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himmel feat. YooSanHyakurei - Maple Wind

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Crystal
Former osu!catch Champion: 2018
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Crystal
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2016年9月13日 at 19:06:47

Artist: himmel feat. YooSanHyakurei
Title: Maple Wind
Source: Zyon載音
Tags: 远枫 Yuan Feng zion Narcissu 384059043 yf_bmp
BPM: 135
Filesize: 17030kb
Play Time: 01:40
Difficulties Available:
  1. 384's Hard (2.6 stars, 182 notes)
  2. Distant (3.79 stars, 253 notes)
  3. Insane (3.36 stars, 212 notes)
  4. Narcissu's Normal (1.59 stars, 105 notes)
Download: himmel feat. YooSanHyakurei - Maple Wind
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#15



「再也不说害怕 就算你不在身边我也会吞下泪花」






pls reDL if before 2016/9/13(y/m/d) for latest osb file!
Thanks IamKwaN for metadata confirmation!
credits
Hitsounding by Narcissu
384's Hard by 384059043
Narcissu's Normal by Narcissu
Awesome Storyboard by yf_bmp pls watch
Last edited by Crystal , edited 16 times in total.
yf_bmp
Elite Storyboarder II / Elite Mapper
1,630 posts
Joined December 2011
yf_bmp

Crystal wrote:

瑶姐好棒啊
pw384
2,286 posts
Joined January 2012
pw384

yf_bmp wrote:

Crystal wrote:

瑶姐好棒啊
Garden
Nomination Assessment Team
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Joined June 2013
Garden
[hs]
  1. 开头一段丢一堆whistle跟琴声听上去不太合适，感觉没有把握到重点的音，开始和停顿之类的。试试看 00:02:032 (2,3) - 、00:03:809 (3,4) - 、00:05:365 (3) - 00:07:143 (4) - 尾巴、00:05:809 (4) - 、00:07:587 (5) - ，这些whistle删掉听起来如何。
  2. 00:27:365 (4) - 00:29:143 (6) - addition用drum? 用风铃跟这里高音感觉很美啊
  3. 00:33:809 (1) - 尾巴drum sample?
  4. 00:35:587 (1,2,3,4) - 同前面提到的，或许试试2或24删掉
  5. 01:19:587 (3) - 漏clap?
[cs5 dif]
  1. 00:10:921 (2,3,4) - 要是打算弄直的话目前这样有点歪了.. 用滑条搞一下
  2. 00:12:809 (2,3) - 移一下把滑条弧度的部分露出来比较好看，和前面那个一样，这个遮着有点尴尬，而且00:12:365 (9,2) - 这里还有点搭到感觉不太干净
  3. 00:15:809 (8,9) - 整体右移一点让8看上去到9和1的头距离一样? -> http://puu.sh/qGYn8/32f472ccff.jpg 当原地按更稳了!
  4. 01:19:809 (4,1) - 这里vocal在往上，试试4摆下来一点或者1摆上去一点可能更有感觉，大概这个角度 -> http://puu.sh/qGZA6/8b0996e3f5.jpg
  5. 01:21:587 (7,1) - 这里虽然不是很明显上扬的高音，但还是感觉给的不太够，比01:19:809 (4,1) - 小了不少，试试 01:21:809 (1,2,3) - 往左移一点，让 01:22:254 (3) - 和 01:21:143 (5) - stack，后面的滑条也对应地移一点
[pro lp mapper]
  1. 感觉ar高了 这个bpm
  2. 00:05:254 (3) - 00:07:032 (5) - 可以稍微ds一下三连
  3. 01:07:143 (4,1) - 忽然好远啊，01:07:587 (1,2,3,4,1,1) - 整个下放一点?
  4. 01:36:921 (4,5) - 或许可以这样下来让 01:37:809 - audiable -> 对称
pw384
2,286 posts
Joined January 2012
pw384

Garden wrote:

[pro lp mapper]
  1. 感觉ar高了 这个bpm :arrow: adjusted to ar7.5
  2. 00:05:254 (3) - 00:07:032 (5) - 可以稍微ds一下三连 :arrow: fixed
  3. 01:07:143 (4,1) - 忽然好远啊，01:07:587 (1,2,3,4,1,1) - 整个下放一点? :arrow: fixed
  4. 01:36:921 (4,5) - 或许可以这样下来让 01:37:809 - audiable -> 对称 :arrow: nice idea
花园好棒啊, thank you for the helpful mod!
384's Hard *NOTE: I copied hitsounds from the highest difficulty
osu file format v14

