CaffeAmericano wrote:

Delivery from #TimeReq

Timing looks almost correct, just need a small adjustment. Try

1. Offset: 110ms BPM: 120.00

Good luck!

baysman wrote:

Hi

General
Off Letterbox during breaks (Song setup >> Design) FIXED!
You didn't set preview point (Timing >> Set Current Positin as Preview Point) i think 01:04:110 - be great for preview FIXED!

Beginner
00:34:110 (7) - what if you make that slider revers to that circle 00:35:110 (8) - and delete this circle FIXED! - I think this was a great idea! Reversing the slider and removing the circle gave the map a bit more variety and a better flow in that section.

Easy
00:40:360 (2) - I think this circle excess - Do you mean delete the circle? (2)
00:56:110 (10) - set new combo FIXED!

I hope my mod will be helpful. Good luck with your map (Nice song)

Cookiedipp wrote:

baysman wrote:

Easy
00:40:360 (2) - I think this circle excess - Do you mean delete the circle? (2)

1. 00:35:610 (8) - Spacing must be consistent, maybe this instead? http://i.imgur.com/nLxeqCS.jpg

1. 00:20:860 (7) - I don't think this circle fits with the music
2. 00:31:360 (6) - Same as above
3. 00:33:110 (2) - Spacing must be consistent
4. 00:42:110 (5) - Spacing again
5. 01:02:610 (2) - This is a bit strict, I think it would be better if the slider was extended again and one circle after like: http://i.imgur.com/9fJDaXy.jpg
6. 01:11:610 (7) - Spacing, put the (7) to the right of (6)

baysman wrote:

Yup!

Toehoe wrote:

[Beginner]

1. 00:35:610 (8) - Spacing must be consistent, maybe this instead? http://i.imgur.com/nLxeqCS.jpg

FIXED!
[Easy]

1. 00:20:860 (7) - I don't think this circle fits with the music - Agreed and fixed!
2. 00:31:360 (6) - Same as above - FIXED!
3. 00:33:110 (2) - Spacing must be consistent - FIXED!
4. 00:42:110 (5) - Spacing again - FIXED!
5. 01:02:610 (2) - This is a bit strict, I think it would be better if the slider was extended again and one circle after like: http://i.imgur.com/9fJDaXy.jpg FIXED! - Nice idea!
6. 01:11:610 (7) - Spacing, put the (7) to the right of (6)

- FIXED!
Rest is fine to me, just make sure to keep spacing the same throughout!

Juiceys wrote:

Beginner

I hate NC modding so let me just say that some combos can be shortened a lot. No more NC mods in this diff from now on though. - Ahh I see, so are you saying that I should go ahead and change them?

General: The Combo colors are very similar if not identical. I Would delete all the combo colors that are similar to another
Btw the mods mapping wise won't be in order at all lmao - Deleted the extra combo colors!

01:18:610 (1) - This spinner is extremely short for a beginner map and should be extended at least 1 full beat - EXTENDED
00:32:610 (4,5,6) - these circles are very boring and I would either make them a slider or put them in a triangular patter - FIXED

only do one of the following
00:35:610 (8,1) - Blanket these
00:35:610 (8,2) Blanket the start of 8 with 2
Decided to blanket 8 and 1!

01:00:110 (8,1,2) -These have no symmetry and are unappealing to look at at. I would either make them symmetrical or make the sliders move around the map more.
Eww you are right, really ugly sliders! I fixed it so it moved around the map more and made it look more symmetrical in appearance.

UPUPUPUPUPUPUPUPUPU

Miryle wrote:

From my queue!~

Beginner

Beginner

1. 00:18:110 (2,3) – Inconsistent DS. - Hmm have no idea how my DS shifted so much, thanks for pointing this out! I checked spacing issues in AI.
   
2. 00:31:110 (3,4) – Blanket these and move 00:33:110 (5) under the slider end of 00:31:110 (3) ? Then move these 00:33:610 (6,7) and blanket them. Fixed blanket and moved what you requested!
   
3. 00:35:610 (8) – Ends on a strong note, I’d put two circles here instead of a slider. Placed two circles.
   
4. 00:47:610 (6) - ^ Pretty much one of the stronger notes of the song. I’d add something clickable here instead of a slider end. - Added something clickable lol
   
5. 00:55:610 (2) – Reverse tick ends on downbeat. - Would you suggest adding circles instead?
   
6. I’ll stop mentioning downbeats that end on slider ends, but if you want to keep them on downbeats by all means do so. I just think it’s more fun to click strong notes than release on strong notes. Hmm I think you are right, when keep sticking to downbeats on slider ends, it feels rather bland to play. I will keep this in mind when revising my map.
   
7. 01:07:110 (16) – This combo is WAY too long. Shorten it. A NC every downbeat is a good rule to follow. (Though that’d be impossible if a slider end is on a downbeat) Must of forgot to fix my combos after my last mods, FIXED
   
8. Also, no kiai time?

Where do I go to apply kiai time?

Easy

Easy

1. 00:33:110 (2) – No. This is too far distance spacing for an Easy. All notes must be the same distance spacing on normal or below. - FIXED
   
2. Also take what I said in Beginner into account here too. Lots of sliders end on downbeats and the NCs are inconsistent. I’d revise these both. Yup! Will do!
   
