656 (13656|0,13751|1) - dibuat minijack aja di col 1, soalny suara piano nya sama
00:17:466 (17466|0) - pindahin ke 4 aja, kasian col 1 nya 00:17:180 (17180|0,17466|0,17751|0,17942|0,18132|0,18323|0) -
00:18:894 (18894|3,18894|2) - knapa ga di chordjack smua aja
00:30:323 kasih mini LN aja biar ga bosen https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7577179 | https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7577183
00:39:751 (39751|3,40037|3,40323|3,40609|3,40894|3,41180|3,41466|3) - jangan diginiin, itu pianonya turun terus
00:52:704 (52704|0,52704|1,52751|3,52751|2,52799|1,52799|0) - keliatan agak aneh, -> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7577195
00:53:370 (53370|2) - double? soalnya lebih keras dari 00:55:656 (55656|0) - suaranya
00:57:085 (57085|3,57085|2,57180|1,57180|0,57275|3,57275|2,57370|1,57370|0,57466|3,57466|2,57561|0,57561|1,57656|2,57656|3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7577205
01:02:370 (62370|0) - hmm agak bingung juga sih sama yang ini.. coba diturunin dlu aja ke garis putih biar ga bingung liatnya, soalnya pas pake 1/4 replay notenya ga pas
01:06:894 (66894|0) - pindahin ke 2, soalnya pianonya mirip (atau sama gtau deh)
01:08:037 (68037|1) - ini ke 3
01:09:180 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7577211
01:12:894 harusnya udah ganti LN, soalnya suaranya uda kedengeran
01:18:037 (78037|2) - pianonya beda sama yg lain, mending jgn dibuat gini 01:17:180 (77180|1,77466|2,77751|1,78037|2,78323|1) -
01:18:894 ada piano
01:20:680 (80680|2,80751|3,80823|1,80894|3,80966|0,81037|2,81109|0,81180|1,81251|0,81323|3) - knp ga di trill
01:22:394 (82394|1,82537|1,82680|1) - sama 01:23:537 (83537|3,83680|3,83823|3,83966|3) - suara pianonya bikin bingung, itu gada piano atau suaranya terlalu kecil? :/
01:29:037 (89037|3,89109|2) - 01:29:609 (89609|1,89680|3) - 01:30:180 (90180|2,90251|3) - yang kayak gitu delete aja, soalnya lebih enak dipencet, terus lagunya lebih kerasa kalo bagian situ LN doang
01:41:251 add note aja biar ga bingung
01:42:323 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7577231
01:43:466 (103466|1,103466|0) - bagian sini cek lagi beatnya, -> kalo gapake piano jadi gini https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7577234 ntar tinggal dibuat patternnya
01:55:561 (115561|3,115847|0) - double? bagian situ suaranya kyk gini 01:57:656 (117656|0,117656|1,117751|3,117751|2,117847|0,117847|1,117942|2,117942|3,118037|0,118037|1,118132|3,118132|2,118228|0,118228|1) -
01:57:656 (117656|0,117656|1) - kalo 1/3 jgn diginiin, bikin bosen
01:36:894 (96894|2,96966|1,97037|2,97109|1,97180|2,97251|1) - rearrange?

SV Suggestions

00:29:180 SV nya pelanin, terus biar ga pusing dibuat gini note nya->https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7577249
00:53:180 dari sini 00:53:370 (53370|2) - 1.2x, terus 00:53:466 (53466|1,53466|0) - 1.0x, repeat. kalo uda masuk bagian LN svnya lepas aja
00:57:085 (57085|3,57085|2) - smooth teleport
01:53:085 (113085|2,113180|1,113180|0,113275|2,113275|3,113370|1,113370|0,113466|3,113466|2,113561|1,113561|0,113656|3,113656|2,113751|0,113751|1) - teleport, ln ganti note biasa
01:57:656 (117656|0,117656|1,117751|3,117751|2,117847|0,117847|1,117942|2,117942|3,118037|0,118037|1,118132|3,118132|2,118228|0,118228|1) - teleport
Cokii-
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Cokii-
Hey M4M

Beginner
01:11:466 (71466|1) - move LN end to 01:12:037 -
add a LN here 01:12:037 -

Hyper
00:59:275 -, 00:58:704 -, 00:59:847 - 01:00:418 -, 02:00:989 -, 02:01:561 (121561|3) - add a note

Another
01:18:894 (78894|0) - add a note for a low pitch sound
02:02:228 (122228|2) - move to C1
02:02:323 (122323|1,122323|0,122418|3,122418|2,122513|0,122513|1,122609|3,122609|2,122704|0,122704|1,122799|3,122799|2,122894|0,122894|1,122989|1,122989|0,123085|0,123085|1,123180|2,123180|3,123275|3,123275|2,123370|2,123370|3,123466|0,123466|1,123751|0,123751|3,123751|2) -
ctrl+H for pitch?