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Countdown: 0
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[Editor]
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[Metadata]
Title:Yuan Feng
TitleUnicode:远枫
Artist:YooSanHyakurei
ArtistUnicode:瑶山百霊
Creator:Crystal
Version:384's Hard
Source:
Tags:
BeatmapID:1059779
BeatmapSetID:497380

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[Crz]Makii
450 posts
Joined November 2014
[Crz]Makii
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我错了
[水仙's NM]
  1. 00:16:032 (1,2) - 好近 啊摆NM竟然可以不用ds 学到了
  2. 00:26:698 (2,3) - 我觉得3的形状适合摆在2那个位置，这两个整体交换一下吧
  3. 00:36:476 (1) - not essential NC here
  4. 00:44:032 (5) - 这里可以加个finish吧....听了几遍都感觉有个锣
  5. prprpr
[北大教授]
  1. 00:07:032 (5) - 这个ds前0.78后0.62 能不能统一下0.7呀。。直观看起来也感觉不是很齐
  2. 00:33:809 (1) - ctrl+J maybe work better in flow
[Insane]
  1. 00:35:587 (1) - 这里...嘛反正我打图的时候是很烦多次折返的 因为第一次打经常会直接认为是一次折返然后断掉 这里改成两个滑条会不会work better
  2. 00:50:698 (1) - ^ both them are my personal suggestion.
  3. 01:22:143 (2,3) - kiai段所有的2连你都是藏在滑条尾巴下stack,只有这里是ds,比较突兀 建议统一patterns
[Distant]
  1. 我艹 cs5
  2. 00:08:698 (3,4,1) - ......nb
  3. 00:35:587 (1,2,3,4) - 建议增大一些ds 这里缩的有点过头了00:01:810 (1,2,3,4) - 我觉得你继续采用这就可
  4. 01:22:143 (2,3) - same as Insane,but if it's your style ignore my suggestion :3
xixi
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moonlightleaf
2,155 posts
Joined September 2011
moonlightleaf
mark +1

[水仙]

prprpr

[山巴士]

00:12:476 (1,2) - 换下节奏

00:15:809 (5) - 这样比较舒服
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01:26:476 - 加个圈?

[Insane]

00:35:587 (1) - 不喜欢这个双折返,试试?
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00:50:698 (1) - ^
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01:24:254 (5) - 没等间距好难受,或者你和6 弄等腰梯形?
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[Distant]

00:50:698 (1) - 之前提过 我觉得作为最高难度这种不太应该出现

01:16:476 (1,2) - 这种可以吗

有啥好摸得= =!
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EncoreW
833 posts
Joined June 2013
EncoreW
[General]

tags就直接空在那边了？

soft whistle找个更契合节拍的音色的，不要默认的

[Distant]

2/4 clap音效缺失有点严重，虽然1/3下了clap音效但是2/4这地方没1/3 clap那么强但是比如 00:09:809 - 这种地方根本听不出来有音效在那边，感觉还是要换个能听得出来的音效

00:02:921 (1) - 00:04:698 (1) - 感觉 NC落在00:03:587 (2) - 00:05:365 (3) - 重音这里比较好

00:08:921 - 音效听上去强度不够

00:12:254 (8) - 这里有必要加上音效

00:52:254 - 不填上吗

01:16:476 (1,2,1,2) - 这几个滑条感觉末尾要消音

01:30:698 (2,3,1,2) - ^

01:38:476 (1) - 还不如换转盘，01:40:921 - 这里结束

讲道理感觉还是音效有点太简单了，很多地方直接 whistle糊弄过去

[Insane]

00:06:476 (4) - 加一个reverse？

00:41:143 (2) - 放到差不多（227，135）这种地方试试看，感觉做成个方的形状好看点

01:28:476 (2) - 末尾消音

01:38:587 (1) - 转盘还是建议在01:40:921 - 这里结束好一点

音效方面和主难度一样

另外两个没什么讲，到时候hard的音效记得复制上去
Narcissu
1,744 posts
Joined August 2012
Narcissu

[Crz]Sword wrote:

[水仙's NM]
  1. 00:16:032 (1,2) - 好近 啊摆NM竟然可以不用ds 学到了
  2. 00:26:698 (2,3) - 我觉得3的形状适合摆在2那个位置，这两个整体交换一下吧
  3. 00:36:476 (1) - not essential NC here …… k
  4. 00:44:032 (5) - 这里可以加个finish吧....听了几遍都感觉有个锣……小星星也沒有我就不動了
  5. prprpr

T-Mac wrote:

[General]

soft whistle找个更契合节拍的音色的，不要默认的……都用默認的所以沒有資源

[Distant]