3. 00:51:360 (2) – No note here, remove this circle. - REMOVED
   
4. 01:01:110 (6) – I don’t even know. This is a little bit lazy in my opinion. You skip over the vocals and you force the player to hold throughout all those juicy clickable notes. Please remove this and map whatever it covers. Added clickable notes!
   
5. 01:08:610 (2,5) – Stack these? - STACKED
   
6. 01:09:110 (4,6) – Overlap that can be avoided. FIXED

I will fix things in normal mode later~ I realized my slider velocity was somehow lower then my other difficulties, so I need to make adjustments.. I will be sure to update!

Normal

Normal

1. 00:18:610 (4,5) – Like I said with distance spacing. In these diffs it has to be consistent everywhere regardless of song intensity. Yes I'm aware, still getting used to the editor here lol!
2. 00:21:110 (7,1) – Symmetry?
   
3. 00:24:610 (5,6) – Blankets too. Check your whole map for them, this isn’t the only one. - Sure thing!
   
4. 00:33:110 (6,8,9,1) – Overlaps. ;-; -
   
5. 00:39:360 (7,8,2) – Stack?
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6. 00:45:110 (2) – Like I said with Easy. Looks lazy and skips really good notes.
   
   
7. 00:54:360 (6) – No note here.
   
8. 01:00:360 (8) - ^
   
9. 01:13:610 (8) – As I said before~
   
10. 01:15:610 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) – What are these even mapped to? Hard to play and to read. Please remap this portion.

Nice song, but the map is unpolished.

_Stan wrote:

hey from my queue, and sorry for late

General

1. check it, preview point aren't same position with different diffs
2. ctrl+a check your notes position, try to make them equally distributed, not concentrate at some place, you can dl some ranked map and edit it with ctrl+a to check

Beginner

1. 00:18:110 (2) - keep prev-ds and next-ds same - FIXED
2. 00:28:110 (7,8) - overlap it's unrankable for Beginner diff - FIXED
3. 00:31:110 (3,5) - no, try to not stack them
4. 00:31:110 (3) - when music have a new part, the long white line you should use a note, don't use a slider's end circle to instead of it
5. 00:35:610 (8) - ^ - Yes, somebody already pointed out this with my sliders! I will keep this in mind when revising my map!
6. 00:38:610 (3) - keep same ds
7. 00:41:610 (7) - ^^
8. 00:47:610 (6) - ^ - DS FIXED
9. 00:55:610 (2) - there is a new part and long white line, the same, you cannot use a slider's reverse point to replace it, make a slider start at here or circle instead like 01:00:110 (8) - FIXED!
10. 01:07:610 (1) - ^ - FIXED!
11. 01:18:610 (1) - try to make the spinner at long white line for Beginner Diff and how about
    
    Nice suggestion! FIXED!
    
    About NC Here
12. You should nc when music have a new part about rhythm, here's my suggestion
13. 00:16:610 (1) - not nc here
14. 00:22:610 (1) - not nc here
15. 00:24:110 (2) - nc
16. 00:28:110 (7) - nc
17. 00:29:110 (1) - not nc here
18. 00:31:110 (3) - when you make a circle or new slider here (do not use a slider's end circle at a new part and long white line) nc
19. 00:35:610 (8) - ^ nc
20. 00:41:610 (7) - ^ nc
21. 00:47:610 (6) - ^ nc
22. 00:49:610 (1) - not nc here
23. 00:52:110 (4) - nc
24. 00:55:610 (2) - nc
25. 01:00:110 (8) - nc
26. 01:04:110 (12) - nc
27. 01:07:610 (1) - nc
28. 01:12:110 (6) - nc
29. 01:14:610 (1) - not nc here
30. 01:16:110 (3) - nc
    
    All combos fixed!

Easy

1. about nc, check beginner mod reference - Yup!
2. 00:21:110 (7,2) - no - CHANGED
3. 00:27:110 (1) - ds you make is about 0.9x, why here 1.4x? - FIXED
4. 00:33:110 (2) - 2.49x... unrankable for ez - FIXED
5. 00:51:360 (2,3) - these kind of rhythmfor ez, im not suggested and if you wanna keep this kind of rhythm, how about - I did something slightly different here.
6. 01:08:610 (2,3,4) - ^ - FIXED
7. 01:09:110 (4,6) - not stack them - UNSTACKED
8. 01:16:610 (6,7,8) - ^^ - REMOVED STACKS
9. 01:18:360 (1) - try to make the spinner at long white line - FIXED

Normal

1. um.. why Normal's sv 1.1x slower tham EZ? - Whoops! FIXED!
2. about nc, check beginner mod reference - Thanks!
3. 00:18:610 (4) - ds
4. 00:24:610 (5,7) - do not stack like this for nm
5. 00:39:610 (8,1) - blanket it better
6. 01:11:610 (4,6) - ^^
7. 01:16:860 (4) - I suggested that do not catch this vocal
   
   Opened AI mode and saw a bunch of DS errors! Eeeek! I will fix all my distance snapping then apply what you mentioned above!

great song and GOOD LUCK~ wanna helpful for you