i really need to get better at mapping/modding easy diffs q.q

good luck getting this ranked
Valentrixe
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Topic Starter
Valentrixe

genkicho wrote:

M4M


Waw mantap audionya high quality :D
akhirnya ada yg buat Zirkfied
Col 1 2 3 4
[Another]
kalo menurut gw sih gausa takut2 kasih jacknya kalo pake 1/3, soalnya enak dipencet | oke u,u
00:09:751 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7577169 | ga cocok orz
00:18:894 (18894|3,18894|2) - knapa ga di chordjack smua aja | variasi lol
00:30:323 kasih mini LN aja biar ga bosen https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7577179 | https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7577183 | umm engga deh
00:39:751 (39751|3,40037|3,40323|3,40609|3,40894|3,41180|3,41466|3) - jangan diginiin, itu pianonya turun terus | aku sengaja ga fokusin ke pitch, lebih fokusin ke suara pianonya yang lompat"(?), lagipula di sini melambat, pola kayak gini lebih gampang dibaca
00:52:704 (52704|0,52704|1,52751|3,52751|2,52799|1,52799|0) - keliatan agak aneh, -> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7577195 | snap nya salah itu
00:53:370 (53370|2) - double? soalnya lebih keras dari 00:55:656 (55656|0) - suaranya | di bagian ini aku cuma kasih double di suara kick
00:57:085 (57085|3,57085|2,57180|1,57180|0,57275|3,57275|2,57370|1,57370|0,57466|3,57466|2,57561|0,57561|1,57656|2,57656|3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7577205 | aku lebih prefer sama pattern ku
01:02:370 (62370|0) - hmm agak bingung juga sih sama yang ini.. coba diturunin dlu aja ke garis putih biar ga bingung liatnya, soalnya pas pake 1/4 replay notenya ga pas | antara 1/6 atau 1/8 imo, aku pake 1/6 aja karena pattern sebelumnya pake 1/3
01:09:180 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7577211 | terlalu banyak LN
01:20:680 (80680|2,80751|3,80823|1,80894|3,80966|0,81037|2,81109|0,81180|1,81251|0,81323|3) - knp ga di trill | sengaja disebar buat awalan aja, biar ga monoton trill semua
01:22:394 (82394|1,82537|1,82680|1) - sama 01:23:537 (83537|3,83680|3,83823|3,83966|3) - suara pianonya bikin bingung, itu gada piano atau suaranya terlalu kecil? :/ | ada, sekilas emang kayak echo sih
01:41:251 add note aja biar ga bingung | bingung apanya?
01:42:323 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7577231 | no .. beda layer
01:43:466 (103466|1,103466|0) - bagian sini cek lagi beatnya, -> kalo gapake piano jadi gini https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7577234 ntar tinggal dibuat patternnya | aku cuma ngikutin piano di sini, ga ngikutin beat drumnya
01:55:561 (115561|3,115847|0) - double? bagian situ suaranya kyk gini 01:57:656 | hah? di sini double cuma buat kick
01:36:894 (96894|2,96966|1,97037|2,97109|1,97180|2,97251|1) - rearrange? | ei sengaja itu trill di tengah :^
also perhatiin 01:37:037 (97037|2,97037|3,97180|2,97180|3) - , aku sengaja stack mereka buat highlight suara synthnya

SV Suggestions

00:29:180 SV nya pelanin, terus biar ga pusing dibuat gini note nya->https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7577249 | whoa chill, aku ga mau ngasih sv di tengah" stream
00:53:180 dari sini 00:53:370 (53370|2) - 1.2x, terus 00:53:466 (53466|1,53466|0) - 1.0x, repeat. kalo uda masuk bagian LN svnya lepas aja | ^
00:57:085 (57085|3,57085|2) - smooth teleport | ei mending ngikutin kick
01:53:085 (113085|2,113180|1,113180|0,113275|2,113275|3,113370|1,113370|0,113466|3,113466|2,113561|1,113561|0,113656|3,113656|2,113751|0,113751|1) - teleport, ln ganti note biasa | terlalu banyak instrumen yang diskip
01:57:656 (117656|0,117656|1,117751|3,117751|2,117847|0,117847|1,117942|2,117942|3,118037|0,118037|1,118132|3,118132|2,118228|0,118228|1) - teleport | ^
thanks a lot .. banyak yang dirombak jadinya orz

Cokiiplay wrote:

Hey M4M

[Beginner]01:11:466 (71466|1) - move LN end to 01:12:037 -
add a LN here 01:12:037 - | i'm following the background piano, not the violin

[Another]
01:18:894 (78894|0) - add a note for a low pitch sound | no, one note is enough
02:02:228 (122228|2) - move to C1 | since i didn't agree with v so no
02:02:323 - ctrl+H for pitch? | i think the pitch is already correct

good luck getting this ranked
thanks
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