2/4 clap音效缺失有点严重，虽然1/3下了clap音效但是2/4这地方没1/3 clap那么强但是比如 00:09:809 - 这种地方根本听不出来有音效在那边，感觉还是要换个能听得出来的音效……這是因為兩個音色太接近了，把物件往後挪1/4就聽到了

00:02:921 (1) - 00:04:698 (1) - 感觉 NC落在00:03:587 (2) - 00:05:365 (3) - 重音这里比较好

00:08:921 - 音效听上去强度不够……粗又……

00:12:254 (8) - 这里有必要加上音效……fix

01:16:476 (1,2,1,2) - 这几个滑条感觉末尾要消音……soft 本來就和消音沒什麼區別

01:30:698 (2,3,1,2) - ^

Garden wrote:

[hs]
  1. 开头一段丢一堆whistle跟琴声听上去不太合适，感觉没有把握到重点的音，开始和停顿之类的。试试看 00:02:032 (2,3) - 、00:03:809 (3,4) - 、00:05:365 (3) - 00:07:143 (4) - 尾巴、00:05:809 (4) - 、00:07:587 (5) - ，这些whistle删掉听起来如何。……那樣數量太少了，低難度我是只有這裡有
  2. 00:27:365 (4) - 00:29:143 (6) - addition用drum? 用风铃跟这里高音感觉很美啊……fix
  3. 00:33:809 (1) - 尾巴drum sample?……fix
  4. 00:35:587 (1,2,3,4) - 同前面提到的，或许试试2或24删掉
  5. 01:19:587 (3) - 漏clap?……fix
我的難度音效和最高難度不一樣所以你自己感覺可以就改啦，我回覆的話改圖應該會很麻煩

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Eric666
3 posts
Joined July 2015
Eric666
[Distant]

cs5。。。。

00:15:809 (8,9,1) - 这里打起来好怪异。。我觉得8 9的位置换一下会好点吧。。。

其他的看了一个小时没看出有什么问题果然还是我不太会摸图。。。
DJMax
112 posts
Joined March 2015
DJMax
distance
00:01:587 - 这里空音（我觉得有点怪）（不用改）
00:33:143 (3,4,5,1) - 强迫症不能忍（不用改）
00:50:698 (1) - 有一点坑（不用改）
01:25:143 (7) - 这个也有点坑（不用改）
其他的看不出啥
（我就是个sb modder）太tm水
Karen
2,860 posts
Joined August 2013
Karen
好，泡
pw384
2,286 posts
Joined January 2012
pw384

[Crz]Sword wrote:

[北大教授]
:arrow: 北个毛
  1. 00:07:032 (5) - 这个ds前0.78后0.62 能不能统一下0.7呀。。直观看起来也感觉不是很齐 :arrow: 改了
  2. 00:33:809 (1) - ctrl+J maybe work better in flow :arrow: 不好，不然1、2之间就很别扭了
xixi
嘻嘻感谢大佬摸得

moonlightleaf wrote:

[山巴士]

