1. Futsuu (2.46 stars, 217 notes)
2. Inner Oni (5.29 stars, 570 notes)
3. Kantan (1.89 stars, 127 notes)
4. Muzukashii (3.18 stars, 322 notes)
5. Oni (4.48 stars, 438 notes)

gaston_2199 wrote:

Hi!
M4M from my queue

[ Beginner]

00:18:558 (10) - Remove Change.
00:19:218 (11,12,13) - K d D Not change.
00:36:135 (30) - Move here 00:36:267 ? Not change.
00:42:611 (37) - k Change.
00:47:765 (42) - K? Change.
00:48:954 (43) - Remove finish Not change.
00:51:069 (45) - k Change.
00:53:183 (47) - Remove finish Not change.
00:56:355 (51) - k Change.
01:04:813 (60) - k Change.

[ Kantan]

00:09:571 (2) - Remove finish Not change consistency with another diff
00:09:835 (3) - Add finish ^
00:11:686 (4) - Remove finish ^
00:36:135 (46) - Move to 00:36:267 Not change.
00:48:954 (64) - Remove finish Same as first

[ Futsuu]

00:21:730 (35) - Remove Change.
00:22:787 (38,39) - Remove Change.
00:23:315 - Add k Change.
00:25:166 (45) - Remove Not change.
00:27:280 (51) - Remove Not change.
00:48:954 (103) - Remove finish Not change.
00:55:298 - Add d Change.
00:55:430 (121) - Move to 00:55:562 Change.
00:56:355 (124) - Add finish Not change.
00:56:619 (125) - Remove Change.
00:57:148 - Add d Not change.
00:57:280 (127) - Move to 00:57:412 Not change.
00:58:470 (131) - Add finish Not change.
00:58:734 (132) - Remove Change.
00:59:527 (135) - k Change.
01:00:584 (138) - Remove Change.
01:01:113 (139) - ^ Change.
01:01:509 (141) - Move to 01:01:377 Not change.
01:18:822 - 01:18:954 - k Change.

[ Oni]

00:09:571 (9) - Remove finish Not change.
00:09:835 (10) - Add finish Not change.
00:10:760 (14) - k Not change.
00:12:082 (22,23,24) - d k d Change.
00:14:725 (40,41) - d k Change.
00:55:166 (244,245,246,247) - Not change.
00:57:280 (260,261,262,263,264,265,266,267) - Not change.
00:59:527 (278,279,280,281,282,283,284) - Not change.

[ Inner Oni]

00:12:478 (25) - k Not change.
00:12:545 - Add k Not change.
00:12:611 (26,27,28) - ddk Not change.
00:12:875 (29) - d Not change.
00:14:197 (40) - d Not change.
00:14:328 (41,42) - kkk Not change.
00:14:593 (43) - d Change.
00:14:659 (44) - Remove Not change.
00:14:725 (45,46) - ddk Not change.
00:15:386 (50,51) - ddd Not change.
00:15:915 (55,56) - kkk Not change.
00:36:003 (196) - d Not change.

Good luck!

Remus wrote:

Hello from my queue o/

Muzukashii

1. 00:35:210 (119,120) - to not break thytm of music i recommend you put here don to
   converge with 00:35:738 (121,122) for now i think it's looks fine Keep it
2. 01:15:386 (289,290,291) - i think you did it to diversify this part, but imo this tpriplet comparing with music and notes around better to do like that :
   Or dkk to not repeat that pattern next time. Change

So, in Oni and Inner Oni i feel a little dissapointed with some triples, but it's your map so i try to not change your rhytm of song, which you mapped(only some advices)

Oni

1. 00:20:078 (76) - it's oni, so we can put here don to increase density a bit in this part. for now i think it's looks fine Keep it
2. 01:09:307 (347,348) - put kat between them. It more suits with vocal and flow at all, imo. +drums here are 1/1+1/4 beats, so.... Change.
3. 01:19:219 (415,416) - this isn't even necessary at all, but you can put here don as i said before to more emphasize music. for now i think it's looks fine Keep it

Inner Oni

1. 00:19:879 (87,88,89,90,91,92,93) - what about this? Change.
2. 00:36:796 (200,201) - to not break vocal part and rhytm at all you can put here. ok.

Well, that mod was like a little help, but anyway i think that i wrote something usefull.
One of my favourite songs, so will be great to see it ranked.
Good luck!

Shiguri wrote:

m4m 8^)

Beginner

00:07:721 (1,2) - k? just think it sounds better I think so but consistency with another diff
00:33:095 (25) - k, high sound Change.
01:07:985 (60) - d cause of the drumkick (is that even a drumkick smh) Change.

Kantan

00:31:509 (38) - remove for consistency (and i dont really hear any sound that could be used for a kantan diff (imo)) Change.
00:35:738 (45) - ^ Change.
00:55:826 (74) - ^ Change.
00:57:941 (77) - k, voice goes high (i assume you mapped on the vocal there) Change.
01:04:285 (89) - (same as above) Change.
01:07:324 (95) - imo, it seems kinda unnessecary for kantan I'm not sure about this I want to keep it

Futsuu

00:21:862 (34) - d, dont hear anything high there Change.
00:27:809 (49) - k, high keysound Not change
00:53:712 (106) - k and remove 00:53:844 (107,108) -, plays better imo Not change
01:02:434 (128) - k and remove 01:02:434 (129) - ^ Not change
01:10:364 (150,151) - remove, seems unnessecary Not change

Muzukashii

00:44:989 (145) - remove Change.
00:45:254 (146) - k Change.
01:19:483 - place k Change.

oni and inner oni seems fine (cant mod >oni anyways ;^C)

Smallwu wrote:

Hi, mod from my queue
[General]
Artist => リモ Prototype [CV：花守ゆみり]
Romanised Artist => Remo Prototype [CV: Hanamori Yumiri] (A Space pls)

Make a space between "Prototype" and "[CV"
Before-->After Not change on rank map is not space
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Uncheck Widescreen Support I will check it
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Open your Inner Oni.osu with txt
Ctrl+F "SliderMultiplier"
"1.39999997138977" --> "1.4" Ok
[Muzukashii]
00:19:483 and 00:19:615 and 00:19:747 - Add d k k Follow Pitch Add k on 00:19:615

00:29:130 - Add k No note here is strange break not add

00:51:862 - Add d? I think that's more fit Add on 00:51:994

00:52:126 (170,171,172) - K K K or k k k Their pitch same, use same pattern Not change.
[Oni]
00:52:126 (224,225,226) - K K K or k k k Reason same as Muzukashii Not change.

01:09:571 (354) - k I don't know what's the sound, but I'm sure here has a sound like cymbals Change.
[Inner Oni]
00:52:126 (290,291,292) - K K K or k k k Reason same as Muzukashii Not change.

00:59:527 - 01:00:320 - Ummmm I don't know that I just think that's more fit with music I want to keep it

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GL with Rank~