Joezapy wrote:

cool song, no diff i can play though

I'll mod what I can I guess

Maybe move 00:05:922 (2) - up so that its sort of blanketed by 00:06:195 (3) - a little bit? If you don't want to mess up the spacing you can move the end anchor of 00:05:104 (1) - up to compensate. / moved a bit

Move 01:08:377 (1) - to x:454 y:157 so the ends are more symmetrical with 01:08:104 (4) - / fixed

Maybe end 01:19:013 (1) - at 01:21:195 - and have another spinner at 01:21:331 - to follow the vocals better? / no sorry

01:34:013 (3,1) - Seems like a weird stacking choice since 01:34:286 (1) - is mapped to a percussion sound thats way more impactful than the surrounding notes. It would make more sense to stack 01:34:013 (3) - on 01:33:741 (2) - or not at all. / fixed

02:33:468 (1) - Maybe move the red anchor in to around x:345 y:155 to blanket better? / um no sorry

03:14:377 (3) - I think you should ctrl+g this, because the odd flow you have at 03:13:831 (2,3) - would fit better with the lyrics if it was at 03:14:377 (3,1) - / i'll keep this way

Maybe have a kiai section from 04:05:104 - until 04:11:650 - and another one from 04:13:559 - 04:40:013 - ? I'd highly suggest at least the second one, since it includes the hardest part of the map and the most intense part of the song. / i will think about that

04:35:650 (1,2,1,2) - Maybe make this part a little bit harder? It's probably the most intense part of the song. Maybe have a slightly higher sv? / keeping it like this

04:38:922 (2) - Remove the whistle on the end of this slider, since there isn't really a sound there ,more of a sound ending.

05:02:922 (3) - Maybe have higher sv for this slider to go with the strings?

05:14:922 (1) - Remove this. You don't need it to reach necessary drain time or anything, you already have 3 spinners, and the ambiance is really cool to hear on the results screen. / rest not fixed / thank you anyways

Sieg wrote:

I'll give just some general ideas

Eternal Sleep:
Volume level in intro, in my opinion hitsounds there are too noisy, you should try something as low as 10% and if it will work for you. And raise it after 00:18:195 (1) , some kind gradual raise would be good trick here. / I did as you suggested/b]
00:59:377 (4,1) - The next deal, is spacing on new stanza, you tend to extent it a bit, so spots like this one is out of structure. / [b]moved a bit
01:08:104 (4,1) - ^ check them, they are quite easy to catch. / i'd like to keep this one here
01:08:377 (1) - Consider to make 01:10:559 beat as hittable object, this is essential for such kind of stressed beats in music, especially for marathon beatmaps. / this is mapped on lyrics. sorry.
01:31:831 (4,1) - Again consistency issues with new stanza, compare with 01:29:922 (5,1) - music pase is the same in this spots so I see no reasons to vary DS here.
01:49:286 (3,1) - ^and there are some more.
Well, this is the general concept as Wafu already mentioned. Usage of distance spacing, you should carefully watch them out. I guess you know how to contact with me if you need any advanced help with this. / Basically i moved some of notes a bit more but not everything. Otherwise thank you for mod :3

Namki wrote:

as promised

Eternal Sleep

1. 00:00:741 (1,2,3,4) - the very first pattern and it's kinda hard, may cause 100's, 50's or misses. It must be better if you swap with these two sliders 00:01:122 - .
   Just copy (00:00:741 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ) and ctrl+G. / i will think about this
2. 01:31:013 (2) - whistle you use doesn't fit with the music. Some kind of default soft-whistles do. / removed
3. It's quite disappointing that you don't put whistles (or some other hitsounds) for those beat:
   01:31:559 - / 01:35:922 (6) - / 01:40:286 (2) - / 01:49:013 (2) - / 01:53:377 (5) - etc. / fixed
4. As I can see, you did jumps to objects what are at the big white tick. So those jumps aren't really big, about 1.7x, 1.9x, 2.2x etc. But here 01:29:922 (5,1) - you made 2.8x, that's really inconsistent. / fixed
5. 02:46:559 (1,2,3) - honestly can't understand why did you make different spacing here. Music does not change much. / i like it how it is
6. 04:53:104 (1,2,3,4) - jumps look out of context. You didn't do any jumps for the entire map, but here decided to make them. / this is because of violin.

Nothing much to say. Decent map! / thanks

wajinshu wrote:

[Eternal Sleep]
02:58:559 (3,4) - How about these form, It will be better flow

SPOILER

/ Quite dont understand what have you been meaning
03:02:922 (2,1) - The ends of the sliders are almost touching each other / moved a bit
03:05:104 (3,1) - Overlap / as well
03:29:650 (3,1) - Blanket these / it is alraedy blanketed

SPOILER

04:11:104 (3) - Ctrl+G / no sorry
04:13:559 (4,1) - stack is bad idea, give more space, because the sound of cymbals / I'd rather not, for better emphasis
04:44:377 (1,2) - Maybe blanketing these? / no sorry
Good map, I like it. Sory for small mod xd / thanks

Lanturn wrote:

Congrats

Namki wrote:

ура, поздравляю!

Mao wrote:

Grats o/

KittyAdventure wrote:

Gratzz, sorry if i'm not mod your map

wajinshu wrote:

Namki wrote:

ура, поздравляю!

Nyantiaz wrote:

congrats!