00:12:476 (1,2) - 换下节奏 :arrow: 这里没法动了，现在这样也挺好的呀

00:15:809 (5) - 这样比较舒服 :arrow: 有道理
SPOILER

01:26:476 - 加个圈? :arrow: 有道理
感谢大佬摸得

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176,246,75143,2,0,P|176:286|192:326,1,84.4999961318971,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,96,75587,2,0,P|213:76|170:69,1,84.4999961318971,0|2,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
343,233,76032,2,0,P|377:213|404:179,1,84.4999961318971,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,88,76476,6,0,L|248:96,1,84.4999961318971,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,112,76809,2,0,L|147:104,1,84.4999961318971,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
131,89,77143,1,2,0:0:0:0:
24,128,77365,6,0,L|31:212,1,84.4999961318971,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
47,228,77698,2,0,L|39:312,1,84.4999961318971,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
24,329,78032,1,2,0:0:0:0:
128,312,78254,6,0,P|200:304|232:304,1,84.4999961318971,2|2,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,320,78698,2,0,P|342:318|384:312,1,84.4999961318971,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
472,184,79143,2,0,P|469:226|463:267,1,84.4999961318971,2|2,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,136,79587,2,0,P|385:94|383:52,1,84.4999961318971,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
383,52,80032,6,0,P|344:72|264:64,1,126.749994197846,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,40,80476,2,0,P|192:48|144:48,1,84.4999961318971,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,136,80921,2,0,P|45:134|4:127,1,84.4999961318971,0|2,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,240,81365,2,0,P|191:198|192:156,1,84.4999961318971,10|2,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,288,81809,6,0,P|89:330|96:371,1,84.4999961318971,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,320,82254,1,10,0:0:0:0:
200,320,82476,1,2,0:0:0:0:
415,371,82698,2,0,P|422:330|424:288,1,84.4999961318971,0|2,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
319,156,83143,2,0,P|320:198|328:240,1,84.4999961318971,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
507,127,83587,6,0,P|466:134|424:136,1,84.4999961318971,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
355,48,84032,2,0,P|313:47|272:40,2,84.4999961318971,8|2|2,0:0|0:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
336,144,84698,2,0,P|256:120|176:144,1,168.999992263794,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
217,264,85365,6,0,P|256:204|296:263,1,168.999992263794,2|10,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,296,86254,1,2,1:2:0:0:
120,296,86476,1,0,0:0:0:0:
120,296,86698,2,0,L|112:208,1,84.4999961318971,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,144,87143,6,0,P|255:120|335:144,1,168.999992263794,6|10,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,296,88032,1,2,1:2:0:0:
392,296,88476,2,0,L|400:208,1,84.4999961318971,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,144,88921,6,0,L|487:228,1,84.4999961318971,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,296,89365,2,0,L|307:288,1,84.4999961318971,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,288,89809,2,0,L|120:296,1,84.4999961318971,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,240,90254,2,0,L|24:155,1,84.4999961318971,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,96,90698,6,0,L|136:224,2,126.749994197846,2|2|2,1:2|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,56,91587,2,0,L|256:192,2,126.749994197846,2|2|2,1:2|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,96,92476,6,0,L|376:224,1,126.749994197846,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,248,92921,2,0,P|416:264|464:264,1,84.4999961318971,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
512,192,93365,1,2,1:2:0:0:
456,265,93587,2,0,L|464:361,2,84.4999961318971,0|10|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,222,94254,6,0,L|384:96,1,126.750000483513,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,182,95143,2,0,L|256:56,1,126.750000483513,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
135,222,96032,2,0,L|128:96,1,126.750000483513,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,96,96921,2,0,L|376:222,1,126.750000483513,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,56,97809,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,97921,12,2,100254,0:3:0:0:

:) :)
Crystal
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[Crz]Sword wrote:

mark
我错了
[Insane]
  1. 00:35:587 (1) - 这里...嘛反正我打图的时候是很烦多次折返的 因为第一次打经常会直接认为是一次折返然后断掉 这里改成两个滑条会不会work better 故意的呀 音调相近的
  2. 00:50:698 (1) - ^ both them are my personal suggestion.
  3. 01:22:143 (2,3) - kiai段所有的2连你都是藏在滑条尾巴下stack,只有这里是ds,比较突兀 建议统一patterns 还是不太想改
[Distant]
  1. 我艹 cs5
  2. 00:08:698 (3,4,1) - ......nb
  3. 00:35:587 (1,2,3,4) - 建议增大一些ds 这里缩的有点过头了00:01:810 (1,2,3,4) - 我觉得你继续采用这就可 还行
  4. 01:22:143 (2,3) - same as Insane,but if it's your style ignore my suggestion :3
xixi

moonlightleaf wrote:

mark +1
[Insane]

00:35:587 (1) - 不喜欢这个双折返,试试? same as mentioned above
SPOILER

00:50:698 (1) - ^
SPOILER

01:24:254 (5) - 没等间距好难受,或者你和6 弄等腰梯形?
SPOILER

[Distant]

00:50:698 (1) - 之前提过 我觉得作为最高难度这种不太应该出现 好像还行呀

01:16:476 (1,2) - 这种可以吗 可以吧

有啥好摸得= =!

T-Mac wrote:

[General]

tags就直接空在那边了？

soft whistle找个更契合节拍的音色的，不要默认的

[Distant]

2/4 clap音效缺失有点严重，虽然1/3下了clap音效但是2/4这地方没1/3 clap那么强但是比如 00:09:809 - 这种地方根本听不出来有音效在那边，感觉还是要换个能听得出来的音效

00:02:921 (1) - 00:04:698 (1) - 感觉 NC落在00:03:587 (2) - 00:05:365 (3) - 重音这里比较好

00:08:921 - 音效听上去强度不够

00:12:254 (8) - 这里有必要加上音效

00:52:254 - 不填上吗 不填，人声是渐进的，没有明显的点

01:16:476 (1,2,1,2) - 这几个滑条感觉末尾要消音

01:30:698 (2,3,1,2) - ^ 还是狗必懂我

01:38:476 (1) - 还不如换转盘，01:40:921 - 这里结束 不太好 故意没放转盘 而且人声在那结束

讲道理感觉还是音效有点太简单了，很多地方直接 whistle糊弄过去

[Insane]

00:06:476 (4) - 加一个reverse？为啥

00:41:143 (2) - 放到差不多（227，135）这种地方试试看，感觉做成个方的形状好看点

01:28:476 (2) - 末尾消音

01:38:587 (1) - 转盘还是建议在01:40:921 - 这里结束好一点 同上

音效方面和主难度一样

另外两个没什么讲，到时候hard的音效记得复制上去

Eric666 wrote:

[Distant]

cs5。。。。

00:15:809 (8,9,1) - 这里打起来好怪异。。我觉得8 9的位置换一下会好点吧。。。on purpose

其他的看了一个小时没看出有什么问题果然还是我不太会摸图。。。

Dynamix wrote:

distance
00:01:587 - 这里空音（我觉得有点怪）（不用改）
00:33:143 (3,4,5,1) - 强迫症不能忍（不用改）好像还行
00:50:698 (1) - 有一点坑（不用改）没啥感觉
01:25:143 (7) - 这个也有点坑（不用改）也没啥感觉
其他的看不出啥
（我就是个sb modder）太tm水
@Garden: all fixed


no comment = fixed
thanks 4 modding!!
Lobelia
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来支持一发，射星
Kibbleru
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yf so good storyboarder.
where are those pictures from o_o

00:38:254 - did u take this idea from https://osu.ppy.sh/s/244001 xD


PS @Crystal: you definitely forgot to add widescreen support for this
also u shud keysound this :D
yf_bmp
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yf_bmp

Kibbleru wrote:

yf so good storyboarder.
where are those pictures from o_o

00:38:254 - did u take this idea from https://osu.ppy.sh/s/244001 xD


PS @Crystal: you definitely forgot to add widescreen support for this
also u shud keysound this :D
Pictures are from: http://store.steampowered.com/app/370280

00:38:254 - did u take this idea from https://osu.ppy.sh/s/244001 xD
I heard of this but it's my first time to see :ppppppp
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01:30:254 (4) - 是不是漏了clap

great map call me back
yf_bmp
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wait
I will make some changes on sb tomorrow
Crystal
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fixed that for him
uploaded yf's storyboard
Rizia
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bubbled
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Rizia
rebub cuz added sber name into tag and enable sb warning
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SB
  1. 01:28:921 - 这里是‘’花开与花落‘’吧，我觉得是网易云歌词的错

Distant
  1. 小圈低bpm强烈建议ar8 做了一堆读图梗又把ar拉高感觉很怪
  2. 00:24:698 (3) - 这也叠在滑条尾巴上 跟上一个一样
  3. 00:36:476 (1,1) - 完全重叠也没事 这也不好看 要么就再歪一点
  4. 00:55:143 (1) - 滑条身体的whistle去掉
  5. 00:58:698 (1,2,3,4) - 前面两个是相反方向 讲道理后面两个也应该是相反的 统一一下比较好
  6. 01:10:254 (1,2,3,4) - 这里很适合连打的样子 几把一点好玩
yf_bmp
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yf_bmp
网上看了好多都没与的 是口音问题？
反正也没人搞中文歌词
Crystal
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Karen wrote:

SB

Distant
  1. 小圈低bpm强烈建议ar8 做了一堆读图梗又把ar拉高感觉很怪
  2. 00:24:698 (3) - 这也叠在滑条尾巴上 跟上一个一样
  3. 00:36:476 (1,1) - 完全重叠也没事 这也不好看 要么就再歪一点 这两个所在直线关于过两直线交点的竖直直线对称的 故意的
  4. 00:55:143 (1) - 滑条身体的whistle去掉
  5. 00:58:698 (1,2,3,4) - 前面两个是相反方向 讲道理后面两个也应该是相反的 统一一下比较好 34其实也是往外弯的 我觉得可以
  6. 01:10:254 (1,2,3,4) - 这里很适合连打的样子 几把一点好玩 不要了吧..我好像只听到3连 而且也不是很想放连打
no comment = fixed
thanks for modding!

updated
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Crystal
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thanks!!

@kibb: keysounding's a bit beyond my ability now, maybe will try later! :D
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好听
meii18
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384's Hard:
00:55:143(2)- Seems like you placed a whistle on sliderbody accidentally and to be honest, it sounds kinda loud which does not catch really well the quiet vocal and instruments.Consider removing it.

Other than that, congratz!
Crystal
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ByBy wrote:

384's Hard:
00:55:143(2)- Seems like you placed a whistle on sliderbody accidentally and to be honest, it sounds kinda loud which does not catch really well the quiet vocal and instruments.Consider removing it.

Other than that, congratz!
he says that that whistle sound is relatively too soft to have a bad effect on gameplay
thanks for your opinion anyway~
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